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Happy February to All and welcome to Poetics! Lisa here as your pub host, offerer-server of liquid refreshment and tasty snacks from the magic cupboard, and provider of today’s poetry prompt.
Mark S at Naturalist Weekly introduced me to the Chinese and Japanese concepts of micro-seasons, also known as kō. Also in his post was a link to a phone app to follow along with the 72 micro-seasons. I downloaded the app and have been following it ever since. We are actually just going into the 72nd and final one now, so it’s a great time to learn about it.
Besides the educational aspect of following along, it has had a wonderful side effect of my becoming more appreciative of the subtle changes that seasons go through always. I may notice them here and there but mostly without my full attention. It’s a mindfulness meditation every 5 days!
The Nippon site has general information about them and includes a calendar. From the site:
The traditional Japanese calendar marks the passing of the seasons and changes in the natural world through the names given to different times of year. There are 24 major divisions, or sekki, from Risshun (Beginning of spring) in early February until Daikan (Greater cold). Originally taken from Chinese sources, these are still well-known around East Asia.
The 24 divisions are each split again into three for a total of 72 kō that last around five days each. The names were also originally taken from China, but they did not always match up well with the local climate. In Japan, they were eventually rewritten in 1685 by the court astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. In their present form, they offer a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.
Every 5 days the same format is followed.
For example, #71 is in the Sekki “Major Cold,” and the kō is “The Mountain Stream Freezes Over” which lasts from approximately January 25 – January 29.
The haiku chosen for it is:
Late fish
now my mouth reeks
snow at noon
There is a breakdown of what the haiku means beyond the obvious.
A little is said about the author, in this case, Natsume Seibi (1749-1816)
Seasonal fish are discussed. This time they are bluefin tuna and wakasagi smelt. Included are where they are found, how they are distinguished from other varieties of those species, how they taste, their texture, and traditional ways of cooking them.
Seasonal vegetables are discussed. This time they are brussels sprouts; it includes nutritional value, how they are grown, and how they are prepared.
The seasonal activity this time are the Daruma (Doll) Markets. Information on the dolls, the markets,and the traditions are included.
A preview says that coming next is #72, also in Sekki “Major Cold” but this, the final, one is “The Chicken Lays Her First Eggs.”
The format for each kō is as follows:
•the title of the Major Season or Sekki
•outline why it is called that
•the title of the micro-season or kō
•outline why it is called that
•write a haiku that speaks to the kō
•include insider information on the haiku and include information about the poet (you)
•seasonal fish, information about it, and including ways to prepare it
•seasonal vegetable, information about it, and ways to prepare it
•seasonal activity, often including the holiday or tradition involved, etc.
•a preview of coming attractions for the next kō
In addition, there are images of artwork, drawings, photographs, etc. of the highlighted
Your challenge, if you choose to accept it, is to create your own major season and then a micro-season, or kō within it using the format above. Create one based on the season you find yourself in. If possible include images, artwork, drawings, photos, etc. from your community to help bring it into three dimensions.
OR
Create a major and minor one within it based on a season you wish you were in. Likewise, try to find images that bring your “wishful season” into focus. This season may also be fictional.
Notes:
•if fish (or vegetables) are not part of your diet, please choose other foods
•you will be writing your own haiku, so put a blurb in there about yourself
•you should end up with a painting of description with a figure of haiku in the center
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Have fun!
Top image: Birds and Flowers of the Four Seasons, Momoyama period (1573–1615)
Frozen stream image: photo by Eric Anderson
Chickens image from here.
Welcome!
Hello, not sure I managed, but partly I think I started on this prompt by dividing the seasons into 8 seasons as it is done in Swedish Lapland.
Sounds wonderful. Just linked up and going to read your poem right now.
Jesus, Lisa, that’s complicated! It would take me a week to write one of those!
Jane, I just did it in 20 minutes. Not as complicated as it looks… Use whatever format you want to get to the jist.
I’ll maybe look at it tomorrow. It’s a bit late and fuzzy here.
I thought so too, Jane, until I read through Lisa’s own offering… it’s not so bad 🙂 (but it did take me a bit of time & research to make sure that I was getting all of my facts right!)
Fascinating prompt Lisa, and thank you so much my friend for introducing me to Naturalist Weekly. As you know, I embrace the natural world close to my heart, as does Gary Snyder, my favorite poet. Snyder has always maintained that his personal sensibility arose from his interest in Native Americans and their involvement with nature and knowledge of it; indeed, their ways seemed to resonate with his own. And he has sought something akin to this through Buddhist practices, Yamabushi initiation, and other experiences and involvements. I resonate with Gary’s mindset. If it were up to me, I would love to write predominantly from a perspective of the natural ways — though I sometimes feel feeble in my attempts. I may not hold nature to the same micro structure you present here Lisa — but I love the concept. In the spirit of, and to honor your mindful prompt, I will go away, and take time to endeavor to bring back a piece I feel honors the essence you have introduced here. Bravo to your prompt Lisa. I feel it in my bones my friend! 🙂✌🏼❤️👍🏼
Rob, I wish you could see my smile and feel my appreciation right now. ❤ I very much look forward to seeing what writing you are inspired to for it. I know you do have a very attuned spirit to the natural world. Your poems in the forest and on the mountains always transport me there.
I just put a link to the Naturalist Weekly’s 72 seasons in the sidebar of my Image & Verse site. I find it has great potential as a catalyst for mindful seasonal meditations (and poetry prompts). 👍🏼🙂
Awesome, Rob!
I must say again, thank you for this well considered prompt Lisa. I hope more of the poets will participate. ✌🏼❤️
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Hi Lisa, I kept it simple as we are deep in winter right now. Thanks for the information about the different seasons – it made me appreciate the nuances of nature.
Hi Grace, keeping it simple for deep winter makes a lot of sense. You are very welcome.
I just copied your format, Lisa – I needed the example, but it fell into place after I read through yours 🙂
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David
Happy to hear it, David. Now I need to mosey over to the trail to see what you wrote 🙂
Well, incredible prompt….took a wee while! Beer now I suppose…thank you very much for your prompt, is what makes dverse different….!
Ain, thank you. I just finished reading your rich travelogue of sensory adventures. It’s one thing to be alive, and quite another to live.
Well those are lovely philosophical words! Really appreciate the amount of work that you went through devising the prompt, and for the rather clever byproduct of finding out more about the people whose poetry we enjoy, and who we chat to, week after week. For me your prompt showed me why dverse is what it is. Very high standard stuff, and a beautiful community. Now and then I try to tug friends and family members towards dverse, but they shy away….I’ll find someone who won’t! But you know, maintaining this high standard is the main part of the success.
Ain your encouragement and high praise are appreciated. I’m glad you saw there was method to my madness.
Hi Lisa, I am afraid you have lost me on this one. A bit much for this old mind to sort out! Thanks for being the host tonight!
Dwight, no worries, there is always another prompt on the horizon ❤
Yes, thank you for understanding!
You’re welcome 🙂
Oh dear, I woke this morning hoping to see a raft of stories and haiku to read….I think some cannot see the forest for the trees….I already feel bad about putting two links for Monday but if this is going on I’m going to find another season, short one! in order to boost the numbers…maybe others can too! Actually to do it well takes a bit of time I think.
Ain, no worries, you know how it is with expectations! Clear it from your mind…
Hi Li. Very interesting information. I don’t know if what I have written fits the bill or not, but it took me a long time as I accidentally deleted all that I had written, not once but twice! ☹️
Anyway, I enjoyed putting it all together for all of you. 🙂
Oh no, Punam! So aggravating when that happens! I’m glad you persisted and truly enjoyed reading about your ko. I’m glad you enjoyed pulling it all together 🙂 ❤
Thank you Lisa a topic close to my heart. In Western Australia our southern indigenous have seven seasons marked by wind, which as a young person rocked my very English origins of four only 🙂 Five days changes means lots of whiskey 🙂
Paul so fascinating to learn your seven seasons are marked by wind. Chuckling over whiskey celebrations over each ko. Better buy it by the case. Two shots of whiskey on the bar, one for you and one for me. Cheers!
Keep em comin’ 🙂 Cheers indeed.
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I like this prompt Lisa and felt inspired to write to it but I’m not sure I met all the criteria.