Hello and welcome to our virtual pub of poetry!
This is Michelle (aka Mish) from mishunderstood.wordpress.com bringing you Tuesday’s Poetics.
As I sit here trying to focus on writing a prompt, I am surrounded by NOISE!! Incessant pounding of hammers against plaster, the high-pitched buzzing of drills and the random, unidentifiable crashing of who knows what landing on the floor above me. To add to the commotion, the contractor’s radio plays a steady stream of heavy metal as if to mask it all (although I do say I like Metallica). This is my life at the moment during a major renovation in our home.
So I have decided to surrender to the chaos and use it as inspiration for our prompt today.
What is noise?
Emily Dickinson ponders the paradox of how a cheerful sound can trigger other emotions.
The saddest noise, the sweetest noise
The saddest noise, the sweetest noise,
The maddest noise that grows,—
The birds, they make it in the spring,
At night’s delicious close.
Between the March and April line—
That magical frontier
Beyond which summer hesitates,
Almost too heavenly near.
It makes us think of all the dead
That sauntered with us here,
By separation’s sorcery
Made cruelly more dear.
It makes us think of what we had,
And what we now deplore.
We almost wish those siren throats
Would go and sing no more.
An ear can break a human heart
As quickly as a spear,
We wish the ear had not a heart
So dangerously near.
In the following piece, I think the repetition drives home the relentlessness of noise. It also made me consider the way a plethora of noises overlap and seem to compete with each other.
[ ] noise
By Victoria Adukwei Bulley
& even when we said we were alone there was [ ] noise on the radio & there was [ ] noise in the car & there was [ ] noise all over the internet & there was [ ] noise in the atmosphere & there was [ ] noise trapped in the system & there was [ ] noise in the economy & [ ] noise was the economy & there was [ ] noise on the train & there was [ ] noise on the road & there was [ ] noise at the board meeting & there was [ ] noise on the field & there was [ ] noise on the kitchen counter & [ ] noise in the cutlery drawer & there was [ ] noise at the hospital where there was [ ] noise in the blood & there was [ ] noise in the water supply & there was [ ] noise in the ocean & there was [ ] noise eating the ice caps & the polar bears were drowning because of it & washed up on the beaches then was a morbid & off-white [ ] noise & there was [ ] noise in the street & there was [ ] noise in the ozone a whole hole’s worth of [ ] noise just counting down the days & there was [ ] noise in the photos of us because [ ] noise was on the lens & there was [ ] noise on the brain scan & there was [ ] noise during the exam where there was [ ] noise scratched into the desk & there was [ ] noise in the texts & there was [ ] noise in the census & there was [ ] noise in the law & there was [ ] noise on Friday at the cinema & there was [ ] noise at the seminar & there was [ ] noise at the peace talks & there was [ ] noise in the rent & there was [ ] noise on the wellness podcast & there was [ ] noise in the obituary & there were little [ ] noise cookies remaining even after carefully choosing reject all & there was [ ] noise in the inquest & there was [ ] noise in the commission & there was [ ] noise in the system you hear because [ ] noise was the system & too [ ] noise was reform & there was [ ] noise in the wounding & there was [ ] noise in the wording of the apology the [ ] noisiness of which made entirely void the apology & there was [ ] noise in the diversity statement & there was [ ] noise in the group chat & there was [ ] noise in the joke of it all, there was [ ] noise in the delivery & there was [ ] noise in the returns process & in the practice & in the prayer & it was there in the room with us still even when we said we were alone even when we swore that we could not hear it
I am sure each of us has our own endless list of daily external noises ranging from five o’clock traffic to the pings of social media notifications. We may find beauty or sadness, peace or annoyance in the sounds that surround us.
Internal noise can be very loud. Thoughts and struggles overwhelm as they swirl around in our brains. A chattering mind disrupts us from engaging in the present moment. Unspoken emotions can be deafening.
Then of course we have societal noise. We are continuously bombarded by information, misinformation and opinions. It can be difficult to sort through or silence to give our mind and body a rest.
Today I’d like you to write about noise of any kind. There are many ways you can approach the theme. It is up to you but here are a few ideas:
What do you consider to be noise pollution? Is there a buried emotion screaming to be heard? What noises give you joy? Sorrow? Bring us the noises of nature or a noise you find most irritating. Maybe there’s a sound of nature that you find irritating. I won’t judge! Fill your poem with noise to paint us a picture of an event. Use noise metaphorically to express turmoil or unease, whether internal or external. You can play with onomatopoeia in your poem if you’d like but it is not required.
Now go find a quiet place and pen us a poem about noise.
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- Write a poem of any style in response to the prompt. Post it to your blog.
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Hello! Hope your week is going well. I am probably hiding under the bar with hands over ears but will manage to serve up your favourites! Can I interest you in a fizzy hard lemonade or Canada Dry gingerale? We have fresh buttered popcorn and a variety of crunchy veggies and dip.
Good evening, Mish – I can just see you hiding under the bar. If you can see a ginger beer down there, I’d love one, and some crunchy veggies ad dip please! I’ve been so busy today I chose to link up a poem I wrote during NaPoWriMo, which I hope is OK with you. I can only be around for a short while, but will catch up with reading and commenting in the morning.
Hi Kim! Glad you found me. A frosty ginger beer coming your way with fresh veggies and dilly dip. I’m excited to read your poem. Thanks for stopping in.
Great prompt Mish ❤️
Thanks for joining in. 🙂
I so relate to the noise of construction, Mish. It’s deafening.. hang in there.
Remembering well!
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Noise drowns all sorrow
leaving only guttural screams
of anger blowing it’s top
I live between the jack hammer
night owls, coyotes and the
howling moon at midnight.
Hi Cindy, yes I think it will be worth it in the end! Thank you.
I do hope you are able to link up your wonderful poem with Mr. Linky.
Yes, it will for sure.. hang in there. Oh you are so sweet. I’m the worst with ping backs.. I hope you don’t mind, I had a minute to play … I’m happy you liked it!
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Ok….well if you do post it on your site, I’d be happy to link it up for you.
Awwww so nice of you!! Thanks so much!🙏
Good luck with your remodeling, Mish! It’ll be worth the noise.
What is the cut off date for this prompt?
Thanks Nancy. The prompt will run until Thursday at 3 p.m.
Great! Thanks!
So sorry for not joining yesterday. I was out on an event and I do not think I can write to this challenge.
I think the noise that’s worst for me is the one internal buzz (imagined) that I hear when all is silent.
No apologies necessary, Bjorn. I have been very distracted with this renovation and other matters of life. Thanks for stopping in.
I understand that internal “noise” during the silence. It can be intense.
Thank you Mish, the muse took me where I wasn’t expecting 🙂
I love when that happens. Thanks for joining in, Paul.
housecat in the loft
above the storm
of argument downstairs
Thanks for sharing this concise piece, Mike. If you’ve posted this on your own blog or website, are you able to link it up to Mr. Linky above so others can read it too?
Hello, Mish! Thanks for hosting, great prompt. It took me to a dark time in my past.