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Beethoven's Fifth Symphony, Charles Baudelaire, Christopher Pearse Cranch, Classical music, Kind of Blue, Lynn Powell, Miles Davis, Stuart Dybek, Two Guitars, Victor Hernández Cruz, Vivaldi
It’s Tuesday and the dVerse Poets Pub is open with steaming soup and hot drinks to warm you on this chilly December day. I’m Kim from writinginnorthnorfolk.com, your host for this week’s Poetics.
Firstly, a dVerse announcement:
ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Two chances to join Open Link Live (OLN LIVE) this month:
Thursday, December 7th from 3 to 4 PM EST and Saturday, December 9th from 10 to 11 AM EST.
***If you’re not in Boston’s EST time zone and wonder what time these OLN LIVE sessions run where you live, go to https://dateful.com/time-zone-converter.***
To participate in OLN LIVE, simply click on the link that will be provided and join us with video and audio. Read a poem of your choice or just come to listen. The more the merrier!
NOTE: You may still post ONE poem as usual to OLN, even if you do not join us live.
Back to the Poetics Prompt.
When I was a child, just discovering music, I surprised my pop-music loving parents when I became obsessed with Tchaikovsky’s Piano Concerto No. 1 in B flat minor. I bought it with my pocket money and played it on our old record player again and again. They were even more surprised when I wrote a story inspired by the music.
Pyotr Ilyich Tchaikovsky ca. 1875
Image found on Wikipedia
A few years ago, I entered a competition that asked for poems inspired by pieces of classical music. Sadly, mine wasn’t even long-listed, but the experience has resulted in this week’s prompt.
Your challenge today is to choose a piece of instrumental music (no songs, but I am happy for you to choose a piece of jazz or instrumental rock if you don’t like classical music) that speaks to you, and write a poem either about the piece, including information about its composer and content, or whatever it conjures in your head. If possible, add a link to the piece of music. Here is a selection of poems about music:
Music
by Charles Baudelaire, translated by Jack Collings Squire
Oft Music, as it were some moving mighty sea,
Bears me toward my pale
Star: in clear space, or ‘neath a vaporous canopy
On-floating, I set sail.
With heaving chest which strains forward, and lungs outblown,
I climb the ridged steeps
Of those high-piled clouds which ‘thwart the night are thrown,
Veiling its starry deeps.
I suffer all the throes, within my quivering form.
Of a great ship in pain,
Now a soft wind, and now the writhings of a storm
Upon the vasty main
Rock me: at other times a death-like calm, the bare
Mirror of my despair.
Sonnet XXIII. Beethoven’s Fifth Symphony
by Christopher Pearse Cranch
The mind’s deep history here in tones is wrought,
The faith, the struggles of the aspiring soul,
The confidence of youth, the chill control
Of manhood’s doubts by stern experience taught;
Alternate moods of bold and timorous thought,
Sunshine and shadow — cloud and aureole;
The failing foothold as the shining goal
Appears, and truth so long, so fondly sought
Is blurred and dimmed. Again and yet again
The exulting march resounds. We must win now!
Slowly the doubts dissolve in clearer air.
Bolder and grander the triumphal strain
Ascends. Heaven’s light is glancing on the brow,
And turns to boundless hope the old despair.
I love this poem, Kind of Blue by Lynn Powell.
Another fine example of a poem about music is Two Guitars by Victor Hernández Cruz.
Image by Ronny Sisson on Unsplash
Finally we have Vivaldi by Stuart Dybek.
If you are new to dVerse and/or Poetics, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join so check back to see more poems;
- Read and comment on other poets’ work – we all come here to have our poems read;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
What a fun prompt, I have lived with classical music a lot, but it was hard to find the right music until I went back to my early teens and a specific record my mother had that was my favorite…
I also decided to create a spotify playlist for all the music selected, I will try to keep it updated.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
But I realized I could have selected Bolero by Ravel… this scene made quite an impression on a young man.
kim881 said:
I think you should write a second one, this time Bolero.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
OK.. done, a very short one written in humor
kim881 said:
Thank you!
merrildsmith said:
That Spotify list is a great idea!
kim881 said:
A Spotify playlist is a great idea, Björn.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
All songs are now added… it will be a very interesting mix especially with the mantra in the end.
kim881 said:
I think we may have a few more at OLN. It’s been really interesting and so enjoyable.
kim881 said:
Good evening poets and welcome to an evening of classical music and jazz – all without words. On Thursday, my husband and I will be attending a candlelit Vivaldi concert in Norwich. In keeping with the tone of the prompt, we have canapes and wine, alcoholic and non-alcoholic, as well as chocolate truffles and Mozart Kugeln. If you would prefer a hot drink, coffee liqueur is ready and waiting. Meanwhile I shall be reading and commenting. I’m expecting some gorgeous poetry,
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think Mozart Kugeln would fit my poem tonight
kim881 said:
Perfect!
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sanaarizvi said:
Loved the prompt, Kim! 😀 May I have some of those chocolate truffles please? 🩷🩷
kim881 said:
I’m glad you like the prompt, Sanaa. Chocolate truffles coming your way!
sanaarizvi said:
Yum! Thank you! 🥰
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dorahak said:
What a fun prompt, Kim! I enjoyed casting about for a musical piece and in the end settled on an instrumental using the age-old instrument of the human voice (sans lyrics of course). A candle-lit night with Mozart sounds wonderful — what a treat! Speaking of which, chocolate truffles and a coffee liqueur of your choice would be great 🙂
kim881 said:
Thank you, Dora, I’m glad you’re enjoying choosing music. Did I write candlelit Mozart? Its Vivaldi! Chocolate truffles and a Tia Maria coffee coming up!
dorahak said:
Vivaldi — where was my mind?! Never mind 🙂 And thanks for the chow!!
merrildsmith said:
Hi Kim and all. Well, I told you I didn’t think I’d get to this, but I decided to just a little while ago. I’m not sure if this is what you’re looking for, but it’s what came to mind. Your Vivaldi concert sounds like a wonderful night out.
I will take a glass of red wine and some canapes without meat while I read and listen.
kim881 said:
I’m so glad you made it, Merril, and here’s a glass of fruity Merlot and vegetarian canapes (I’m a veggie).
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Kim.
We’re kindred spirits!
Melissa Lemay said:
Darn it. I thought I did such a great job this time. I just reread the part about it being instrumental.😅
kim881 said:
Not a problem, Melissa. I love your poem and choice of music.
Colleen M. Chesebro said:
How lovely is this? I’ll be at the Saturday session. Excellent idea, Kim.
kim881 said:
Thank you, Colleen. I’ll be there too!
Colleen M. Chesebro said:
Great. That gives me some time to work on a poem.
Astrid said:
Thanks for an intriguing prompt. I’m going to look through my Spotify, as I love instrumental music, though I think most are either instrumental versions of songs with lyrics or New Age music, neither of which you’re probably looking for.
kim881 said:
Astrid, I’m happy with either of those. I’m eager to see how you interpret them in your poetry.
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msjadeli said:
Hello Kim and All. Wonderful prompt I will be writing to! Will link up later!
kim881 said:
I look forward to it, Lisa!
kim881 said:
Coming from a rock and heavy metal household, this evening’s playlist is a treat for me!
kim881 said:
It’s getting late here and I’m almost ready for bed, so I’ll say goodnight for now and will come back in the morning to read and comment on all the poems that are linked up while I’m dreaming.
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Helen said:
As a musician, flautist …. nothing pleases me more than thinking about music. I immediately knew I would compose a poem about my favorite Debussy piece, Clair de Lune. Thank you. Surprise me with what you think I might enjoy from the bar tonight. Enjoy your Vivaldi concert!!!
Gospel Isosceles said:
At my kids’ piano recital two days ago, a young teenager performed this piece all by ear and she interpreted it beautifully.
kim881 said:
I’m so glad you like the prompt. Helen, and that you too love Clair de Lune. I’ll be over to read shortly.
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Gospel Isosceles said:
Good to see you all still gathered here, and what a fortuitous day to come in out of the cold and find you listening to Tchaikovsky and Miles Davis! (Two artists I’ve been listening to heavily this past year and even took the family to see Tchaikovsky’s 5th Symphony last month performed by the San Juan Symphony.) Happy writing and listening — the most agreeable pairing!
kim881 said:
Welcome back! I’m so glad you like the prompt!
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poetisatinta said:
A great challenge Kim 🙌
kim881 said:
Thank you!
purplepeninportland said:
Oh Kim, thanks so much for that link to Lynn Powell’s poem.
I read it three times.
kim881 said:
It’s wonderful, isn’t it, Sara.
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memadtwo said:
Thanks for the prompt Kim. Music is evocative in so many ways. (K)
kim881 said:
I’m glad you like it, Kerfe.
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Gillena Cox said:
Since the prompt is about poems in response to music. Here’s an invitation for Christmas at Facebook
The 9th year of gifts of haiku for baby Jesus will happen at facebook Dec 25 2023 to Jan 6 2024
Here’s what happens
A christmas carol is chosen and players write and post haiku on site
Here is last year’s you can visit and read
https://www.facebook.com/events/548597750499488
Here is a flipbook from the event
https://read.bookcreator.com/lioNbtdi9JOMecY4IZCQmOpOE9u1/WFr6zflkTWGEaYFJ0uytJQ
Rob Kistner said:
Thank you for hosting Kim. Love the prompt. I’m late again. More neurology tests. ✌🏼🫶🏼
kim881 said:
Better late than never, Rob. I hope the tests go well.
kim881 said:
This has not just been a prompt but an international music lesson! I’ve loved every piece of music and every poem. Thank you all so much., it’s the perfect Christmas present.
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pvcann said:
Thank you Kim, what a delightful prompt.
kim881 said:
My pleasure, Paul.
pvcann said:
I just checked and it has turned up on linky – weird
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petrujviljoen said:
Thanks for hosting Kim. Lovely prompt. I entered – rather late than never – eh?
kim881 said:
Exactly!
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Oloriel said:
What a wonderful prompt, and hopefully I was not too late for it! I chose a newer piece that I just find delightful, because I do hope that our future will have even more classical pieces and compositions!
kim881 said:
Never too late. I’m about to go to bed, but I’ll be back in the morning to read and comment again.
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