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Welcome to Haibun Monday!
Michelle Beauchamp here, (aka Mish) happy to be your host as we blend prose and poetry into Matsuo Basho’s famous form. You can explore more about Basho here.
During a recent trip to the lake, I was grateful for our newly purchased beach umbrella, providing us protection from the sun….. and the rain. It was the difference between a disappointing day and a “go with the flow” sort of day. It made me think of the capacity of shelter, the power it has to change our environment, our state of mind, our livelihood….our lives. Nature gives us perfect examples of shelter, from the tiny field mouse burrowing underground to the sly mountain lion patrolling her territory from a steep mountain crevice.
Shelter could be nothing but a quick escape from the noise of the world. However, in times of poverty, homelessness, war, violence, shelter is everything. Shelter can be described from the forest floor or from the depths of our hearts and minds where we often need a safe place to reset, to nourish, to grow.
“A tree is a wonderful living organism which gives shelter, food, warmth and protection to all living things. It even gives shade to those who wield an axe to cut it down.”
Guatama Buddha
“Friendship is a sheltering tree.”
Samuel Taylor Coleridge
“A mother’s love is like an island, In life’s ocean vast and wide, A peaceful, quiet shelter, From the restless, rising tide.”
Helen Steiner Rice
Today, I’d like you to incorporate the theme of “shelter” into your haibun. If you are new to the form, a haibun is made up of no more than three tight paragraphs that are non-fiction/autobiographical and usually written in present tense. The prose is followed by a haiku that makes reference to a season with an image of nature. Often the haiku adds another depth or layer to the prose.
Here’s how to join in:
- Write a haibun eluding to shelter and post it to your blog.
- Click on Mr. Linky below to add your name and direct url to your work.
- Add a link for dVerse on your page so others can find us as well.
- Visit other poets on the list to read their poems and comment.
- Take a seat in our little poetry haven and say hello.
- Have fun!
Hello poets! Hope you are having a wonderful day/night. I’m keeping it simple, serving up some comfort food. On the menu is curried carrot soup or turkey chili, homemade biscuits and cinnamon pear jam, blueberry banana bread and my oatmeal and chocolate chip cookies.
I look forward to see what everyone else come up with. I keep it simple tonight.
Sometimes simple is just what we need. 🙂
Excellent prompt Mish. I sm heading to quick checkup with my Doc, i will be on this when I return. 👍🏼 Thank you for hosting my friend. 🙂✌🏼❤️
My pleasure, Rob. Sending positive vibes for a great check up. Thanks for popping in. 🙂
Hello Mish and All. A thoughtful prompt for the haibun. Much appreciated. I combined this prompt with earthweal’s *last* week’s challenge. I’m sipping hot coffee now and an oatmeal cookie sounds just right, please.
Three warm cookies coming up. Looking forward to reading yours, Lisa.
Thanks much. Yummy!
Three warm cookies coming up. Looking forward to reading yours, Lisa.
Having trouble posting comments….so you may get six!
Thanks for letting me know. WP is getting glitchier by the day 😦
The cookies freeze well….like WordPress. 😆
LOL!
Hi Mish. Thank you for hosting and for the prompt. I find haibun difficult to write, but I’ve been wanting to write about a recent special lunch I had . . .
A cup of coffee and a slice of blueberry banana bread and cookies, please. 💙
Hi Merril…treats coming your way with a hot cup of coffee. I’m glad your muse cooperated for the form. 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
Hi Merril
Hi poets,
yes please to some cookies they sound delicious,
great choice of words with shelter.
it feel right into what is grating my gristle at the moment.
hope my haibun is not to much of a rant
rog
Hi rog….the cookies are still warm. Sliding some your way. I always enjoy a good rant.
🤘♥️👍
Good evening Mish and dVerse Poets around the world. I am curious about everyone’s take on the prompt. It’s turned a little chilly here, so a cappuccino would be much appreciated. 🙂
Ooh…a cappuccino coming right up, Kim. It should warm you up perfectly.
Cheers Mish!
Dark n Stormy – a good drink for needing to take shelter.
Hi JYP…you sent me to the mixology book for that one. Sounds delicious, actually. Coming right up! 🙂 Thanks for joining in.
LOVELY prompt and love all of the responses Mish!
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Thanks so much, Cindy. 🙂 Enjoy the poetry trail!
thanks for hosting and the subject, Mish
You’re very welcome, Barbara. Thank you for joining us. 🙂
Thank you for hosting, Mish. 🙂
My pleasure. Thanks for joining in. 🙂
Hope mine isn’t too dark… https://hourglasspoetry.com/2022/08/30/shelter-dverse-haibun/
Thank you Mish, of course the song by the Stones comes to mind and the earlier one by Dylan, all good stuff, this took me to an inner transition that was powerful. I’ll have a whiskey – double – thanks.
Exactly, Paul. Thanks. Whiskey double coming up!
Thanks for hosting this shelter prompt, I’m looking forward to reading all the entries.
You’re welcome. 🙂 Enjoy!
I will be posting here shortly, but I am still reading and commenting on the last challenge – not sure if my comments are being held for “approval” or just not registering – sometimes wordpress seems to swallow my comments. Its a lot of effort to just disapear!
Hi Margaret! Good to see you here.
Hi Margaret…I understand the frustration. WP has been glitchy to say the least. Not sure why but I do find my comments seem to show up later or sometimes easier on my mobile vs. laptop. Another tip I’ve heard (and was successful for me) is to go to your WP Reader feed, find the poet’s blog and comment using this route. Good luck! Thanks for dropping in. The Haibun prompt is open all week. 🙂
Late again…but I’m glad this prompt is still open for Thursday doors.