Hi everyone! We have been learning poetry forms both classic and invented since we started with this community. I have been sharing invented poetry forms from other sites. However, I would like to ask you poets, if you have an invented poetry form that you would like to share with us. Let me know in the comments below. In the meantime, let’s learn an invented poetry form today, Octelle.
The Octelle, created by Emily Romano, is a poem consisting of eight lines using personification and symbolism in a telling manner. The syllable count structure for this verse is 8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8, and the rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa. The first two lines and the last two lines are identical. Here is my example:
Summer’s end by Grace
Your words are brine and pickled seeds
I grow bittermelon and reeds
Your coat of apples, so bright
Turn to grimy grey, a blight
August sun is sipping tea
Yellowing red leaves with glee
Your words are brine and pickled seeds
I grow bittermelon and reeds
The poetic tools used with the above form are personification and symbolism. We have discussed these tools in the past but below is a brief description.
A figure of speech in which the poet describes an abstraction, a thing, or a nonhuman form as if it were a person. When inanimate objects, are given human qualities, this results in a poem full of imagery and description. Example: “The wind moaned, beckoning me to come outside.” In this example, the wind—a nonhuman element—is being described as if it is human (it “moans” and “beckons”).
Symbolism is to convey the hidden meaning to the reader or listener. It tells us about artistic expression and represents abstract ideas. A writer can use a person, place, word, action, and object as a symbol. To covey his mood and emotion, the writer uses symbolism. It can be in a visual image or gesture. It helps in creating meanings and emotions in writing. Usually, symbolism contains several layers of meaning, which are robbed in different aspects and concepts. It gives depth to writing that cannot be expressed straightforwardly. It helps the writer to convey his thoughts on multiple levels.
Ah! Sun-flower – William Blake
Ah Sun-flower, weary of time,
Who countest the steps of the sun;
Seeking after the sweet golden clime
Where the traveler’s journey is done;
You can read the rest of the poem here.
The writing challenge is to write an Octelle as described above.
Here’s how to join in:
- Post a poem following the Octelle poetry form to your blog or website.
- Click on Mr. Linky. Copy and paste the direct link to your poem and add your name.
- Remember to check the box re: privacy policy.
- Follow the links to other poets. Read and comment on other poems. We all appreciate feedback on our poems.
- Link back to dVerse so others can find us too.
- Have fun!
a.h. starlingsson said:
Lovely description. So interesting.
Grace said:
Hi Ain! Thank you.
Grace said:
Hi everyone! I hope you will enjoy this new poetry form. On the menu today is a lot of peaches as our summer is filled with peaches. We have fresh peaches, or peach salsa, or peach pie. Plus cold ice wine from our Niagara fields!
sanaarizvi said:
Loved the prompt, Grace! It’s always a pleasure to try new poetic forms 😀 Peach pie for me please. Happy Thursday! ❤❤
Grace said:
Hi Sanaa! It’s a challenge to write in these poetry forms. Here’s a freshly baked peach pie! Cheers!
sanaarizvi said:
Thank you, Grace! Yum! ❤❤
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Grace and others! This does look like an interesting form. Would like to give it a try before I hit the bed. Could I please have a bowl of fresh peaches as I write!
Grace said:
Hi Punam. Yes, its a compact form but requires depth and meaning to the lines. Looking forward to reading your poem. Here are fresh peaches for you – enjoy!
paeansunplugged said:
Indeed, it does require that. Thank you.
msjadeli said:
Hello Grace and All. This form lends itself to joy. Thank you for choosing it to write to today ❤ Fresh peach pie and cold ice wine sounds juuuuust right!
Grace said:
Hi Lisa. I love how we can integrate the poetic tools into the short form. Sharing the fresh peach pie and cold ice wine with you! Cheers!
msjadeli said:
Indeed, Grace! Thank you for the yummy treats. Cheers!
Gillena Cox said:
Always i like trying the new forms. Todays is new to me snd interesting.
I have a createf form sbis is called The Fold which i have written and shared.
Here are links to my created form The Fold
the fold – gillena cox
AND
the fold – gillena cox
Incidentally, David ben Alexander, linked me to a set that he wrote with a friend and i was really thrilled.
Much💖love
Grace said:
Hi Gillena. An interesting form to learn and try one time. Thank you for sharing The Fold.
Sunra Rainz said:
Ooh, what an interesting form, Grace! I’ll have to give it a go 🙂 Can I request peach schnapps please? With a chunk of fresh peach thrown in! 😀
Grace said:
Hi Sunra! Looking forward to reading your poem. Peach schnapps with fresh peaches, coming up!
Sunra Rainz said:
Ha ha! Thanks Grace! Yum! 😀
coalblack said:
I like your examples very much, they make clear what is required and they’re just enjoyable in any case. I’m definitely not a fan of personification–laughing trees and such–but i will see what I can do. Symbolism on the other hand, the saying of a thing without saying it directly, is right up my alley. Let me get started on this. Thanks for hosting!
–Shay
Grace said:
Thanks Shay! The poetic tools make this short form interesting.
abigfatcanofworms said:
I live your Octelle, Grace!
abigfatcanofworms said:
*love
Grace said:
Thank you. I like the challenge of the short form as it really drives me to weigh every word and line.
sdtp33 said:
Hi there Grace
You were asking about invented verse forms, when I started my blog my intention was to write poems of 4 lines, each line being limited to 3 syllables. I called the form slimverse. I thought it was the perfect form for the limited attention span of the internet. Of course, after a while the form became too limiting but I had fun with it. Thanks for the intriguing prompt…JIM
Grace said:
Hi Jim! Thanks for sharing this form, aptly named slimverse. I would call this a minimalist poem, a micro poem. This is suitable to twitter as you are right, we do have short attention spans now.
Christine Bolton, Poetry for Healing said:
This was new to me. I hope I got it right! ☺️🤞
Grace said:
You got it Christine. Thanks for joining in.
Christine Bolton, Poetry for Healing said:
Thank you! ☺️
Truedessa said:
Thanks for hosting Grace – this is a new form for me to try.
Grace said:
Looking forward to reading your poem Truedessa. Thanks for joining in.
SelmaMartin said:
I enjoyed writing in this invented form. Octelle, I’m sure I like it. So cool. Thanks, Grace.
Grace said:
Hi Selma. Glad you enjoyed the challenge of the form. Have a good day!
Mish said:
Thanks for hosting, Grace. It is very late, but I did find some leftover peach salsa to go with my cinnamon chips. Yum.
Grace said:
Hi Mish. That peach salsa is so good. YUM! Happy Friday/weekend!
pvcann said:
Another new form for me to learn, fascinating form Grace, thank you, whiskey and peach pie please.
Grace said:
Hi Paul. Whiskey and peach pie coming up. Thanks for joining in.
pvcann said:
Wonderful
kittysverses said:
Thank you Grace, for introducing a wonderful and challenge form. 🙂
Grace said:
Thanks for joining in. Wishing you a good weekend!
kittysverses said:
I’ve written another poem, Grace. Thanks for hosting, in love with this form. 🙂
Grace said:
Good. I am glad you had fun with the form.
M Jay Dixit said:
Hey, Grace, thanks for hosting! I liked writing for the prompt very much.
Grace said:
Hi Jay! Thanks for joining in. Happy weekend!
cognacproject said:
I’m late to the party, but here’s mine anyway 🙂 https://cognacproject.wordpress.com/2022/08/15/lady-slippers/