Hi everyone!
In today’s session, we are going to learn about head rhyme (or beginning rhyme or inital rhyme) and using this in the Traditional Mongolian Meter.
19th century Mongolian Sutra Manuscript
Traditional Mongolian Meter is thought to date back to Genghis Khan but the first record of this more sophisticated form is the 17th century. It is a little different than most forms in that the lines are head rhymed. Alliteration is a prominent element of the form.
The elements of Traditional Mongolian Meter are:
- written in any number of quatrains.
- syllabic, usually 7 to 8 syllables.
- head rhymed. Technically, head rhyme is just the first consonant of each line matching. However, while still alliterative, with the matched consonant heading the line, it is often seen as the first syllable in each line rhyming with the first syllable of the ensuing lines. Rhyme scheme aaaa bbbb cccc etc. (Remember the rhyme is at the beginning of the line, not the end.)
- alliterated, although alliteration can occur within a couplet and need not be contained within a single line. If true or near rhyme is not present, alliteration of the first word of each line is a must.
Example of a quatrain:
Fall leaves flutter, sun in my eyes
Fading brown and marmalade hues
Faithful is the sky, wrapped in grey
Farewell summer, I’ll miss your blooms
You can write as many quatrains in a poem, using the same head rhyme for each stanza.
The writing challenge is to write the traditional Mongolian Meter using the elements as described above.
Here’s how to join in:
- Post a poem following the Traditional Mongolian Meter poetry form to your blog or website.
- Click on Mr. Linky. Copy and paste the direct link to your poem and add your name.
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- Follow the links to other poets. Read and comment on other poems. We all appreciate feedback on our poems.
- Link back to dVerse so others can find us too.
- Have fun!
Grace said:
Hi everyone! I hope you are having a good day or night. We have coffee, tea and some blueberry and pumpkin pies.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Too late for coffee here, but some herbal tea is excellent
Grace said:
Herbal tea for you Bjorn. Have a good night!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
a cup of tea would suffice thank you
Grace said:
Tea for you as well Laura. Have a good night!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
This form was harder than I thought at first… but I managed to twist something together I think. I can recommend this page
https://www.thefreedictionary.com/words-that-start-with-el
Just put in the first syllable and you get a list of words you may try… like a rhymelexicon
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I could have done with that – belated thanks
Grace said:
Great site. I was googling for words too with the first rhyme. The challenge is to find a good one.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
easier than I expected Grace and a fun prompt and could not resist some added alliteration
Grace said:
Thanks for joining in Laura. You are an over-achiever, smiles.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Just a reminder… today the Nobel Prize winner in Literature was announced. I must admit I had not heard the name before. Is anyone else here who has read her? This year it will be the first time in years there will be a real party for the winners on the 10th of December.
Grace said:
I read the news but have not heard of her name or her work before. Something to research for in the coming weeks.
kim881 said:
Good evening all. Thank you for a very challenging prompt, Grace, which I hope I’ve managed to fulfill. I have a sick husband to tend to. I’ll be back to read and comment shortly.
Grace said:
Thanks Kim. Take care of the hubby and see you in the poetry trail.
merrildsmith said:
I’m not positive I did it correctly, but it was a fun form to try. Thank you, Grace! And Hello, All. 😊
Coffee and blueberry pie would be wonderful!
Grace said:
Coffee and blueberry pie for you Merril. Yes, this was a fun form for me too.
Rob Kistner said:
Thanks for hosting Grace. I have tried to honor the form, but I can’t get to anything that doesn’t suck! Maybe later? 🙂✌🏼❤️
Rob Kistner said:
OK, I think I got one. 👌🏼👍🏼🙂✌🏼❤️
rogblog666 said:
hi grace
hi poets
I found this tricky Grace thanks for stretching my creative side.
heading for my normal evening soak before reading.
back soonish
rog
Grace said:
See you tomorrow. Enjoy the reading.
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Grace and all. You turned rhyming on its head with this prompt. I enjoyed the exercise. 🙂
Grace said:
Hi Punam. It was a fun challenge to write the head rhymes, smiles.
Frank J. Tassone said:
Good Evening, Poets! Thank you, Grace, for presenting this intriguing, and challenging, form! See you all on the poetry trail, soon!
Grace said:
Hi Frank. It is indeed a fun challenge. Thanks for joining in.
pvcann said:
Thank you Grace, such an interesting challenge
Grace said:
Thanks for joining in. Have a good weekend.
Brandon Ellrich said:
This was a fun one to try. I think I did it, all but the limitations on syllables. Oh well.
purplepeninportland said:
Late again!
envisioneden said:
Interesting post