
Welcome to DVerse, Poets! I am Frank Tassone, your host for today’s Meet the Bar, where we delve into poetic craft.
As a writer of Japanese poetry in English, I am fascinated with imagery. Finding the right words and phrases to capture the essence of a moment depends on conveying images, those mysterious appeals to the senses. While its importance to haikai cannot be understated, imagery transcends any one culture’s form of poetry. Throughout time and across the world, poets have employed imagery. one modern movement of poetry, however, utilized it as the cornerstone of its practitioners’ work: Imagism.
According to The American Academy of Poets:
Imagism was born in England and America in the early twentieth century. A reactionary movement against romanticism and Victorian poetry, imagism emphasized simplicity, clarity of expression, and precision through the use of exacting visual images.
You may have heard of some of the Imagists: Ezra Pound, William Carlos Williams, Amy Lowell. Others, perhaps, less so: Hilda Dolittle (H.D.), F.S. Flint, Ford Madox Ford. First brought together by American ex-patriate Erza Pound, the imagists inaugurated modernism with poetry that, in the words of Ezra Pound (as quoted by F.S. Flint in Poetry Magazine in 1913) followed these tenets:
I. Direct treatment of the “thing,” whether subjective or objective.
II. To use absolutely no word that does not contribute to the presentation.
III. As regarding rhythm: to compose in sequence of the musical phrase, not in sequence of the metronome.
Influenced both by Japanese and ancient Greek poetry, some of the Imagists’ work is striking in its minimalism, as well as its sensory appeal:
In a Station of the Metro
The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.
—Ezra Pound
The Red Wheelbarrow
William Carlos Williams – 1883-1963
so much depends
upona red wheel
barrowglazed with rain
waterbeside the white
chickens
Stars Wheel in Purple
H. D. – 1886-1961
Stars wheel in purple, yours is not so rare
as Hesperus, nor yet so great a star
as bright Aldeboran or Sirius,
nor yet the stained and brilliant one of War;
stars turn in purple, glorious to the sight;
yours is not gracious as the Pleiads are
nor as Orion’s sapphires, luminous;
yet disenchanted, cold, imperious face,
when all the others blighted, reel and fall,
your star, steel-set, keeps lone and frigid tryst
to freighted ships, baffled in wind and blast.
Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to write a poem utilizing the aesthetics of the Imagists. Use free verse, imagery, a focus on the “thing” of you choosing, and an economy of language in service of your presentation. As a haijin, I welcome the use of Japanese haikai forms, of course, even if they are not free verse forms. If you are writing haiku, however, write at least two in a sequence. Additionally, if you are enamored of Sappho’s Greek lyric, have at it. Otherwise, keep it free verse.
Remember: let your imagery tell the story (or sing the song) of your poem. As William Carlos Williams said, “No ideas but in things.”
New to dVerse? Here’s what you do:
- Write a poem in the aesthetic of the Imagists
- Post it on your personal site/blog
- Include a link back to dVerse in your post.
- Copy your link onto the Mr. Linky
- Remember to click the small checkbox about data protection.
- Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work.
- Like and leave a comment below if you choose to do so.
Have fun!
Welcome, poets! The pub is open!
Good evening all, and thanks for the welcome and the prompt, Frank! I’m not sure if I’ve met the bar with this one, but I had a go. I won’t be hanging around long as I’m a bit under the weather today. I will be back in the morning to read and comment.
Hi, Kim! Thanks for coming out. I’m sorry you’re feeling unwell. Shall I serve up a tea with some medicinal port? 😉
Tea would be lovely, Frank, Thank you, 🙂
One hot tea, coming right up! 🙂
Hope you feel better soon, Kim!
Thank you, Merril! I’m off to tuck myself up in bed for a little light reading.
thank you Frank for this challenge!! I know and love ‘The Red Wheelbarrow’ I was stimulated by the prompt though I struggled to confine my poetry to the strictures of this movement and so found inspiration in its founder, T. E. Hulme
Glad you could make it, Laura! 🙂
Great prompt, Frank! I do like imagism – but, like haiku, I think it’s easier said than done.
Happy to see you here, Sarah. The steeper the climb, the more satisfying the view, right? 😉
So they say. But I find haiku more like catching moonbeams – I think I’ve caught one, and open my hand to find it’s slipped away.
They can be evanescent.
Thanks for this interesting prompt, Frank. I will try to post tomorrow, as I’m still catching up on reading.
Thanks for coming, Merril! I look forward to it!
Hello Frank and All. Late to the pub, had errands to run now that things are opening up more. Intriguing prompt. I saw the movie, “Paterson,” last year, where Adam Driver plays Paterson, the bus driver poet. William Carlos Williams poetry features; well worth a watch. On to try to meet the bar!
Great to see you, Jade! 🙂
🙂
I’ll be posting later (shortly?). Thanks for the Imagist prompt, Frank. It led me to the Works-In-Progress File for some polishing. I hope the Haiku / Tanka / Senryu series meets the standard.
Welcome, Ron! I look forward to it! 🙂
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I think I’m going to attempt my first ever tanka poem, thank you for the prompt ✨
Excellent! Welcome to haikai! 😀
Thank you 😊
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Thanks Frank, new to me but the idea appeals!
Glad I inspired you! Thanks! 😀
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I loved this prompt Frank. It really captured my imagination. 🙂
Happy to hear it, Suzanne!
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Been slowly reading thru WCW’s book-length “Paterson” for the last two weeks. Have been writing daily short poems that fit right in.
Excellent! Thank you for coming out!
Off the topic, but … am I the only one who’s noticed the June/July/August calendar is not up?
Good Point. I’ll ask management. 😉
By the way, poets, I have a message from Grace about our schedule:
“We will be having our summer break after next week. I will update our third schedule this weekend. Two (2) week holiday per the usual.”
Thanks, Beverly, for the heads-up observations!
That’s it for me tonight! Enjoy the pub; I’ll keep the bar open for you. Just clean up any mess you make, and leave some Burgundy for me! LOL! 🙂
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Thank you for the prompt and the open bar. Not sure if I met it but that’s what came to mind. Due to life there may be a slight delay before I can make the rounds.
Happy you came! 😀
great prompt got my mind working this morning when I read it. sorry did not see it last night as was at an on line spoken word meeting I attend monthly.
That sounds like fun! Welcome! 😀
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My poem isn’t really up to the challenge but I read a lot of interesting poetry in the process of composing it. (K)
Great to see you here, K! I’ll head over and check it out!
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Hello Frank! I’m late to the party. Just wanted to say that the prompt really gave me an insight to the Imagist movement and I read a lot of good poetry, all thanks to you. My poem is a bit weird but I hope you’d like it.
Jay
Welcome, Jay! Thanks for coming out!
Ah- I can’t believe I got in under the wire on the linky! Thanks for this prompt that made me work for it.
My pleasure! Glad you made it! 🙂
https://joem18b.wordpress.com/2020/06/20/haiku-469/
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