I’m not an intrepid traveller mostly because I fear being lost, not finding my way in another language, even to the post office! I might parrot-fashion the basic questions but inevitably the answer comes too quickly for comprehension! Thus I’ve certainly never ventured as far as the Republic of Niger as Susan Rich does in her “Lost By Way of Tchin-Tabarden “ (full text here)
“…It’s so easy to get lost and disappear, die of thirst and longing
as the Sultan’s three wives did last year. Found in their Mercedes,
the chauffeur at the wheel, how did they fail to return home
to Ágadez, retrace a landscape they’d always believed?
No cross-streets, no broken yellow lines; I feel relief at the abandonment
of my own geography. I know there’s no surveyor but want to imagine
the aerial map that will send me above flame trees, snaking
through knots of basalt. I’ll mark the exact site for a lean-to
where the wind and dust travel easily along my skin,
and I’m no longer satiated by the scent of gasoline. I’ll arrive there
out of balance, untaught; ready for something called home.”
Like the terrifying tale with no happy ending of the Babes in the Woods, Pablo Neruda is ”Lost in the Forest”
“Lost in the forest, I broke off a dark twig
and lifted its whisper to my thirsty lips:
maybe it was the voice of the rain crying,
a cracked bell, or a torn heart.
Something from far off it seemed
deep and secret to me, hidden by the earth,
a shout muffled by huge autumns,
by the moist half-open darkness of the leaves.
Wakening from the dreaming forest there, the hazel-sprig
sang under my tongue, its drifting fragrance
climbed up through my conscious mind
as if suddenly the roots I had left behind
cried out to me, the land I had lost with my childhood—
and I stopped, wounded by the wandering scent.”
Even when we go nowhere, we can still lose our way, like Peter Schneider getting Lost in Plain Sight (full text here)
“Somewhere recently
I lost my short-term memory.
It was there and then it moved
like the flash of a red fox
My short-term memory
has no address but here
no time but now.
It is a straight-man, waiting to speak
to fill in empty space
with name, date, trivia, punch line.
And then it fails to show….
It is lost, hiding somewhere out back
a dried ragweed stalk on the Kansas Prairie…”
In her usual prose poetry style Maxine Chernoff is looking for a particular item in “Lost and Found”
I am looking for the photo that would make all the difference in my life. It’s very small and subject to fits of amnesia, turning up in poker hands, grocery carts, under the unturned stone. The photo shows me at the lost and found looking for an earlier photo, the one that would have made all the difference then. My past evades me like a politician. Wielding a fly-swatter, it destroys my collection of cereal boxes, my childhood lived close to the breakfast table. Only that photo can help me locate my fourteen lost children, who look just like me. When I call the Bureau of Missing Persons, they say, “Try the Bureau of Missing Photos.” They have a fine collection. Here’s one of Calvin Coolidge’s seventh wedding. Here’s one of a man going over a cliff on a dogsled. Here’s my Uncle Arthur the night he bought the prize peacock. O photo! End your tour of the world in a hot air balloon. Resign your job at the mirror-testing laboratory. Come home to me, you little fool, before I find I can live without you.
And so for this challenge, you have two options to choose from:
1. ‘And the lost were found’: Select ONE of the above ‘lost poems’ (or one of your own finding where something or someone is lost) and write your poem as response with the resolution of finding, being found or returned etc.
OR
2. Finding a poem within a poem or prose: Select ONE of the above ‘lost poems’ (or one of your own finding where something or someone is lost ) and re-write is as a ‘Found poem’. It does not have to be as rigid as an erasure poem for you can add in some of your own words or even reorder it.
Whichever option you choose you must include a reference to the poem you selected but better still, include the original within your post or alongside your own poem, especially if you are opting for a Found poetry style. [And for those of you who need to double-check what Found Poetry is see HERE:]
Hint: you can see the full text of your chosen poem by clicking on its link
And so that others can find you, add your poem to the Mr Linky below and go visiting others as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
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Hello Everyone – a wet night here in the UK but the pub is open and ready to serve …I hope you find something to your taste here!
Hello Laura… I have found my way here at least. It was a bit challenging, but I tried at least. I think a glass of mineral water with lemon is fine with me tonight.
Coming up Bjorn with high recommendations on your poem!
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Wonderful topic, wonderfully researched and suitably challenging (very!) – the latter point just as good as the first two!
that’s good to hear, thank you – look forward to reading how you met the challenge
Ain, I can’t find a way to comment on your post, but I found it stark and brutal and powerful, and I hope you’re OK.
that goes for me too
Thank you so much. Sorry am messing around with sites. Trying to find one can work with…
Ain, did you switch from the site you were at to tumbler? I finally was able to get into the other site (forgot what it was) and now you are at a place I have no account and so can’t comment (like others have said.) I liked your poem, and the loss of fear about being found sounds like a step in the right direction. When we’ve had to hide for so long, anything else feels uncomfortable.
I’m so sorry..trying to get the right site.. medium.com only permits some replies…so I searched around…sorry again…
Sounds like a frustrating challenge. Hope you get it worked out and can relax.
Hello Laura and All. I enjoyed writing to your challenge, Laura. Sorry it’s rainy there. We could use some here, but I won’t complain about the extended summer weather. A pint of Magners if you please 🙂
Magners coming up Lisa – just what an extended summer calls for 😉
Thank you! Cheers!
thanks Laura for this challenge.
the poem “lost in the foreset” took me back to my childhood growing up next door to a pine forest where i could get lost daily.
heading for a candlit soak in the bath back later for a read
you found the evocative and perhaps a future for a past project?!
Perhaps thank toy
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Extremely interesting prompt Laura. Thank you for hosting today. Hope I responded to it properly. I found an old, unpublished poem of mine, that had a sense of “loss” at its essence — then did an edit and rewrite to give it a rescued “found” essence. Happy Tuesday everyone! 🙂
it was a good opportunity for a reworking Rob and especially one with that upbeat twist
Great prompt, Laura, which I stretched to the max with much trepidation, and enjoyed much! :>)
pax,
dora
max you did and mixed so well Dora!
🧡❤️
Thank you for the prompt Laura and the wonderful poetry and prose links. (I wondered is Susan Rich related to Adrienne Rich?) I have attempted my first ‘erasure poem’ – albeit very brief. Looking forward to reading everyone’s posts tomorrow.
the brevity gave such impact!
~ and there is no relation but good question – Adrienne had sons and here is Susan’s bio
https://susanrich.squarespace.com/bio
Thank you for the bio link – what an interesting lady.
Laura, thank you for the challenging and fun prompt. I have written a found poem for the first time. 🙂
well it reads as though you have been ‘finding’ poems for much longer!
That’s very kind of you to say! Much appreciated.
Hello All- Thanks for hosting Laura. A bit late, but whew, this was a great challenge!
and still in plenty of time Linda!
Hello Laura- I may have misread a portion of this prompt. I thought it read you can use one of your own poems to create a ‘found ‘poem in option 2. If you need to delete my link, that’s fine. No worries.
not at all Linda – several others did the same – its also an excellent way of rewriting and tightening our poetry as you showed with yours.
Thank you!
Thanks for the great prompt Laura. (K)