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H.A. Dobson, John Donne, literary device, paradox, Paul Laurence Dunbar, Robert Frost, Wallace Stevens, William Wordsworth
“There is a sense in which paradox is the language appropriate and inevitable to poetry”
C. Brooks 1
Hello Poets – today’s prompt was prompted by a couple of distant memories – the first from ‘the Confession’ in the Book of Common Prayer:-
“We have left undone those things which we ought to have done;
And we have done those things which we ought not to have done;”
As a small child I loved those words without quite knowing why and it was not until studying poetry when a teen that that delight in the contrary was re-invoked:
“Out of a fired ship, which by no way
But drowning could be rescued from the flame,
Some men leap’d forth, and ever as they came
Near the foes’ ships, did by their shot decay;
So all were lost, which in the ship were found,
They in the sea being burnt, they in the burnt ship drown’d.”
Thus was I introduced to the term ‘paradox,’ exemplified in the final couplet of John Donne’s “Burnt Ship” when those who went down with the burnt ship were drowned and those who leapt into the sea burnt up, presumably in the flaming tar and gunpowder that coated the surface. Donne, along with his contemporary metaphysical poets, made regular use of paradox so what place does this literary device have in poetry?
From the Latin, para translates as ‘beyond’ and doxum as ‘meaning’ so paradoxum is literally ’beyond meaning’. It does not connote meaninglessness but rather unbelievable in the first instance, with its departure from received wisdom and juxtaposition of incongruous ideas. The seeming contradiction surprises the reader and enables a rethink for an unexpected insight.
And H.A. Dobson makes much of the contradiction in “The Paradox of Time”:
“Time goes, you say? Ah no!
Alas, Time stays, we go;
Or else, were this not so,
What need to chain the hours,
For Youth were always ours?
Time goes, you say? -ah no! “…
Another poet who makes liberal use of paradox in poetry is Robert Frost, not least in The Gift Outright:
“The land was ours before we were the land’s.
She was our land more than a hundred years
Before we were her people. She was ours
In Massachusetts, in Virginia,
But we were England’s, still colonials,
Possessing what we still were unpossessed by,
Possessed by what we now no more possessed.
Something we were withholding made us weak
Until we found out that it was ourselves…”
The paradox can suggestively imbue a poem and not be confined to the literal juxtapositions, as for example in Wordsworth’s “Composed upon Westminster Bridge”. Thus, the famous ‘lake poet’, seeking to make the prosaic poetic, is able to see the great metropolis of London as a lovely landscape:
“Earth has not any thing to show more fair:
Dull would he be of soul who could pass by
A sight so touching in its majesty:
This City now doth, like a garment, wear
The beauty of the morning; silent, bare,
Ships, towers, domes, theatres, and temples lie
Open unto the fields, and to the sky;
All bright and glittering in the smokeless air.
Never did sun more beautifully steep
In his first splendour, valley, rock, or hill;
Ne’er saw I, never felt, a calm so deep!
The river glideth at his own sweet will:
Dear God! the very houses seem asleep;
And all that mighty heart is lying still!”
For this Poetics challenge I’m giving you choices but you can only choose ONE!!
1. Here are some lines from Paul Dunbar’s The Paradox: – select ONE and build your poem around it.
- I am thy fool in the morning, thou art my slave in the night.
- I am the mother of sorrows; I am the ender of grief;
- I am the bud and the blossom, I am the late-falling leaf
OR
2. Take the last lines of Wallace Stevens’ The Snow Man and write a poem that is imbued with the existential paradox implied there. [the meaning of which is the ridding of our usual human observation and viewing winter as a ‘man of snow’ not a snowman! (more HERE)]
- For the listener, who listens in the snow, And, nothing himself, beholds nothing that is not there and the nothing that is.
Preferably do NOT use the lines within your own writing but cite the source at the end of your post, or at the start as epigraph.
Note: Read the poems by all means before you start writing – the links are there.
We should not fret if paradox seems hard to grasp (it can be slippery). The purpose of the prompt is to let the chosen line seed our own imagination – after all the paradox has been done for us already.
References:
1. The Language of Paradox (1947) Cleanth Brooks
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Linky widget and leave a comment (see below). Then go visiting, reading and sharing your thoughts with other contributors which is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
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Hello and welcome to the Bar – in the UK the pubs are cloed and will reopen sometime soon without serving alcohol. Paradoxical indeed!
I look forward to seeing what poems you can make out of this prompt
oops typo – ‘closed’ but I dont have permission to edit
Good evening… this was a very interesting prompt… I love the fact that not everything will have a resolution. sometimes the paradox seems less paradoxical than clarity is.
or the resolution is couched in the revolution of meanings twisted and turned – you nailed it in that final line of your snow poem
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Good evening all, and thank you Laura for a challenging prompt, which I hope I have understood and given an appropriate response. I love the poems and the lines you chose as examples and inspiration.
coming over to read Kim – happy to hear you enjoyed the poem selections. I have always loved the Wordsworth one
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Hello Laura and All. I have to say I loved your challenging prompt, Laura. I had fun with it. It’s sunny and the snow is melting to slush. Sipping hot coffee and taking a stroll on the poetry trail…
glad you found some fun in this – paradox can be a slippery twist. Enjoy the hot coffee on your trail
This is a great prompt Laura, thank you! Isn’t the whole of life something of a paradox? I deliberately didn’t read the prompt poems before I wrote so now I’m going back to read them, and everyone else’s poems…
I guess you might have an existential point there Ingrid – something like in life we are in death or some such! Happy to hear the prompt was an enjoyable challenge – will stop by to read yours soon
Hello Laura and All- I absolutely loved this prompt Laura, so challenging! Great poems you shared too. I hope everyone is doing well. It is lovely here today- 75 degrees and the sun is shining.
lovely upbeat input from you Linda – no wonder with that temperature! Looking fowrward to seeing what you wrote
I hope I achieved the purpose of the prompt!
It is your purpose that counts Linda 🙂
thanks Laura for such an exciting, interesting prompt … I went with the flow!
I’d like a chai and ginger cookie thanks
A warming combo of repaste coming up Kate! Will flow your way soon…
in your own time, I’m not going anywhere Laura
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Thank you so much for hosting, Laura! 💝 It took me a long time to decide which lines to compose to 😀 (I had initially decided to try writing to “The Snow Man,” but couldn’t wrap my head around it.)
Then Dunbar caught my eye and before I knew it the poem poured out! Cold coffee for me please 💝
I thought aboout the man of snow too but no vision ensued – still Dunbar certainly got your juices flowing. Cold coffee is what I normally drink in my absent mindeness of forgetting I made one, so that is an easy order!
I am currently taking a much needed sabbatical, away from unnecessary distraction, a time of healing, but I do peek in, read the prompts and write for my eyes only at the present. This particular prompt grabbed my attention, especially Paradox of Time. Last week I said to someone, we always ask, “where does the time go?” As I think about it, I don’t think it goes anywhere. It is we who move through it.”
I never heard the poem until today, or know anything about paradoxacal poetry, but in light of this now, it all makes more sense.
Thank you! And the first words of common prayer came from the Apostle Paul’s dilemma in Romans 7:19-25.
I sense I am on the right track, and yes, much is beyond meaning.
I understand and empathise with the need for sabbaticals Mary – having had some time away myself though perhaps more in a state of unknowing than your kind of deliberation. Do you know the Fairport Convention song “Who knows where the time goes”? its beautiful –
I will check it out. Thank you.
For those in a different time zone, I shall leave the Bar open and pay more virtual visits to read your poems tomorrow
Good evening Laura and everyone else. This was challenging and fun. And in the end make me able to wrap up and finish a rough first draft from this weekend.
Would need coffee to keep awake, but I guess going to bed and read more tomorrow, is a better route. 🙂
Sweet Dreams!
Good afternoon and what a whirlwind romance you gave us!
A bit late to the pub…..I hope I understood the prompt correctly…found it fascinating to work with. Apologies for the length of my poem….the tale just got away from me!
First Covid vaccine shot last night…shoulder a bit sore but so so happy to have this first step!
never too late Lilian – and your willow myth was a great tale
Thanks for the prompt. I had trouble using your suggested lines without being guilty of plagiarism, but the snowman vs man of snow did get me started (without snow).
glad to know that plagiarism bothers you Ron – hence I did specify in the prompt:
“Preferably do NOT use the lines within your own writing but cite the source at the end of your post, or at the start as epigraph.”
Thank you for hosting Laura! 🙂 Fascinating prompt!
thanks for joining Rob
Sorry; I can’t play tonight…
https://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2021/02/23/no-words/
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Thanks for this challenging prompt. The examples of paradoxes that you share are lovely. ❤
Happy to hear you ejoyed this! 🙂
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I profoundly enjoyed this prompt. Thanks, Laura ❤
-David
It shows so well in your poem
That is very kind. Thank you, Laura!
❤
David
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Thank you for paradoxes Laura, such fun.
thank you – I love them – and your poem..
Many thanks Laura.
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Hello, Laura. Thanks for hosting. The prompt was really awesome. I’ve linked up my poem, it’s a reflective poem from a mothers’ perspective. I hope you’ll enjoy it.
~Jay
thank you yes – a strong piece of poetry with red as its signature colour
I loved this prompt…
An awesome challenge indeed.
Took me further and near to myself.
that is surely the personification of paradox!
Had to embrace her in order to align my thoughts. . .
Thank you very much for hosting. I enjoyed responding to this prompt. 🙂