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Hello, lovers of dVerse! Dora here from PilgrimDreams.com. So good to see you all after more than a month-long absence. I’ve missed you guys.
Welcome especially to dVersian votaries of the quadrille form, a 44-word poem original to dVerse whose only requirement other than word count is that you must include the word provided.
And the word is . . . (drumroll, please) . . . “VAMPIRE.”
Hardly a word that should pop into the mind of a debut quadrille host, you might think? But it’s not wholly random and I humbly ask for your indulgence on this fond mother on the eve of her daughter’s first book release, a vampire-infested mystery novel. What more can I say (other than click here for a list of booksellers)?!
Shameless, I know. Vampiric even, battening off your desire to spread your wings bat-like or howl like a wolf under the poetic moon in (44-word) abandon!
“Unquenched, unquenchable,” Byron wrote of a vampire’s lust in “The Giaour: A Fragment of a Turkish Tale”:
Around, within, thy heart shall dwell;
excerpt from “The Giaour” (1810-1811) by George Gordon Byron, 6th Baron Byron
Nor ear can hear nor tongue can tell
The tortures of that inward hell!
But first, on earth as vampire sent,
Thy corse shall from its tomb be rent:
Then ghastly haunt thy native place,
And suck the blood of all thy race;
There from thy daughter, sister, wife,
At midnight drain the stream of life;
Yet loathe the banquet which perforce
Must feed thy livid living corse:
Thy victims ere they yet expire
Shall know the demon for their sire,
As cursing thee, thou cursing them,
Thy flowers are withered on the stem.
Neither was Coleridge averse to vampiric characters in “Christabel”:
Beneath the lamp the lady bowed,
excerpt from “Christabel” (1797-1800) by Samuel Taylor Coleridge
And slowly rolled her eyes around;
Then drawing in her breath aloud,
Like one that shuddered, she unbound
The cincture from beneath her breast:
Her silken robe, and inner vest,
Dropt to her feet, and full in view,
Behold! her bosom, and half her side—
A sight to dream of, not to tell!
O shield her! shield sweet Christabel!
Of “The Vampire-Bride,” Scottish poet Henry Thomas Liddell writes:
“I am come—I am come! once again from the tomb,
In return for the ring which you gave;
That I am thine, and that thou art mine,
This nuptial pledge receive.”He lay like a corse ‘neath the Demon’s force,
And she wrapp’d him in a shround;
And she fixed her teeth his heart beneath,
And she drank of the warm life-blood!And ever and anon murmur’d the lips of stone,
from The Wizard Of The North, The Vampire Bride, And Other Poems (1833)
“Soft and warm is this couch of thine,
Thou’lt to-morrow be laid on a colder bed—
Albert! that bed will be mine!”
The Savannah-born, southern American writer, Conrad Aiken, writes hauntingly of a soul-devouring vampire:
She rose among us where we lay.
She wept, we put our work away.
She chilled our laughter, stilled our play;
And spread a silence there.
And darkness shot across the sky,
And once, and twice, we heard her cry;
And saw her lift white hands on high
And toss her troubled hair.What shape was this who came to us,
excerpt from “The Vampire” (1914) by Conrad Aiken
With basilisk eyes so ominous,
With mouth so sweet, so poisonous,
And tortured hands so pale?
We saw her wavering to and fro,
Through dark and wind we saw her go;
Yet what her name was did not know;
And felt our spirits fail.
A vampire need not, of course, be wholly supernatural while possessing the attributes of one. Kipling wrote his verse, “The Vampire,” based on the above painting. It begins:
A fool there was and he made his prayer
(Even as you or I!)
To a rag and a bone and a hank of hair,
(We called her the woman who did not care),
But the fool he called her his lady fair—
(Even as you or I!)Oh, the years we waste and the tears we waste,
excerpt from “The Vampire” (1897) by Rudyard Kipling
And the work of our head and hand
Belong to the woman who did not know
(And now we know that she never could know)
And did not understand!
Given the countless movies on vampires, are you a fan of any one movie that spooked you or an actor’s performance that chilled you? Quadrille it out for us! And don’t be shy: you can post more than one poem as the muse takes you.
So take it away, guys! Give us a 44-word poem including the word “vampire” (or a derivative thereof, such as “vamp”).
Post it on your blog. Link your poem to this dVerse post. Enter your name and your blog post link into Mr. Linky. Relax in a recumbent position (if only mentally) and drink lustily of your fellow poets’ renderings to a maximum surfeit of pleasure. Theirs is an open invitation as is yours.
N.B. The quadrille prompt stays open until Saturday, 3 P.M.







Welcome everyone and as always, an open invitation to all to join us on the poetry trail!
As the weather turns and the equinox approaches, those of us in the northern hemisphere can look forward to gathering conkers (chestnuts) and picking blackberries among other autumnal treats. Folklore has it that carrying conkers in your pocket wards off arthritis, and placing blackberries (also called bramble, dewberry, and thimbleberry) on your windowsill protects you from vampires and ghosts. Timely!
Along with whatever else your heart desires, we’re serving Blackberry Tea and Japanese Chestnut Tea Cake.
Sounds delicios iwith blackberry tea (in Swedish they are bear berries). I love myself a little gothic prompt though it’s not yet Halloween.
It’s never too early for Halloween! 🙂 Bear berry tea it is! I wonder, did you see many of those berries in your trek?
No blackberries, but there were plenty of cloudberries which are a bit bramble like but pink-orange instead (and no thorns).
Good evening, poets, and thank you Dora for hosting with this fabulous prompt – I love it. I’d like a virgin bloody Mary, please, and some whatever vampire snacks you have on offer – vegetarian if possible!
Evenin’ Kim! A virgin bloody Mary (yikes!) comin’ up and as far as snacks, how about bat-wing-shaped crisp ginger cookies?!
Thank you, Dora, I love ginger cookies!
I know the Christabel poem well but not the Kipling. Thank you for hosting this quadrille – a brilliant title but it was not the easiest of themes though finally found a way into it
definitely Blackberry tea for me – my favourite fruit but they are mostly finished here in the UK now after cold rainy days last week
The Kipling poem was a discovery for me as well, Laura. Blackberry tea is on its way. We are still having the remnants of summer and blackberries have ripened considerably.
Hello Dora and All. Congratulations to your daughter’s new book on vampires. Of course you want the world to know about it. Right now I’m reading a book on fox spirits, which goes nicely hand in hand with vampires. Mysteries that will always exist in mind, spirit, and perhaps beyond. A cup of hot blackberry tea would be perfect please.
Thank you, Lisa! Mysteries indeed, and some we revel in and I’m intrigued by your reading! Blackberry tea coming up. 🙂
You’re welcome. Thanks much, Dora. Cheers!
I’m cozied up to the wine bar, leaving the suckers behind.
Haha! I hear you, Nolcha.
Thank you for the opportunity. And I love these examples – they were creatively inspiring. Here is my attempt at this week’s challenge: https://mindonfirebooks.com/2024/09/16/evidence-of-the-night-quadrille-poem/
Shoot, I didn’t mean to put the link on here, lol, sorry!
No probs! I’ll look for it on Mr. Linky! So glad you could join us. 😀
hi dora
hi poets
really enjoyed the prompt
and all the poems you found too.
my favourite vamp film is lost boys.
blackberry tea is a bit blood like so yes please.
rog
Haha! Blackberry tea coming right up! It IS “blood-like” ain’t it? Hadn’t thought of that. The “Lost Boys” is great, one of the definitive more modern takes on the genre. So glad you liked the prompt, Rog!
Cheers slurp slurp
Oh gosh, vampires. I’ll see what I can do. Welcome back!
Glad to be back! Yeah, I know. Vampires. Scary-wary. 🦇
Thank you for hosting Dora. Love the prompt!
I’m so glad, Rob! I loved your poem, btw. Absolutely enthralling drama.
this was a fun one! thanks so much for the prompt. 🙂
I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for joining in Ren. Headed to read yours now. 🙌
my pleasure! and tysm for stopping by to visit me!
Thanks for hosting, Dora. Congratulations on your daughter’s first book release, wishing her many more. Thank you for an amazing prompt, it was a never before tried theme for me.I enjoyed writing to it. 🙂
I appreciate that very much, thank you! She’s on pins and needles today with excitement. As to the prompt, I’m never sure how prompts will be received and knowing you enjoyed it makes me happy. Can’t wait to read your Q!! 💖
I somehow never get the dVerse prompt published until near the bottom of the third row..regular as clockwork. One of these days I’ll figure out when the prompt is published!!! At any rater, here I am again…semi-late to school!!
Not late at all! This prompt stays open longer than most, until Saturday afternoon (EST). You made good time and I’m looking forward to checking your Q out. Thanks for joining in, Judy!
Thanks, Dora..
Ha, a prompt with bite – thank you Dora!
So I’m not surprised that you delivered some bitingly good poetry, Paul. Bravo!
Thanks for the prompt, and I’d love some tea!
Here you go, Kim, so glad you could join in!
Enjoyed the prompt very much, wrote another one. Thanks, Dora. 🙂
Wow, glad to hear it! Looking forward to reading another one of your gems.💜💜
Late to the party – I wasn’t sure whether I would write or not but I woke at 4am and a Vampire poem came to me which I have just posted – so I think there is only one drink suitable – a Bloody Mary please, Dora…
We’ll be having a run on those, Drew, so get it while you can and cheers! Those 4 a.m. poems can be doozies — Can’t wait to read!
Thanks for this intriguing prompt, Dora!
I’m so glad you could join in, Chris! Riveting poem.
Thank you for hosting and for the prompt, Dora. Congratulations to your daughter!
Thanks so much, Merril, and I loved your poem. A treat to read.
Thank you very much, Dora, and you’re welcome!