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Hello, dVerse Poets! It’s Merril–writing from southern New Jersey with another Prosery prompt.
It’s certainly been a crazy, stressful few weeks [years] here in the U.S., and I know the eyes of the world have been on us. Thank goodness for poetry and stories! I feel like I should have come up with a more cheerful prompt, but I wrote this before the news came on Saturday, and it sounds very November-ish to me.
For those who have not written for the dVerse prosery prompt–or if you need a refresher–here is an explanation.
Prosery is a piece of short prose that includes a line from a poem. I will give you the line, and then you incorporate it into your prose piece. It can be either flash fiction, nonfiction, or creative nonfiction, but it must be prose, not a poem. And it must be no longer than 144 words, not including the title. It does not have to be exactly 144 words.
You must use the line that I give you below. You may change punctuation and capitalize words, but you are not allowed to insert words in between the parts of the sentence.
I was browsing through Brainpickings, and I came across a poem by Liesel Mueller. I’ve selected this sentence:
“there is nothing behind the wall
except a space where the wind whistles”
from “Drawings By Children” by Lisel Mueller
You can read the entire poem here, and also watch/listen to Rosanne Cash’s reading of it.
Here’s how to take part in the Prosery Prompt:
– Write a piece of flash fiction or other prose (not a poem) of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line.
– Post your Prosery piece on your blog and link back to this post.
– Place the link to your actual post (not your blog or web site) in the Mister Linky site.
– Don’t forget to check the little box to accept use/privacy policy
– Please visit other blogs and comment on their posts!
Hello, Everyone! It’s a beautiful spring-like day here in NJ. You can even sit on the pub’s terrace today.
Ha… here we have evening and darkness… much more November… and your line fitted perfectly with my mood.
I was in “a mood” until the end of last week. 😀. We’ll return to more typical November weather in a few days–cold and rainy.
Hello Merril and All. Your prompt got me to thinking, so thank you! I like what you say also about how writing and poetry can get us through tough times. The weather has been beeyooteeful here the past couple of days. The doors and windows are open. My economical brain says less days to turn on heat the less it costs me, which means both hemispheres are happy. Can’t wait to see what everyone comes up with using Mueller’s evocative line.
I’m so pleased I got you thinking, and that you liked the line. It seemed like one with lots of possibilities.
Hello Everyone! Merril- thank you so much for hosting and for the wonderful line. Putting the finishing touches on something now. It’s chilly and overcast here today, which is such a welcome change. I am making homemade tomato soup with orzo and grilled cheese sandwiches for dinner. 🙂
Oh yummy. I’ll be right over. I don’t eat meat, so I wasn’t interested in your BBQ when it was nice out. 😀
Linda that sounds so yummy. If you have enough for a guest, may I invite myself to your dinner table?
Anytime! ❤️🙏🏻
❤ 🙂
Hi Merril. This is a wonderfully mysterious prompt! Will be fun to create a response. Thanks!
Hope everyone is having a wonderful November!
Great, Rob. I’m so pleased you like it. November is definitely looking up. 😀
Your prompt put me in mind of EAPoe — so…
Ohhhh!
Rossnne Cash did wonderful reading of Lisel’s poem — very moving, both the poem and the reading.
Thank you, Rob. I thought so, too.
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Thank you for the prompt, Merril. I enjoyed taking part although it was challenging. I’ll be back here to read in the morning after I’ve set up home-school for my son. Speaking of challenging…
I’m so pleased you undertook the challenge, and I loved your story. Yes, I understand. Daughter and husband are at the other end of things–teaching from home.
Thank you for hosting, Merril. I found this a haunting line for some reason….hence my piece of fiction surrounding it.
Well…..winter is coming and we won’t be escaping to a warmer climate for the first time in 7 years. So — we bought a treadmill. It came today. Oh my goodness. The box is HUGE and LONG…..luckily a maintenance man by the building’s loading dock took pity on us and helped bring it up to our unit. Almost didn’t fit in the elevator! The box is now in our living room and weighs about 200 pounds! I should have listened to George when he said to get the smaller one! We hope to carry all the individual pieces into the study and put it together there. If the main large and long piece doesn’t make it round the bend in our hallway, our living room may be sporting a treadmill!!! Wish us luck….and I’ll have a hefty gin and tonic please! 🙂
The things we do in pandemic times! Good luck. Well, we never go away to warmer places, but I’m sad about not getting together with family–and considering ordering an indoor bike.
Good luck Lillian! 🙂 …and happy treading!
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Oops! I forgot to wish you all a good evening and a belated cheer for the excellent election result. I’ve enjoyed all the stories so far and look forward to reading more in the morning. More creepy ones please!
I’ve written several creepy stories and poems recently, but not for this prompt. Sorry! 😀
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Good evening everyone! Can only agree with Björn, this fitted my mood too. Made me try to write a different kind of story.
Wonderful!
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Lovely prompt to start the week Merril – thank you, and yes a cheer for good old democracy.
Thanks so much, Peter, and yes!
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Hi there. This is my first time to enter and I’m not sure if I have done it correctly as to linking! I’ve never Linked before! Please let me know if I have missed an important part of the process. Thanks!
Hi. Yes, when I clicked on it, I got message that the page doesn’t exist. Copy the entire URL of your post and then paste it into the Mister Linky. To link to dVerse in your post, you copy the link to this post and paste it into your post. I hope that’s clear. If not, maybe someone else can explain it better. Thank you for joining us!
Hi Merril! A fascinating prompt, indeed. Our weather is glorious, thus far, and not the typical November grey scarf. I may not be able to participate but will definitely be making my rounds to see what others have written.
Thank you so much. The prompt is open all week, so feel free to join in later, if you’d like.
You’re welcome and thank you, Merril. ❤️
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Ah, Merrill, what a lovely prompt so full of whistles in the wind … and all they mean …
🙂
Left mine with the linky.
Would love me a nice cup of warm spiced cider. The weather isn’t too fall-like, but the heart knows the times are what they are. …. 🙂
Na’ama
Ooops, extra “l” sneaked into your name for “extra lovely” …
😀💙
Sorry … 😉
Thank you. Sorry, I’m late with your cider. I’ll join you with some later this afternoon. 😀
Cider this afternoon sounds fab! 🙂
😀
Thanks for the inspiration Merril! It has been a bit stressful these past few weeks in the US so I tried to give this piece a hopeful ending. I’m looking forward to reading everyone else’s throughout the day tomorrow !
Thank you. Yes, I’ve had a hard time concentrating lately (well. . .for months). I’ll be back to reading more later today.
Hello Merril, thanks for hosting, I’ve submitted my flash fiction piece and I loved this prompt. Take care :))
Thank you very much. I’ll be by later today to read it.
good quote Merril. Some interesting and varied responses too. (K)
Thank you, Kerfe. Yes, quite diverse. I’m enjoying reading them.
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I was fascinated with Mueller’s line, thank you for such an interesting prompt Merril.
Thank you so much, Paul. I think the poem is interesting, too.
🙂
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Wonderful prompt Merril
https://wideeyedwanderingspoonie.wordpress.com/2020/11/10/shattered-a-prosery-tale/
I’m so pleased you like it!
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