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As We Lay Side by Side, ee cummings, Erotica, Erotica as Literary Genre, I Sing the Body Electric, John Donne
Hi everyone! We are pleased to have our guest host, Sanaa Rizvi for today’s poetics.
Welcome to dVerse Poetics. This is Sanaa Rizvi aka (adashofsunny) and I will be your hostess this evening.
Erotica has been in Literature for quite some time. Nearly 270 years and onward, the first ever erotic novel to be written is “Fanny Hill.”
It remains one of the most highly banned books in history for its bold content centuries before “Lady Chatterley’s Lover.”
First published in 1748, it’s a story that revolves around an ageing courtesan who looks back contemplating the stark truth of her scandalous life.
What is erotica? Other than literary or artistic work that deals significantly with subject matter which stimulates?
Detail of a classical statue by Socrates Mavrommantis on display at his “Fragments” #exhibition
To His Mistress Going to Bed
by John Donne
Licence my roving hands, and let them go,
Before, behind, between, above, below.
O my America! my new-found-land,
My kingdom, safeliest when with one man mann’d,
My Mine of precious stones, My Empirie,
How blest am I in this discovering thee!
To enter in these bonds, is to be free;
Then where my hand is set, my seal shall be.
Full nakedness! All joys are due to thee,
As souls unbodied, bodies uncloth’d must be,
To taste whole joys. (Read full poem here)
~*~*~
Donne is easily the most erotic Poet in English Literature; his commemoration of his mistress’s body is free and jovial. It is entirely without shame and guilt and expresses itself in a language so sensual that it not only reproduces but attempts to transfer the energy to one reading the poem.
It’s been nearly two years since I have delved into writing erotic poetry of my own — the journey from finding my own voice to embracing it has been both challenging and profound. Following is a recent, short and humble example:
Darker Sunrise
I have surrendered many a darker sunrise
in my weakness—
your instructions never fail to arouse
the rising stems,
stretching out wherever you are,
whatever your weather.
I look upon you as a paragon of eros,
the way your lips shape my name
and obey
the pull of the commands of servitude—
sometimes there are no words left,
only beams of light
and softer sighs; is this something you can live without?
Evolution of Eros in Literature:
Erotic poetry has been written since as further back as Ancient Greece, producing poets such as Erato who was mythologized as the muse of erotic genre of poetry.
As time went by, more poets emerged in Italy including Petrarch and Guido Cavalcanti. Guido was best known for publishing “Canzone” (A lady asks me).
Another writer in the mid I500s, a French Poet called Pierre de Ronsard tried to mask the intense sexual experiences in his early love poems by infusing classical mythology into his work about his lover, Cassandre Salviati.
Shakespeare’s narrative poem “Venus and Adonis,” was his most popular work in 1593. He was of course best known for his large body of dramatic works but his poetry is still alluded to in contemporary Literature.
When the eighteenth century began, a significant Scottish poet, Robert Burns wrote heavily about sensuality and love in poems such as ‘A Red, Red Rose.’ Since its publication, it has gained a lot of popularity across the globe.
Caressed by a cloud … Detail from Correggio’s Jupiter and Io, (Antonio Allegri).
Walt Whitman’s opus “Leaves of Grass,” published in 1855, is filled with melodious eroticism particularly in “I sing the Body Electric.”
I Sing the Body Electric
(an excerpt from the poem)
This is the female form,
A divine nimbus exhales from it from head to foot,
It attracts with fierce undeniable attraction,
I am drawn by its breath as if I were no more than a helpless vapor, all falls aside but myself and it,
Books, art, religion, time, the visible and solid earth, and what was expected of heaven or fear’d of hell, are now consumed,
Mad filaments, ungovernable shoots play out of it, the response likewise ungovernable,
Hair, bosom, hips, bend of legs, negligent falling hands all diffused, mine too diffused,
Ebb stung by the flow and flow stung by the ebb, love-flesh swelling and deliciously aching,
Limitless limpid jets of love hot and enormous, quivering jelly of love, white-blow and delirious juice. (Read full poem here)
And who can forget E.E. Cummings, the prolific 20th century Poet who wrote verses in hopes to shock his puritanical peers:
As We Lay Side by Side
as we lie side by side
my little breasts become two sharp delightful strutting towers and
I shove hotly the lovingness of my belly against you
your arms are
young;
Your arms will convince me, in the complete silence speaking
upon my body
their ultimate slender language.
do not laugh at my thighs.
there is between my big legs a crisp city.
when you touch me
it is Spring in the city; the streets beautifully writhe,
it is for you; do not frighten them,
all the houses terribly tighten
upon your coming;
and they are glad
as you fill the streets of my city with children.
my love you are a bright mountain which feels.
you are a keen mountain and an eager island whose
lively slopes are based always in the me which is shrugging, which is
under you and around you and forever: I am the hugging sea.
O mountain you cannot escape me
your roots are anchored in my silence; therefore, O mountain
skillfully murder my breasts, still and always
I will hug you solemnly into me.
~*~*~
Erotic Poetry is particularly intriguing because this genre often demands a higher degree of lyricism through an expression of subjectivity and ‘complex feelings.’ How do these qualities mesh with the erotic? Is it pure physicality? It’s important to understand that there’s more to erotic poetry than corporeality or sexuality.
Erotic poems need not be sexually explicit and one doesn’t require use of dirty or overtly suggestive language to convey meaning. In fact, eroticism is sexiest when it remains indirect as a hint, as a suggestion between two characters.
The way this genre has manifested itself differs, of course, from one historical time to another and even from one country to another, depends on several particularities of the artistic trends that were influential at one point and on preferred kinds of sensitivity/ imaginary in a given cultural space.
Erotic poetry allows us to engage our imagination and helps us to better understand our urges and impulses and in doing so an erotic poem becomes a place where we can indulge in deep-seated desires or play out our irrational fears.
Sources: A Brief History of Erotic Poetry and The Uses of Erotic Poetry
For today’s Poetics, I would like you to write a poem and explore the question: “What is your idea of an erotic poem? What makes it stimulating? In your own words describe the fine line between ribald and just plain classy.”
Once you have created your post, please link up with Mr. Linky widget below. Make sure you visit your fellow poets and comment on their work. I look forward to reading you all and hope you enjoy the prompt.
If you ask me what I came to do in this universe, I as a Poet will answer you: I am here to write. A Dash of Sunny is a creative outlet for Sanaa, who possesses a deep love and inclination towards Poetry and Literature. Poetry is her calling, it chose her and is the reason behind the person she is today.
It’s necessary for one to become hurt, to be betrayed and to spend a considerable amount of time alone to truly be practical, to reflect, to recognize self and survive; her soul is a river flowing regardless of the obstacles in between. She is a dreamer and dreams of publishing several books in the time to come.
Thank you so much, Grace It’s a pleasure to be guest hosting at dVerse today!❤️ On the menu, we have a variety of drinks and horsd’oeuvres namely cheese curls with cabernet sauvignon, champagne and smoked salmon or if you prefer we also have raspberry scones with a coffee of your choice.
Hope you all have fun writing to the prompt! I look forward to reading what everyone comes up with. ❤️
Hi, Sanaa! I’m glad you’re hosting today. I’ll take one of those raspberry scones with a black coffee. 🙂
Raspberry scones with black coffee coming right up! ❤️ Great to have you with us, Jenna 🙂
That sounds like an amazing menu… I would be glad for a glass of Champagne and some salmon.. :.)
Smoked salmon and champagne coming up 🙂 Good to see you, Bjorn! ❤️
Thank you Sanaa for being our gracious host today. It has been some time since I have written one (as Scarlet of my other blog). I tend to write in lyrical and sensual way when thinking of loves scenes.
Wow, menu and drinks are special tonight. Champagne will be good but I also bring our famous ice wine from Niagara winery. See you in the poetry trail. Cheers!!!
Oh wow that sounds delicious! Thank you so much, Grace 😀 Heading over to delight in your verses ❤️Cheers!!!
“And I will blaze
open, a pink-cherry blooming
with all fire in me“
Your BLOGGER site won’t let me post, but had to tell you I enjoyed your poem — especialy the above… HOT!
Thank you. I appreciate your comment 🙂
Thank you for hosting, Sanaa and hello all.
An absolutely beautiful day today in Boston. I am just back from a walk along the Charles River. Nice breeze and moderate temps…lovely!
I’ll be back on the reading trail in the morning.
Hope you enjoyed your walk, Lillian 🙂 I just came back from reading your poem and absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for writing ❤️
Just popping in to say hi- to Sanaa and all–and well, that menu sounds amazing. I may have to have a bit of everything. 😀
Hi Merril! 😀 Hope you are having a wonderful day so far ❤️ Yes, please help yourself 🙂 I thought a bit of variety would be appropriate keeping in mind everyone’s tastes and preferences.
Good evening everyone, and thank you Sanaa for the challenging prompt, which has taken me out of my comfort zone and pushed me to write something very different. I really enjoyed the challenge. I’m late back from visiting my (step-)mother-in-law with my husband, so I won’t manage to read and comment much tonight, but I’ll be back early in the morning.
Thank you so much, Kim 😀 I am so glad you enjoyed writing to the prompt 🥰 heading over to read you! ❤️ See you in the morning!
The only erotica I know is the Marquis de Sade, Histoire d’O and Georges Bataille, definitely not my style 🙂 If I can come up with anything a bit ‘softer’ I’ll post it.
Aha 😀 sounds intriguing ❤️ I will definitely check it out some time. So good to see you, Jane!
Hi Sanaa! A wonderful pleasure to see you here. An intriguing prompt… I think I’ll be going down the fun and silly route… let’s see😂
Hey Viv! 😀 I am eager to see what you come up with. I am sure it will be fabulous! Happy Tuesday! ❤️
I couldn’t find the Mr Linky widget. I can never find these things.
My own quick thoughts are not worth publication, anyway. Neither erotic nor ribald but consistent with my style, my words are trite and silly.
My working title for this one …. ‘A drop in your Ocean’
You are my ocean to explore
A mystery of blue
I turn my bow from left to right
To see all sides of you
I pause upon each wave, each crest
To take in every view
Traversing slowly every inch
Explore each port anew
I try to turn the volume up
And turn you on, that’s true
As long as I don’t turn you off
Then any turn will do
To be classily erotic, by the way, is to use a feather. To be ribald is to use the whole chicken.
This is gorgeously rendered! ❤️ Thank you for joining us at dVerse Poetics, Richmond 🙂
Such a pleasure to be here. Could I perhaps have a little nibble on one of those cucumber sandwiches? And a cup of tea, perhaps? Milk, no sugar.
Cucumber sandwiches and a cup of tea 🙂 milk, no sugar coming right up! ❤️
Richmond, I truly adore your poem and comment on feather v chicken.
I agree, it is quite brilliant! 🙂
Thank you so much.
You are very welcome.
Richard, you won’t see the Mr Linky link if you’re viewing dVerse in the WP reader. You have to go to the actual dVerse site, then you’ll see it. Lovely poem with a humorous twist. I enjoyed the read. 😊
Oops, that should be Richmond. Auto-correct change your name. 🙏
Richard? Richard? Who is this Richard fellow?
Ask auto-correct — s/he wanted to rename you. 😄
Ha ha! ‘She’s’ a funny one, isn’t she? Anyhow, I found Mr Linky!
Auto-correct is a well-known trouble maker. Calling people by the wrong names, changing words, saying things we never intended to say. 😅 Glad you found good old Mr Linky. He was hiding in plain sight. 👍
Yes, but one cannot help thinking that all these digital beings – auto-correct and Mr Linky included, might be conspiring together to accelerate my dementia.
I think it’s a global conspiracy. Let’s not even go there with those domestic spies, Siri and Alexa.
Nicely written Richard! 🙂
That’s superb ❤
That is the sort of hugely generous overstatement that I thrive on, thank you Jenna
Sanaa, I hope you like my attempt. It’s pretty meta. *laughs*
It’s fantastic, Jenna! ❤️ I loved every word 🙂 thank you so much for writing to the prompt.
Hi Grace, thanks for having the helm. Welcome Sanaa! Is your name pronounced (sah-nah-ah), as it is in my head? Anyway — What a wonderful prompt. I had to reign myself in a bit, as this is a topic I am truly impassioned with. I wanted to take erotica all the way to the edge, but not step over into porn. I hope I showed a proper mix of fire and restraint. 😉
Hi Rob! 🙂 Loved your response to the prompt. Haha well it’s actually pronounced ‘Sa naa’ but over time there have been some pretty interesting variations ❤️ so anything goes. Thank you for joining us!
Hello Sanaa and All. So glad to see you hosting today. If I can overcome discomfort and can create a poem I will post it. Cheers to Erotica!
Hello Lisa 🙂 I look forward to reading it! Cheers! ❤️
Hi everyone! Thank you for hosting, Sanaa. 🙂
Hi Ayala! 😀 It’s so good to see you. Hope everything is good at your end ❤️
The responses to this prompt have been amazing! I’ve had such fun reading them all. Please forgive my delays in commenting; these prompts always pop up when I’m off to bed (good job I didn’t read them last night, or I might now have slept, hehe!)
No apologies necessary, Ingrid 🙂 I am so pleased to know that you enjoyed reading all the responses to this prompt. I agree, they are absolutely amazing! ❤️
I love this post!
Thank you Sanaa and Grace, loved the opportunity to explore this, and enjoyed the poems you provided, some of them my faves.
Thank you so much, Paul 🙂 heading over to read you! Thank you so much for joining us at dVerse Poetics ❤️
Pleasure 🙂
This has been a very interesting prompt! It has been so much fun to see how different personalities in the group responded, some overtly and others very subtle. You did a very classy job.
dwight
That is such high praise, thank you so much, Dwight 🙂 I am glad everyone enjoyed writing to the prompt. That was the main idea. ❤️
:>)
Thank you for choosing this genre.
I have recently started an erotica blog in order to promote out two romantic erotica novellas.
I have developed two styles. I lean towards a romantic dreamy storytelling which details the building emotion (especially from the female perspective). But I have also started to try my hand at a more “slap & tickle & style” only because it is a break from the emotion involved in writing dramatic romantic passionate stories.
I am going to try to write a poem in response to your prompt. My gorgeous Ben and I are pretty beat because we are out on a tough assignment. But I don’t want to miss the opportunity to take part in your prompt.
❤ ❤ ❤
Thank you for hosting, Sanaa! Great prompt! Inspired the passion of creativity in me.
And thank YOU for the wonderful poem, Mother Wintermoon ❤️
Thanks for a wonderful prompt Sanaa. Looking forward to some steamy afternoon reading.
And thank YOU for the brilliant write, Peter! 🙂
Finally! Fabulous post and your poem needs no humble caveat!
Thank you so much, Christine 🙂 that’s very kind of you to say so! ❤️
Hi Christine. I am wondering where your specific poem about this prompt is? Your link is just on your blog/website, not to the post itself. If you can relink it, we can read and comment. Thanks.
Incredible, beautiful
Well done
Meanwhile our if our thoughts meet
https://sexoticstories.wordpress.com/
💖💖💖
Would love the write erotic poetry but so far have only managed short stories
https://sexoticstories.wordpress.com/2021/01/21/one-winter-day/
aawwww…sweet