Hi everyone! In my part of the world, we are in the spring season and it is bursting with colors and green. I hope you will enjoy today’s session, which is actually a poetry form that we have tackled in the past, back in Dec. 2012. The dVerse archives is a treasure to read!
A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four.
A quatern has eight syllables (4 metric feet) per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. The poet may elect to rhyme at his own discretion, as long as the refrain is in the proper position. The refrain is the entire line 1, or the poet may wish to alter line 1 with a slight change in the order, pace or focus e.g. changing a word or putting in a comma, for example, to suit one’s particular voice. It is composed with a rolling refrain that is repeated as:
line 1
line 2
line 3
line 4
line 5
line 6 (line 1)
line 7
line 8
line 9
line 10
line 11 (line 1)
line 12
line 13
line 14
line 15
line 16 (line 1)
Here is my unrhymed Quatern, Autumn’s Last Day
I will wait here by river’s edge –
Wrapped in heated blanket of us
Sunlight flickers low in white mist
Maple trees still, breathless statues
As winter drapes like bridal veil
I will wait here by river’s edge –
Writing poems and letters to you
As you sail, wingspan gliding wide
The days and nights collide like dream –
Icy crystals drops, snow castles –
As I wait here by river’s edge
Writing songs, words flowing like wine
Ferments the anticipation
My hands weave our pictures and words
Into the emerald-spring frame —
Here, I will wait by river’s edge
Are you ready to write and share your QUATERN, following the format?
Grace said:
Hi everyone! I hope you enjoy this poetry form. In the meantime, enjoy some cakes and pies with coffee or tea, on the house.
Helen said:
Grace I so enjoyed this form, how it lends itself to a wonderful rhythm, the ability to reinforce the meaning/message in the poem. I will have .. get ready .. key lime pie with iced tea, no sugar. Cheers.
Grace said:
Helen, the refrain lends it a wonderful beat and message. Here is some key lime pie with ice tea. Cheers!
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Grace! An interesting form and I love your poem. I would love a slice of chocolate cake with a cup of Darjeeling tea. Thanks.
Grace said:
Hi Punam! A slice of chocolate with a cup of Darjeeling tea is yummy. A classic poetry form to try out. Thanks.
paeansunplugged said:
Thank you! Indeed a lovely form. I enjoyed writing to it.
kim881 said:
Good evening dVerse Poets, and thank you Grace for a new form to get our teeth into. I enjoyed writing mine and look forward to reading other poets’ Quaterns.
Grace said:
Hello Kim. Your quatern was a joy to read – perfect for spring season.
kim881 said:
Thank you, Grace.
rothpoetry said:
A great job on you poem Grace. A challenging prompt for us today. Thank you for hosting.
Grace said:
Yes, a challenge but also a fun way to write a poetry form. I recommend thinking of a good refrain for Line 1. I look forward to reading your poem.
rothpoetry said:
Thank you Grace, I think I will give this one a try.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
A form from the old days… I never wrote anything for this… but I did enjoy it. I will soon go to bed so I will just have a glass of mineral water with a wedge of lime, please.
Grace said:
Bjorn, I was looking for your name back in 2012 but I didn’t find it (smiles). Glad you enjoyed writing to this poetry form. Water with lime for you. Have a good night!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think I started writing a few months later…
merrildsmith said:
Hi Grace and all. This is the form I didn’t know I needed today. 🙂. I had fun with it and added rhyme.
Grace said:
Yes, your rhyming verses was a lovely read. Glad you had fun with the classic poetry form.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you! I did!
merrildsmith said:
I accidentally put mine up under Cheryl’s name, but I’ve corrected it. Sorry!
Grace said:
Thanks Merril!
merrildsmith said:
😊
Rob Kistner said:
Thanks for hosting Grace. I had s bit of fun with this my friend… 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
Grace said:
You are very welcome Rob!
areadingwriter said:
Grace, thank you for this prompt that made me dig deep to try to put into the words the thorns of my heart.
dVerse poets, I missed reading your poems.
I am happy to be able to write again.
Grace said:
We miss you too. Love your quatern as it digs deep in our hearts. Always happy to see you back to writing and sharing your poems.
areadingwriter said:
Thank you, Grace!
memadtwo said:
Thanks Grace–I love poetry with lines that repeat. (K)
Grace said:
I like to think that refrains makes our writing a bit easier too. Thanks for joining in.
pvcann said:
Thank you for this Grace, I’m captivated by the form.
Grace said:
Paul, I am happy that you enjoyed the challenge of the poetry form. It is a classic poetry form, that employ refraining lines which amplifies one’s theme. Thanks for joining in.
lesleyscoble said:
I love the way your first line ripples down stanza by stanza. Beautiful 🌹
Grace said:
Thank you!
Frewin55 said:
My first time here in the pub and my first quatrain. I have only recently returned to writing and in a group, I have mostly written free verse so it was fun to work to a form.
In honour of Spring, I would like a glass of sparkling spring water please…
Grace said:
Apologies for this late response. So good to find you here, actively participating in our poetry community. Cheers for 2024!