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Hello, poets! Welcome to Haibun Monday, where we combine prose and haiku into the form known as haibun. I am Frank J. Tassone, your host today, and I want to get seasonal. Let’s talk about winter!
A Nor’easter struck the Northeastern United States this weekend. In my corner of New York’s backyard, I lucked out with a down fall of 5 to 7 inches. Areas closer to the coast received more. Of course, that’s par for the course in January. What else can we expect from winter?
Winter is the coldest season of the year in polar and temperate zones. It occurs between autumn and spring. The tilt of Earth’s axis causes seasons; winter occurs when a hemisphere is oriented away from the Sun. Different cultures define different dates as the start of winter, and some use a definition based on weather.
When it is winter in the Northern Hemisphere, it is summer in the Southern Hemisphere, and vice versa. In many regions, winter brings snow and freezing temperatures. The moment of winter solstice is when the Sun’s elevation with respect to the North or South Pole is at its most negative value; that is, the Sun is at its farthest below the horizon as measured from the pole. The day on which this occurs has the shortest day and the longest night, with day length increasing and night length decreasing as the season progresses after the solstice.
The earliest sunset and latest sunrise dates outside the polar regions differ from the date of the winter solstice and depend on latitude. They differ due to the variation in the solar day throughout the year caused by the Earth’s elliptical orbit (see earliest and latest sunrise and sunset).
While days have increased in the northern hemisphere since December 22nd , nights still reign. Ten minutes to six in the evening, and the sky is already pitch black. The cold, snow, and shortened daylight may weigh oppressively on some. Still, there is a beauty to the coldest season.
Winter
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Do we not sing of “Winter wonderlands?” Is this not the season for nestling by a roaring fire? On a deeper level, is this not the season of dormancy, a gathering of hidden life, waiting to burst forth into spring?
Let’s witness what some poets have to say about this season:
To Winter
Claude McKay – 1889-1948
Stay, season of calm love and soulful snows!
This poem is in the public domain. Published in Poem-a-Day on February 21, 2021, by the Academy of American Poets.
There is a subtle sweetness in the sun,
The ripples on the stream’s breast gaily run,
The wind more boisterously by me blows,
And each succeeding day now longer grows.
The birds a gladder music have begun,
The squirrel, full of mischief and of fun,
From maple’s topmost branch the brown twig throws.
I read these pregnant signs, know what they mean:
I know that thou art making ready to go.
Oh stay! I fled a land where fields are green
Always, and palms wave gently to and fro,
And winds are balmy, blue brooks ever sheen,
To ease my heart of its impassioned woe.
Sounds of the Winter
Walt Whitman – 1819-1892
Sounds of the winter too,
This poem is in the public domain.
Sunshine upon the mountains—many a distant strain
From cheery railroad train—from nearer field, barn, house
The whispering air—even the mute crops, garner’d apples, corn,
Children’s and women’s tones—rhythm of many a farmer and of flail,
And old man’s garrulous lips among the rest, Think not we give out yet,
Forth from these snowy hairs we keep up yet the lilt.
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Plover Island is a fragile barrier beach that hovers in the Atlantic, north of Boston. A community of wind-and-sea-salt-blasted wooden houses hides in its sand and shrub brush. From October through April the water turns steel gray, and seals can be seen playing in the channel and sometimes on the beach. The summer people are gone. Those who choose to winter in a place like this do so willfully. They have been captured by the way the sea grass waves in the wind and then nestles under snow. They are infatuated with the damp brine and seaweed smell of mornings. They stand at dusk behind thick glass deck doors, and watch the low, dark storm clouds scud down from the north. They seek silence and solitude.
the surf, the moon
and summer renters
drunk and loudThe day after a heavy January storm buries the island it is totally silent. You cannot hear the wind. You cannot hear the surf. The house feels compressed by the immense weight of snow it bears. It is smaller, tighter. The flames of the wood stove push back the walls, keep us alive. We whisper. Outside, the noon landscape is whiteness, punctuated by a few small pines. I read Kawabata’s Snow Country again. Beyond the bleached and frozen beach, the winter ocean waits, dead black.
gray-rimmed and bare,
2nd place, Haiku Society of America Haibun Awards 2017
this pale midwinter beach
lets gull bones bleach
Brrrr! Let’s warm ourselves up by writing about winter! Write a haibun about this chill season.
For those new to haibun, the form consists of one to a few paragraphs of prose—usually written in the present tense—that evoke an experience and are often non-fictional/autobiographical. They may be preceded or followed by one or more haiku—nature-based, using a seasonal image—that complement without directly repeating what the prose stated.
New to dVerse? Here’s what you do:
- Write a haibun about winter.
- Post it on your personal site/blog
- Copy your link onto the Mr. Linky
- Remember to click the small checkbox about data protection.
- Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work
- Like and leave a comment below if you choose to do so
- Have fun!
Welcome, poets! The pub is open!
Hello Frank… a good topic for the day… there are some changes in the air… but still very much winter.
Thanks, Bjorn! 😀
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Thank you bery much Frank, I enjoy this form so very much, and used a haibun I wrote the other day…I do like writing fresh things, but it seemed to fit…like a whisky does for some and a coffee for others…or both in the same winter glass..¨!
Happy to see you join us today, Ain! Speaking of whiskey and coffee in the same glass… how about an Irish coffee? 😉
That sounds like exactly what I should be thinking of!
Morning Frank, the sun is shining, the cicadas singing … it’s going to be a hot one! To ask an Aussie to write about winter is about as constructive as asking a Nepali about surfing 🙂
So I adapted, hope is fits!
Fair point. I considered doing a Summer/Winter split for you southern hemispherers: I’ll follow-through next time. Looking forward to your haibun!
just gotta keep reminding you we are here 🙂
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Hello Frank and All. Temps are in the 20’s this week, which is higher than last week’s teens, but still full-swing winter. A tall mug of hot tea with a nip of Carolan’s sounds just right, Frank, if you please 🙂
Coming right up, Lisa! 😉
Thank you, Frank. Cheers!
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Brandy, all warmed please! Great challenge, Frank ~ Brrrrrrrr.
You got it, Helen! 😉
oops nearly forgot to come leave a hello to you all. i got drawn in by some of your posts. i will have a hot chocolate with marshmellows before i had for a warm soak thanks
rog
Coming right up! 😉
Hello all! Thanks for hosting Frank. Here is my “hushed” response to your timely prompt. 🙂
Happy to see you made it, Rob!
A mild summers day expected here after a horror run of plus 105 f days in a row. But a great prompt to get in tune with nonetheless. 🙂
Happy to oblige! Glad you could make it!
Well, that’s it for me, tonight. See you all on the trail tomorrow. Keep your tabs honest, and last one out, turn off the lights! 😉
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Here where I live we don’t get snow but in some parts of NZ we do. Frost is as near as I can get 😉
Nice prompt though and I enjoyed. I actually have heard the More Pork since my husband passed away but not very often. I saw two sitting side by side at a farm just out of town. But that was many years ago.
Hi Frank! I love our winter…so a great prompt!🙂
Hi Frank, thank you for the prompt and the wonderful examples to get us in the mood.
Hello all. Thank you frank for hosting. I love winter as long as it includes snow. So to read all your homages has been a delight.
Not only did we get a lot of snow here at the Jersey shore, it’s been cold so it has not melted. And my nieces showed me where there is a great sledding hill! There are very few hills here. Very happy!
David I hope your daughter has a great party! I have trouble commenting on your blog from my phone.
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Thank you Frank for hosting this challenge. 🙂
https://bardiearborist.com/2022/02/03/haibun-monday-writing-prompt-slate-and-sapkowski/
This is my first attempt at writing a Haibun and I rather enjoyed the test. Thanks for the prompt!
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Hi Frank, I like your post. I tried my hand at haibun a few days ago. I read the guidelines on Google and I put myself to task. My haibun consists of one haiku and nine senryū instead of two paragraphs but they are prose, ordinary language written in a 5/7/5 format.
thank you for the invite to the pub.
Rgds
Anita.