Hello Björn is here with a challenge that I hope will bring out the best of you. I find it interesting how different movement in art and art actually follow each other. For instance we have all heard about expressionistic poetry. So I thought that today we would start to investigate this a little bit more during some months to follow. I will be researching the topic and see how thoughts in art represent themselves in word.
Today we will discuss cubism, not only because it’s one of the least obvious, but also because it connects to a poem I wrote last week for OLN, and some of the comments I received around that.
So let us start with the definition of cubism in art. Cubism is first of all not abstract, but another form of realism. The pioneers where Pablo Picasso and George Braque who started to explore reality using the following starting points.
Break the concept of perspective, something that had been around at least since the renaissance.
Break the picture into simplified objects with clear borders in between. These forms were often done as geometric object, each of them simplified and with clear borders between them.

Pablo Picasso, 1910, Girl with a Mandolin (Fanny Tellier), oil on canvas, 100.3 x 73.6 cm, Museum of Modern Art, New York
You can see this very well represented in Pablo Picasso’s “girl with a mandolin” where different parts have been broken up and simplified. Then the parts are showed in different perspectives, almost as you have tilted the building blocks.
Cubism was later on further developed, but I think sticking to these two small rules we can easier see how this applies to poetry.
We have already looked on one artist who inspired by this wrote poetry, that yet today sits among the most controversial. Gertrude Stein, and her book Tender Buttons. For her the simple items where the words themselves, and by abandoning concept as grammar or meaning created images that actually crosses the border into incomprehensible. There are cubist painting that are very hard to interpret as well but since we’ve have had a prompt on that already I would like to present you with another cubist approach.
If you on the other hand start with simplification of poetry into very short pieces, we are all aware what can be done using for instance haiku or tanka. Or sticking to modernistic principles we can use an imagist approach. Poems like that are complex in themselves because we have to fill in the gaps ourselves as readers. A short poem like that will be viewed different by context of the reader.
Consider now a cubist approach, where you write many small poems on the same object but with a shift of perspective, and you might see that that the poems put together will form something where gradually the poet provide a clearer and clearer context. I see it almost as a conversation with the reader. This has of course been done many times through history, but for it to be truly cubist we also need to break the pieces apart. We have to show the borders between the perspectives and refrain from blurring the edges, or at least have a shift of perspective large enough to provide contrast.
So now let’s jump to an example, the most famous one:
Wallace Stevens’
Thirteen ways of looking at the blackbird.
I
Among twenty snowy mountains,
The only moving thing
Was the eye of the blackbird.
II
I was of three minds,
Like a tree
In which there are three blackbirds.
III
The blackbird whirled in the autumn winds.
It was a small part of the pantomime.
IV
A man and a woman
Are one.
A man and a woman and a blackbird
Are one.
V
I do not know which to prefer,
The beauty of inflections
Or the beauty of innuendoes,
The blackbird whistling
Or just after.
VI
Icicles filled the long window
With barbaric glass.
The shadow of the blackbird
Crossed it, to and fro.
The mood
Traced in the shadow
An indecipherable cause.
VII
O thin men of Haddam,
Why do you imagine golden birds?
Do you not see how the blackbird
Walks around the feet
Of the women about you?
VIII
I know noble accents
And lucid, inescapable rhythms;
But I know, too,
That the blackbird is involved
In what I know.
IX
When the blackbird flew out of sight,
It marked the edge
Of one of many circles.
X
At the sight of blackbirds
Flying in a green light,
Even the bawds of euphony
Would cry out sharply.
XI
He rode over Connecticut
In a glass coach.
Once, a fear pierced him,
In that he mistook
The shadow of his equipage
For blackbirds.
XII
The river is moving.
The blackbird must be flying.
XIII
It was evening all afternoon.
It was snowing
And it was going to snow.
The blackbird sat
In the cedar-limbs.
Notice how each poem could be written using imagism or other modernist poem, it’s simple a clean, like the geometric shape in a cubist painting, but when put together they form a complex weave that together form a new unity, like the full painting. Notice how a coda if read by itself would require you to fill in plenty of gaps, just like how a portion of a cubist painting would be something different than the whole poem.
For today I would like you to:
Select a simple object, or a common concept
Write several poems where you look at the object from different perspective. This perspective could be anything (poets have so much freedom than painters) such as being placed in a small narrative, at different part of the day or at different seasons.
Order your small poems in an order where you while striving to create contrasts and keeping the coherence of a complete poem.
If you want to paint more, you can let the poems be moved closer, they could be different codas, stanzas or just images with line break between. Like Claudia’s prompt on layered poems.
Post your poem when you are ready and link up to the link below. Come and read, comment and have fun… Remember that the prompt is open 48 hours so spend your time writing and rewriting.
Welcome everyone… this is a prompt I have looked forward to a long time. I realize it could be a challenge, but remember that the prompt is open for 48 hours. Happy Thursday
A beautiful and challenging prompt Bjorn ~ I like the approach of looking at the same object or theme in different perspectives ~ And Wallace makes it look so easy, ha ~
Looking forward to some wonderful reading tonight and tomorrow ~
I actually spent a few days turning my objects back and forth… and I have used this technique… but I find the result very rewarding…
OK, big Bjorn, you are getting tough & esoteric on us here–and I love it; a real challenge. Doing my own research, I found Cubism in Art straight forward, but transferred to poetry–there is no real tangible definition. I surmised that for some, the shape of the words & stanzas can constitute the “look” of fracture & absurdity. I concluded that I have been experimenting with shape on the page for years, so now
I just had to find poetics somewhere between e.e. cummings & Wallace Stevens. right? I came up with 7 stanzas, capped with a tanka, finding this “form” to be challenging & interesting; can’t wait to get out on the trail & see how the gang deals with this prompt.
I think there might be taking some time to really find a true definition… Somewhere I found that Wallace Stevens talked about perspektiveness which is close to what Braque and Picasso did… so some of this is based on my own theories… I hope to continue to explore some of this in the future.
Good evening Björn! I struggled a bit with this challenge as I wasn’t sure how to approach the ‘small poems’. In the end I wrote a number of haiku and haiku-like poems and spent some time organising them into a coherent whole. I hope I have succeeded! I’m not a drinker but I think I need a Bacardi Breezer after that!
Ha.. yes this prompt was challenging (and this was my third effort… ) but on the other hand once you find the object to write about it becomes a little bit easier..
I was going to write about a strange object a friend of mine brought back from Malawi a few years ago. I even made a start but I could see the willows in the garden – I heard them calling to me and I couldn’t resist!
Maybe there could be second one, but usually I have found the simple object work the best… the early cubist often had motives in their paintings that was quite ordinary, like a still life… that’s why I thought the arrangements from Grace’s poetry worked so well.
I agree!
Well, I wrote and rewrote and edited and changed and then rewrote some more. I hope y’all like it as I am unsure it fits what Björn is asking for.
Ha… I did the same, writing and rewriting lots of time… I will check you.
Mr. Linky won’t open for me. It says the most likely cause is that I need to log in.
I have had problem with my internet… too seems to be some issues with the cloud… I think it will be back again (no need to login I think)
Seems to work OK now…
I think it is my work computer. I’ll try from home later.
Could be a firewall acting up
I love this prompt, Bjorn. That poem of Stevens inspired me a while back to write a few poem along that line. I would like to try a new one, or at least to refresh an older one. There is huge appeal in imagism for me. This has been an uber-busy week but will do my best to be on board tonight or tomorrow. Thank you.
Yes some of Wallace Steven’s blackbird pieces are very much written as an imagist would, others i think were less, yet the total effect is stunning.
Thank you for this great prompt, Bjorn. I’d like to explore it further when I get more time.
48 hours of open time…
Oh, I linked a poem. I just would like to revisit this again…so very interesting!
I saw that… yes this is my third effort with this technique… I have found it just improves with many edits.
I only three short poems in mine.
That’s a good start Frank ~
I LOVED this. Thank you, Bjorn. Back in a little bit to read. Can’t wait to see what everybody spills.
There is some stunning poetry here…. really a great prompt to write to…
Hey everyone,
Phew! this was one hell of a challenging prompt! I hope I got it right, sharing my poem ‘Ten ways of looking at Love’ 🙂 thank you Bjorn for the wonderful opportunity 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Love… yes that’s a good one to look at.
Thank you 🙂 I just couldn’t resist trying my hand at this prompt though its later than usual 😛
For now, reposting one from 2011. Off to write a new one. I love this way of looking at things!
It is extremely interesting way of writing… it’s been said the cubism was one of the most influential movements in art…
Some truly aweinspiring poetry here tonight… it might be challenging, but so rewarding if your thoughts are expanded around those first few images, think about a story around your object, are there any idioms, other words that can associate to your word and from that you can build your pieces… I’m so impressed. But now it’s late, and I will go to bed….
See you tomorrow Bjorn ~ I am hitting the poetry trail now ~
Goodnight, Sir. Thank you for this incredible inspiration today. Much appreciated. And I am in awe of my fellow poets. WOW.
I may take another swing at this tomorrow. All the poems have been amazing.
Looking forward to it Brian ~ This is a good technique to keep for future writing.
a great challenge, Bjorn. Certainly not what I am used to…but that’s one thing that I love about dVerse…being stretched into those areas that I am not used to, and therefore, a chance to grow!
And making it fun too along the way ~ Thanks for joining us Bryan ~
Indeed.. That’s what so fun about dVerse.. And so much you can learn by analysing poetry.
Such an interesting and challenging prompt, Bjorn. And your writing to explain it is very well done. I’ve been out almost all day today, teaching a workshop. Just got to posting. Will try to do some reading tonight and in early AM. We leave tomorrow morning for NC to spend an extended weekend with my son. Should have some down time to read then also.
Happy weekend to all!
The poetry for this prompt is among the best one I have read, so I hope you will enjoy the ride.
I really suck at this. Sorry. I only could partly get my head around this prompt in the form of cinquains. Great prompt, though. Stretching and hard.
I will be over in a minute… Cinquains sounds like a great idea, you can get the cubes even
Hi Bjorn! whew! What a challenge before my weekend starts! 😀 But I like how you discuss it! 🙂 Will try to write one! 😀
I found that the best way for me is to write it over some time, let the thought sink in a bit, and maybe also reuse some words of your own.
ooh. thank you, Bjorn! I can re-use/re-write a poem?
If you have something from your past you can incorporate that – of course
alright. thank you, Bjorn!
Bjorn, I love this prompt. I so enjoy concise, to the point poetry rather than rococo ramblings. Thank you so much for this. I brought me out of hiatus to write. I will be back tomorrow to read and comment.
No ramblings in this prompt for sure… But I can enjoy both baroque brawling and rococo rambling every now and then.
Good morning/afternoon to all my fellow pub crawlers. I wrote another poem for this prompt called “Girl: Phone: History, there of”. Hope y’all have a splendiferous day!
Finally found something to write a fresh one about. I have an appointment this afternoon–will be back to catch up later. I love this form.
Couldn’t resist double dipping into this amazing prompt. And have made my rounds again. You all ROCK.
I can’t thank Björn enough for this prompt. This a part of a comment in response to Glenn on my first poem.
“This prompt was so interesting for all the angst it generated among the participants. We all wanted to write to the prompt but it was so unique there were really no prior benchmarks. I think between all of us, Björn has succeeded in forcing us to create a new style of Cubist poetry. I am awed at all the amazing talent in the d’Verse group.”
YES. Love that. ❤
I think that’s what we’re we get by really dive into analysing the poems by the master.
This is a very interesting challenge indeed!
Some of the best poetry I have seen is written online in a long time has been written here..
I agree Bjorn ~
I agree–the Pub is chock full of talented poets, which can be intimidating 🙂
It feels a pity to close Mr Linky, but we have 48 hours to do it… maybe we will see some more poems for the Open Link this upcoming Thursday.
Well, my phone said I missed the deadline by six minutes. Other device said an hour. Sigh. This prompt was really different and challenging, I wish the deadline could be extended a bit. I’ll just put in drafts and not post it then.
I missed the Mr Linky deadline by an hour. 😦 Darn it! It was such a creative, amazing and challenging prompt, I’m posting mine anyway and hoping you all will drop by.
I will, and I will link you up – wouldn’t miss yours. 😉
Just saw your reply, Bjorn. How lovely! Okay, you inspired me. 🙂 I’m going for it!
Just put your link here and I will link you up.
Another option is our OpenLinkNight next Thursday if you want to edit it further. Any and all poems are welcome during our OLN~
Thanks for linking me up, Grace. ❤ https://motherwintermoon.wordpress.com/2016/10/01/wings-and-claws/
Thanks Bjorn! I just linked in reply to Grace’s comment.
Done and thanks for your support of our community ~
The pleasure is mine.
Missed the linky as just got back from a break but could not resist this innovative challenge – thanks for taking me way out of my comfort zone.
Hope to see you link on OLN…