Hello, this is Frank Hubeny. Today for Meeting the Bar the challenge is to write a poem with seven lines. That is the only constraint, but you are welcome to make that constraint more complicated.
The number 7 suggests “perfection” for some and so in the midst of this virus and market volatility, I was looking for something positive to think of rather than the uncertainty we are in.
Also the motivation came from reading revivedwriter’s recent poem “Artists”. Her poem was a Chaucerian stanza about using art as comfort to others. A Chaucerian stanza is a seven-line poem in iambic pentameter with a rhyme scheme of ABABBCC.
That is what I will try to write, a Chaucerian stanza, but you are not required to use that form. I don’t want to make you feel any more locked-in than you already are. Any seven-line poem will do.
Nor does it have to be optimistic, but I will try to make mine aim in a positive direction, because who knows what the unknown reader might be going through? I don’t even know what I might be going through a week from now or whenever I read what I have written again.
I featured Chaucerian stanzas or Rhyme Royale at dVerse in 2017 and also septets, seven-line poems, in 2018 for dVerse’s seventh anniversary. It is now 2020. Even January of this year appears like ancient history. So I hope I am not repeating myself too soon and I also hope that all of you are well.
To participate, write a poem of seven lines in any form or in no form. Just limit it to those perfect (or not) seven lines. Post it to your blog. Copy the link to that post and paste it in the Mister Linky below. The Mister Linky will be open for the next 48 hours.
Don’t forget to link back to this post so others who might want to participate know where the prompt is. Also don’t forget to read and comment on how others who have linked with you met this challenge. If you want, I will be watching the comments for any thoughts you might like to share.
The pub is open for virtual gathering.
To keep my mind off of things I watched Blake Edwards and Peter Sellers in a Pink Panther movie. It was better than I remembered it to be.
I’ve been watching every season of Great British Bake Off. Very escapist.
That sounds better than listening to the news. I may watch another Pink Panther tonight.
Thanks for hosting, Frank!
Today in Boston, it’s what I call a make-your-own-sunshine kind of day. Cold, dreary and rainy – ugh. So I shall watch some comedy on Netflix tonight…do some sewing now and come back tomorrow with fresh brewed coffee to do my reading. Looking forward to some sevens then 🙂
Stay safe everyone!
Stay safe! Sometimes we have to make our own sunshine. Coffee helps me as well.
Thank you for hosting, Frank!
Today in Boston, it’s what I call a make-your-own-sunshine kind of day. Rain all day. So I’ve posted and shall come back to read in the morning with my fresh-brewed coffee and sun streaming in my window 🙂
Stay safe everyone!
well….technical guru I am not…somehow I’m here twice. Twice as nice????
Twice as nice works for me. Twice can be perfect as well.
a ‘make your own sunshine’ kind of day certainly stands repeating!
Thank you, Eric!
I presume the lines are counted as pc shows them, rather than mobile..
They are as you choose to make them. I imagine they could be very long or very short, metrical or free verse.
Good evening all! Thank you for this seven-line prompt, Frank; I enjoyed writing to the form and especially in iambic pentameter. I’ll stick around for as long as I can. It’s been a crazy day. I found out that my children’s novel is number 6 in the Amazon Hot New Releases in Horror & Ghost Stories for Children. It was Viv who alerted me to it – she’s really good at publishing, marketing ad promoting, and has her eye on what’s happening on Amazon. But I need reviews and sales, which do’t seem to be happening. In case anyone would like to read it, it’s free with Kindle Unlimited.
Congratulations on your children’s novel! I’ll look for it.
Thanks frank! It’s called Joe and Nelly.
Congratulations on your novel’s ranking on amazon! I don’t have kindle unlimited.
Thank you, Lisa! Once the pandemic is over, I’ll get a paperback version sorted out.
You are very welcome.
Very cool!
Hello Frank and All. Thank you for not constraining us too much. It’s sputtering snow out there right now, but when I walked to the mailbox I traveled a path along one of the flowerbeds and saw that the basement bargain peonies ($2.50 roots) I planted last summer survived the winter and are out of the ground. I also saw a frog hop into the water of the ditch out front yesterday. These small things make sunshine. I’m sipping hot coffee with unsweetened almond milk and am heading off to write 7 lines.
It seems that those bargain basement peonies are expressing their gratitude to you for buying them. May they bloom for many years.
❤
Hi Frank, thank you for hosting and for the prompt!
You are welcome, Merril. I am glad to see we can all virtually gather together wherever we are. It looks like we were preparing ourselves for this pandemic without realizing it.
I was thinking about that the other day–the dVerse virtual pub that existed before the current crisis!
Although I use the internet a lot, I would not have imagined how valuable it was until this pandemic occurred.
Hello Frank… tomorrow is a holiday so I took a bit of break from writing… I will see if I link up something later.
Yes, it is a holiday for many. Thanks for stopping by, Bjorn!
Frank, thank you so much for featuring my poem! Now I know why I suddenly got a bunch of interaction with it. 😅
I look forward to writing probably another Chaucerian stanza, and I’ll have a black coffee. 🙂
I enjoyed your poem very much. I used to write Chaucerian stanzas but I stopped some time ago until your poem reminded me of the form. I also like the optimism I find in your poetry.
Here’s some black coffee!
Thank you for not overstretching us with this one and since its you Frank – I even rhymed my seven lines (though I also did another one with none which is still in draft!)
Your poem had a very nice sound to it, both in the rhyme and the meter.
I like the fact that you gave us a form but also left it open-ended. Thanks Frank!
Most of these forms have many variations. One might as well leave those details up to the poet.
Thanks for hosting and giving a challenge to keep my mind occupied a while. Was a fun form, will try it again and for longer pieces.
It can be an interesting way to break up a poem into stanzas. Usually I think of stanzas with an even number of lines, but seven is odd.
Septets and Chaucerian verses are on my to-do list for a new series adding a line to a verse each day. So this gave me a little practice one, and allowed me to use a line that’s been kicking around in my head for a few days: “The world needs poets now”. The meter lent itself well to the form. Thank you for a lovely prompt (also, I love technical prompts)
I liked the sound in your poem and the challenge to poets especially to choose the right words in the midst of the fear in this crisis.
Thank you! And of course the world always needs poets (and all artists), but never quite understands that.
good prompt frank, thanks. you inspired me to try and keep a rhyme, rather than sprinkle them randomly.
Very nice poem. I liked the sound of your rhyme.
Hey, Frank! A form seems very timely – I need a little structure right now.
It feels like we live in a time when we are not sure what is going to happen next. Or worse, whether we will respond appropriately.
I enjoyed the sound and sense of your Chaucerian stanza.
Thanks for the challenge Frank, and a generosity in not making it harder 🙂
It is too stressful even for me to check all the constraints. I like your description of the couple’s encounter giving them an opportunity to unlock their dreams.
Thank you Frank.
Thank you Frank for hosting. Better late than never. Let’s keep the poetry flowing. It is so good for the soul.
What you linked in the Mister Linky was the URL to this prompt rather than your own post. I think this is your post: https://flashlightbatteries.blog/2020/04/10/let-go/
You are right, it is good to keep the poetry flowing as before.
Thanks Frank. I am sorry about that. Maybe I am not as awake as I thought.
Frank, thanks for hosting the 7 line challenge. Wishing you all a safe and peaceful day!
I wish everyone as well a safe and peaceful day. These times are unusual and the uncertainty can make people anxious.