Today we are considering moments in time that stand out from time; they are the momentous days we recall and revisit, year in and year out as holidays, as anniversaries. Formal or informal, they are replayed in memory and may even be attached to tokens.
Here Cecilia Woloch is recalling her “Anniversary”
“Didn’t I stand there once,
white-knuckled, gripping the just-lit taper,
swearing I’d never go back?
And hadn’t you kissed the rain from my mouth?
And weren’t we gentle and awed and afraid,
knowing we’d stepped from the room of desire
into the further room of love?… [read in full]
Whilst Charles Reznikoff in this ‘Feast of Booths’ recalls all the Jewish holidays with his “Meditations on the Fall and Winter Holidays”
“This was a season of our fathers' joy:
not only when they gathered grapes and the fruit of trees
in Israel, but when, locked in the dark and stony streets,
they held—symbols of a life from which they were banished
but to which they would surely return—
the branches of palm trees and of willows, the twigs of the myrtle,
and the bright odorous citrons.
This was the grove of palms with its deep well
in the stony ghetto in the blaze of noon;
this the living stream lined with willows;
and this the thick-leaved myrtles and trees heavy with fruit
in the barren ghetto—a garden
where the unjustly hated were justly safe at last....”[read in full]
And Dylan Thomas once again writes a “Poem on His Birthday”
“...This sandgrain day in the bent bay's grave
He celebrates and spurns
His driftwood thirty-fifth wind turned age;
Herons spire and spear.
Under and round him go
Flounders, gulls, on their cold, dying trails,
Doing what they are told,
Curlews aloud in the congered waves
Work at their ways to death,
And the rhymer in the long tongued room,
Who tolls his birthday bell,
Toils towards the ambush of his wounds;” [read in full]
And so for today’s prompt we are revisiting Emily Romano’s Memento poetry style:
Poetry Rules:
- 2 stanzas
- 6 lines per stanza
- 2 tercets (2*3 lines) per stanza
- syllable count per tercet: 8,6,2; 8,6,2
- rhyme scheme abc, abc
Poetry Theme:
a holiday or an anniversary (formal or informal)
Helpful Links:
- We’re revisiting as Grace gave us the Memento prompt back in January 2023
- The memento poetry style – Shadow Poetry
Once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
Please also TAG dVerse in your post, or include a link at the end of your poem that leads readers back to this dVerse prompt
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Pub is Open! This is Lisa, acting host for Laura’s prompt. Welcome.
Good evening all, and thank you for a challenging prompt, Laura. This is a form I would like to play with again.
Welcome, Kim. I would also like to take a little more time with the form. It did bring back very happy memories. The fam and I are planning on a lake day this coming weekend.
Thanks for the challenge, Laura and thank you for tending bar, Lisa! My poem is going to be autographical … from the heart. How about a glass of bubbly, please?
Duh … of course given the challenge rules, autobiographical would be appropriate.
Welcome, Helen. One glass of bubbly coming right up. Looking forward to reading a chapter from your life. Cheers!
Thanks, I enjoyed playing with this form. (And well timed for my annual anniversary reaction!) Bubbly for me too, please, to toast that person I always remember.
Welcome, Rosemary. Sorry to have missed your comment before. So happy the timing worked for your anniversary. I’m sure Laura will be pleased. A glass of bubbly coming right. Pouring one for you and one for me. Cheers!
Laura’s MTB prompts often take an overnight gustation but better late than never – Li, if you are still up after an all-nighter behind the bar, could I have a coffee please while I go visit the offerings…
Welcome, Andrew. Just now reading your comment. Sorry for the delay. One cup of fresh hot coffee for you. Cheers!
Gaia, not sure if you can see this or not, but I did not see a way to comment on your poem. That’s a lot of story you told in the poem! I personally don’t eat pork or beef (99% of the time on beef,) and both of my sons are vegetarian, so I can totally relate to those awkward dinners. Really got a smile on how you used tofu.
I loved this form before and I loved it now!
Welcome, Jay. I just finished reading yours, and glad you love the form. Hoping Laura will come in and read the comments when she’s back from her away time to see yours.
thanks so much for the introduction to the memento form. Difficult to fit —couldn’t go with the theme, wrote about my granddaughter instead. So I don’t think it’s fair to put to Linky. But it was fun.
thanks. And a cognac please. Xo
Welcome, Selma. Just read your poem and love it. Here it is for anyone who wants to read about Selma’s granddaughter:
https://selmamartin.com/i-will-remember-this/
Pouring two cognacs, one for you one for me. Cheers!
Ah, Lisa. What a great honor. Thanks “cheers”. All the best to you and your four year old little teacher. Bless you and your family. Hugs.
❤
Hello. This was an intriguing prompt, I really wanted to try the form. I only now, a week later managed that, so it’s at todays OLN. But I wanted to thank you for the prompt.