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Hello, dVerse poets! I hope you’re all well. It’s summer here in New Jersey, and while many people are vacationing or relaxing, I’m super busy—and I suddenly had to get a new phone today because mine decided not to work. But I have more memory and a better camera—Well, when it rains, it pours, but every cloud has a silver lining.
Yes, we’re going to be working with proverbs today. I read this post on Interesting Literature about the origins of the proverb
“You can’t have your cake and eat it too.”
John Keats, for example, used a version of the proverb as an epigraph for his poem, “On Fame.”
"You cannot eat your cake and have it too"--Proverb How fever’d is the man, who cannot look Upon his mortal days with temperate blood, Who vexes all the leaves of his life’s book, And robs his fair name of its maidenhood; It is as if the rose should pluck herself, On the ripe plum finger its misty bloom, As if a Naiad, like a meddling elf, Should darken her pure grot with muddy gloom: But the rose leaves herself upon the briar, For winds to kiss and grateful bees to feed, And the ripe plum still wears its dim attire, The undisturbed lake has crystal space; Why then should man, teasing the world for grace, Spoil his salvation for a fierce miscreed? --from John Keats, “On Fame”
This got me to thinking about proverbs and how poets incorporate them into their poems. I also noticed how often there seem to be proverbs with equally well-known opposite messages. I’ve listed a few below:
Many hands make light work.
Too many cooks spoil the broth
Birds of a feather flock together.
Opposites attract.
You are never too old to learn.
You can’t teach an old dog new tricks.
A rolling stone gathers no moss.
Stop and smell the roses.
He who hesitates is lost.
Strike while the iron is hot.
Look before you leap.
For this prompt, choose a proverb or a pair of proverbs. Use them as you wish—as an epigraph or within the poem. Be serious or funny. You can use one of the proverbs above or choose one of your own. Yes, they are often clichés, but that gives you a challenge to make your poem original, right? 😀 Make certain you clearly state the proverb.
New? Here’s what to do:
Write a poem that incorporates a proverb in some way. Make certain you state the proverb.
Post your poem on your blog.
Enter the link for that post (not your blog) into Mister Linky.
Read and comment on others’ posts.
merrildsmith said:
Hello, dVerse Poets! Welcome! The pub is open, and I’m ready to read all your poems. It’s a hot summer day here, but not as humid as it has been. We have fresh lemonade and a variety of other beverages—hot and cold–though we don’t have milk, since we don’t want anyone to cry over it if it’s spilled. 😏 There’s a variety of cookies, cakes, and whatever else you want to eat from our endless virtual kitchen.
revivedwriter said:
This will be fun. 😀
merrildsmith said:
Thank you! I hope so. I’m expecting some will come up with some very clever responses.
Helen Dehner said:
Hi Merril … feeling frisky today, make mine champagne please!!
Helen Dehner said:
I’d been working on my stream of consciousness … you provided the perfect time to finish and post!
merrildsmith said:
Oh, that’s wonderful. YAY!
merrildsmith said:
Oooo! That sounds delightful, Helen. Perhaps I’ll join you. 😀 🥂
msjadeli said:
Hello Merril and All. Another late start today. The tree crew came today to do major trimming on the locust tree behind the house, and I promised my mom and I would bring her some of the many zucchini weighing down the counter. Also had to visit the library for drop-off and pickup and fill up the tank on the car. It will take a bit to pick out proverb(s) and write to them. Heading off to do just that. See you all later on the poetry trail! If you’re pouring, I’ll take a pint of Magners please.
merrildsmith said:
Here you go, and join in whenever. If I don’t see it tonight (because I go to bed early), I’ll read it in the morning.
msjadeli said:
Thank you and Cheers! Just posted it.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I think I need something chilled as this proverb lark got me all existential – perhaps a sweetener or two as well. A most interesting prompt, Merrill
merrildsmith said:
Thank you very much, Laura. I will pour you something chilled–maybe some of the champagne Helen and I are drinking?
Peter said:
My entry is made up of Dutch expressions/proverbs translated literally into English.
merrildsmith said:
I just read it–great fun!
fireblossom32 said:
Better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to leave a comment and remove all doubt. Nonetheless, hi. 😛
merrildsmith said:
Hi, back to you! 😀
Jewish Young Professional "JYP" said:
Is it lemonade made from the lemons life gives you? I’ll take mine with a spoonful of sugar to help the medicine go down!
merrildsmith said:
Hahahaha. Yes, to all of that! 😀
Jewish Young Professional "JYP" said:
😁
robtkistner said:
This is a fun one Merril — thank you for hosting… 👍🙂
merrildsmith said:
You’re very welcome, Rob. I will by to read yours soon.
erbiage said:
Late to the pub am I. Hope all is well with my fellow poets!
merrildsmith said:
You’re not late, but I’m late to reading.😀
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Merril and all. Please overlook my wide-eyed awe. I am looking forward to reading you all.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you! Feel free to add your own (if you haven’t already).
paeansunplugged said:
My pleasure. I have.
merrildsmith said:
😀
memadtwo said:
Great prompt Merril. (K)
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Kerfe!
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
I’m late to the party, but here this morning! Great prompt Merril. Thank you for hosting.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Linda. You’re not late, but I’m behind in reading. 😀 I will get to yours soon!
RedCat said:
Thanks for hosting!
This was a tricky choice. There is so many proverbs to choose from. In the end an image did the trick in guiding me.
merrildsmith said:
You’re welcome, and I’m pleased you found something to spark your writing. I’ve been working all day, so I’m behind on reading, but I will get to yours soon. Thank you!
kittysverses said:
Hi Merril,
Thank you for hosting. Writing for this prompt is an experience in itself, so many proverbs and many vague ideas. Finally I came up with a poem. Thank you very much for this wonderful exercise! 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Thank you so much, Kitty. I was a bit overwhelmed with the choices, as well, that’s why I listed only a few. I’ve been working all day, so I’m behind on reading, but I will get to yours soon. 😀