“Canst thou bind the sweet influences of Pleiades…?” Job 38:31.
Hello dVersians! Sleepless the other night, I was struck, once again, by the clarity of our late Autumnal nocturnal sky here in the Northern Hemisphere, when the pressure is high and that familiar hunter Orion is back chasing the bull. And just out of reach of his lustful intentions, loom the seven sisters of the Pleiades.
November is the month of the Pleiades reaching its highest spot in the sky on or around the 21st of the month. As a frost patch of stars, it is perhaps indicative of the cold weather to come. In the Southern Hemisphere however, this star conglomerate is coincident with the Spring awakening and agriculture and hence they are ‘the hoeing stars’ in South Africa.
I visualize the Pleiades as a jewelled setting of marcasites and this stellar phenomenon turns up in many poems throughout time. (And isn’t the magic of stars that they connect us not only across continents but down the centuries too.) Evidently Sappho was sleepless and star-gazing like me, in her Midnight Poem
“Tonight I’ve watched
The moon and then
the Pleiades
go down
The night is now
half-gone; youth
goes; I am
in bed alone”
Walt Whitman’s’ On the Beach at Night, describes a father teaching his child about transience and immortality in their night sky gazing.
“Watching the east, the autumn sky.
Up through the darkness,
While ravening clouds, the burial clouds, in black masses spreading,
Lower sullen and fast athwart and down the sky,
Amid a transparent clear belt of ether yet left in the east,
Ascends large and calm the lord-star Jupiter,
And nigh at hand, only a very little above,
Swim the delicate sisters the Pleiades…”
And I particularly like Marjorie Pickthall’s “Stars”
“Now in the West the slender moon lies low,
And now Orion glimmers through the trees,
Clearing the earth with even pace and slow,
And now the stately-moving Pleiades,
In that soft infinite darkness overhead
Hang jewel-wise upon a silver thread…”
For some like Anne Spencer (The Wife Woman ), the Pleiades is not so much a star assembly as just another example of the ‘seven’ phenomenon, evident in many earthly things:
“Maker-of-sevens in the scheme of things
From earth to star;
Thy cycle holds whatever is fate, and
Over the border the bar.
Though rank and fierce the mariner
Sailing the seven seas,
He prays, as he holds his glass to his eyes,
Coaxing the Pleiades…“
And so, for this month’s Poetics challenge:-
1A. Write a poem using the PLEIADES FORM (click HERE for MTB 16/10/14 post on this). Pick a ONE-WORD TITLE then write a SEVEN-LINE poem of SEVEN SYLLABLES whereby each line begins with the FIRST LETTER of your title.
1B. Since only 6 of the Pleiades are now visible to the naked eye, some Greek legends explore what might have happened to the missing sister, Merope, sometimes called the Lost Pleiad. So you may prefer to write the Pleiades form with just SIX LINES of SIX SYLLABLES instead. For example ‘Perpetual’
“Plain-song echoes in old
porous stone. Wilting weeds
plead. Thistles fly where once
prayers flew. Roof gone, sky stark,
peel back centuries: the
Passion, or passions, all
places die, immortal.”
OR
2. Write an ACROSTIC poem of PLEIADES or its derivative PLEIADIAN with each letter starting the first word of subsequent lines
Note: Your poem(s) should be pertinent to the subject here – within a cosmic, mythic, or numeric theme pertinent to ‘seven’.
[If you want to have a go at both – write them under the same ONE WORD TITLE]
Further Reading:
Meddle with a Pleiades Poem
The Pleiades in Mythology – different cultural myths for this star cluster
Who are the Pleiadians?
Stargazers might like to Find the Pleiades
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Linky widget and leave a comment (see below). Then go visiting, reading and sharing your thoughts with other contributors which is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
Hello Everyone – this prompt is not too taxing but I hope still inspirational as we look up to the night sky
Hello… It took me a while to remember how I wrote to that prompt… now I remember that Vandana did the guest host for this… let us see if she comes to visit.
Maybe she will. I figured after 6 years it was time to resurrect this form!
Ha… I might even repost my poem from that time.
Hello Laura and All. Happy to see a new form to try out. I woke up to a blanket of snow outside and it’s still falling. Not expected at all! If you have any hot cocoa with a bit of peppermint schnapps could I have a mug please?
Interesting concoction coming up and maybe a few marshmallow sprinkles to reflect the snow theme
Here in the UK we are mostly wet
Marshmallows to reflect the snow theme sounds perfect. Cheers!
This is fascinating, and I am really looking forward to trying it!
will look out for it!
Good evening dVerse barflies and poets!, and thank you Laura for this stellar prompt. I found it hard to choose just one option, so I ended up combining two, if that’s OK. There’s a misty moon above Norfolk this evening, but I haven’t seen any stars tonight. Maybe later, as we’ve been promised frost in the forecast.
I did two too – both forms under 1 title but I liked how you chose both the Pleiades forms – beautifully worked too
p.s. cloudyish here too and due rain later
Thank you so much, Laura! I haven’t noticed any rain but it was certainly cloudy late this afternoon, although we did have a gorgeous pink and purple sunset. I was hoping to see some stars this evening to complement your prompt.
yes I took some photos of that sunset after my afternoon walk
Exiting and fascinating with a whole new form. 😀
Enjoy! It was new to me too!
That was fun and challenging will try out some more after this.
See you all tomorrow – have enjoyed reading the poems – a fair sprinkling of Pleiades over the Acrostic
Not really my cuppa tea, but I gave it a whirl, enjoyed it greatly, and I’m reasonably satisfied with the outcome. Now I gotta go sit in the corner & read. If you’re not too busy, can I get a cuppa tea, please?
sorry you missed the tea lady and your ‘whirl’ was really very good!
Fascinating prompt Laura.I wrote a 6/6 version. Also, the first link I posted was incorrect. I reposted with the correct link. SORRY! 😦
I posted links to the two poems I wrote to your prompt — a Pleiades, and an acrostic. I apologize for messing up my very first link post. The two posted links that are correct are the one notated (correct link) and the one notated (acrostic). Thanks Laura.
Got it – will come and read
An interesting prompt Laura. The former prompt said the syllables were changed to six. From your prompt I guess we are staying with seven syllables?
I guess I did not read down far enough for you said we could do it with six syllables if we choose. Sorry for talking ahead of myself!!
no worries – I quite often read what I think is there!
I do it all the time sad to say!! Thank you.
A bit late to the pub today….thank you for hosting Laura. I enjoyed doing some research before posting here. Will be back in the morning to hit the reading trail….and to catch up a bit from last week as well.
I’m only just back on the reading trail myself Lillian
A challenging form and a great subject. (K)
when I lack inspiration the heavens sometimes help!
Always.
Hi Everyone! I have been running behind all day, it seems. Pretty silly for a retired person, you know? Anywho, sipping some red wine and enjoying a warm fire on a brisk evening. I’ll be making the rounds and thank you, Laura, for the fascinating prompt.
hope you enjoyed your wine – will come and read your poem soon
😊
Interesting prompt, I wrote one then decided to go in another direction. I am a dreamer so I had to work a dream into that starry sky.
It’s late but, I promise to be back tomorrow to read all the wonderful poems.
dream on Trudessa – dreams are made of starlight!
Laura, I am unable to comment on you page. I just wanted to let you know I enjoyed both poems. The first one brought a tear as 7 has always been an important number
in my journey.
sorry to hear that Trudessa – bloggers & WPers not always compatible but I think there is a way – not sure why yet but even so thanks for taking the time to try and for this lovely feedback
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Hello Laura, thanks for hositng. I have submitted my poem. I loved writing it, in the process I found out many interesting facts/myths about Pleiades!
~Jay
glad you enjoyed the stellarium prompt – look forward to reading your poem
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What a fascinating form Laura, glad to be acquainted with it.
and thank you for joining in
loved reading these poems. i still have some to read. i have learnt a new form of poem from this prompt. did try and write one to join in but was not happy enough to post. thank you for broadening my mind.