Hello everyone, Grace here hosting a session for today.
We have discussed this literary device, known as Stream of Conciousness writing before in this session by Victoria C. Slotto. More contemporary figures in the world of poetry who turned to this technique include Jack Kerouac and Sylvia Plath. Briefly: In stream-of-consciousness writing, the poet or novelist turns to the flow of ideas, observations and emotions that invade our consciousness, many times hovering just below the surface. Novelist Virginia Woolf described this process as “an incessant shower of innumerable atoms.”
Basically, its purpose is to emulate the passage of thought through your mind without any inhibitors. For that reason, sentences become longer, less organized and more sporadic in style. Its lack of structure is not for everybody, but that doesn’t mean there isn’t any order. Stream of consciousness permits deeper patterns of order to emerge, ones based on the genuine movement of information in your brain.
This type of writing often produces a fair share of challenges for the reader who may struggle to find a sense of connection between one thought and another. With careful reading, it may become apparent, or maybe not.
Here are a few hints to help with reading and writing poetry that uses the stream of consciousness technique. Perhaps these will be a help in responding to today’s prompt, which is to write a stream of consciousness poem.
• Choose a topic. You might think of a person, and activity or even a dream. Take a walk, go someplace public, and let your thoughts take flight.
• Write with pen or pencil on paper. Draw pictures. You may even choose to use your writing journal to jot down your own little (schizophrenic) episodes.
• When you write in your journal, be different. Write with your non-dominant hand, write all over the page, not just in lines, write from bottom to top. Write in spirals or shapes. Forget grammar and syntax.
• Set a time to write non-stop or with hardly any pause in your writing.
• Review your writing for any connection you can discover between words and phrases and see where your poem will take you.
While you are thinking about this, allow me to share with you TED Talk by American Poet Billy Collins: Everyday Moments, caught in time. He is an American poet who was appointed as Poet Laureate of the United States from 2001 to 2003. He is a Distinguished Professor at Lehman College of the City University of New York (retired, 2016).
Billy Collins is known for writing down his poems in one sitting, with minimal edits in the final form. He is focused in observing something in the present, the immediate rather than observing something in the past. Writing a poem for him is an interruption of silence.
New to dVerse? Here’s what you do:
- Write a poem using stream of consciousness technique.
- Include a link back to dVerse in your post.
- Post your poem along with the photo on your blog.
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr. Linky below and remember to click the small checkbox about data protection.
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join during the next few days so check back to read other entries.
- Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work as we all love to have our poems read.
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like.
- Remember, have fun.
Grace said:
Welcome to the pub everyone! Hope you will find this fun to do. See you at the poetry trail.
Misky said:
Oh fun. I love writing using this technique.
Grace said:
I look forward to reading it.
Misky said:
It’s a bit in the day now, so I’ll give it my attention tomorrow. Thanks for the prompt, Grace.
Helen Dehner said:
One of my favorite ways to write poetry!
Grace said:
Carry on. Hello Helen!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
At least I tried… I have a lot about cooking in my thoughts at the moment… I have become addicted to watching food videos on youtube.
Grace said:
They are fun to learn and follow Bjorn. Right now I am into plants and propagating them so watching a lot of videos on that.
Helen Dehner said:
There are worse YouTube addictions! 🤪🤪🤪
msjadeli said:
Hello Grace and All. Thank you so much for the fun prompt. Just finished it. A lovely day today. Headed out to mow in a bit as the weeds with the tall stems love to show off. Sipping tepid coffee with oat milk right now so all set on a beverage. See you at the poetry trail!
Grace said:
I just came from the garden myself. Now back in to read your poems. So slad it was a fun prompt for you.
sanaarizvi said:
Loved the prompt, Grace 🙂 I found it was much easier to write this way than usual. A poem which would not have been written otherwise. Thank you!
I ll be around today and tomorrow to read and comment 💝
Grace said:
Good and I hope it was fun to write. See you!
dixitmrityunjay said:
Hello Grace, thanks for hosting. I loved writing in the way you’ve described, extra thanks for introducing me to this amazing style! I’ve submitted my song/poem. I hope you’ll enjoy it.
~Jay
Grace said:
Thanks for joining us Jay. I think it is fun to write it just the way thoughts would come to us.
Lucy said:
LOVE this prompt. Stream of consciousness writing is always enjoyable, and I had so much fun with this.
I didn’t have a clear idea on what I was writing about at first, but it came to me in the middle as I was thinking/writing. Forgiveness and remorse. Those themes struck me and I wanted to write a type of poem that breaks down the self through lament, remorse and wanting closure.
Thank you for the prompt, Grace. It was inspiring to me!
Grace said:
Good stuff to write about Lucy. Hope it was cathartic in a way of releasing them into the paper.
rothpoetry said:
I love the prompt! it is the way I write most of my poetry!
Grace said:
Really, good for you Dwight. Your poems seem that way, like flowing freely from your pen.
rothpoetry said:
Yes it works very well for me!
Truedessa said:
Hello Everyone, I thought I’d try this as my mind seems to be wandering these days. So here are some of my fragmented thoughts.
Looking forward to seeing where your mind traveled.
Grace said:
Fragmented thoughts are welcome!
sarahsouthwest said:
Hmm. I usually do a lot of thinking before i start to write, so it looks like I write quickly, but I’ve sorted my thoughts out beforehand. This felt very different, probably something I should try more often.
Grace said:
I do a lot of editing too so this process was light and fun. See you!
memadtwo said:
Great prompt Grace. (K)
Grace said:
Thanks for joining in.
pvcann said:
My natural habitat really, well, in my head anyway, thank you Grace for this wonderful prompting.
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Hello All- thanks for hosting Grace! Wonderful prompt.
rugby843 said:
I probably write like this most of the time, then try to make it readable.
Beverly Crawford said:
Great prompt! I love letting my mind go where it will!
Stine Writing said:
I guess I was a little late…Here is my contribution anyhow…https://christinebialczak.com/2020/08/16/mtb-stream-of-consciousness-writing/
Nima Mohan said:
A little late for the contribution !!