Hello All, here is Björn with a prompt that I hope will give us some great poetry. It is a form that I first became aware of when reading this week’s Quadrilles and came upon the poem by Jane Dougherty which was written as a Cadralor, a form described in the poetic journal Gleam as:
The cadralor is a poem of 5, unrelated, numbered stanzaic images, each of which can stand alone as a poem, is fewer than 10 lines, and ideally constrains all stanzas to the same number of lines. Imagery is crucial to cadralore: each stanza should be a whole, imagist poem, almost like a scene from a film, or a photograph. The fifth stanza acts as the crucible, alchemically pulling the unrelated stanzas together into a love poem. By “love poem,” we mean that your fifth stanza illuminates a gleaming thread that runs obliquely through the unrelated stanzas and answers the compelling question: “For what do you yearn?”
It is left to the poet’s discretion to decide how much, if any, contextual connection or linguistic connection will exist between the stanzas. The more unrelated in context, the sharper–riskier–the poem. Ultimately, the more unrelated the stanzas, the more successful the poem will be as a cadralor: they contain oblique connections that are illuminated by the fifth stanza. End punctuation between stanzas is also at the discretion of the poet.
I must say that my first thought went to the poem “Thirteen ways of looking at a blackbird” by Wallace Stevens which we featured a while back here at dVerse. Given how many great entries we had from that prompt, with many poems also becoming part of our anthology I thought we should try to write cadralors here.
In addition, since today the Nobel Prize in literature was announced I give you the option of being inspired by:
Abdulrazak Gurnah “for his uncompromising and compassionate penetration of the effects of colonialism and the fate of the refugee in the gulf between cultures and continents.

Av PalFest – originally posted to Flickr as Abulrazak Gurnah on Hebron Panel, CC BY 2.0,
I must admit that I had never heard about him before. He was born in Zanzibar in 1948 when Zanzibar was still a colony under United Kingdom. He moved for his studies to England and first studied Science before moving on to become a teacher. Writing came gradually and he said that he never considered writing a career but rather something you did because you had something to tell. If you want to write a poem based on a topics such as exile, migration and colonalialism you can do that as well, in the form of a Cadralor or not.
I will leave you with a quote:
“I speak to maps. And sometimes they something back to me. This is not as strange as it sounds, nor is it an unheard of thing. Before maps, the world was limitless. It was maps that gave it shape and made it seem like territory, like something that could be possessed, not just laid waste and plundered. Maps made places on the edges of the imagination seem graspable and placable.”
― Abdulrazak Gurnah, By the Sea
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But most of all be kind and have fun.
Hello all, sit down by the bar and listen to all the stories from around the world… it is always exciting the day when the Nobel Prize in literature is announced and today it was a total surprise I think. Anyway today we offer you simple pub food, Shephard pie, farm ale or if you prefer some of our select malt whisky.
Thanks for promoting this poetry form Bjorn (and the heads-up to Gurnah) as I did want to give it a go sometime – having done so I think it looks easier than it is but have made an attempt anyway.
I liked the effort, I think you can make it as easy or hard as you want… but the variations are endless. Maybe the challenge is its simplicity.
indeed!
Bjorn,
What an intriguing prompt, especially as it relates to the quote from the latest Nobel Prize winner, opening up so many possibilities! The Wallace Stevens poem is another starting point. I’m looking forward to giving the cadralor form a try. Shall I grab a slice of Shepherd’s pie first? Farm ale? That would be a first and maybe provide inspiration. :>)
pax,
dora
Oh yes, it does, and gives you a place from where to start, maybe an exile of sort.
Hello Bjorn and All. First off, I did love trying to put something together with this form, it’s one I’ll be using again. Secondly, I love the Gurnah quote. Shephard pie sounds hearty and good, one slice please, and a glass of select malt whisky sounds great also.
Coming right up.. and I too found the quote really good, especially in line with the Nobel, committee’s motivaton.
Thank you. Cheers! Agreed.
Thank you for hosting and for the challenge. Also for the news about the Nobel Prize in Literature. I will definitely go back and look at that.
It will be interesting to read what everyone does with this form.
I have high hopes on what I have read so far…
Shepherd’s pie sounds like great comfort food for a stormy night in Slovenia. Thank you for an interesting new challenge, Björn!
I think a lot of thanks goes back to Jane.
True! She writes excellent cadralore 😊
Shepherd’s pie for me too Bjorn. This was a fun poetry form to try and I was pleasantly surprised at the Nobel prize winner. Good to know and read more about him and his journey. Thanks for hosting.
I have spent part of my evening trying to lean more. Thankfully there was a program on the radio to listen to while doing dishes 🙂
Just returned from a Van Gogh Immersion exhibit. Beautiful and I learned a lot. Did you know Van Gogh was color blind???
Thanks for hosting, Bjorn, and for our introduction to this form. I went to the inaugural issue of Gleam for some examples and inspirations. I must say, I thought the idea of the fifth stanza answering the question “What do I yearn for?” quite a challenge. Enjoyed writing for this though.
A small slice of shepherd’s pie and an ale would be lovely!’\
Off to the reading now 🙂
I agree, the fifth stanza was the true challenge… I think you did very well and I think it’s also good to avoid the simple trap of simply answering that question.
Inspiring prompt thanks Bjorn, shame you didn’t add a direct link to Jane’s but I eventually found it! I went with the Nobel laureate on this one.
Oh I thought I did include a link, I intended to that that.
hi bjorn
thanks for waking my sleepy mind up with this prompt. a whisky would be a great night cap than my normal hot choc. Ishall come back for read in the morning.
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A whisky is here for you
Cheers
Interesting, Bjorn! Imma take a walk and let this percolate a bit. Perhaps keep a nice white chilled for me when I get back!
There is always white in the fridge.
I’ve been wanting to try this form. It definitely needs practice.(K)
It does, the trick is to keep the different stanzas separate enough and try to find the yearning in the last stanza
Luv when i get to play catch. Luv this new form you threw out to us
I approached very timidily though. Hope i got it right
Much💜love
It is more challenging than it might look… It is a bit like looking through a caleidoscope
Hi Bjorn, et al! Thank you for hosting sir, and for a most interesting and, for me, a very challenging prompt. I am again blowin’ in the winds of uncertainty here — but I sent this one airborne, in hopes it might find altitude. I have no idea what I am doing — but here I go, doin’ it anyway! 🙂
I think trying is the best we can do. You can always take a look at Gleam for great examples.
Very interesting prompt Bjorn – definitely a form to consider in some depth – I’ll definitely be looking into it more; and had it banging about in my head – nothing like writing poetry when slipped under the bed covers 😜 – but here I am, in the wee hours of the after midnight – so I’ll be back later in the day to read what others have done …
and thanks for introducing us to the Nobel Literature winner – another something/one to look into with more awake eyes 🙂
Hope you have a great day and weekend
I was intrigued by the form when I had read Jane’s quadrille. Thanks for the challenge, Björn. Great news about the Nobel.
I too was inspired by Jane’s poem… this is what it is to be inspired by each other.
Absolutely.
I was heartened by Gurnah’s win, hoping it will auger a new wave of understanding. I was certainly challenged by this form. Thank you Bjorn.
I like it too, and I look forward to read him.
Yes, something worthwhile for a change methinks.
Shepherd’s pie and farm ale sound like a hearty combination! Interesting new (to me) form, Bjorn…and I like quote by Gurnah.
I like the quote as well… I picked some lines in my poem
I recognized the maps line…
A fascinating form, Bjorn, and far from an easy one. I felt compelled to give it a shot, and I’m still struggling with it, but hope to have something soon.
PS. I’ll be around tomorrow to read. That wore me out! ;_)
I am just making my rounds… I have been a bit worn as well
Mike Bayles
Poets’ Lunch
The others gather in the kitchen
between verses
The cabin in the nature center
shuns city life.
A hummingbird hovers at the window
fluttering my imagination.
I keep secret our conversation
while others gather lunch.
I turn to nature, my muse,
when shaping poems.
Love it..nature is a perfect inspiration for poems.
That was so interesting Bjorn. I’m not too happy with what I wrote but I loved the excercise.
It reminds me somewhat loosely of those long sessions Bashô led in evenings in different parts of Japan, though as I understand there were some formal rules there, such as mention of moon in such and such stanza, etc. But what I really liked there was again how each “stanza” was ‘unrelated.’
This concept of keeping groupings unrelated was a major part in the development of Edward de Bono’s concepts of creative, or parallel thinking, where he maintained forcing persons to find relation between two completely unrelated objects caused wonderfuly creative thinking, which he explained in medical terminology. I tried once with an orange and matchbox in a classroom, and got wonderful poetry from students. I also strongly feel this approach should be a feature of haibun more often than not, between prose and haiku.
I was unable to leave a comment ~~ I enjoyed your poem!! You brought everything together in the final stanza ~~ beautifully.
I leave my comment here, I really love those images of being a refuge, since many people have come from Afghanistan to Sweden, that dance can really be somewhere in Stockholm, these could be people I meet in Sweden, or maybe the office janitor.
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