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Blessing for Sound, Blessing for the Light, David Whyte, Kwansaba, poetry reading, praise poem, response poem
Hi everyone! This is our last poetry prompt for 2021 and we are grateful for all your visits, participation and enthusiasm in our poetry community. We will be going on a 2 week holiday break and we will come back on January 3, 2022.
For today’s poetry form, we will be learning a verse form of praise, and listening to the wonderful reading by David Whyte.
I. Kwansaba is an African American verse form of praise. The Kwansaba, (swahili kwan – first fruit / saba -principle) was created in 1995 by Eugene B Redmond, East St. Louis Poet Laureate and professor of English at Southern Illinois University-East St. Louis. The form was developed in honor of the celebration of Kwanzaa . The poetic form adopts the number 7 from Kwanzaa’s Nguzo Saba (7 principles) as well as embraces its roots in the South African tradition of the Praise Poem.
*Unity, family
*Self Determination
*Work Collectively
*Cooperative economics
*Purpose
*Creativity
*Faith
Kwanzaa is a 7 day celebration of the African-American family encompassing African-American heritage, culture and principles. The celebration was introduced by Dr. Maulana Karenga, African-American educator, following the Watts riots of 1966 with the intent of bringing the African American community together. Kwansaba, the birth of a poetry form The 7 principles of Kwanzaa are unity, self-determination, collective work and responsibility, cooperative economics, purpose, creativity, and faith. Each day of the celebration focuses on one of the principles.
The defining features of Kwansaba are:
1.a celebration of family and African-American culture, a praise poem.
2.a septastich, a poem in 7 lines. (To be clear, it is only 1 stanza).
3. measured by 7 words in each line.
4. written with no word exceeding 7 letters.
Source . Here is my example:
December celebration
@Grace Guevara
Our faces shine brighter than neon lights
Smoke from fiery spices fill our noses
Festive table is filled with fruits, sweet
bread, yam and cured meats. Church bells
echo our evening prayers with white candles
Voices rise with plates & tall tales
Here is home, warm as chicken soup
Our first writing challenge is to write a Kwansaba, verse form of praise.
II. I came across this beautiful reading by David Whyte here.
Two of these poems — “Blessing for Sound” and “Blessing for the Light” — come alive as a ravishment of Irish landscape and music in Whyte’s collaboration with filmmaker Andrew Hinton and composer Owen Ó Súilleabháin for Emergence Magazine.
BLESSING FOR SOUND
from The Bell and the Blackbird by David Whyte
I thank you,
for the smallest sound,
for the way my ears open
even before my eyes,
as if to remember
the way everything began
with an original, vibrant, note,
and I thank you for this
everyday original music,
always being rehearsed,
always being played,
always being remembered
as something new
and arriving, a tram line
below in the city street,
gull cries, or a ship’s horn
in the distant harbour,
so that in waking I hear voices
even where there is no voice
and invitations where
there is no invitation
so that I can wake with you
by the ocean, in summer
or in the deepest seemingly
quietest winter,
and be with you
so that I can hear you
even with my eyes closed,
even with my heart closed,
even before I fully wake.
BLESSING FOR THE LIGHT
from The Bell and the Blackbird by David Whyte
I thank you, light, again,
for helping me to find
the outline of my daughter’s face,
I thank you light,
for the subtle way
your merest touch gives shape
to such things I could
only learn to love
through your delicate instruction,
and I thank you, this morning
waking again,
most intimately and secretly
for your visible invisibility,
the way you make me look
at the face of the world
so that everything becomes
an eye to everything else
and so that strangely,
I also see myself being seen,
so that I can be born again
in that sight, so that
I can have this one other way
along with every other way,
to know that I am here.
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The second option is to write a response poem along the theme of Blessings and Thankfulness, if you have been inspired listening to the 2 poems by David Whyte. Just a note that if you are to borrow a line from a poem to begin or end a new poem, to give credit to the poet and poem that inspired you.
Today’s writing challenge: You have 2 options: 1) write a Kwansaba poem using the guidelines as described above, or 2) write a response poem to David Whyte’s Blessing for Light and Blessing for Sound poems.
Here is how to join us if you are new:
- Write a poem based on the writing challenge as described above. Post it on your blog or website.
- Enter your name and direct link to your poem in Mr. Linky.
- Remember to check the box re: privacy policy.
- Follow the links to other poets. Read and comment on other poems. We all appreciate feedback on our poems.
- Link back to dVerse so others can find us too.
- Have fun!
See you next year! On behalf of the dVerse team, Thank You. ~Grace~
Hi everyone! Looking forward to reading your poems. We have some cakes, wine and canapes along with tea for anyone needing some nourishments, complements of the pub team.
Thank you all for your wonderful poems for this year 2021.
Cake for me please 😀 phew what an incredible year it has been in terms of poetry! Looking forward to reading all the responses tonight!
Thank you so much for hosting us, Grace. I loved the prompt 💝💝
Cake coming up. Yes, it was a wonderful year of writing and getting inspired by other poets.
Wishing you Happy New Year!
Happy New Year to you too, Grace! 💝💝
Hello Grace… So nice to have this pub, but I feel I need a bit of rest now. It feels so strange to never leave your home… and soon my third year working and writing poetry from the same place is beginning. I need some rest.
Hi Bjorn, I feel the same way, smiles. We are going into our 3rd year of working from home, so it feels like forever.
This pub feels like an escape room somewhere in this house.
Wishing you a good rest and a happy new year!!!
Hello Grace and All. What a wonderful prompt to end 2021 at the poets pub with! I shouldn’t need a prompt to look back to my beloved grandmother but that’s what happened. Hot peppermint tea with canapes sounds just right as I go to walk the poetry trail. Thank you to You and Bjorn and to the rest of the pub hosts. Praise to every one also who cozied up here with their amazing offerings over 2021. Happy Holidays!
I will join you for hot peppermint tea with canapes. I love forward to reading your poem. Also, thank you for your inspired writing and prompts for the year 2021.
Wishing you Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!!!
Cheers, Grace! Thank you. Onward to 2022! ❤
Morning Grace and team, seasonal greetings to all … I will miss you over the break!
What a stupendous choice, I couldn’t decide so tried both … great post and prompts thanks Grace
I’ll have a chai with ginger cake thanks Grace
I tried both myself Kate. Chai with ginger tea coming up for you.
Happy Holidays and Happy New year to you!!!
much appreciated Grace, really appreciate your prompts and your kind heart!
Thank you for hosting today Grace, interesting prompt. As this year closes, I would like to say thank you to all in this online community. You are not only wonderful writers, you are also kind and generous of heart. You’ve given this old man both joy and inspiration. To those who found my writing enjoyable, I am pleased, that is my general intention. To those I have angered, my apologies, it was not my intention — usually. To those whom think I am crazy, you may well be correct — I may agree with you. To those I have made think, well, that was probably accidental. To those I have made laugh or cry, most likely also an accident. If I have made you feel, that was simply me returning the favor. The happiest of holidays to everyone, and may the new year be a blessing for us all. I hope to be with all of you again in 2022. 🙂👍🏼✌🏼❤️
It was pleasure to read you all the year(s) Rob. Thank you for your active participation, specially during LIVE OLN.
Take care of your health and we will see you back again in 2022!! Happy New Year!
What a wonderful comment …. Cheers Rob.
Hi Grace! I’d love some cake and tea, if you’ve got a pot going. What a wonderful year dVerse has had and I’m so glad to have met so many new poet-friends at the pub! Thank you for hosting, Grace, loved this prompt! Merry Christmas to all!
Dora, so happy to have cross paths with you. Our poet communities enlarges us all – with virtual friendships and inspired writings. Thank you for being here.
Wishing you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!!
Grace is as Grace does – thanks for hosting and a prompt that inspired me to – borrow the most inspiring celebration of African American culture – Colour Purple aside, I can think of. this extract is very close to my heart, for more than one reason…
It was a good one – thanks for sharing. Wishing you Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!
Thanks for hosting and introducing us to this form Grace. The hardest part for me was the 7 letter limit for each word. I had many words that “looked” like they were 7 letters long but they actually had 8 letters when I counted them — forcing a rewrite.
I hope it was a good challenge. Thanks for joining in.
Chills when I read Eugene B Redmond’s name, not much older than me. I am a proud graduate of East St. Louis High School and attended SIU – East St. Louis for three years. On that note … I would love a flute of champagne this evening to celebrate Poet Redmond and my home town Alma Maters!!
Cheers Helen! Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!
Hello Grace 🙂 Thank you for the cake with tea and kudos to you , Bjorn, and the other pub tenders this year! Merry Christmas to all and hope to join in a live OLN next year.
It would be lovely to see you in Live OLN Lynn. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you!
Hey, Grace, I see you have Stollen. I will take a slice of that, please, and the Mulled wine too. Thanks so much.
Really, this has been an enlightening year for me. And I have poetry to thank for that. And for sure, landing here at dVerse was yet another great highlight. To have rubbed shoulders with you all, gosh… Thank you.
I want to wish the team behind the scenes at dVerse a splendid holiday season and extend it to the amazing members who make this work so smoothly. Hats off to all of you: the whole team!
May the new year bring us even closer still. Thank you for making me feel welcomed here.
I wish you miracles and magic and love and enough cinnamon to last for the entire year.
Good that you feel at home at the pub with mulled wine too. You are part of what makes this virtual poetry community welcoming.
Wishing you and your family Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!!! Cheers!
Hi Grace. What a beautiful prompt to end the year!
Hello everyone. Just wanted to thank all of you at dVerse for being such a warm, embracing community.
Wishing you all merry Christmas/ happy holidays/happy new year.
See you all in 2022. 🙏🏼
Thank you for being part of our writing community.
Wishing you Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and Happy New Year! Cheers!
Cheers!
Giving thanks for this delightful invitation Grace.
Thanks for joining us. Wishing you a wonderful holiday and new year!!
A prompt I couldn’t resist even though there’s computer problems. Thanks for this one!
Thanks for joining in. Wishing you Happy New Year!!!!
Hello, I wanted to wish everyone a happy and safe holiday season. To the staff at dVerse thank you for all you do to keep this community going.
Wishing you light, hope and love always
Hi Trudessa! Appreciate the thoughtful and sweet holiday message.
Wishing you happy holidays and joyful new year!!!!
Grace, Just stopping by to wish an old friend Merry Christmas. Here’s hoping your blessings are overflowing this year! Looks like you are still busy with the dVerse work, which always a good thing. Merry merry Grace, the merriest of them to you and yours! And Happy Christmas to all the poets here at dVerse!
Thank you for your visit and Christmas greetings. Wishing you all the best in the coming year. Drop by any time as the pub doors are always open. Take care and Happy New Year!!!
Beautiful poem! Happy Kwanzaa!