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Hi everyone! Over the years we have tried our hand in short poetry forms, from haiku, tanka to rondelet, cinquain and limericks. What a challenge it is to choose carefully our words given the constraints of lines and syllables/meter.
Today, we are trying out a short poetry form, The Wayra.
The Wayra (Quechua – wind) is a popular verse form of Peru and Bolivia. It appears it originated in an indigenous Quechua language but has found its way into Spanish literature. It is a short syllabic verse form found at Vole Central and some other sites around the internet. Source
The elements of the Wayra are:
1.a pentastich, a poem in 5 lines.
2.syllabic, 5-7-7-6-8
3.unrhymed.
Here is an example from A Reading Writer:
barefoot (A Wayra)
Wayward, barefoot steps
search the path untamed, cluttered
with rocks of doubts, holes of flaws
ready for blisters, scars,
knowing to rise means to fall first.
Additional challenge: To incorporate onomatopoeia in your wayra poem.
Bang! Zip! Screech! Sound words that are written out are known as onomatopoeia. Poetry uses onomatopoeia for both sensory language and short, choppy lines.
Check out Bjorn’s article on onomatopoeia here.
Here is my wayra, incorporating the sounds:
cracks beneath our feet
@EverydayAmazing
grandfather clock chimes
tick-tock! each beat, rushing pull
of moontide. we hold the line
-dark soil shifts, falters, boom!–
sting of loss nipping our cheeks
Writing challenge: a poem written in the wayra form, incorporating onomatopoeia as described above.
Here is how to join us if you are new:
- Write a poem based on the writing challenge as described above. Post it on your blog or website.
- Enter your name and direct link to your poem in Mr. Linky.
- Remember to check the box re: privacy policy.
- Follow the links to other poets. Read and comment on other poems. We all appreciate feedback on our poems.
- Link back to dVerse so others can find us too.
- Have fun!
See you at the poetry trail. ~Grace~
sanaarizvi said:
Welcome everyone! It’s a lovely cold evening here 🙂 Please help yourselves to the menu, we have Pumpkin Spice White Russian, Washington Appletini, Cream cheese pound cake or if you prefer we also have coffee with mocha scones.
Grace will be with us shortly~ see you on the poetry trail! 💝💝
Grace said:
You always come up with delicious food – thank you.
sanaarizvi said:
You’re most welcome! 💝💝
areadingwriter said:
here for the cream cheese pound cake, Sanaa!! I am salivating. HAHA.
Grace said:
Hi everyone! Thank you Sanaa for opening the pub doors. I love the selections for tonight – goodness a pound cake will be lovely.
sanaarizvi said:
Thank you so much, Grace 💝💝 I will join you for some pound cake! Loved the prompt 😀 Looking forward to reading the responses.
Ain Starlingsson, forestbathing hermit said:
That was also a powerful Wayra you wrote in the introduction presentation, must say…
Grace said:
Thank you Ain. Appreciate your support to our prompts. Commenting on our blog post though is such a challenge.
areadingwriter said:
Same for pound cake, Grace! And also thank you for featuring my old Wayra here. Excited to try it again today and to make it “ring” this time! 😉
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Oh… I had a very strange day today… first, when coming home from a morning walk I received an SMS saying that we had a planned power outage until noon. We couldn’t have that, so we had to jump into the car and drive to the office (we are allowed in, but only upon need) Then I spent the whole day in a room with meetings and never saw a colleague, then when I came home I had to go through the network resetting everything … only after that I had the time to write my poem… thank god it was a short form.
Grace said:
Hurray for short forms, smiles. That is a strange meeting indeed Bjorn. So far, all my meetings today is via Zoom and if there is an outage, sorry but I am staying home..ha..ha..
calmkate said:
coffee and cake sounds good please? Thanks Grace and Rosema for the inspiration, an interesting format …
Grace said:
Perfect combination specially on this cold autumn day.
calmkate said:
thanks, but its a sunny spring day here 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Coffee and scones pleas, Sanaa, and thank you for opening the pub, and Grace for this fun short form.
sanaarizvi said:
Coffee and scones for you, Merril! 🙂 Loved your poem! 💝💝
merrildsmith said:
Yummy, and thank you so much, Sanaa! 💕
Ain Starlingsson, forestbathing hermit said:
A few coffees I think, one by one…long night ahead getting the best wayra out! V interesting…!
sanaarizvi said:
A round of coffees for you, Ain 🙂 I agree, it is truly an interesting form 💝💝
Ain Starlingsson, forestbathing hermit said:
Thanks so much! I meant the best I can do to clarify…reads bit funny when I saw my comment…chewing coca leaves from Peru/Bolivia, or coca tea might help too!
Grace said:
I also want to say that I enjoy reading your poems but the commenting on your blog is so difficult and tiresome. Thank you for your enthusiatic responses to our poetry prompts. We appreciate it!
Helen Dehner said:
Washington Appletini please~a most intriguing challenge!,
sanaarizvi said:
Washington Appletini for you, Helen! 😀 I too enjoyed the challenge 💝💝
fireblossom32 said:
Thanks for the interesting form to try.
Grace said:
Thanks for joining in. You do wonders with them.
rogblog666 said:
hello all
i have been fighting mis behaving tech today to be here so i apologise now if i do not get to read. have fun with this. thanks for the challenge of a new form. heading for a soak in the bath to reset my frazzled head.
goodnight all
rog
Grace said:
Great that you had fun with the form. Enjoy and see you in the poetry trail!
rogblog666 said:
👍👍
dorahak said:
Glad to see you all here! A coffee and scone sounds wonderful, as does the prompt! Thanks Grace and Sanaa!
pax,
dora
Grace said:
Coffee and scone is perfect for a dreary night. Great to see you Dora.
dorahak said:
Working on the wayra is brightening it up too. Thanks, Grace! 🥰
Ron. said:
Thanks for the cool prompt, Grace! I’m diggin it! I’ll try to get around to reading / commenting later, after My Beloved Sandra frees me from housekeeping in preparation for tomorrow’s visitors.
Grace said:
Thanks for joining in! See you around the bend then!
Carol Congalton said:
Don’t know what I am doing wrong but my linking just won’t work correctly! So humble apologies for re-tries which make it appear I have multiple entries! I’m just trying to get one link to stick. ????
Grace said:
Got the right one – thanks for joining in!!!!
robtkistner said:
Thanks for hosting Grace. Interesting prompt, I’ll give it a try.
Grace said:
Great Rob! Looking forward to it!
robtkistner said:
Thank you for introducing this wonderful form. It is succint yet generous in its ability to provide a platform to say so much. 🙂
revivedwriter said:
I love trying new forms! 😀
Grace said:
It is a fun exercise 🙂
writingwhatnots said:
Thank you Grace – this looks like a fun form.
Grace said:
Short and fun – thanks for joining in.
kittysverses said:
Thank you Grace for hosting and introducing a new form. 🙂
Grace said:
I am excited to read all the contributions. Thanks for joining in.
kittysverses said:
You are welcome, Grace. 🙂
paeansunplugged said:
Grace, thank you for the amazing prompt. Loved both Wayra you shared.
Grace said:
Thank you for supporting our prompts and our writing community.
paeansunplugged said:
Thank YOU for I always learn something new here.
pvcann said:
What a fascinating form, excited to learn this thank you Grace. (always a whiskey)
Grace said:
Cheers! Thanks for joining in.
hedgewitch said:
Thanks for the challenge, Grace. Saw this yesterday but couldn’t find anything til this morning. I’m fond of short counted forms like this–they are very effective.
Grace said:
Fantastic, I will be making my rounds shortly. Thanks for joining in!
memadtwo said:
Thanks for introducing us to this form Grace. (K)
Grace said:
It’s fun to try new forms. I hope you enjoyed writing to it.
memadtwo said:
I did! I like short forms.