“the house is a nest for dreaming, a shelter for imagining” The Poetics of Space ~ G. Bachelard
Having just moved house and in this interim between inhabiting a structure as shelter, and it taking on the feeling of home, my thoughts have naturally turned to ‘the house’ as subject for poetry. Research soon showed that many poets, across the centuries and continents, have written on this very subject.
In 17th century England, country house poetry gave rise to a kind of topographical poem that both described and praised a house, partly out of flattery, partly out of memory as visitor. Along similar but obviously different lines, C. Dale Young captures “Devon House” in Jamaica.
“Lamps have begun to light as evening,
alluvial, fills every crevice in the courtyard,
fills Devon House, alone with its marble columns,
its verandas and esplanades empty,
the plantation gone, and the fields,
the courtyard a tourist attraction now:
glass ashtrays etched with boys
too large to be clambering coconut trees,
statuettes of women too smooth to be burdened
with baskets of fruit on their heads, stoneware
and now even the hummingbirds are spoken of as jewels
where once everyone drowned in leaf-filtered sunlight.”
Carol Muske-Dukes writes, both literally and imaginatively, as visitor to the National Trust property of Virginia and Leonard Woolf’s home, “Monks’ House, Rodmell:”
“…The Trust ladies place the still-ticking brain
of Leonard’s wireless next to the empty brass stalk
with its single blossom: old black hat
she wore like pharaoh gazing down
the Nile-green Nile.
That’s her:
the flat drainboard of a face
set so fiercely against the previous
owner’s trompe 1’oeil beard and jug.
The simpleton’s request: a picture of her young—
So the trees walk up burning,
the birds speak Latin
for the dull-witted, drenched palette
the glimpse of whirlwind in the pond
where their handfuls of ash
drifted down…”
In her “House with Tulips” Finvola Drury gives no clue as to whose abode, if any, it is, though the epigraph is a quote from the mystic, Evelyn Underhill.
“In winter the house stood tall with wonder
gone in the look of a manner that lingers
grey in a net of snow its pillars seemed
cold and thin as the bones in frozen fingers
telling like shells of the vanished ocean,
poking empty gestures in a pale space
of windows, the fixed eyes of a body
which living has deserted, leaving in its place
a few tools under the unused stairway
a little labor where the icy trees
raise their fractured branches drying brown
as the wood once bright in the sagging eaves”
And out of a lover’s dream, Wilbur Smith conjures “The House”
“Sometimes, on waking, she would close her eyes
For a last look at that white house she knew
In sleep alone, and held no title to,
And had not entered yet, for all her sighs.
What did she tell me of that house of hers?
White gatepost; terrace; fanlight of the door;
A widow’s walk above the bouldered shore;
Salt winds that ruffle the surrounding firs.
Is she now there, wherever there may be?
Only a foolish man would hope to find
That haven fashioned by her dreaming mind.
Night after night my love, I put to sea”
For this Poetics Prompt I want us to be voyeurs, peeping through windows and doors of a house One that has no family connections, no memories of our own to call upon .
- conjure an imaginary house of any size, any place, any age
- fill it with an imaginary person/people past or present, or ghosts, or leave it empty with its history
- make it literal but move into the metaphorical if you wish
If you find it hard to imagine then use a picture of a house (exterior or interior) and write an ekphrastic or select a house in your neighbourhood, or a historic place, or one from a book or film but reinvent its history, story or narrative.
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Linky widget and leave a comment (see below). Then go visiting, reading and sharing your thoughts with other contributors, which is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
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Hello Poets – I look forward to visiting all your houses. meanwhile, the bar is open – what’s your order?
https://chrisreilleypoems.blogspot.com/2014/04/stopping-by-old-house.html
Stopping by the Old House
do please add this link to Mr Linky above!
Done. 🙂
Hot chocolate for me please … 🙂 Loved the prompt, Laura! ❤️❤️
Snuggling down with your drink in that lovely house!
Aww shucks! Thank you, I ll join you 😀
Hello Laura and All. Congratulations on the move and best wishes for turning a house into a home. I enjoyed your poem selections, as they set the bar high. Will work on a poem for the prompt challenge today and link up later. One pint of Magners, if you please 🙂
Coming up as you’ll be working up a thirst with the house build
p.s. and thanks for the good wishes – am settling in by and by
Thank you, Laura, and Cheers!
I’d like a Poet’s Mule please, darkest rum you have, ginger beer, splash of elderflower liquor, on the rocks in copper mugs.
What a great cocktail and so apt – will look out the copper mugs
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do we alll have our own poets mule recipe. mine is to strong for an evening before i need to be up the following morning. a glass of blackberry and apple juice please as i settle in for the evening to catch up on some reading. hope the new house feels like home soon Laura.
great thirst quenching choice. Enjoy your evening and thanks for the good wishes
Thank you Laura, for including lovely examples of “House and Home” poems. Early in Oregon, make mine a Corona with a wedge of lime … please.
Corona coming up -the lime makes all the difference.
glad you liked the poems Helen – there are just so many to choose from but I was aiming for those that the poet does not personally know
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Back tomorrow for more house visits – help yourself at the bar
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Oops, I failed. I read the first half of the prompt, thought of my childhood home, and went to work. When posting the link, I read the rest of the prompt that says we are to be voyeurs looking into a house we have no memories of. I failed, and wrote about a house I know intimately. I will take two demerits and a Poets Mule that should kick me in the ass.
I guess you were so enthused you rushed the lines! A few of those Mules should help slow you down 😉
I had fun writing this new (to me) form of poem. Thanks!
https://lightmotifs.wordpress.com/2021/08/10/the-blue-house/
It showed – thanks for joining in Paula
What a fun prompt Laura!
and what an ending you gave your house!
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Such a fun prompt. I had lots of ideas but my muse just wanted one thing. So that’s were we went.
Then I wrangled IT issues for way too long before being able to post. I’m heading to bed now, so I’ll serve myself some coffee when I come back tomorrow to read.
you have Nordic DNA or at least your Muse does
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I mistakenly posted my quadrille poem on this Mr. Linky. Oddly enough, it is actually about a house, but just a coincidence. I had formerly posted it on the quadrille post, though, so it is appearing twice. Sorry. I’ll do another one as well.
only if you want – your quadrille is a perfect fit
Thank you for hosting Laura. 🙂 Today was not a good one. Perhaps I can find inspiration tomorrow — and the time and energy to pursue it…
I too am rather distracted and struggled for inspiration of my own prompt – we got there in the end!
Well. this is where I finally found inspiration, looking not in but out of a window from long ago. It may not be what you wanted Laura, for that I am sorry — but it was what I could conjure. It was a struggle this weekend… 🙂✌🏼
no judgements, Rob – inside looking out is another way of building a house
though the prompt does specify an unfamiliar house!
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A lovely prompt, Laura…the house theme is well supported by the poems you chose! I’ll help myself to a glass of sauvignon to accompany my poetic readings tonight.
hope you enjoyed your fine wine – and your house had a few lessons for us all
though the prompt does specify an unfamiliar house!
ignore – cannot edit comments and this does not apply here but am having prob with browser not displaying or getting stuck 😦
Thanks, Laura…the wine and prompt were both excellent!
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Thank you, dVerse, thanks Laura. I find your prompts ever so inspiring every time. Be well. I wish you miracles. Always and forever.
lovely poem from you Selma – good to know you’re inspired
Lovely topic, Laura, and one of my go-to’s. I’m a little late to this house party, but I’ll see if I can beat the Linky and get something up!
welcome to the house party – its still going on!
Made it, just before last call I think!
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Thank you Laura for hosting this challenge. I enjoyed writing to it.
and thank you for joining in
Most welcome, I enjoyed every bit. 🙂
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