Hello. It’s me—emmett.
In my first commentary I promised to explain why I do not capitalize the first letter in my first and last name. I do it as a way to remind myself I need to get better. While I have enjoyed much success, once I achieve “sufficient noteworthiness” as a poet, I’ll capitalize both letters. What does “sufficient noteworthiness” look like? Trust me, you’ll let me know.
Now—regarding craft. I came across a great word today. It’s the word “Conflation.” It’s an unusual word, a word I don’t imagine many of us use in our day to day conversations. I know I don’t. Here is its definition as defined by my favorite and frequently used online dictionary site. It means “To bring together: meld or fuse; to combine (two variant texts, for example) into one whole. I kid you not, boy did this thought intrigue me, and so I wrote and titled my current poem “Conflation”—something that’s quite personal, but liberating having written about both.
At times we as poets can be too linear in our writing. The symmetry leads in a direct line to a specific destination, often predictable even when abstract or metaphoric. Conflation is a great way to break out of that rut.
Listen, as a writing prompt here is what I’m asking you to do.
- Write a poem that is constructed using conflation. This means the poem must possess at least two different, wholly unrelated themes package together.
- To challenge you further, the two or more thematic aspects of the poem must be revealing about yourself.
- Also, for this writing prompt you are not permitted to use end-rhymes. I find to many times poets used contrived end-rhymes. By this I mean, just tagging at the end of the line a word that rhymes, and is one used so often I want to hurl.
I plan to write about “Enjambment” for my next commentary, so this request is a precursor to where I want to go next with my dVerse commentary about craft.
I look forward to reading as many of your works as I can. Happy writing!
here’s how it works…
- Write your poem
- Post it on your blog
- Click the Mr. Linky button below, and in the new window that opens up input your name and direct url of the poem.
- Visit others who have taken the challenge.
- Have fun..!
claudia said:
whew emmett – you’re raising the bar high tonight…this is quite challenging but really looking forward to what this talented bunch of poets who love to hang out in the pub is coming up with… raising my glass..and trying to meet the bar..smiles
tashtoo said:
Oh oh! This self proclaimed addict of rhyme could be in for some trouble here…but because of posts like this…I’ve found myself breaking the habit! Emmett, (and yes, I personally think you worthy of the capital ‘E’) thank you so very much for devoting your time to us Poets…because of it, we will grow to be bigger and brighter writers…whoops, unintended rhyme, I swear! Off to grab my notebook….
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
Ah, addicted to rhyme. When I began writing poetry so was I. It was easy until I started using the same rhyming words over and over. I found freedom and freshness when not using rhyme. Although, when writing lyrical poetry (poetry accompanied by music) I tend to use rhyme. It’s great for memory and helps the hearer/audience more readially understand what’s being communicated. Love your work Tashtoo.
Shawna said:
He said no END rhyme. Internal rhyme is the best. 🙂
brian miller said:
intriguing emmett…conflagration was harder than it seems…i just realized i ended on an end rhyme too…dang it….ha…do you notice how when you really think about something the harder it is…i much rather fly free….anyway….nice thought provoker my friend…will be interested in seeing what others come up with…
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
Brian, you are an incredible poet. Glad you got a prompt you find challenging. I think you use conflation more than you realize. The twist and turns you place in your poems, the switching of themes at times is why I so enjoy your work. Plus, I hardly comment because 2 trillion people comment before I can! lol!! Have fun my friend.
Shawna said:
He DOES have roughly 2 trillion comments. 🙂 I’m thrilled when I get close to 20!
Laurie Kolp said:
All I can say is wow… and thanks!
brian miller said:
yep that is pretty much what i said after i read yours….wow…ugh…mine feels rather tame after reading everyone elses…
Uneven Stephen said:
Yours was a breath of fresh air, for sure Brian – I needed a fun and light-hearted write after penning mine.
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
Commented on your poem. Enjoyed your write lots!
tashtoo said:
Lori blew my mind with her poem tonight…bet she’ll do the same for you! An amazing response to this fantastic prompt, lady!
Uneven Stephen said:
Thank you, emmett, for the informative and challenging post. I’m not really sure if I followed all the rules correctly, but I took a stab at the prompt. And I definitely think your good name deserves capitalization.
zongrik said:
this is about Alice in Wonderland, but also, a twitter friend said I was quite mad, but admitted, he was also, so I thought I’d throw in some good old “mates” in a mental hospital…well, it makes sense, the whole story in Wonderland is rather mad…
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
Tried to comment on your poem, but I couldn’t using my Ipad for some reason. Will do so this evening. I appreciate your contribution.
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shanyns said:
Deep breath! Here we go…then I’ll be back to read all of yours! 🙂
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tashtoo said:
Okay…so maybe there’s a rhyme or two, I took out a couple, I swear it’s true! Poets…this was HARD for me. I have to agree with Brian…definitely think I’m guilty of way over thinking this one!
Shawna said:
LOL, Tash. You know rules are made to be broken. 🙂
Heaven said:
I hope i did it right.. .thanks for the wonderful session ~
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
Don’t worry about getting it right. That’s not poetry. Right is subjective. Even what comes from not having done something the way it was asked can result in the production of a gem. Just do your best.
Shawna said:
AMEN
manicddaily said:
Hi emmett, a wonderful prompt. I am trying to work on it inbetween other work, not a good idea, as very absorbing–I will be up late tonight with other things, but I really enjoyed this. I had a poem I have been thinking of that wasn’t quite right that I used as basic material, but one problem had been that it didn’t all fit togehter. (That became a virtue! Ha!) It still may not be quite right and don’t know if it qualifies as the themes are not so divergent–I loved the spareness of yours and the shifts–but well, it’s what I did. I think I stuck to internal rhymes. (Agh!)
Thanks again.
manicddaily said:
Actually, looking again, I am sure I did not really do this right! My themes are not so divergent, but this is the poem that came out with that effort, so must make do! I will keep it in mind. K.
hobgoblin2011 said:
Emmett, fine prompt tonight, thanks for hosting. It was much more difficult than I thought it would be. Boy, that’s an understatement. I think the fact we had to be ever conscience of eliminating end rhyme added a bit of the difficulty. But in any case, it was a lot of fun and look forward to reading what the others have offered. Thanks again
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
Honestly, I’m so glad it created a degree of complexity. Rhyme is a beautiful aspect of poetry, but once hooked, it’s hard to leave. There is a whole-new world of poetry waiting to be written without rhyme. Fresh, honest, and compelling poetry sometime shy’s away from it. Already I’ve read some good poetry without it. Thanks for the comment and being honest with me about the challenge the prompt presents. Think I’ve accomplished what I hoped for.
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Ruth said:
Very interesting prompt, emmett – you are certainly raising the bar for me… that’s if I did it right. 🙂
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
Hey, do what the kid do. Go under the bar rather try to jump it. Just kidding. Glad you feel the challenge. Hope to read your post later today.
Seek the Sun said:
Thanks, emmett, for a great prompt. I like combining two different subjects together. Somehow, they do find their own connection. It’s like the conscious and unconscious mind. I am looking forward to reading some great poetry.
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
You got it! Deep poetic thought comes from the contradication when conflating two competing thoughts, especially when antithetical. Great poetry is coming to be because of this prompt, let’s enjoy them.
hypercryptical said:
Thanks for a great prompt Emmett – although I am uncertain as to whether my attempt is a true representation of conflation.
Anna :o]
Jash Comstock said:
Such an addicting prompt. Thank you emmett!
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
You’re welcome Jash. Have fun with it. Challenge yourself. I did and do.
Daydreamertoo said:
Interesting prompt. I doubt those who love words can resist having a go.
I did, mine’s up. Thank you to all at dVerse and for the prompt Emmette.
emmett wheatfall (@emmettwheatfall) said:
A wonderful write. Love the imagery. You paint a beautiful picture with your poem. Thanks for posting your creative work.
Anna Montgomery said:
I went philosophical and my poetry very rarely rhymes so that was in the bag. I got lots of conflicting information about conflation and it actually inspired the write so thank for a fascinating subject.
Beth Winter said:
Hello, emmett,
I was hoping to write for this prompt tonight but something came up at home that demanded attention. I will try to write for it over the next couple of days. I do love a challenge. I’m looking forward to seeing what others came up with as well.
Hope everyone is having a wonderful evening.
Beth
Margaret said:
Thank you so much for this challenge! I read them all and loved the diversity. I haven’t been able to contribute/participate/read all that dVerse does, but I do try!
claudia said:
woohoo – looks like you’re having some fun and quite a few took the challenge… will be on the reading trail in a bit..
brian miller said:
good morning claudia…
there are some great pieces out there so far…i am about to go to bed and look forward to seeing what tomorrow brings…
see you in a few hours….
hedgewitch said:
This was really interesting –and challenging. I’m not sure but that I haven’t been too obvious, after reading some of the subtle work I’ve seen others doing, but I had fun trying. Thank you, emmett, for coming up with a very creative prompt that got a poem out of me I would never otherwise have written, and for sharing your way of looking at our craft here at dVerse.
Jash Comstock said:
If anyone ever has a chance, check out the prompt site Misfitian. Another great place to gather, with very unique prompts.
-Misfit
pandamoniumcat said:
I thankyou for this prompt, I have been busy working and haven’t felt compelled to write much lately, but something about conflation made me want to have a go…so again I thank you!
Emily said:
I wasn’t planning to respond, but couldn’t help myself. This was fun! I might be a little vague (intentionally…), and like a couple of others, I’m not sure I got conflation, exactly, but I’m still grateful for the exercise.
Thanks for the forum, the inspiration, and all the sharing.
Anna Montgomery said:
Thanks for all the fantastic poems; I’ll have to finish reading later as I’m heading out to mentor.
b_y said:
A good one. I think I understand the concept. Not certain I managed it, though.
Shawna said:
I started a new poetry blog to keep my poems separate from my ramblings of nonsense. Check it out.
arbitrarymeaning.blogspot.com
snakypoet said:
A very interesting exercise! Not sure I did it right but I enjoyed the attempt. 🙂
snakypoet said:
Oh damn, just realised I left in some accidental end rhymes. I might leave them anyway. There’s not a pattern of rhyme, and I think the particular words are essential — or at least that altering them would weaken the statements. Ideced to ignore them for that reason, but forgot about the veto. 😦
snakypoet said:
*decided
fireblossom32 said:
Thanks so much for the kind words about my poem.
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