“I must ask you to imagine a room, like many thousands, with a window looking across people’s hats and vans and motor-cars to other windows, and on the table inside the room a blank sheet of paper on which was written ….” A Room of One’s Own
So goes Virginia Woolf’s treatise on the need for women writers to have a room of one’s own but that is not the point of today’s Poetics. Rather it is just one example of how often room/rooms features in literature and poetry. Here is John Updike’s ‘Chambered Nautilus’
“How many rooms one occupies to lead
a life! – the child’s small cell, within earshot
of his parents’ smothered moans; the college room
assigned by number, a poster-clad outpost
of freedom, the married man’s bedchamber,
cramped scene of glad possession and sneaking sorrow…”
The poet leads us through the stages of man, as personified by the chambers of a nautilus which as it grows shuts off one chamber in its shell and moves into the next.
In a similar vein, Charlotte Mew’s “Rooms” moves through locales from memory but summoning their place in an intimacy that grows colder.
“I remember rooms that have had their part
In the steady slowing down of the heart.
The room in Paris, the room at Geneva,
The little damp room with the seaweed smell,
And that ceaseless maddening sound of the tide—
Rooms where for good or for ill—things died.
But there is the room where we (two) lie dead,
Though every morning we seem to wake and might just as well seem to sleep again
As we shall somewhere in the other quieter, dustier bed
Out there in the sun—in the rain.”
Taking it one step further Imtiaz Dharker conjures a fantastical metaphor from the real experience of having parts of a ceiling fall down on her in “This Room”
“This room is breaking out
of itself, cracking through
its own walls
in search of space, light,
empty air.
The bed is lifting out of
its nightmares.
From dark corners, chairs
are rising up to crash through clouds.
This is the time and place
to be alive:
when the daily furniture of our lives
stirs, when the improbable arrives…”
I was surprise to find that I too have written about rooms, though I ‘d quite forgotten this one “Keeping a Distance”
“why burrow? what should I want to know
of long- ago rooms in ruins; all those faraway feelings
that ran their course and fossilised
memories will naturally annex themselves
after all, what’s recalled is squarely placed
between tall walls or hidebound
in backlots, …”
For today’s poetry prompt I’m asking us to conjure a room or rooms in the literal, functional, metaphorical, imaginary, and/or fantastical sense
Rooms often feature in dreams so if you are stuck for ideas try The Meaning of Rooms in Dreams
There is no restriction on rhyme or style
If you use any part of the above poems as inspiration remember to cite it.
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Linky widget and leave a comment below. Then go visiting, reading and sharing your thoughts with other contributors which is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
A beautiful evening here and outside is calling but my prompt reflects the weeks of interiors most of us have been living – so show me your ROOM(s)
Good evening all! Thank you for hosting and for an inspirational prompt,. Laura. ‘This Room’ by Imtiaz Dharker is one of my favourites by her.
I stumbled across Dharker only in my research – going to read yours now
Love the prompt… I thought of Borges and the rooms of the infinite library… hope it works.
it was made for the librarian 🙂
Thanks for hosting, Laura! Your prompt gave me an opportunity to recall the many rooms I’ve lived in over the years.
do they condense into one I wonder?!
They seem to all condense into the room where I am right now.
I have always loved the idea of the mind being an organic room. your prompt got me thinking along such lines thank you.
interesting – thanks for exploring
Hello Laura and All. It’s like mid-summer here in heat and light, just right, but not for the end of May. I’m not complaining, or am I? You’ve given a very provocative prompt, Laura, one that was enjoyable to write to.
the lack of pollution seems to be bringing cloudless skies and a sunny May here too
p.s. Laura, I only know Updike from his Rabbit series and love him as an author, but now I see the need to seek out his poetry as well.
I have come late to Updike’s poetry – and enjoy his fresh but (seemingly) straightforward writing
Thank you for the prompt. I recycled, I hope that’s okay. But I may come back with something fresher.
am so glad you did -such a good poem
Thank you. I did make it back with another, fresh just for the Pub.
And now my bedroom is calling – back tomorrow to look through more rooms.
An interesting prompt and really appreciate the diversity of these samples, thanks Laura
I liked how you interpreted this prompt!
appreciate that!
Thanks for hosting Laura! Love the poems you shared and the prompt. I’ll be working on something in the morning as I have an appointment today.
you made it and what a room!
Hi Laura. Thanks for hosting at the pub. I took this a bit of a different way. I’ve been struck by how my world has shrunk since Covid-19….and I feel more and more confined. Mind you….I totally agree with all of the shelter in place and slow reopenings etc….choosing to follow the science and epidemiologists and knowing that I am in the age group deemed more vulnerable. Anyway….I addressed that feeling of my shrinking world. Will be back in AM to do some reading. In the mean time, I’ve helped myself to a cold glass of chardonnay 🙂
you took this prompt and gave it such a good shape!
Lots of variety out here on the trail; excellent responses to your prompt. Since there was no restrictions for style, I created a dozen tankas in another “renga”. It’s fun to find other authors views and convert their words to tankas. In the many years I’ve hung out here at the Pub, I don’t recall us using the renga as a prompt. It would require thinking outside the box, and collaborating with others.
not too good with forms Glenn but I liked all the voices in your room
Hi Laura! Thanks for hosting. Loved the prompt and the poems you’ve shared. I’ve submitted my poem, it’s a bit dark but I hope you’d appreciate it.
Take care, always.
Jay.
dark maybe but a vivid room
Thanks for appreciation!
Hi, Laura! Thank you for this prompt! Stay safe. 🙂
thanks for joining in
Thanks Laura. (K)
thanks for joining in
Thank you for the prompt. There are so many ways to go with this. I was having one of those days yesterday, and I couldn’t do anything, but I came up with something this morning. I’ll be back to read in a bit.
we both took a nostalgic trip – lovely!
😀
Hey Laura!
Loved the prompt. The poems you’ve mention got me thinking and I went back to a previous poem and kind of redesigned it. I’ve submitted my poem. It’s kinda dark but it’s not. More along the shades of gray, I guess.
I hope you’re doing well! Stay happy and stay safe.
not too dark – you broke free!
😁
And of course, we’re all stuck in rooms at this moment. I’ve been writing about all the ones I’ve lived in coincidentally, although I’m only up to age 5 right now. A lovely prompt, thank you.
I loved your very succinct metaphors
It brought back a memory of Room With A View, and childhood rooms for me, among many rabbit holes I pursued. Thank you Laura.
the rabbit hole brought a shift in knowing!
It did, and it didn’t matter which way I went 🙂
Thank you for hosting, Laura, and giving us room to grow. 😉😊
nice way of seeing the prompt – thank you for joining in