Hi everyone! How fast time flies and here we are again with another poetry form to learn and add to our poetry toolbox.
Loop Poetry is a poetry form created by Hellon. There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is abcb.
Variations:
1. Stanzas, writers choice on the number, no rhyming, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.
2. One long stanza, no limit on number of lines, no rhyming scheme, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.
3. Couplets mixed with 4 line stanzas, the last word, first word scheme is maintained in the stanzas. It can also be used in the couplets. Rhyme scheme is ab, cc, defg, hh, ii, jklm, nn, oo.
Photo by Grace
Here are my examples @Grace Guevara:
- Summertime in Ontario
Yesterday’s cold dusted in a blink
Blink, and the minute turns
Turns to long hour, my eyes
Eyes the clock, sun burns
Morning air is humid, crackles
Crackles turn to birdsongs
Birdsongs break the crisp hum, hush
Hush! where’s the rain, so far along
Evening paints a peach cooler time
Time is patient as sugar maple trees
Trees so vibrant green, summer is a toast
Toast to begonias, blue sky, buzzing bees!
2. Weekdays in a blur
Monday {yawns} opens the door to Tuesday
Tuesday rushes in, fluffs the pillows for Wednesday
Wednesday offers ice wine & hot gossip to Thursday
Thursday laps it all up, in cruise control, awaiting Friday
Friday is in a pink party mood, dancing until early Saturday
Saturday is in no hurry, lounging in pajamas until Sunday
Sunday is <lost> in book & clouds, forgetting time & Monday
- Write a Loop Poem based on the writing challenge as described above. Post it on your blog or website.
- Enter your name and direct link to your poem in Mr. Linky.
- Remember to check the box re: privacy policy.
- Follow the links to other poets. Read and comment on other poems. We all appreciate feedback on our poems.
- Link back to dVerse so others can find us too.
- Have fun!
Hello everyone! We have some peach and apple pie with tea and coffee here at the pub. Have a good Thursday!
Hello Grace and All. Wonderful poems you wrote in the loop form. Creative to use the days of the week, it works so well. Will link up after writing mine. Happy Thursday and wishing all a wonderful weekend.
It was so fun to do, smiles. Looking forward to it. Have a wonderful weekend too!
Hi Grace and others. Love the poems you shared. While I ponder on what to write, a slice of pie and some coffee, please.
Hello, a slice of pice and coffee for you! Looking forward to reading your poem.
Thanks, Grace, for the delicious pie and coffee. The bed beckons now. I will catch up with the reading tomorrow. Ciao!
Sleep well and see you around the poetry trail!
Hi kids! Tried my hand at a loop poem, unsurprisingly, I wrote it about poetry.
I’ve got a LOT of poems about being a poet, do you think there is any kind of market for such a collection?
Hello! Let me see, I do read a lot of poems about the moon, and about the poet writing good or bad poetry, form or free verse. Popular themes Chris.
Happy Thursday! Peach pie sounds yummy!! This looks like a fun challenge, going to think on it! 🤔
Hi Tricia! Peaches are a lot during summer here in Ontario. Here’s a peach pie for you!
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Hello everyone! Grace, thank you for hosting — and for a wonderful prompt.. I loved it. In fact, looping is similar to way I think, especially when composing — as is visible at times in my past work. I have been pondering long on friendship in recent months, as I have lost still more long time friends to the wear of time, or to cruel disease. So much has been on my mind in this regard, that this piece proved very fulfilling to write, as it kept looping and building. Thank you for the inspiration my friend.
Friendship is a wonderful theme to write. Thanks for joining in.
I did a second piece — tighter to the prompt form.
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Thank you for another fun prompt 🙂 Here’s mine: https://cognacproject.wordpress.com/2022/07/29/cold-feet/
Muy interesante. Me ha encantado. Volveré con deteniento para estudiar y detenerme con atención. Un abrazo.
Thanks for hosting, Grace. Took me a while to get in the rhythm of this form!
It is a bit of a challenge, I know. Have a good weekend Lillian.
Thank you Grace, I really enjoyed trying to learn this form.
Thanks for joining in. Have a good weekend.
Thank you Grace – you too 🙂