Hello everyone! We have guest host for today’s Poetics – Lucy!
“So I went on softly from the glade,
And left her behind me throwing her shade,
As she were indeed an apparition—
My head unturned lest my dream should fade.”
—“The Shadow on the Stone” by Thomas Hardy.
Hello dVerse poets… Heeeeere’s Lucy!
Yes. That was a reference to Lucille Ball.
I’m your guest host for today’s Tuesday Poetics, and I’m so glad to be here.
It seems such an odd transition in the seasons, don’t you think? Especially these days. From summer to the crisp autumn, inviting us to the tint of October with carved pumpkins, skulls and chocolate—there’s not that much time to process the gothic underlying theme that our dear October tessellates for us.
This would include to the most perceptive eye, literature and branching from literature, poetry.
Dark and daunting themes, grief, reflection, horror tales and scares. There are memories associated with October, as well with costume expectations and trick or treaters to look forward to for each year. I for one will be scaring children with an evil Monopoly guy mask.
Okay, no, I’m not that cruel.
But, when we think of October, there are different contexts to consider, such as how dark and dreary the month is. We can celebrate the glory of dark themes and imagery in poetry as October is one of the best times to do so. It allows an essence of life into the fog, a river to part with grief, and to stumble upon an apparition by the trees.
Was that last part too specific? You bet. In Thomas Hardy’s poem, “The Shadow on the Stone,” it communicates these themes of what October engenders: death, grief, disillusionment, and most importantly, wraith imagery (with Hardy’s poem, as well a theme to not look back into the past of what once was).
I was captivated by this piece, along with Edgar Allan Poe’s ballad, “To Ulalume.”
“The skies they were ashen and sober;
The leaves they were crispéd and sere—
The leaves they were withering and sere;
It was night in the lonesome October…”
Edgar Allan Poe, overall, describes the longing of a deceased love but with the desire of not wanting to look back; instead he wants to indulge in temptation. He does not, in the end. This one was written the same year his wife, Virginia, died.
Both poems I’ve mentioned have themes of not wanting to look back. Poe does look back, at one point, as he finds himself at his beloved’s grave. Hardy does not as he refuses to turn his head to see what could be the apparition of his deceased wife; if he turns his head, it destroys the dream that she could be there when she might not be at all.
Both poems have strong notions of grief, all relative to the theme of October. From October, we are currently from the former shift of life to death.
And that is what we are going to write about for our poetics today.
Today’s prompt:
We will write a poem about the transient notion of life to death, or topics germane to the theme. With a twist.
We are going to write a ballad.
Ballads typically consist of four-line quatrains with a rhyme scheme in either ABABBCBC form or another alternate of that form such as ABCB or ABAB.
The form is up to you, ultimately, along with how many stanzas you use.
Now as for syllables… Let’s pretend they don’t exist here for this ballad prompt. I don’t want this one to be too limiting to write for. So… Syllables? What are those? Never heard of them.
Poe’s “Ulalume” is the perfect example of a ballad, along with Ezra Pound’s “Ballad of the Goodly Fere”.
This will/can include dark, gothic themes and imagery as it pertains to the theme. It’s October and we’re looking for some dark poetry, publies.
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Oh, the fun we’re going to have…
Note: The title is from You Want It Darker, from Leonard Cohen.
Author bio: I have been writing poetry consistently since early 2017 and I am constantly inspired by poets like Sylvia Plath, Robert Frost, E.E. Cummings, Ted Hughes, and Leonard Cohen. I have publications that appear in Variant Literature Magazine, Visual Verse Anthology, the Scarlet Leaf Review, and Ephemeral Elegies among others that are listed under my main pseudonym Ellie Onka. In my free time, I enjoy practicing music.
Thank you for guest hosting our Poetics Lucy. Yes, we want it darker and sweeter.
Thank you Grace for the opportunity!
And the bar is now open. Welcome!
It’s a sunny day today, and my cat is using me as furniture. How is your day going? How are you?
I can’t wait to read everyone’s ballads. I hope you have fun with the prompt despite it being dark poetry themed, but October itself can be a pretty dark month, no?
As well, thank you Grace, for the opportunity to host today. 🙂
Hello Lucy… here it’s a dark and rainy night already (just the right mood for a ballad like this)
Cloudy sunny in between afternoon.
This was fun to do in ballad style of writing as well. Thanks for pushing us out of our comfort zone.
I always like those types of afternoons. Not too sunny, not too dark or cloudy. I hope the weather is nice this season!
I’m so glad to hear that. I know rhyme schemes can be pretty constricting, but I think it’s always good to switch things up and experiment. I’m primarily a free-verse type of writer, so even for me, this was a push out of my comfort zone.
Indeed, the perfect mood.
T’was a dark and stormy night…
Ha 🙂
I thought about the genre Murder Ballads, and particularly the record by Nick Cave when reading this…
For example this one
Downright chilling!
Wow! This really can get one in the headspace to write a ballad. Incredibly visceral and haunting, especially with the instrumentals.
This is from the same record… another dark ballad
Welcome, Lucy, and thank you for guest hosting Poetics! We have had a weird mixture of rain and sunshine today, and my car broke down right in a no-parking zone in the rain. Luckily, my husband got someone to help with jump leads, but I’m feeling out of sorts and hoping that some deliciously dark poems will sort me out. I haven’t written a ballad in a while, so I took an old poem and re-wrote it. It’s still raining and very dark outside – the cats have deserted me and are sitting with my husband. Oh well.
I’m so sorry to hear that, Kim. That sounds hectic. I also hope that some dark poems will help.
Also, I really enjoyed your poem! It’s perfect with the theme.
Well, with the rain, it can fit the prompt pretty well then, at least. 🙂
Ha! Cats will be cats. How many times my little guy has deserted me, I’ll never know. I can relate.
Hello Grace, Lucy, and All. I love the theme, Lucy, as it gives me permission to delve into my dark side. I wrote the ballad last night but it is far from finished in my eyes. Will use the “edit like a cat” to try to polish it up some more. It’s sunny today and halfway warm again. Speaking of cats, your furbaby is letting you know where you rate, eh? Mine see me as tolerable servants as well 🙂 If you have any Magners on tap today, I’ll take a pint please.
Hi Lisa! Yes, join the dark side! Your ballad is amazing with the prompt, and it really is haunting.
Yep, my little kitty (okay, he’s ten or so) is letting me know that I’m his lazy boy chair. That’s my new day job, I guess. We are definitely their servants, I’m glad you can understand. How are your cats?
One pint coming right up!
Thank you again on the ballad 🙂 My cats had major beefs with each other at first, but at night when I’m cozied down on the couch, each creeps closer to each other. Mlady let her tail tap on Dotty the other night and Dotty didn’t run away scared. What’s your cat’s name?
Thanks on Magners. Cheers!
Aww, that’s so cute. That sounds like progress to me! Two of my cats just hate each other, no way can I remedy that at this point. Lol.
I also love your cats’ names. ❤ ❤ ❤
My little guy is Haji, named after the head of all genies in "I Dream of Jeannie."
Cheers. 🙂
🙂 I love the name Haji and didn’t know that about “I Dream of Jeannie.” Haji is also Jonny Quest’s best buddy!
Hi, Lucy! Hope you have a fun time tonight. I’ve ended up doing two ballads. Sometimes when I have a little battle with a prompt I find another poem just spills out almost immediately – as if i was trying to write the wrong poem all along.
Hi Sarah! I’m indeed having a fun time, reading all the responses and seeing how everyone interprets the prompt. I can’t wait to see more come in.
I understand that entirely. 🙂 Some poems are easy to be fencing with, while others are just stubborn and won’t back down. It’s a process, but seeing how it all comes together is worth the fight.
Your two ballads were incredible. I enjoyed them both greatly. ❤
Loved the prompt! I have never been able to accomplish a ballad… it’s challenging. But couldn’t resist trying today 🙂 hope I got it right.
Going to make my rounds now. Happy Tuesday everyone!
Happy Tuesday, Sanaa. I’m glad you like the prompt for today, and I enjoyed reading your take on it. It was very well-written!
I’m not much of a ballad writer myself. I think this is the first time I ever wrote a ballad that I was content with. It was challenging for me as well, to be honest.
Thank you, Lucy! 💝💝
Not much of a balladeer, I fear, but I gave it a go. Thanks for the push, Lucy.
Same, Ron, same! Poems with structure scare me.
I’m kidding, I think. I hardly write in traditional form and I don’t think many do either, which is why I thought it would be a good challenge.
Looking forward to trying out a “dark ballad,” Lucy! What a chillingly delicious prompt 🙂
I’m looking forward to reading your response, Dora. 🙂 Have fun.
Thank you for hosting Lucy! Great prompt- I[‘ll have to work on something- I had a dental appointment today. UGH…
I hope all is well Linda with your appointment! I’m looking forward to see what you come up with for the prompt. 🙂
Interesting choice of songs Bjorn!
Darkness from Lucy is hardly surprising … but it’s spring here so i felt justified in blending a bit of both!
What? Me, dark? Never.
So glad you could participate in the prompt. Light and darkness mix very well. 🙂 There’s a light at the end of the tunnel somewhere then.
lol but can you find it Lucy with all those broken bones and wings n things 🙂
I don’t know, but I can certainly try. 🙂
lol maybe I should challenge you to write one poem with NO darkness or death overtones … up for it?
Sure thing. Any deadline in mind?
shall we say a week?
thanks, you’re a good sport!
Yes, a week sounds good. Thank you for the challenge!
you’re most welcome, looking forward to reading it!
Hi Lucy! Well, I’m not of much of a balladeer but I’m giving it a try. And in the middle of my endeavor, the new editor decided to be contrary and not let me space between paragraphs. Does anyone know how to do this? – Eugi
Hello Eugi! I’m glad to hear that. I’m not much of a balladeer either, which is why I inflicted such traditional hell (oops, I mean, poetic form) onto us to write in today. I’m more of a free-verse type of writer. But, seriously, it gives us a chance to break out of our comfort zones. Lordy knows I need to smash mine here and there.
About the spaces, you can try two things. There’s a spacer block in the new editor where you can add spaces between the lines. Also, depending on your computer, you can try command shift v to copy/paste your writing from its original format onto the block editor. I hope this can help.
Well, Lucy, you are separating the sheep and the goats in this one!!
It’s animal hunting season already?
Just some of my dark humor tonight. Ha. But, yes, it does seem that way!
I enjoy your unique gift of poetry!!
Aww, thanks. ☺️
Hey Lucy, great prompt. I’ve put my kinda ballad up and I’ll be back for a bit of gothic reading later.
Hi Peter. Glad you could join in!
Good Evening – I don’t usually write dark but, tonight I thought I’d give it a try.
Hi Truedessa! You wrote a fabulous dark ballad. I enjoyed it very much.
Oo, a ballad. Back when I was young and foolish and thought I was Joni Mitchell and/or Judy Collins and/or Leonard Cohen with a little Neal Young thrown in, I used to write those all the time. I will /not/ be going back to look at them because why disillusion myself about my youthful brilliance. Anyway, this may take some time, I’ll post when I’ve got one!
Personally, I know what you mean, which is why I love the sentiment of looking forwards and not backwards (so no one can see I’m burning my old poems). Take all the time you need, I’m looking forward to seeing what you create!
Love this prompt Lucy! As a melancholy man with a well-traveled soul, dark comes to me with just a coax. I am quick with a smile and always in pursuit of a clever remark, yet I find the dark soothing, and cathartic to write. BTW — I just in this half hour edited three words in my original posted piece. I think it makes it stronger and its darkness more penetrating. Thank you for hosting today… 🙂
Thank you, Rob. So glad you enjoyed the prompt!
I can understand, finding the darkness soothing. I think definitely letting out the darker parts of our emotions can be a relief. I gravitate toward it too, especially with the poetry I read, often grim and gothic.
Hi, Lucy! Thanks for hosting. I love ballads, but I didn’t have a chance to write or post yesterday.
I also like Leonard Cohen. A Montreal dance company was touring with their show set to all Leonard Cohen. We saw the show in Philadelphia (when we still went out to things. . .).
Hi Merril!
Leonard Cohen was a gem. And that is so neat! What an experience that must have been!
Love this prompt, Grace! Thank you for hosting.
I’m glad you liked the prompt! 😉
Ah, I see it was your prompt. Thank you, Lucy! 😊🤩
Sorry I missed the deadline, Lucy. Dark poetry is my thing! I find it cathartic and it brings out the Mistress of the Dark, in me. 😉 I hope to use your prompt on OLN.
There is no need to apologize, MW. I’m just happy that others like the challenge. I know it can be difficult with rhyme schemes, as well with dark poetry not being everyone’s forte.
And yes, you are so right. Dark poetry really can be cathartic. We’re letting out our demons to play. What’s not freeing about that?
I’m looking forward to seeing what you come up with for OLN, if you do use the prompt. 🙂
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