
“It is my conviction that killing under the cloak of war is nothing but an act of murder.” Albert Einstein
Hello everyone!
Let me start with a disclaimer today…I know expressing an opinion on religion or politics can perhaps provoke potent emotions and lead to controversy. But as human beings we are all able to see when human rights are violated…I do not want to start a discussion on good war vs bad war or it being a necessary evil, BUT on the inhuman side of war.
Strip a war of jingoism and romanticism and all that would be left is the miasmic putridity of death and depravity. The senseless slaughter, the perverted tortures, the gang rapes, the indiscriminate bombings that should fill us with revulsion, are pushed into the background when we eulogize the dead soldiers who did not have to die. When we remember those soldiers years later, we are at the same time forgetting scores of civilians whom we term just collateral damage. They were individuals with an identity, dreams and aspirations but now are cold numbers only.
War adversely affects not just combatants but non combatants too. Death, disability, sexual violence, malnutrition, psychological trauma, PTSD, depression and anxiety are some of the most threatening physical and emotional consequences of war. It can sever family ties and disrupt communities.
Those that do survive the mindless mayhem, the numbing horrors, carry the scars of wars on their psyches that remain festering and unhealed. Sometimes love and therapy are not enough to bring them back from the brink. Wars make us carry crosses that are totally unnecessary. Lives should matter more than lines (on maps).
Beyond the toll that a war takes on human lives, think of what it does to the environment! The impact of any conflict, whether aerial warfare or chemical contamination contributes immensely to the reduction of flora and fauna in the conflict zone. Attacks lead to water and soil contamination and release of pollutants. Nature becomes a silent victim of war too.

The Challenge
For today’s Poetics, I would like you to write an anti war poem. Let it not be an ode to the slain soldier. Let it be about his dilemma about killing strangers, his despair at taking lives, his inner turmoil about nationalism. Let it be from his mother/father/wife or kid’s point of view. Or write from an ordinary citizen’s perspective. Let us all raise our voice against wars that do nothing for anyone…not even victors!
Here are excerpts from two poems to inspire you.
by Wislawa Szymborska
After every war
someone has to clean up.
Things won’t
straighten themselves up, after all.
Someone has to push the rubble
to the side of the road,
so the corpse-filled wagons
can pass.
by Thomas Hardy
Had he and I but met
By some old ancient inn,
We should have sat us down to wet
Right many a nipperkin!
“But ranged as infantry,
And staring face to face,
I shot at him as he at me,
And killed him in his place.
You can also read “Wichita Vortex Sutra” by Allen Ginsberg for inspiration.
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Hi all! Welcome to poetics.
Today we celebrated Dussehra in India which symbolises the victory of good over evil. May good sense prevail everywhere.
In North India it is a custom to eat jalebi which is made of deep fried fermented dough dipped in sugar syrup.
We are serving drinks of your choice, hot samosas and jalebi, ginger tea, filter coffee.
I so look forward to your poems.
Good evening poets and thank you to Punam for hosting today. War is a difficult topic to write about, especially considering what is happening in the world. Due to computer and Internet problems, I struggled to write a completely new poem, so I took an old one from April 2023 and rewrote it.
Good evening, Kim. I agree it is a difficult topic to write about but in the present times voices against war need to be heard.
I am sorry to know you are having problems with the internet. I look forward to reading your rewritten poem.
This is topic I have written of before… alas it’s much easier to be against war when we are not fighting for anything… but alas it seems to be much harder now, and just write about the effect of war.
Yes, when we are not a part of conflict it is easier to write about it but the effects of it are devastating. Maybe if we highlight those, better sense may prevail sometime.
Hi Punam! A gut-wrenchinh topic with all the images that confront us daily in the news. For some of us it’s even too close to home. Can I trouble you for samosas and coffee?! 🙂
Hi Dora! It is an ordeal watching the news these days. Hot samosas and tea coming your way. 🙂
Oops! Hot coffee and not tea! My bad. 😓
Tea is good too, my friend! Brings back memories of 4 o’clock at my parent’s house in India.
❤️😊 Tea time is fixed in most households.
Exactly. The unbreakable law. 😅
Sacrosanct! 😄
Hi Punam!👋🏻 Thanks for hosting. Perhaps I will write later if I have time.❤️
Hi Melissa! I hope you do. ❤️
Hi folks. It is past my bed time. Please help yourselves. Will catch up in the morning.
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hi all
wow what a prompt, will have to read these a little at a time so as not to get overwhelmed.
see you all out there
rog
Hi Rog. Yes, it can be a bit overwhelming to read all the poems at one go. Take your time.
I really liked yours.
cheers
Thank you for hosting Punam. 🙂 What a great, and sadly ongoingly appropriate prompt. Human cruelty seems surpassed by only our stupidity ✌🏼🫶🏼
My pleasure, Rob. Indeed, what you say is true. Our stupidity lands us in a mess everytime.
Good for you in fronting the often unmentionable … my poem WOE would be appropriate here.
Sadly war is only about ‘profit’ and when the economy looks dismal the wars escalate. People, countries, soldiers have no idea of how they are being manipulated …
Imagine the lives sacrificed so that a handful could profit! What can be more revolting than that!
I will surely read “Woe”.
they make huge profit and we the masses need to wake up to that!
I love the featured poems, Punam! A great prompt! We cannot escape the pain and sorrow of war being waged anywhere in the world. I think it is healing to express our feelings about the horrors of war and give support to innocent noncombatants by writing. When will humanity move beyond war? Not in my lifetime, but maybe someday…
I am glad you liked those poems, Cheryl. It is definitely healing to let our emotions flow. I agree, not in our lifetime but maybe one day….
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Thanks for hosting today, Punam. Somehow I got my stuff all screw up trying to repost one from earlier. Please delete them and I will try to reload them again. Thanks. Sorry!
My pleasure, Dwight. No worries. I will do the needful.
Thank you for fixing this for me.
We are all trying to process this world Punam. Sometimes writing about it helps. (K)
It does, Kerfe, to some extent.
I have written on war a couple of times this week, I guess it is ever present but especially this past three weeks, thank you for offering this sober challenge Punam.
If we go through our archives, I guess we all will find at least one poem on war. What is happening now is something I couldn’t get off my mind. I am glad you liked the challenge, Paul.
Agree Punam, it hangs around, always in a corner of my mind.
Thank you, Punam, for your prompt. It’s a difficult one. I enjoyed the challenge, so thank you. ❤️
Lesley, I am glad you enjoyed it. ❤️
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Punam,
I appreciate the way you framed this prompt. There are no winners with war. Thank you for this.
Ali, thank you and my pleasure.
Great poem.