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alliteration, May, May Day, Septets, StaceyAnn Chin, Tess Taylor, The Alliterisen, The First Time
“Poetry has the power to breathe life into mathematical concepts, making them more relatable and captivating”. [source]
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And here we are too on the first of May, a month that is made for poetry and so we begin with an extract of Tess Taylor’s “May Day”:-
“They go, the early flags, the gory maples—
so too the daffodils & Lenten roses.
Other petals swirl & nights warm.
Buds thicken and cast shadows:
in a thunderstorm
I almost forget the ice that was….”[more]
And ‘the First’ is of course a wellspring for memories and poetry, as in this extract of StaceyAnn Chin’s “First Green”:-
“...open windows and summer
approaching
ominous air-marked with the first green
leaf
over-turned poems
forgotten
mouths tinkling humor
pages rustling...” [more]
For today’s MTB prompt our poetry follows the style of The Alliterisen, created by Udit Bhatia. It is a 7-line poem (septet) containing a set number of alliterations per line and adhering to a specific syllable structure.
Alliterisen poems can be either complex or rhyming. Choose either one.
1. Poetry formulae for Complex Alliterisen:-
- a 7 line poem
- 2 alliterations on every line
- choose a syllabic count of 7 or more thus:
- 1st line- x syllables [e.g. 7]
- 2nd line- x+2 syllables [e.g. 9]
- 3rd line- x-1 syllables [e.g. 6]
- 4th line- (x+2)-1 syllables [e.g. 8]
- 5th line- x-2 syllables [e.g. 5]
- 6th line- (x+2)-2 syllables [e.g. 7]
- 7th line- x syllables [e.g. 7]
2. Poetry formulae for Rhyming Alliterisen;
- a 7 line poem
- 1 alliteration in every line
- 7 syllables per line
- rhyme scheme as follows: aabbccd
Poem Options:
- you can write 1 or more 7 line verses in one of the above styles
- there are no subject restrictions but May, the first time of something, or even anything mathematical would make a good fit for this prompt.
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings. Please also TAG dVerse in your post, or include a link at the end of your poem that leads readers back to the prompt.
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Hello poets. Welcome to dVerse pub. Unfortunately Laura, our MTB host today, is indisposed. I will be in the pub serving you. Our bar is stocked with all the favourites. I do hope you enjoy writing to the prompt.
Just holler if you need anything.
Oh dear…but this is a forte of yr verse…dare I have a coffee, strong of course
Haha! Alliteration right up my alley. A strong coffee for you, Ain, and I will join you as it is a lovely, rainy morning here.
Thanks, Punam. I need a ginger shot! (She hollered) 😁
Coming up right away, ma’am!
(Sorry, I fell asleep behind the counter)🤭
😁 haha, thanks , Punam 💤
You are welcome, milady! 🙇🏼♀️😉
👸I thank you ☺️
(One can die of thirst around here) 😉 😁🙃
🥰🥰
interesting form. A hot toddy for me please
Yes, an extremely interesting form Laura has chosen.
A hot toddy coming up for you, Eric.
My school reports all said – If only he paid attention! I realised after I’d hit publish that I only had single pairs of alliterated words. Anyways, many thanks Laura, I found it fun to have a go.
Well, there were two options and the second option had only single pairs of alliteration. So you are very much on prompt. 🙂
A single malt for you.
I found the form to be quite challenging
and most of what i wrote felt forced
Hello, Laura, thanks for hosting! It was not as easy as it seemed, but I’m happy with the result. Off to read what others have come up with. Great prompt!