Hello, dVerse Poets! It’s Merril, and I’m hosting from New Jersey, where most likely it is a hot and humid day.
Today’s challenge is what we at dVerse call Prosery. If you’re new, or if you have not come across this challenge before, let me explain. I will give you a line from a poem, and then you incorporate it into a short prose piece. This can be either flash fiction, nonfiction, or creative nonfiction, but it must be prose! And it must be no longer than 144 words, not including the title.
You must use the line that I give you below. You may change punctuation and capitalize words, but you are not allowed to insert words in between parts of the sentence.
I went wandering through the Poetry Foundation Website, and I came across this poem, “A Time” by Allison Adelle Hedge Coke, whose work often explores her Native American heritage.
I’ve selected this line.
“when it is over said and done
it was a time
and there was never enough of it.”
–Allison Adelle Hedge Coke, “A Time”
Obviously, you will have to punctuate it to use it in prose. You can read the full poem here. Do not choose a different line from the poem for this prompt.
Please also link your prosery to dVerse. If you do not follow the rules, I will gently remind you, and then I will remove your prose piece from Mr. Linky.
Here’s how to take part in the Prosery Prompt:
– Write a piece of flash fiction or other prose of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line.
– Post your Prosery piece on your blog and link back to this post.
– Place the link to your actual post (not your blog or web site) in the Mister Linky site.
– Don’t forget to check the little box to accept use/privacy policy
– Please visit other blogs and comment on their posts!
I’m repeating here what I said the last time I hosted Prosery—in June—but which seems like a lifetime ago. I think it’s still true:
Many of us are feeling weary and overwhelmed. I know I’ve had days that I just feel like I can’t do the prompts or read posts by others. Never feel that you have to take part. You can always go back and revisit a prompt on your own or share a poem on an Open Link Night. That said, I will respond to every post for this prompt. I look forward to reading what you come up with. As of right now, I have no idea what I’ll be writing about!
Hello— love the quote… it made for a nice melancholy tale for me… look forward to read all the rest of the stories. I’m back at work (working from home) and we still have summer which meant ending my workday by going down to the sea for a swim.
Hi, Everyone! Welcome, the pub is open! It’s actually a pleasant day here in south Jersey–not too hot or humid, though we may get thunderstorms later. Grab a drink, and get ready to read and write.
Hi Merril, and thanks for hosting today. I love the poem and the line you chose. It’s good to know that you’ve had a pleasant day – we’ve had thunder and ran most of the day, but at least it’s cooler.
Thanks, Kim. We had one of the hottest Julys on record–and extreme humidity–which continued into August. It’s nice to get a break. 😏 I hope you have a better day tomorrow.
Hi Björn. I’m so pleased you like the quote, and how lovely to end your workday with an ocean swim!
well. not so much ocean, the sea is the brackish baltic… but it’s nice anyway.
😀
Hello All- I hope your day is going well. Merril, thank you for hosting and for a wonderful line to use. I’ve started week 2 of radiation therapy; feeling a bit tired so resting a lot.
I’m so glad you were able to make it today, Linda, and that the radiation therapy is in its second week already. Not too long to go now. Take it easy and don’t try to push yourself.
Thank you Kim.
As Kim said, you’ll be through it soon. Definitely take it easy, if you’re feeling tired, but I’m pleased you’re here.
Thank you Merril. I will.
Hello dVerse Poets. I’m back, refreshed and raring to go! I too love the quote and I’m looking forward to reading other writers’ flash fiction, anecdotes and stories. I’m so glad to see that you’re back, Björn, and hope you had a great break – how wonderful to end your workday with a swim in the sea! We ate the only courgette that grew on our plants – David didn’t water them or the tomatoes enough while I was away – and we had some of the potatoes in a potato salad this evening. I’m already planning for next year.
We have already had our first small harvest of tomatillo (the first time we tried) and I think there will be many more… the tomatoes have started to come as well… and we just put some seeds for winter-sallad in the ground. I am sorry for your tomatoes
Me too. I was looking forward to them, especially after eating some of my daughter’s crop.
We got some James Wong seeds for Christmas, and they have mostly worked very well…
We have some plants from bought seeds, and some my dad grew from seeds he got from tomatoes he bought in the supermarket. I was surprised they grew at all, but we’ve just had our first tomato from his plants. They are all cherry tomatoes. I wasn’t planning to grow anything this year, but it’s nice to be getting a crop now.
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Hi gang! Hope all is well for everyone, and those you love.
Hi Rob, I hope you and yours are well.
I made a mistake with my incorporated line, as someone pointed-out, but I’ve corrected it. 😀
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Bedtime for this night owl! 🙂 Will be back in the morning to read and comment ❤️
Just about bedtime for this morning person! 😀
❤️❤️❤️
Uh Oh, in the excitement of writing I totally spaced out the 144 words requirement. Please remove my link. I will make every effort to enlarge it!
It doesn’t have to be 144 words; it simply can’t exceed that number. Shorter is fine.
Fixed.
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Thank you, Merril, I can think of few prompts more timely than today’s.
Left mine with the linky …
May I have a bit of good rum, straight?
May we all find our way.
To wherever it is we are going or headed from.
Na’ama
I go to bed early, so I’m just seeing this. Thank you. I hope you helped yourself from the bar. I have some fresh hot coffee now.
I did help myself … 😉 Thank you. And I’d love a cup of coffee if you still have some on, though decaf might be best … 😉
The great thing about a virtual bar–we have everything! 😀
🙂
A great quote and one that touched a place deep inside. My mind went to current events but, my heart searched elsewhere.
I will be reading for a bit and return tomorrow.
Thank you very much!
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I thought immediately of the Chambers Brothers…time is an evocative word. (K)
Yes, it is.
I didn’t think I was going to have enough headspace to write. I’ve been pretty consumed by the fiasco of exam results in the UK. However, I surprised myself, and it was good to have something else to concentrate on.
I’m glad that you did. I saw something about the exam results–maybe something you said on Twitter? I just read about it. It does sound like an awful mess. We don’t have a state system for university exams. Some colleges waved the SATs and such for admission this year. Here the problem is mostly over whether schools (at all levels) will be in-person or virtual, but it differs by state and district.
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Hello Merril, thank you for hosting. I’ve submitted my work, I hope you’ll enjoy it.
Take care and stay safe.
~Jay
Thank you, Jay. I’ll be over in a bit to read it.
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Sandy Denny, just love her work. Thank you for hosting prosery Merril, a great line to challenge the mind and heart.
Thanks so much, Paul. I love her work, too–and this song is just so haunting whoever sings it.
Yes, one of my faves.
144 words are never enough for me! I think I must suffer from verbosity! I did whittle it down to 144, but so much remains to be said!! Great prompt, Merrill.
Thanks so much, Beverly. I’m glad you enjoyed the prompt. It is difficult to whittle it down to 144 words or fewer, but I suppose it’s a good exercise. Perhaps you can write the rest in the next prosery prompt. I’ll be by in a little bit to read.
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Good Afternoon, Poets! Sorry I’m late, Merril! Thank you for the inspiring line! 🙂
Thank you for your story!
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Amazing post
Well, thanks. It’s a prompt that’s now closed, but you can always catch another.