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C.S. Lewis, mystic, octave forms, R.S. Thomas, sacred, spiritual
“There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white…”
Shel Silverstein
Hello dVersifiers – here we are in the month of Advent and today, December 8th, is Bhodi day, celebrating that moment when Siddhartha Gautama achieved awakening/enlightenment (bhodi) through meditation/prayer and became the Buddha. And yet Wordsworth’s words seem more than ever to apply:
“The world is too much with us; late and soon,
Getting and spending, we lay waste our powers:
Little we see in Nature that is ours;
We have given our hearts away, a sordid boon!”
A major distractor these days is politics which, with Covid-19, has become increasingly personal and intrusive in our day to day lives. Moreover, the enlightened notion of ‘awakening’ has been somewhat bastardised within the current ideology of ‘wokeness’ as with it we are more divisive, more intolerant, more consumed by worldly things. So, let us step off the sidewalk for a while and look to the poets whose thoughts turn to the mystical/spiritual. I like how C.S. Lewis is answering the question he poses in ‘An Expostulation’
“…Why should I leave this green-floored cell,
Roofed with blue air, in which we dwell,
Unless, outside its guarded gates,
Long, long desired, the Unearthly waits
Strangeness that moves us more than fear,
Beauty that stabs with tingling spear,
Or Wonder, laying on one’s heart
That finger-tip at which we start
As if some thought too swift and shy
For reason’s grasp had just gone by?”
And the Chinese hermit seems to answer him in Han Shan’s poetry & Thoughts:
“Put a fish on land and he will remember the ocean until he dies.
Put a bird in a cage, yet he will not forget the sky.
Each remains homesick for his true home,
the place where his nature has decreed that he should be.
Man is born in the state of innocence.
His original nature is love and grace and purity.
Yet he emigrates so casually without even a thought of his old home.
Is this not sadder than the fishes and the birds?”
Glimpsing and forgetting are embodied in R.S. Thomas’ The Bright Field
“I have seen the sun break through
to illuminate a small field
for a while, and gone my way
and forgotten it. But that was the pearl
of great price, the one field that had
treasure in it. I realize now
that I must give all that I have
to possess it. Life is not hurrying
on to a receding future, nor hankering after
an imagined past. It is the turning
aside like Moses to the miracle
of the lit bush, to a brightness
that seemed as transitory as your youth
once, but is the eternity that awaits you.”
Solitude, peacefulness, beauty in the nature, are invariable the touchstones for that glimpse of something other. But it is that grit in our oyster shell that makes us turn away, search, hanker, and were it not for our capacity to daydream we might never even begin to fathom, like Din-Attar
“Lost in myself
I reappeared
I know not where
a drop that rose
from the sea and fell
and dissolved again;
a shadow
that stretched itself out
at dawn,
when the sun
reached noon
I disappeared.”
For this Poetics challenge, let your imagination become a springboard to the mystical/sacred just as Mary Oliver describes in ‘Praying’.
“…just
pay attention, then patch
a few words together and don’t try
to make them elaborate, this isn’t
a contest but the doorway
into thanks, and a silence in which
another voice may speak.”
Here are 8 fragments from the mystic poets as prompt. Choose ONE, include the words in your poem or title if you wish, or write it as an Epigraph at the start of your poem and always cite the author too.
- Our hearts irrigate the earth. We are fields before each other (Thomas Aquinas)
- Coming, going, the waterbirds don’t leave a trace (Dogen)
- Why should not the water find delight in the floral fragrance of its own rippled surface? (Jnanadev)
- To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night (Gibran)
- Like a ruby held up to the sunrise. Is it still a stone, or a world made of redness? (Rumi)
- My heart was split, and a flower appeared (Solomon)
- The mountain path leads skyward and dissolves into light (Tukaram)
- Ask no questions of the moth in the candle flame (Attar)
For those of you who like the extra challenge of poetry forms try one of these 8 line Octave forms
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Good evening from a wet Yorkshire – The bar is open and its Happy Bhodi day – I look forward to reading your poems.
Hello Laura and All. It’s cold enough to snow but none yet. Sipping hot coffee and trying to stay warm. I love every choice of line for the prompt and it took awhile to choose one.
and in the end we chose the same one!
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Hello… a little late tonight as we were on a live event watching a reading of “Borders” by the playwright Henry Naylor… really good stuff, and almost as good streamed as it would have been live. Now I have to relax a bit and leave the paved road…
that’s a hard act to compete with!
Loved the prompt! I was instantly drawn to the quote by Thomas Aquinas! It led me to a rosy field 💝 Will be around today and tomorrow to read and comment.
Happy Bodhi day, Laura! 🙂 You always inspire the best poetry from me.
that’s really good to hear Sanaa x
Good even ing all, and thank you Laura for giving me something to think about and get my teeth into! My heater was fixed last Thursday but, by Sunday, it stopped working again. So here I am with a shawl, a blanket, a hot water bottle and a cup of rhubarb and ginger tea! I have to go out in the car tomorrow and I’m not looking forward to it. So I hope to warm my hands and heart on this evening’s poems. 🙂
no wonder your heart poem was meltingly lovely
🙂
Thank you for the uplifting prompt. It was a challenge to choose which line, until it came to me. I might want to use the other lines for the future. Cheers from cold winter Canada.
those lines certainly gave rise to a marvellous poem Grace- we chose the same as did Lisa – always interesting to see how one line can take us in so many different directions
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great lines, delightful prompt … I’ll have a fresh fruit juice please Laura, going to be a hot day here!
fruit cup coming up as I shiver at the bar!
lol polar opposites, sending you a posy of warm sunshine!
thank you Kate – just what is needed
Terrific prompt Laura, thank you – looking forward to reading some wonders – as ever – only thing wet here is my cucumbers and chillies under the sprinkler – as summer beats down. Something long and cool pls bartender.
I think a Hendrick’s Gin and Fevertree tonic with that cucumber – a popular drink here in summer!! Look forward to your poem Peter
What a wonderful and thoughtful prompt! I’m a bit late to the pub. Shall get to reading tomorrow….posts to this beautiful prompt and some of the later ones to my prosery prompt yesterday. Happy Tuesday everyone!
oh you did not miss the tide Lillian with that poem and interesting choice of prompt too
This sounds like a wonderful prompt! 😍 Thanks for sharing all those poems. My favorite is probably “The Bright Field.”
Glad you mentioned the poems too – I loved the R.S. Thomas one as well.
I so enjoy the mystics and love my C.S. Lewis as well, really enjoyed reading your selections, Laura! It’s been nice and sunny here today so I will gaze out my window a while and then try to think up something mystical to share, this should be interesting!
Gaze away Tricia – whenever you’re ready will stop by. Happy to hear you enjoyed the poems
Just finished it! Great prompt to get me thinking! ❤
Loved it!!
I’m probably totally off-base with this one, but…
Surely not – see you soon!
Thank you for hosting Laura, and wonderful prompt. I have recently been enjoying the neo-primitive sculpture work of Rose Bean Simpson, and decided to reflect on a piece of her work to inform this Thomas Aquinas inspired poem I wrote today. They seemed go work together for me in a mystical way.
Sounds interesting and look forward to reading it Rob
Must sign off now as the hour is getting late – back tomorrow to continue reading and enjoying all your responses to this prompt
Good evening.
Thanks for hosting, Laura. I appreciate the prompt. It took my mind off of thoughts that I wasn’t enjoying thinking. One of the many gifts of poetry.
I count on being joyfully distracted for the rest of the evening reading what others have shared.
Ali
that’s what was intended Ali so that is reassuring – enjoy some brighter thoughts. Over to read yours now
Thanks for hosting – I decided to step off the sidewalk and wander my mind. So many great fragments I had a hard time choosing.
Ooh, this sent my mind whirling! Thank you for the prompt – and such a welcome change to run free with this and ignore all the other ‘stuff’.
oh and you did wonders with the pomegranate
Thank you again!
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Sorry I am later with my poem. For some reason WP did not send me the usual email about the posting. Love the prompt Laura! ☺️
never too late Christine – so glad you enjoyed the prompt anyway
Thank you for the prompt. Been wanting to write another Triolet but haven’t found the inspiration before. 🙂
well you certainly found it in your poem this time!
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Hi Laura, Love your prompt, great lines to choose from.
you worked some mystical magic with them
I so enjoyed this challenge.
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Hello Laura and All- thanks for hosting Laura with a wonderful prompt! My internet is being upgraded and it’s going in and out, but I’ll be reading when I can.
Good to see you Linda and to know that despite the IT probs you managed your lovely poem
Yes, I am holding my breath that it lasts. They are upgrading the whole neighborhood because people are streaming so much and working from home!
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This was such a beautiful and much needed prompt!
Thanks,
David
and you kept faith with it too – thank you David
Laura this prompt was wonderful. Thank you for hosting. I was unable to leave a comment on your blog. I wanted to let you know I visited.
appreciate you trying Trudessa and not sure why you have probs as other Bloggers manage
Thank you to everyone who participated – the prompts gave rise to such a wealth of your words…and don’t forget tonight is Open Link Night LIVE – 3pm EST
I am away for a few days and shall see you all after the holiday break in 2021
Happy Chanukah, Happy Christmas and a Healthy New Year!