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invented poetry form, Memento, poetry form, Sara Teasdale, symbolism, Symbolism in Poetry, Wild Aster
Hi everyone! I hope you are all doing well.
There are 2 options to participate in today’s poetry writing.
1.Write a poem following the poetry form, Memento.
Memento
Memento, created by Emily Romano is a poem about a holiday or an anniversary, consisting of two stanzas as follows: the syllable count should be 8 beats for line one; 6 beats for line two; and two beats for line three. This is repeated twice for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is: a/b/c/a/b/c for each of the two stanzas.
midnight holiday
@Grace Guevara
we watch snowflakes spill – glass flowers
on barren fields & woods
calling
we gather light from short hours –
wicks, lamps & yellowed goods
falling
finally the moon is ours-
darkness is a cocoon
wrapping
midnight sky with mulberry stars-
silvering trees, we swoon
clapping
Source: Shadow Poetry
2. Write a free style poetry with a theme about memento, using symbolism as a poetic device.
Definition of memento:
noun, plural me·men·tos, me·men·toes.
an object or item that serves to remind one of a person, past event, etc.; keepsake; souvenir.
anything serving as a reminder or warning.
Uses of Symbolism
A writer can use a person, place, word, action, and object as a symbol. To covey his mood and emotion, the writer uses symbolism. It can be in a visual image or gesture.
Wild Aster – Sara Teasdale
In the spring I asked the daisies
If his words were true,
And the clever, clear-eyed daisies
Always knew.
Now the fields are brown and barren,
Bitter autumn blows,
And of all the stupid asters
Not one knows.
Symbolism as a poetic device was discussed by Victoria in this post.
Hi everyone! I hope you are staying warm as its -1C in my city right now. We have on menu today, newly baked pies – blueberry, sugar and apple pies, with a choice of coffee, chocolate or tea of your choice. I look forward to reading your poems!
Blueberry pie and some herbal tea would be delicious
Perfect for todayès cold season. Cheers!
That form was harder than it looked at first… I wondered a bit about beats but thought it was syllables really.
Yes, I used syllables too per line. A challenging short form, I agree.
I think it’s more about the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables.
The examples shown at Shadow poetry were syllables… including the one by the inventor of the form.
Yes, that’s why mentioning beats confused me. As I understand it, they’re not the same thing.
Mememto poems our like to the past. Thank you for hosting, Grace.
Yes, they are Dwight. Feel free to share them in your post. Thanks for joining in.
Thanks… oops… link instead of like!
Thanks for hosting Grace. Prompt sounds interesting. I will give it my best shot. 🙂✌🏼
Hi Rob, looking forward to reading your poem.
Blueberry pie for me please! 🙂 Loved the prompt, Grace. I chose the second option and wrote a free style poem with a theme about memento, using symbolism as a poetic device. Hope you like it!
Will be back in the morning to read, savor and comment! Happy Thursday ❤️❤️
Hi Sanaa! Blueberry pie is the sweetest. Thanks for joining in. Happy Thursday!
Hello, Grace, thanks for hosting! Great form, kinda hard to write but very rewarding. Loved the poems you shared, especially the Midnight Holiday. 🙂
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the short but challenging form.
Thanks for hosting, Grace. It was interesting to try a new form. 🙂
Yes, always fun to try writing to a new one. Thanks for joining in.
Hi Grace and all. That form was quite a challenge! I apologize for writing about such a horrible topic–but it is an anniversary.
Hi Merril! Yes, it is a quite a challenging short form. Your poem was a beautiful tribute.
Thank you, Grace.
If anyone comes by later I can recommend to read the short story by August Strindberg “Half a Sheet of Foolscap” http://etthalvtarkpapper.se/category/lasa/engelska-lasa/
Hi Grace, I loved your pick this week. I generally write syllabic poem, from four, every number, to 12. Sometimes for nine, I’ll make every other line five followed by four. The memento writes good, concise so most every word counts. I may use it again, I like it but would end with four syllables instead of two.
BTW, I couldn’t read your write, the Microsoft Edge flagged it as containing harmful infections and then wouldn’t let me read what you had written.
Thank you for reading mine.
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Here’s my poem
http://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2023/01/30/meeting-the-bar-memento/