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On this day 70 BC, the poet Virgil was born and yet as with this extract from “First Georgic” i.e. poetic work related to agriculture, we can still relate, perhaps because he “combines technical agricultural knowledge with rich metaphorical language, transforming everyday rural life into an elevated narrative.” [source]
“When spring begins and the ice-locked streams begin
To flow down from the snowy hills above
And the clods begin to crumble in the breeze,
The time has come for my groaning ox to drag
My heavy plow across the fields, so that
The plow blade shines as the furrow rubs against it.
Not till the earth has been twice plowed, so twice
Exposed to sun and twice to coolness will
It yield…” [more]
Aeons later the American poet Fanny Howe had her birth this day in 1940. Here’s an excerpt from a poem of hers that I like very much – “Far and Away”
“...What is a poet but a person
Who lives on the ground
Who laughs and listens
Without pretension of knowing
Anything, driven by the lyric’s
Quest for rest that never
(God willing) will be found?
Concord, kitchen table, 1966.
Corbetts, Creeley, a grandmother
And me. Sweater, glasses,
One wet eye.
Lots of laughter
Before and after. Every meeting
Rhymed and fluttered into meter.
The beat was the message”… [more]
And recently the WordPress ‘On This day’ alert, dug out a poem I wrote in 2021 “A Third October” based on an MTB prompt that Björn gave us then, which gave me the idea to revisit “The Cadralor” after these 5 years.
The Cadralor is a hybridised name from the 2 inventors, Lori Howe and Christopher Cadra
Poetry Style
- 5 numbered stanzas
- choose 3-10 lines per stanza (but keep same chosen stanza length throughout)
- each stanza stands alone as an imagist poem (just the obliquest of connections)
- 5th stanza pulls the 4 unrelated stanzas together into a poem of love, of yearning
- rhymes and syllabic meter are NOT wanted
Useful Links
Cadralor rules of the form
example cadralor poems
MTB Cadralor 10.21
Once you have written and posted your poem, according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
Please also TAG dVerse in your post, or include a link at the end of your poem that leads readers back to this dVerse prompt
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Good evening Laura and dVerse poets. After over a week of bad flu symptoms, I’m almost back to normal, but I’m not sure I’ve produced a Cadralor. That said, I am happy with what I’ve written and I hope you like it too. A hot chocolate with a dash of Baileys would be so appreciated this evening, please.
sorry to hear this Kim- my daughter has had it too this last week so hot choc is probably the best medicine
Thanks Laura, I love hot chocolate!
Yes it was most definitely a Cadralor! ❤
Phew!
However did you write one so quickly Kim?!
It’s something I’ve been working on that was easy to edit to form, Catherin.
I see I see…looking forward to reading it xo
Welcome to the Poets Pub – serving warming food of spiced pumpkin soup, cheese scones, crusty bread and some hot treacle tart and custard to follow.
Looking forward to seeing what images appaer in our Cadralor poetry this time around –
hey laura thanks for the prompt. at first i was thinking ‘what the heck is this form’ but then it just started coming. Thank you for the prompt, there’s no way this would have been written (lke this, or at all really) without it. dont know what treacle is but custard sounds great!
ooooh Laura, spiced pumpkin soup sounds fabulous!!! Plus crusty bread! You are an amazing pub tender….AND I really enjoyed writing for this prompt!
serving up now Lillian – glad you like the menu and the poetry style to go with it!
Hi Laura. I first came across this form on Jane’s blog. When I wrote one for Björn’s prompt, Jane very patiently and sweetly guided me.
Not an easy form but definitely very interesting!
you certainly have the hang of it!
❤️
NB – he Unspoken poem seems to be written with AI 😦 and I cannot comment anyway as I don’t want the app
Thanks for the Virgil and the contemporary poem…such extremes of time! It’s early morning here if you can do a hazelnut flavoured coffee?
Thanks for noticing the choice of poetry – enjoy it some more with your coffee
Oh a cheese scone please, like my granny used to make! I think I’ll need to switch my coffee to a tea though
You could have both!
now you’re talking!
Tough, tough tough form, must crack it though keep going nowhere. Perhaps it did not help seeing a few powerful ones! I must not give up or worse, just link a subpar piece. I hate that. Guess it is going to take a while…
I like my title at least….
Thanks Laura….no, really!
You will get there without a subpar! Plenty of time yet to consider and compose – it’s a kind of photo book and that yearning/love motif of #5 helps summon the imagery of the other stanzas I think
Yep, that easy! I’ll get there, ta…
hey all! thanks laura for the prompt this never would have been written, in this form or at all, without it. no idea what treacle is but some custard sounds great.
treacle is dark syrup from the sugar refinery – goes well with pastry and custard in much the same way your Cadralor brought so much to the prompt
A hearty bowl of pumpkin soup please, Laura! NOT sure if I got “imagism” or “Cadralor” form correctly but I enjoyed the attempt 🙂
with some hearty soup and your enthusiasm you warmed that cadralor, Lynn
I love a cheese scone, Laura, and this was my first time writing a Cadralor, so thanks for that challenge. I found I did have to keep changing lines to make them more concrete…
You could make use of your painting skills with this poetry style – my daughter does the best cheese scones but mine aren’t bad 😌
it should be up your street as the saying goes with your artisitic aptitude
– my daughter makes the best cheese scones but mine pass muster
Thank you for the prompt, Laura. I haven’t written a Cadralor in a while. I’m not sure if I’ll have time before the link closes but maybe! 😊
the last time we tackled one here was 5 years ago Merril – so it took me quite a while to get some imagism going – hoping you manage something
It’s been more like a year for me, but still.
Sorry for the late arrival … I look forward to reading and commenting on your poems.