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MTB: Zuihitsu, Following the Brush
Hellooo, dVerse Poets! Welcome to Meeting the Bar, where we work on poetry forms and skills. I know many of us are participating in NaPoWriMo or other poetry challenges this month, but I hope you will at least look at this new-to-me form called the zuihitsu. I don’t think we’ve ever tried this on dVerse before.
Zuihitsu is not a new form. According to the Poetry Foundation’s glossary:
It is “a Japanese hybrid form that can be traced back to Sei Shōnagon’s 10th-century text, The Pillow Book, zuihitsu is often translated from the Japanese as “following the brush.” This capacious genre incorporates nonfiction, musings and confessions, poetry, and miscellany to create a spontaneous, layered text.”
I think it is most helpful to look at examples. Here’s the beginning of a poem by Jenny Xie.

Read the rest of the poem here.
You can read more examples by several poets here
Here is an interview about the form with poet Kimiko Hahn
So, for the prompt–
Just have fun with this one. To start, you can use a line from a poem, the news, a song, or think about a walk you’ve taken . . .go from there. I think you could also begin it as an ekphrastic. You can write paragraphs and fragments—follow the brush and see where it takes you!
For the sake of those reading, let’s keep these zuihitsu to one page. 😊
If you’re new to dVerse, here’s how to join in:
*Write a poem and post it to your blog.
*Enter your name and direct link to your poem into Mr. Linky.
*You will also find some other amazing poems! Please read and comment.
*Provide a link to dVerse so others can find us too.
*Drop in to say hello in our discussion below.
*Have fun!
Hello, All! The pub is open. It’s unseasonably hot here in southern NJ–so we have fresh lemonade and lemon bars on hand, as well as all the usual treats.
I hope you’ll give this form a try! I’m curious to see what people come up with.
Thanks Merril for an interesting poem format – so very creative to try it out. Fresh lemonade would be great.
Thank you, Grace. I was afraid no one would try it!
Here’s some fresh lemonade, and there’s a full pitcher if you want more.
You actually gave us permission to be creative and allow the brushstrokes to move freely. This is my first time to read such a form.
I’d never heard of the form before either. I’m so pleased you enjoyed it!
This was interesting form to try.
I can’t find Mr Linky. It’s maybe my bad internet connection.
Hi Maggie. The Linky is there. Maybe try again tomorrow?
Hi all! This was a fun, prompt Merrill. I even created a couple of Japanese influenced images to go with my poem. Hope y’all dig it!
Hi Rob. I’m so glad you enjoyed the prompt. I’ll be over in a minute to read your poem!
im quite stimied by this form, which seems like no form.
Yes, I don’t think I quite understand it either, but I thought it would be fun to try!
Yeah… it kind of seems like anything goes, right?
~David
I think there’s a bit more to it than that though I can’t describe it, which is why I suggested people read examples. 😊
it is intriguing. thank you for pushing our envelopes a bit. Sent from my iPhone
You’re welcome!
I gave it a shot!
Thank you! I know you like more structured forms. 😊
Thank you!
I will be away from my computer for most of Friday and the weekend, but I will read responses when I can and catch up on Sunday. The prompt link closes on Saturday at 3 P.M. Eastern Daylight Time.
I’m pleased that so many are attempting this unusual form! Thank you!
I have wanted to try this form for a long time and here we are, many thanks for this Merril. The Pillow Book is a wonderful read as well as a historical record, highly recommend it.
I’m glad you’ve wanted to try out the form, Paul. I know of The Pillow Book, but I’ve never read it. Something to check out!
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Thank you Merril, I couldn’t resist trying this fascinating form. I mean to keep on doing so! Meanwhile, fresh lemonade sounds like a perfect accompaniment.
I’m so pleased you enjoyed, Rosemary. I hope you helped yourself to the lemonade. 😊
Thank you, Merril. I know I’m late here. I so wanted to participate but time escaped me. Still, today, I’m using the incentive in your prompt to expand on my poem of the day. Thanks, dVerse. Thank you, Merril. and bless you.
The prompts are here for whenever, Selma. It’s hard to keep up. I’m glad you came back to it!
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