It’s Tuesday, the dVerse Poets Pub bar is open (with a choice of popular drinks and snacks), and I’m Kim from writinginnorthnorfolk. I’d like to welcome you to Poetics and introduce you to a rather long poem by Australian poet Les Murray, entitled ‘The Quality of Sprawl’.
It’s also the title of his book of essays, opinions, thoughts and musings about Australia.
Les Murray’s poem is based on a kind of list of his personal definitions of ‘sprawl’. It has a great title and is a neat combination of apparent opposites: in the poem, he values ‘sprawl’ for its unpredictability, individuality and freedom from the restraints of convention.
The challenge is to write a poem on the quality of a something (noun, verb, adjective but not ‘sprawl’) using the same format of title: ‘The Quality of…’; I’ve included a short list of suggestions below, but it’s fun to come up with one of your own.
- lazy
- cool
- silence
- dust
- feet
- dog/cat
- smile
- soup
I would like you to emulate the format of the poem, starting each stanza with ‘[Word] is/does’; however, your poem doesn’t have to be quite so long.
If you are new to dVerse and/or Poetics, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join so check back to see more poems;
- Read and comment on other poets’ work – we all come here to have our poems read;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
kim881 said:
Good evening and welcome to Poetics. As our example poem is by an serving up Australian poet, I’m serving up ice cold tinnies and quality food from the barbie. I’m excited about the poems we’ll be sharing today.
Grace said:
Hi Kim. Thanks for the challenge for Poetics today. I hope I did it right as it was an out of the box kind of writing for me. Ice cold tinnies would be great.
kim881 said:
Your poem was perfect, An ice cold tinny coming up, Grace!
sanaarizvi said:
Loved the prompt, Kim 😀 I am looking forward to reading everyone’s entries! Hot chocolate for me please ❤️❤️
kim881 said:
Hot chocolate on its way – would you like whipped cream and sprinkles with that?
sanaarizvi said:
Yes please! ❤️❤️
Melissa Lemay said:
Thanks for this, Kim!
kim881 said:
I’m so glad you’ve joined us, Melissa, and look forward to your poem.
msjadeli said:
Hello Kim and All. Excellent prompt that I know will generate a lot of good poetry. Not sure what tinnies are but maybe drinks of some kind? I’ll take an ice cold tinnie but no beer unless it is ginger beer please.
kim881 said:
Tinnies are cans of lager, usually Four X. Ginger beer is also available, Lisa, and one is coming your way!
msjadeli said:
Oh ok on Tinnies. Cheers!
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Laura Bloomsbury said:
A brilliant prompt Kim and cat got me going… but too cold here tonight for anything but a hot choc please
kim881 said:
Same here, Laura. I can’t believe the temperature here. Apparently it’s the same all up the east coast. I’ll add some Tia Maria to your hot chocolate – would you like some whipped cream (that ‘s a reference to Sanaa’s masterpiece!).
sanaarizvi said:
Aww! Thank you, Kim 😍😍
rothpoetry said:
Wow… that is a lot of sprawl! A challenging prompt, Kim. Thanks for hosting.
kim881 said:
It looks a lot but your don’t have to write quite so much, Dwight.
rothpoetry said:
I am sure it will be shorter!
Mish said:
Fantastical prompt, Kim! Thank you for hosting. I think I’ll try an ice cold tinnie, perhaps there is a fruity blend.
kim881 said:
Thanks Mish! Tinnies are cans of lager and I know that there are fruity versions, so I’ll dig deep into the fridge and see what I can find. 🙂
Mish said:
Sounds wonderful. Thank you!
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paeansunplugged said:
Hello Kim. A wonderful prompt. Mine is more of a stream of consciousness write as I have been very busy this entire weekend. My husband sprained his knee and hospital visits kept me occupied.
kim881 said:
That’s OK, Punam, I look forward to reading it. I hope your husband isn’t in too much pain.
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Jane Dougherty said:
Sorry, I didn’t realise we had to use the exact words ‘The quality of…’ in the title. I’ll change it if you’d rather.
kim881 said:
That’s fine with me, Jane. I do like poems to be unique.
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello… I missed this as it was a holiday yesterday and I spent the evening doing other things. I think I want to use the prompt for OLN… or combining with something else. Spring is a busy time in Sweden.
kim881 said:
Good morning, Björn. Not a problem. I look forward to reading your quality poem.
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D. Avery @shiftnshake said:
Hello Kim. Thank you for the prompt and the introduction to Les Murray.
kim881 said:
I’m glad you joined us!
D. Avery @shiftnshake said:
Me too!
Jewish Young Professional "JYP" said:
In keeping with the Aussie theme, Tim Tams please!😋
kim881 said:
Coming up!
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pvcann said:
Thank you for Les Murray Kim, that poem is packed with so many references, I think that RR was sold at auction in 2011, so many cultural references. And a great prompt.
kim881 said:
I thought you might like it, Paul!
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rosross said:
Family circumstances have kept me away for some time and nice to return in the name of one of our much loved poets in Ozlandia.
kim881 said:
Welcome back Roslyn!
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kenhume31 said:
Hi Kim. Really enjoyed “The quality of… This prompt. 😛😁😂 Thanks very much! Just posted the link to my contribution over at Mr. Linky there. Hope ye all have a nice day and enjoy the read! 🙏🤞😁📖
kim881 said:
Hi Ken I’ll be over in a bit to read and comment. I’m delighted you enjoyed the prompt.
kenhume31 said:
Thanks very much Kim, no rush! 😊🙏😁
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