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“If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away.” Henry David Thoreau.
The word “beat” is so much a part of modern times, we hardly think about it any more. It is used everywhere regarding life, theater, music, art, and especially poetry. Life is a series of beats – heart beats, breaths, our natural biological rhythms, and our unity with the rhythms of nature, the planet, and the cosmos.
When a musician begins to compose, he usually establishes his rhythm first or at the very least has an idea what he wants the rhythm in the piece to do. In these days of composing electronically, one has to build from the bass up to the treble. The bass historically sets the “beat” and the treble (primarily) carries the melody. Even if one gets the tune first by noodling, one has to compose by establishing rhythm in the time signature and building the bass under that melody.
“In acoustics, a beat is an interference between two sounds of slightly different frequencies, perceived as periodic variations in volume whose rate is the difference between the two frequencies.
With tuning instruments that can produce sustained tones, beats can readily be recognized. Tuning two tones to a unison will present a peculiar effect: when the two tones are close in pitch but not identical, the difference in frequency generates the beating. The volume varies like in a tremolo as the sounds alternately interfere constructively and destructively. As the two tones gradually approach unison, the beating slows down and may become so slow as to be inperceptible.
Binaural beats are heard when the right ear listens to a slightly different tone than the left ear. Here, the tones do not interfere physically, but are summed by the brain in the olivary nucleus. This effect is related to the brain’s ability to locate sounds in three dimensions.”
(Wikipedia – Beat)
Because we as poets create a melody with the sounds of words, we depend on our rhythms to emphasize them, to give them flow, urgency, excitement, liquidity, effortlessness. Because we are each unique, it is probable we have unique rhythms that show up unconsciously in our work. When we write form, the rhythm is prescribed.
Virginia Woolf said, “What rhythm is goes far deeper than words, it is very profound. A sight, an emotion, creates a wave in the mind, long before it makes words to fit it.”
In Rosa Alchemica, Yeats said, “Michael Robartes returned and told me that I would have to learn the steps of an exceedingly antique dance, because before my initiation could be perfected I had to join three times in a magical dance, for rhythm was the wheel of Eternity, on which alone the transient and accidental could be broken, and the spirit set free.”
Our voice may form from language but it merges into music and therefore into poetry when it takes up a natural rhythm, it seems to me. It may be in that marriage where the magic takes place.
The beats are equal to the stresses in the words we choose. When we choose a three syllable word, we may have one stressed syllable and two unstressed syllables, or two unstressed and one stressed syllable. Most two syllable words have one unstressed and one stressed syllable but a few like “football” may have two stressed syllables. If you’re unsure about your stresses, check your dictionary.
There are times when we want a silence, an interruption, a break in the line — somewhere around the middle usually, and we want a reader to know that a silence takes a beat or several beats. This insertion of silence into a piece is called a caesura. It may be marked by a space or spaces or by a line break. This is a very effective way of saying, “listen to the thought“.
I offer one more quote from Grigoris Deoudis: “Let us liberate ourselves from any form of control. Let us focus at the inner drum, where the rhythm aligns with that of our heart. The measure of responsibility, equals to the need for evolution. Just listen to the inner child, let it whisper in your ear.”
Today, I want you to choose a poem you have already written that you think most clearly represents your personal voice. If you have a caesura, just put brackets or parentheses around the blank space. Mark the beats as you hear them in bold or italics so that as we read your work, we hear your own rhythms and appreciate your own inner music.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I tried to find a poem that didn’t have a steady metronome in it.. and checked prose too.. but my beat seems to a steady … this metronome… I checked how I would write in Swedish,, and the same thing.. so I took a piece of prose written previously.. and marked my beat. …
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
that will do, I think. I’ll be by in a little bit…(gathering up saucers and plates, and carrying tea things to wash up). See you then.
claudia said:
i too thought your beat was astonishingly steady björn – that’s why you’re doing so well with sonnets me thinks..
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I usually spend some time with thesaurus.. to find words that give the right “natural” beat… that’s why I need a keyboard, I change it all the time.. writing back an forth.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I keep my thesaurus tab handy always and when writing form, the rhyming dictionary tab open as well.
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
me too. The thesaurus in Word Review is a most useful tool to have at the side of the page, and Rhymezone and B-Rhymes give a good choice of directness or subtlety.
brian miller said:
I have a rap/spoken word rhyming dictionary that I use that includes a lot of slant rhymes….or b rhymes…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Alas I have the one on-line.. but some of them I use quite regularly.. (there’s even a b-rhyme one… )..
claudia said:
ha – so you’re all using your secret tools for the rhymes…ha… need to find me one as well
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Sometimes I sit down and read dictionaries too 🙂
Glenn Buttkus said:
Something in me resisted the underlining or designating the beat; & wanted to write a new poem on one of my older personal themes; so I am a bad boy today, but hopefully the “rhythms” will be self-evident in the reading, both my me & you.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Well you could mark the stresses on a few lines. I think you’d be amazed at the way American English is so irregular in its beat. I found my lines were irregular, and my beat pretty jazzy. Huh?!
claudia said:
i think it would be great if you could point them out cause we tend to read with our own rhythm… what seems clear to us is not necesarrily for the reader…
brian miller said:
I agree…I commented on one that I wondered if the rhythm I felt in the words was the same one that they felt when they read it…
claudia said:
what an interesting article gay – i def. have that inner beat – just usually not listening consciously – so it was interesting to try to find and mark the stresses
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Hope you’re feeling better Claudia. Thanks for taking part.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Very much like the idea of understanding our own beat. Because of guests, I’m scarce this week–wish I could be a part of this.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I’ll miss you Victoria. Understand about guests…here too.
claudia said:
have a great time with your guests victoria!
brian miller said:
yeah, friends or family visitors?
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Friends from Palm Desert! (Winter friends).
brian miller said:
cool…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
intended pun?
brian miller said:
definitely.
ha
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Sorry guys, had an unexpected guest and just got here. Late to the party, oh my! Hope it’s a good day for everyone. Ready to get anyone a cold one. There are some sweets on the bar. Hope you are keeping cool!
claudia said:
nice… an unexpected guest can be such a blessing… thanks for tending bar gay
brian miller said:
today was the first day of school with kids…a cold one is definitely in order…ha
katiemiafrederick said:
Fascinating perspective this is on the archetypes of rhythm and beat over all in the musicK and lyrics of poetry..and particularly interesting to me as an individual diagnosed on the Autism Spectrum in mid-life previously with a language delay until age 4..great difficulty in speaking coherently..stuttering through middle school..and still not comfortable writing and speaking coherent paragraphs in thought..
Truly for me with piano..came the ability to sing a song in words..to relay emotions of language too..and later on..when losing effective use of my eyesight..totally unable to connect with anyone with a pain disorder so severe..not even my immediate family i could connect to in same household..
My only hope of regaining my humanity was a way to make the only thing i could do..type lists of words at start in November of 2010..a lyrical play of song of words too…
So now that i finally recover last Summer in real life..i keep my adaptation and accommodation..to try my besTest to be human in words organically speaking in text that flows like waves in shapes of form..strong still..by practicing..practicing it still every day..and every now..as there is always the possibility that my pain in remission could come back..
And once again..
my life…
wil
only
be
words……
But smiles..and thanks for this great prompt Gay..the song of Hakuna Matata..sings through the organic shape of my words come…
true…
in
real life too!..:)!
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) said:
Just reading this comment, I love the way you use words and would call you highly articulate as well as musical with language.
katiemiafrederick said:
Thanks Snakypoet..for the nice appreciation of my communication..lyrics of musicK IS where i truly do thrive in communication..the best!..:)particularly verbally now in real life!
brian miller said:
gay, lots of fun….I have a bit of a wild rhythm…I struggle to hold a pentameter and such…but let the rhythm run wild and I am good…I tried to capture that in my verse with CAPs…I rely a lot on how words sound…and sound when put together in establishing my rhythm…hearing words is one of the great leaps for me in poetry.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
There is only music in the way you compose Brian. It’s not the usual scan but I could make the stresses pop when I read it. Like all free verse should be, yours is very free, unique, personal, with uneven line lengths, use of capitals, other typesets and ampersands, slang, coined words and new usages. Very clever, novel, and deeply intelligent. In the poem today, a kind of protest in a clever amusing and understated way. Always fascinated by the “how” of your poems, Brian.
brian miller said:
the how of today was actually the front page of CNN.com a couple days ago…its a fun little exercise when I want to SPEAK OUT….I try to swizzle in the different bizarre news I read…and well we are 2 years out of presidential votes again and the slinging is already starting so…ha
georgeplace2013 said:
I’ll be back tonight to comment – got to get supper ready.
brian miller said:
anything good?
got an extra plate?
smiles.
georgeplace2013 said:
If you’re in the area we’ll add a little water to the soup beans. Pull up a chair. : )
brian miller said:
ha. that would be cool.
i doubt you are near lynchburg va
but if you were
i would.
georgeplace2013 said:
Ha, not too far. Three hours, I think? Are you visiting there? Shoot. I was teasing about the beans… I fixed a filet mignon, b potato and salad. Next time and bring the fam.
brian miller said:
three hours…that is doable…smiles…
and hey i wont raise my nose at soup beans…
smiles.
georgeplace2013 said:
My husband said 2 1/2 hours – ya coulda made it.
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
What an interesting topic, particularly today, my first full day with hearing aids: I’m hearing all sorts of sounds, rhythmic and not, which set me thinking about this before I’d even read Gay’s exposé. I’m too tired to do it now, but will try and produce something new tomorrow.
brian miller said:
cool. look forward to reading what you come up with
and best wishes on getting used to the new ears…it was not an easy transition for my mother…
claudia said:
oy… so you can hear the ants cough now…? i bet in all those sounds is a poem waiting to be written….smiles… see you tomorrow viv
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Great Viv. Let me know how the hearing aid(s) work for you. I have tinnitis and it’s starting to block out all other noise, it’s so loud. Lots of voices are too soft to hear but I hate stuff “in” my ears. I know there’s a lot of new technology. So I’m interested.
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
So do I hate stuff in my ears, but these are minute, and until you get an itch, you forget they are there! I can turn the subtitles off the TV now.
They block out the tinnitus, but when you take them out to sleep, the tinnitus is more noticeable. I can live with that. I sleep very lightly, and with the aids in, the slightest creak would wake me up!
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) said:
I have had hearing aids for a few years now. I love them. Better to hear well than not!
brian miller said:
alright, time to head home….
and today was the first day of middle school for logan…
so will need to hear all about it when I get there…
but I will be back here in a bit.
claudia said:
smiles…i bet he has thousand stories to tell…. for me it’s bedtime… will catch up tomorrow morning
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Soon bedtime for me too.. Hope to catch up a bit tomorrow.. 🙂
brian miller said:
sleep well both of you…
Myrna said:
Well I gave it a try. Not sure if I have a good rhythm or beat (I do when I dance, ha.), but when I write I think I may be too unstructured, undisciplined. Hope there’s a natural rhythm to some of my poems. I think I change the rhythm midstream too, which is probably not too effective.
Thanks for this prompt Gay.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I’ll be by in a bit Myrna..I think that changing rhythms in mid line or mid verse is pretty American. We have such a mishmosh of sounds in our heads, and such a play of both melodious and cacophonous sounds in our music that it’s bound to show up in our work.
That was really the point I was trying to make with this exercise. It’s a fairly easy one, pointing out to ourselves where our stresses land; however, like diagramming sentences it gives us a picture of what we do and the tools we use to do it. We may not always think about those tools even as we use them (what pianist considers the hammers, strings and felts, the pedals, the strength used to get soft and loud sounds after he or she learns to play?) but once in a while it’s useful to reflect on those tools, to clean them up, or sharpen them if applicable. Otherwise, happy we’ve got the “go-to’s” to make the music we do.
Anna Chamberlain said:
Gay, this is a fantastic article. It would never have occurred to me to really look at the stresses in a free verse and think about the rhythm. I learned I have a lot of unstressed space in my work, sometimes an entire line. I try to create space for the reader in my work, maybe the lack of stress is an unconscious way of achieving that end. Not surprising my rhythm is asymmetrical, unpredictable, and odd. Perhaps like me :).
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Thank you Anna. So glad you’re back in the pub. I encourage everyone to read the fine poem you linked today. It is full of irregularities that build a beautiful harmonic work. Conscious or unconscious..your rhythms come across as the foundation of the poem!
Mary said:
Thanks, Gay, for the challenging prompt. It took me a while to think of how to accomplish it….but eventually I did. Smiles.
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) said:
It seems that even in free verse I am boringly iambic — with occasional variations. I’ll be interested to see how others identify their beats, because I know that American and Aussie English can have different inflections and emphases (as well as pronunciations) so I may find some surprises.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I am surprised at how many iambs and anapests roll through our English texts. As Shakespeare showed us, that is the “natural” rhythm of English, but a few people did surprise me, gave us new sounds, new lines, and clever ways of writing. Enjoy the reads!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Sometimes when I just sit down and scribble what I think is free-verse … I note afterwards it’s really almost perfect blank verse. – those iambs are very natural to use when you feel like there is a story to tell – like walking almost.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Sleep time here…will be around in the a.m. here for a while, then have to drive to Dallas for the afternoon. Will stop by late tomorrow evening. So y’all talk among yourselves. Cool poems out there, fun to see!
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Up to date now. Will return late this evening for any latecomers. Make sure you stop to read your fellow poets who linked!
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
I boobed! I’ve only just realised that we’re supposed to work on an existing poem. I’ve written a new one, mea culpa, becaust the theme for today is so apposite. Now I’m off to see what the rest of you have done.
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
I am intrigued at all the devices dVerse poets have used to indicate caesurae: surely correct punctuation and lineation does that job without the need for brackets etc? What do you think?
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Yes I do believe that Viv. I just wanted them to let me know they were specifically there. I think when we “take a beat” we sometimes are hardly aware of it. I thought of this exercise a little like diagramming sentences. One is always surprised when we break things down again.
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
But weren’t our poets inventive? It was a delight to see it, and read the poems aloud using those devices.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I agree! Wow!
mishunderstood said:
I absolutely LOVED this prompt, Gay. I am stressing “LOVED”! …lots of bold print!!
It really opened a whole new area of understanding into my own writing.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Then it was worthwhile to put up the article. I think that we have many ways to explicate a poem. We can think about word choice, the etymology of the words which takes us into those roots and to their related words, we can think about those words as they have been used in classical literature, film, by other poets, as jumping off places for other works of art, we can use the tools of the trade – rhyme, meter, alliteration, assimilation, assonance, internal rhyme, but the cart that carries all this, the thing that changes that text from prose to poetry particularly in free verse is understanding the beat, it’s the delivery system that carries what we want to stress to the reader. If we put our main driving ideas on the main driving beats, it seems to me, it will be a better poem. Thank you so much for making my idea a success for you!