Hello from rainy summer season Ontario, Canada! The maple leaves have started to burn a bit brown but green leaves still abound here from all the rain. Here’s what is blooming along my hiking trails:
Today we are going to try our hand with a poetic form developed by Michael Walker, the monotetra. Here are the basic rules:
*Comprised of quatrains (four-line stanzas) in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of 8 syllables per line
*Each quatrain consists of mono-rhymed lines (so each line in the first stanza has the same type of rhyme, as does each line in the second stanza, etc.)
*The final line of each stanza repeats the same four syllables. This is what makes the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form – the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated.
*This poem can be as short as 1 or 2 quatrains and as long as a poet wishes.
Stanza Structure:
Line 1: 8 syllables; A1
Line 2: 8 syllables; A2
Line 3: 8 syllables; A3
Line 4: 4 syllables, repeated; A4, A4
Here is my offering:
seasons by grace
you are the breeze that strums my strings
to blues & yellows, all things spring
to sun kissed flowers, your words bring
hint of soft wings, hint of soft wings
you are the sky that stirs my beat
to reds & tango, churn the heat
bring the saucy winks, wine & treats
naughty & sweet, naughty & sweet
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Today’s challenge: To write a poem in monotetra form. You choose your theme, following the stanza structure as described. I really enjoyed writing that 4th line as it served like an echo of the stanza.
- Write a poem based on the writing challenge as described above. Post it on your blog or website.
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- Follow the links to other poets. Read and comment on other poems. We all appreciate feedback on our poems.
- Link back to dVerse so others can find us too.
- Have fun!
Grace said:
Hello everyone. Its a crazy weather here in Ontario.
May I offer you a selection of Canadian Ice Wine, Cranberry Fruit Cocktail, Blueberry pie or Butter Tarts – while you are writing and reading the poems.
Hope you have fun writing to this poetry form.
Helen Dehner said:
Naughty and sweet …. how delightful! Great challenge, Grace! My television died last evening, so shopping today. See you tomorrow, save a glass of Merlot for me please?
Grace said:
Of course Helen! Take care.
sanaarizvi said:
Blueberry pie for me please 😀 the weather is absolutely beautiful here.. I am looking forward to reading all the responses! Thank you so much for introducing us to this poetic form, Grace. Happy Thursday 💝💝
Grace said:
Blueberry pie for you dear Sanaa. I envy you for your weather because its been a wild -rain & sun, rain & sun- cycle in a day. I am happy to share new poetry forms as it brings me out of my comfort zone. Happy Thursday!!!
sanaarizvi said:
Yum! 😀 Thank you, Grace. Hopefully the weather there will come around soon 💝 I too loving exploring new poetry forms. Hope you have a wonderful day and weekend! 💝
sanaarizvi said:
love*
merrildsmith said:
Hi Grace, and thank you for hosting. I really want to try this, but not today. I’m still finishing up that chapter–and crazy weather here, too. We have a tornado watch now till 9 PM. We’re supposed to get some strong thunderstorms. Save me a piece of pie!😀
Grace said:
Saving one slice of blueberry pie Merril. Be safe from the crazy weather specially the tornado. Good luck on your writing.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Grace!
msjadeli said:
Hello Grace and All. Just dropping in long enough to say hi and that I look forward to writing a monotetra. Heading out to an appointment right now and will link up later and ramble along the poetry trail.
Grace said:
Looking forward to reading it! See you along the poetry trail.
lillian said:
Thanks for hosting, Grace. An interesting form indeed! I’ve just returned from visiting an old college friend – glad to be back visiting the pub!
Grace said:
Hi Lillian. Hope you had a good time.
Lucy said:
Hello!
I really enjoyed the prompt today, Grace. I never heard of this poetic form before so it was neat to try it out and get inspired. I am torn between blueberry pie and butter tarts, but I suppose I will try out the butter tarts please! 😀 Always like to try something new.
Grace said:
Me too. Looks like a puzzle to me. Good to see the adventuresome spirit in you Lucy. Butter tarts coming up for you. Thanks for joining us.
RedCat said:
Good evening Grace!
Thanks for hosting and introducing a new form. This one was fun, I really like that doubly repeated last line.
I’ll try as small glass of ice wine (something I never heard of before) before heading off to sleep.
Grace said:
Me too, I like that last line for emphasis. Canadian ice wine coming up (its from Niagara vineyard). Have a good night!
Ron Rowland said:
Ice wine for me.
I enjoyed this (new to me) form.
I found myself first writing the last line of each stanza, then filling in the three preceding lines.
Grace said:
Seems a popular choice – Canadian ice wine for you then!
Your writing process is interesting; i start with selecting the word end rhyme first. Enjoyed your take.
Christine Bolton, Poetry for Healing said:
I love your take on the form Grace.
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Grace said:
Thanks Christine. Hope you had fun writing this poetry form.
Christine Bolton, Poetry for Healing said:
I certainly did Grace. I live counting syllables and it was my second nature poem today! ☺️🌺
anotherkatewilson said:
Coffee for me, decaf please so I don’t get too hyper.
Nice prompt – kookaburras sing in monotetra. 😀
Grace said:
Coffee for you then. Looking forward to your monotetra.
robtkistner said:
Thank you for hosting Grace. My mind isn’t wrapping around this form right now. I am dealing with both a summer cold, and West Coast Olympic viewer’s exhaustion, because the events that attract my interest are in the post midnight, early AM — so my insomnia has been further exacerbated. If I begin feeling my muse stir, I may have a go at a Monotetra. Just woke up at 5:00 PM PDT, prepared for more Olympic watching. My women’s US soccer team plays at 4:00 AM. Go USA! 🇺🇸💪🏼⚽️🙂
Grace said:
It has been an interesting watch for us Canadians too. Hope all will be well.
robtkistner said:
OK, my muse has inspired a dark one Grace. Oh my… 😕
calmkate said:
Interesting format, I was just trying a similar one … so d’Verse is scheduled in about 14 hours, and the other Monday, much thanks Grace!
Grace said:
You are very welcome. Thanks for joining in the fun!
calmkate said:
thanks for an interesting prompt Grace!
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Grace. What a lovely form. Your verse is delightful.
I think blueberry pie would go very well with the rains outside.
Grace said:
Blueberry pie for you! Thanks for joining us.
paeansunplugged said:
Thank you! My pleasure.
memadtwo said:
Great prompt Grace. I have to go out now, but I’ll visit everyone later. (K)
Grace said:
Thank you and have a good weekend!
kittysverses said:
Thank you Grace for hosting. This was a challenging and an enjoyable prompt. 🙂