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Mirrorred Refrain, new poetry form, poetry form, Repetition, Repetitive Form Poetry, Stephanie Repnyek
We have been exploring newer poetry forms of late and we are going to try our hand with another poetry form using a recurring pattern.
Importance of Repetition
As a backgrounder, repetition—the use of the same term several times—is one of the crucial elements in poetry. “Repetition in word and phrase and in idea is the very essence of poetry,” Theodore Roethke writes in “Some Remarks on Rhythm” (1960). It is one of the most marked features of all poetry, oral and written, one of the primary ways we distinguish poetry itself. Repetition, as in rhyme, is a strong mnemonic device. Oral poets especially use it for remembering structures.
The incantatory magic of poetry—think of spells and chants, of children’s rhymes and lullabies—has something to do with recurrence, with things coming back to us in time, sometimes in the same way, sometimes differently. Repetition is the primary way of creating a pattern through rhythm. Meaning accrues through repetition. One of the deep fundamentals of poetry is the recurrence of sounds, syllables, words, phrases, lines, and stanzas.
Many of the sound devices of poetry (alliteration, assonance, consonance) depend on recurrence. Metrical patterns are established by recurrences, and so are poetic forms (villanelle, canzone, the sestina), some with repetends and refrains.
Mirrored Refrain
The Mirrored Refrain is rhyming verse form constructed by Stephanie Repnyek.
The poem is formed by three or more quatrains where two lines within the quatrain are the “mirrored refrain” or alternating refrain.
The rhyme scheme is as follows: xaBA, xbAB, xaBA, xbAB, etc..
x represents the only lines that do not rhyme within the poem. A and B represent the refrain. The first four stanzas of the example poem are labeled for better understanding.
Example:
Child of His Earth
by Stephanie Repnyek
Spirits moving passionately (x)
Soaring with the wind… (a)
I am a child of the Earth, (B)
From the beginning to the end. (A)
God paints his canvas around me (x)
I come alive…a new rebirth (b)
From the beginning to the end (A)
I am a child of the Earth. (B)
Teardrops fall while giving thanks (x)
I hear the voices of the wind (a)
I am a child of the Earth, (B)
From the beginning to the end. (A)
When I’m lonely and blue… (x)
His touch shows me my worth (b)
From the beginning to the end, (A)
I am a child of the Earth. (B)
You can continue reading the poem here.
Today’s challenge: Write a poem in mirrorred refrain form. You choose your theme, and refraining lines following the stanza structure as described.
- Write a poem based on the writing challenge as described above. Post it on your blog or website.
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- Follow the links to other poets. Read and comment on other poems. We all appreciate feedback on our poems.
- Link back to dVerse so others can find us too.
- Have fun!
See you at the poetry trail. ~Grace~
Hi everyone. I hope you are having a good day, afternoon or night. While you are reading and writing poems, we have Montreal style bagels, ice-cream sandwiches with your choice of bubble teas, smoothies or freshly squeezed juices for your enjoyment. Hope you have fun writing to this poetry form.
Caramel milk tea with yogurt popping pearls, please. 🙂
Oh Yum! An ice cream sandwich please … any flavor!
Yes, of course Helen. Enjoy the cool & delicious one.
A charming selection, Grace 😀 I will have a Montreal style bagel with smoothie please .. 💝 Loved the challenge. Happy Thursday! 💝
Happy Thursday back to you. Hope you enjoy the bagels & smoothie.
Hello Grace and All. Happy to be here on this Thursday afternoon. The sky is a little overcast which is a blessing anymore and the temp is holding steady at 80F. I really enjoyed writing with this form and will plan on using it again. Will read a little and then finally get out there and mow the very tall lawn whose weeds are blooming yet again. I have never had bubble tea but it sounds intriguing. I’ll have one of those please 🙂
We have great selections of bubble teas, smiles. You must try it for real some time. I hope you are safe and enjoying the gardening and keeping yourself cool. The heat can be relentless.
Awesome, how about strawberry bubble tea? Thank you and I hope these things for you as well, my friend.
This form sounds like fun. 😁 I will have a bagel and a strawberry smoothie.
Sweet combination – okay! Have fun with the form – its like crossword puzzle to me.
Mmm bagels! I love this new (to me) form and will write one soon…
Looking forward to it Paula. Thanks for joining in.
A fresh berry smoothie, please! Such an interesting form to work with!
Thanks for hosting, Grace.
Fresh berry smoothie it is. It’s fun learning these new poetry forms Lillian. See you in the poetry trail.
This was a fun prompt Grace, it put a song in my heart! Thank you!
I am so happy to read this Rob. Have a good night!
This was fun, thanks for hosting Grace! 💝
You are very welcome Tricia. Thanks for joining in.
Grace, thanks for another interesting form! Of course my muse wanted to play after a stormy day here. I hope, I got this form right.
Yours was lovely Truedessa. Thanks for joining in.
SEriously considering some ice cream sandwich because this form is deliciously complex, Grace. ❤ Thank you.
A challenging form but fun, smiles. Here’s some ice cream sanwiches for you. Enjoy the weekend.
yay for ice cream sandwiches!
Well that was fun! I’d been struggling with a concept that I thought wanted to be a villanelle, and it wasn’t coming together, but this did the trick! Thank you, Grace, for breaking that log jam!
Hope it was fun for you. The form allows for some flexibility. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you Grace for hosting a wonderful prompt challenge. Enjoyed writing. 🙂
Thanks for joining in. Have a wonderful weekend.
Thank you, have a nice day. 🙂
Another wonderful prompt. Gave it a go. Villanelle. You rock. good night.
Hi Selma. Sorry, this is not villanelle, though it is close in form. Please submit a form as described – mirrorred refrain. Thank you.
🙈 Thanks, Grace. Will do as time permits. I appreciate you. 🙇♀️ 💕
Thank you Grace for introducing another form with a song feeling to it. I was stargazing yesterday, hoping for a glimpse of the Perseids meteor shower. After that the poems just flowed out of me. Wrote three before finally getting to bed. Today I decided I just had to record a reading to because it sounded so much like a chant or an old song.
Wishing you all a great weekend!
Wonderful read – a lot of magic with nature and the moon. Thanks for joining in.