“Listen! the wind is rising, and the air is wild with leaves”
~ Humbert Wolfe
This month, my penultimate MTB of 2024, I’m taking a lead from the Anglo Saxons, who called November the “wind monath”. For these seafarers it was obviously an important factor in their calendar but mostly their chronicles of the wind are from the land, seeing it as a portent of death and disaster, which it obviously could be and was.
At this time of year in the Northern hemisphere, the winds do indeed tend to be wild as that most famous sonnet and Ode from Shelley attests:
“O wild West Wind, thou breath of Autumn’s being,
Thou, from whose unseen presence the leaves dead
Are driven, like ghosts from an enchanter fleeing,
Yellow, and black, and pale, and hectic red,
Pestilence-stricken multitudes: O thou,
Who chariotest to their dark wintry bed...[more]
Whilst Lola Ridge in her personification poem, rustles up a lusty North Wind
“Blow on and over my dreams. . .
Scatter my sick dreams. . .
Throw your lusty arms about me. . .
Envelop all my hot body. . .
Carry me to pine forests—
Great, rough-bearded forests. . .
Bring me to stark plains and steppes. . .
I would have the North to-night—
The cold, enduring North. [more]
Poetry Theme: And as you’ve probably guessed the theme of your poem should be
- a wild wind, generic or a particular wild wind(see list of names from around the world below)
- include it in your title or just as part of the poem
- you could use personification, description, metaphor, scenic backdrop – the options are open
Poetry Style: And since today is the 14th our poetry style is going to follow a version of a sonnet, called the Trilonet from Shelley A. Cephas, accordingly:-
- 14 lines
- 4 tercets (3 line stanzas) ending with a rhyming couplet
- rhymes scheme is ABC, ABC, ABC, ABC, AA (or BB or CC or DD)
- in iambic pentameter of 10 syllables (5 feet) per line
- or iambic tetrameter of 8 syllables (4 feet) per line
Note: In 2013 at dVerse Samuel Peralta outlined a version of this form which he called a Trireme Sonnet because he took some exception to Cephas’ Trillonet’s lack of reference to what is essentially a sonnet version and hence for today’spoetry style I’ve combined rules of both forms.
Useful Links:
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Good evening poets, and thank you Laura for hosting. This form was tricky and I’m not sure if I’ve got it quite right, but it was an experience!
Not as tricky for you though Kim as for me since you are much more stylised in your poetry than my freer versed ramblings
Thank you, Laura.
and a superb read
Hello, I still remember that form. It was so early in my writing career, and I remember i read the prompt at 9 PM and needed to write one before going to bed (the trimere sonnet) …. so much fun.
yes a long time ago so a revival with Trillonet combo this time!
Loved it…
Good evening Poets from a cooling UK though despite this prompt the winds have been not much more than a whisper.
The bar is open for drinks, snacks and poems – I looks forward to doing the rounds
A whisper of a wind is still a breeze… maybe a Bacardi Breezer would fit at the bar tonight.
oh yes! And there is an Autumn wind cocktail
Too many and we’d be ‘four sheets to the wind’ as the saying goes!
This is wonderful!
Thank you for hosting Laura! Fun prompt, but I got blown around a bit until I found my way through.😉👍🏼✌🏼🫶🏼🎼
voyaged there in the end Rob 😉
Well that was indeed hard work, Laura, there is at least one oblique rhyme but needs must…
oblique rhymes as good as direct ones and your poem is all encompassing
please don’t kill me for nitpicking, but I think it’s spelled ‘Trilonnet’
~David
pick away with much thanks – you are the maven of poetry styles – edited accordingly
✨️🙏🏻✨️
My entry may be more of the “free verse rambling type” that Laura mentioned to Kim after Kim’s welcome comment.
and a very nice poem too Helen but sadly it does not fit the requirements of a Trilonet
Hi Laura! I am a little late to the party but I did not want to miss it! A very interesting prompt and also a wee bit difficult.
My goodness but this is specific. I’ll try.
I don’t understand. If each tercet ends with a rhyming couplet how can the rhyme scheme be ABC ABC etc? I’m lost.
Never mind, I think I figured it out. Maybe.
just in case there are confusions I left a link to the Trilonet so you can check ther
I followed it already, Thanks so much for the links. I used all three in writing mine.
it shows too Shay – loved your poem
Thank you for hosting, Laura. 🙂
and to you for joining in with your might monsoon