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We are pleased to have a guest host for today’s Poetics, Tricia Sankey.
Welcome to dVerse Poetics Tuesday. For tonight’s Poetics, I want to explore the theme of risk. This could be –
tackling difficult subjects
laying bare a personal struggle in vivid detail
writing on any topic as long the word “risk” is used (perhaps the risk we take falling in love)
exploring a new writing form that you may find “risky” or unconventional
I’ve included a few poems on risk below to get us started:
“Risk”
To laugh is to risk appearing a fool. To weep is to risk appearing sentimental. To reach out to another is to risk involvement. To expose feelings is to risk exposing your true self. To place your ideas and dreams before a crowd is to risk their loss. To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure. But risks must be taken, because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing.
“RISK” BY ANAÏS NIN
And then the day came,
when the risk
to remain tight
in a bud
was more painful
than the risk
it took
to blossom.
The following poem is a little longer but is a great example of an award-winning poet who takes risks in his writing.
Bullet Points
I will not shoot myself
In the head, and I will not shoot myself
In the back, and I will not hang myself
With a trashbag, and if I do,
I promise you, I will not do it
In a police car while handcuffed
Or in the jail cell of a town
I only know the name of
Because I have to drive through it
To get home. Yes, I may be at risk,
But I promise you, I trust the maggots
Who live beneath the floorboards
Of my house to do what they must
To any carcass more than I trust
An officer of the law of the land
To shut my eyes like a man
Of God might, or to cover me with a sheet
So clean my mother could have used it
To tuck me in. When I kill me, I will
Do it the same way most Americans do,
I promise you: cigarette smoke
Or a piece of meat on which I choke
Or so broke I freeze
In one of these winters we keep
Calling worst. I promise if you hear
Of me dead anywhere near
A cop, then that cop killed me. He took
Me from us and left my body, which is,
No matter what we’ve been taught,
Greater than the settlement
A city can pay a mother to stop crying,
And more beautiful than the new bullet
Fished from the folds of my brain.
If you are new to the dVerse, here’s how to take part:
· Write a poem in response to the challenge.
· Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below and remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy. You will find links to other poets and more will join so check back later to read their poems.
· Read and comment on other poets’ work – we all come here to have our poems read.
· Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
· Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
· Have fun.
About our guest host:
Tricia Sankey is a Freelance Writer and Editor who enjoys blogging at www.triciasankey.com and tweeting her micropoetry @triciasankey. She’s traveled the United States as an Army Wife and received an MFA in Writing from Lindenwood University along the way! Her poetry and microfiction can be found on sites such as Red Wolf Journal and 50-Word Stories. Her short stories have placed in contests, most notably the L. Ron Hubbard Writers of the Future Contest.
Good afternoon folks. I hope you find our writing challenge fun and risky as well. Thank you Tricia for being our gracious guest host.
Thanks, Grace! I’m excited to read some great posts today!
Welcome to the pub where we will be daring and break all the rules today! Anyone need a shot of courage, let me know. Otherwise, I’m serving iced tea with lemon scones while enjoying the a/c here in Missouri. Hope everyone’s Tuesday is going well!
So nice to have you in the bar… I think I cannot hold any liquor tonight, so I guess I will opt for some mineral water with a slice of lemon tonight.
Coming right up! Keep hydrated! The muse requires h2O! 😉
Hello Tricia, Grace, and All. Tricia, welcome to hosting today. I must tell you that your prompt pulled me out of the comfort zone, so thank you for that. If you are pouring, I’ll take a pint of Magners please. Very much looking forward to visiting the poetry trail on your prompt.
No problem! A pint should be just enough for some edgy words! Looking forward to your post, Lisa! 💗
Thank you and Cheers!
Iced tea with lemon scones sounds just perfect as it’s been a hot day here Tricia! Getting ready to read some risk-taking poetry…
Yes, it’s poetry and tea time! 🥳
☕️ cheers!
Thank you for a great challenge! As luck (or fate) would have it I had been working on the outline of my poem for a few weeks … had to fill in some blanks.
Can’t wait to read it, Helen! Good to hear the prompt is collaborating with fate today! ❤
I liked the examples so much, especially the short poem by Anaïs Nin… the simplicity of the poem with the metaphor of buds going to blossom is so powerful.
I’ve always LOVED that poem. It’s so powerful in its simplicity and truth! 💖
It reminds me of the first stanza of a poem by Swedish Poet Karin Boye
https://www.karinboye.se/verk/dikter/dikter-mcduff/of-course-it-hurts.shtml
Nice!
Hi Tricia. Thanks for hosting. This is a wonderful prompt. I can’t join in today, but I wanted to say hello. Perhaps I’ll take a scone to go.
Sure, take three! Take care and I’ll see you on the poetry trail another time! 💝
Thanks! Yummy. 💙
So glad to see you at the bar, Tricia! I’d love to have tea and scones while I chew over the dares of all the risk takers at the pub. The poem by Jericho Brown is a mighty good start. :>)
pax,
dora
Coming right up! I was really impressed with Brown’s poem. Nice to hear it touched you as well!
Hi Tricia – hope you enjoy your evening. Great prompt.
Thanks, Sara! This is a great group to spend the afternoon and evening with! 💝
Iced tea with lemon scones sounds perfect! I will gladly have some 💝 Loved the prompt, Tricia 🙂 I look forward to reading all the responses!
Thanks for joining in Sanaa! ❤
i had been looking at the man made waterways around the area i live in. the risk to life was high as they were dug by hand just to feed their families at the end of 18th centuery . so it seemed to fit with your promt tonight. enjoyed this tonight now for some reading with a hot chocolate and n
marsh mellow sprinkles
Sending you extra marshmallow sprinkles! Thanks for joining in, can’t wait to read your post! 💕
Thanks for the extra sprinkles
Hi all! Thank you for hosting Tricia, and for an excellent prompt. It helped me put the perfect finishing touch on a difficult piece I have frustrated over. It’s deep, it’s dark, it’s deadly — and now it is finally and truly done.
… and approaching the subject of this piece felt very “risky” to me, but I was compelled to finish, once I started it.
Sounds so intriguing, Rob, can’t wait to read it! Glad this prompt helped with the finishing touches! 💕
good one Tricia, you’ve inspired us all … your examples were great and that last one exceptional, thanks!
His poem is exceptional! Thanks for joining in, Kate! 💕
my pleasure, thanks for the inspiration!
Late to the pub tonight! 🙂 So nice to see you here, Tricia. I went very simplistically with my poem today. It’s what popped into my head with this word though.
Will be back in the morning to read.
Thanks, Lilian! Can’t wait to read your offering! 💖
I think this is an iced tea, lemon scone, and liquid courage kind of day!
Love the poems by Anais Nin and Jericho Brown. (I went in a totally different and ridiculous and out of character direction)
Coming right up! It’s a great day for carbs and poetry! Can’t wait to read your offering, I’m in a reading frenzy this afternoon! 💝
Thank you for hosting us tonight Tricia, a wonderful prompting tonight for me to engage.
Thanks, Paul! Looking forward to reading your poem, I’m going to enjoy my afternoon on the poetry trail! 💝
Thank you Grace and Tricia for hosting today. I liked your poem selection, especially one about the bud ready to bloom. 🙂
Yes, it’s an oldy but goody! Thanks for joining in, looking forward to reading your offering today! 💝
Whew, took a little while to get there! Almost missed the Linky. Thank you for a thoughtful prompt!
A pleasure to host this group! I look forward to reading your poem later this afternoon! 💝
This prompt (again) is lovely. You sent me risking– climbing up a fruit tree and I loved it. Thanks.
(and… um, yes, The Twitter. Thanks so much)
Be well, I wish you miracles.
So happy you joined in! I just finished your poem and gave it a retweet. It’s fun to connect on Twitter as well as the blogosphere! 💗
Thanks so much. You rock. Great prompt too. xoxo
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Thank you for hosting!
I’m very late to the pub, couldn’t seem to get anything together. Then it all came to me tonight as I took a walk. My muse often does that. 🙂
The Jericho Brown poem is really powerful. Also made realized it’s been a long time since I read Anaïs Nin.
Yes, I found it so powerful as well. I’ll have to go check out your poem, thanks for joining! ❤