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Hi everyone! I am pleased to present our guest blogger, Michelle, better known as “Mish” in the dVerse community for today’s Poetics!
Photo Credit: Mish
Hello everyone! I am so grateful for the opportunity to be a guest host for you today. After mulling over many possible ideas for this honoured occasion, I looked down at my keyboard and …voila! A poetic prompt at my fingertips….literally.
Let’s look at our hands. Do they have a story to tell?
Think about the ways we use our hands to communicate. They have a tendency to join in as we speak. Often they are the only voice we use. Sometimes they are the only voice we have. They welcome, dismiss, applaud and wipe tears. We raise our hands in frustration. We extend our hand in peace.
Consider the many symbolisms of hands. Humanitarianism, power, possession and purpose are just a few. In many Native American tribes, hand symbols were painted on war horses to represent success in battle or the fact that the horse had knocked down an enemy. The left and right hand take on opposite energies within the Chinese philosophy of yin and yang.
It was surprising to me that there are very few famous poems written about hands, considering the magnitude of their roles and figurative meanings. I was moved by a poem by John Keats where he uses a hand to speak of life and death or perhaps love and rejection. There are many interpretations but I think it is the imagery and the way he seems to leap out of his own thoughts at the end that intrigued me the most. I found it very chilling and thought provoking.
This Living Hand
by John Keats
This living hand, now warm and capable
Of earnest grasping, would, if it were cold
And in the icy silence of the tomb,
So haunt thy days and chill thy dreaming nights
That thou wouldst wish thine own heart dry of blood
So in my veins red life might stream again,
And thou be conscience-calmed–see here it is–
I hold it towards you.
For most of us, our hands have served us well. They have carried out our work and our play. They have been a part of our accomplishments and our failures. They carefully cradled what is precious to us. So today I am asking you to write a poem that pays homage to hands. They may be your own hands, the hands of someone you love or those of a stranger. You can use hands as a symbol or a way to tell us a story. These are just some ideas, because I leave it in your hands!
Photo credit: Mish
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BIO: Michelle or “Mish” is a proud Canadian residing in the beautiful province of Ontario with her husband. She is also a mother and an Early Childhood Educator. She began writing short poems and song lyrics as a teenager. Her blog, mishunderstood was the spark that rekindled her passion for writing. So far, she sees no end to the creative flow. She credits most of her inspiration to dVerse, her love of nature, music, amateur photography and the many ponderings of life.
mishunderstood said:
Hello everyone. The pub is open! I am so excited to see your responses to today’s prompt.
Grace said:
Thank you Mish for your lovely post ~ Looking forward to reading your poems about hands ~
mishunderstood said:
Hi Grace! I am grateful for the opportunity. 🙂
welshstream said:
Grace for some reason I can never seem to leave a comment on your blog. I select wordpress option but it never loads up …. which is such a great shame. Just loved your poem tonight .. some great imagery there.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Welcom Mish.. so great to have you prompting… and I loved to write about hands. A great prompt. Love the sight of you sitting at your keyboard all of the sudden realizing what you should prompt about.
mishunderstood said:
Hi Bjorn. Yes it was one of those “aha” moments!
Grace said:
Hello everyone ~ Thank you Mish for hosting ~ And you are welcome to link more than 1 poem for this prompt ~
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I might do that… we will see…
Grace said:
Well it is OpenLinkNight this Thursday, smiles ~
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.. yes and I have to write something for that too…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello everyone… today we are having some feeling of spring, and daylight is coming fast now.
Grace said:
Yes, warming weather here too and lots of rain the whole week ~ Better rain than snow, I say ~
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
🙂 hmm I will go north for more snow soon…
mishunderstood said:
Oh please don’t say the “s” word. Rainy here but I am really enjoying the mild weather. The birds are singing!
Grace said:
Me too ~ I will back in a bit to read and comment on other links ~
On my way home via train ~ See you in a few minutes ~
annell4 said:
Interesting prompt.
Hands to Hold and Hands to Let Go
i look at my hands they are my mother’s hands my grandmother’s
and possibly they were my great mother’s my ancestor’s hands
my mother taught me to use them to care for them
with these hands we crawled out of the trees gathered food
rocked the cradle washed and bathed prepared food
mended the wounds made things played instruments
before we could speak we made gestures we made love
we learned to count hold what is precious learned to let go
and with our fingertips we remembered
March 15, 2016
annell4 said:
http://somethingsithinkabout-annell-annell.blogspot.com
mishunderstood said:
Welcome Annell. A beautiful poem. Did you have any trouble with Mr. Linky?
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
And I had to think about the marvelous line of e e cummings.
nobody,not even the rain, has such small hands
Grace said:
Beautiful line ~
whimsygizmo said:
You scoundrel. I was just playing around with that, for a second piece. 😉 You know I loves me some E.E.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha… I should have been more careful quoting ee.. 🙂
Glenn Buttkus said:
Wow, first time I’ve responded to prompt about hands; very cool. DST comments remind of something Native Americans say, “White men are silly with their time shifting. It’s like taking a perfectly fine blanket, cutting an inch off the top, sewing in on the bottom, & trying to convince us it is now a longer blanket.”
mishunderstood said:
Hi Glenn…I agree, and those who think they are still feeling the difference in time weeks later? I hope you enjoyed the prompt. Looking forward to the read.
welshstream said:
Welcome Mish and what a great prompt – certainly kept my mind exercised through the day and given that I’ve hit a dry spell recently, was so pleased this prompt seemed to have opened a door 🙂
mishunderstood said:
Thank you! I am so happy that it inspired you. I guess those “hands” opened a door for you. 🙂
seingraham said:
Hey Mish – I don’t always make it here but am glad I did today … happy to see a friend manning the bar, and as welshstream said – what a great prompt. Looking forward to reading some of the others.
http://whenthepenbleeds.blogspot.ca/2016/03/hand-in-hand.html
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I love that there are so many old friends gathering 🙂
mishunderstood said:
Thank you, seingraham. Welcome! 🙂
kim881 said:
This challenge has given me so many ideas – it’s going to be tricky. I can’t think clearly at this time of night, so I’ll be back again in the morning!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Many ideas is no problem… at Poetics you can link up more than one poem…
mishunderstood said:
Thanks for dropping in to read the prompt, kim. Have a good night. 🙂
whimsygizmo said:
Love this prompt, Mish! Thank you!
mishunderstood said:
Thank YOU!! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
therisa said:
An interesting topic, to choose, Mish
lillian said:
So nice to see you tending bar, Mish! I went to the dark side on this one….excellent prompt! Sun is finally breaking in St. George’s, Bermuda. Rain and dark skies all day — perhaps that’s what sent me to the dark side? Glad to have the sun again! 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I find myself writing even darker when sun is out… 🙂
mishunderstood said:
Hey lillian…thanks for your support. I like the dark side of poetry so I’m sure I’ll love your poem. Not too much sun here these days, but I’m happy to lose the snow boots and gloves. 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I added a second one… also a darker one… now it’s bed-time here.
Grace said:
Sweet dreams and see you tomorrow 🙂
Bodhirose said:
Hi Mish, thanks for a most interesting prompt and your help manning the bar!
Grace said:
Hi Gayle, thanks for dropping by ~
mishunderstood said:
Thank you, Gayle. My pleasure! 🙂
Bekkie said:
Not only can I give you a hand, I can give you 10 Digits. I’m so happy sharing this older poem of mine with you, a tribute to Dr. Suess and a favorite of mine. What a great idea for a prompt I give you a thumbs up! Perhaps I’ll write another.
Grace said:
Hi Bekkie! You are welcome to write another poem ~
Bekkie said:
If I have time I will. I like this prompt and from I’ve read so far everyone is in top form! Thanks Grace.
mishunderstood said:
High five, Bekkie! Hope you do! 🙂
Bekkie said:
:^)
Pleasant Street said:
Hi everyone. I like the hand prompt- so wide open to interpretation, I expect every poem will be very different
Grace said:
Hello! Yes, it is and I enjoyed reading the different takes so far ~
Sanaa Rizvi said:
Hey everyone,
Hope you’re having a wonderful week so far 🙂 sharing my poem “Palm of her hand.” Hope you all like it.
Thank you Michelle for the lovely opportunity. This one’s for you! 😉
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Grace said:
Hello Sanaa ! I will be over in a bit to read ~ Thanks for joining us 🙂
mishunderstood said:
Thank you, Sanaa ! On my way over to read it.
Sanaa Rizvi said:
You’re welcome 🙂
lynn__ said:
Hello all…Thanks for hosting, Mish! I’m linking an earlier poem of mine that I don’t think I’ve shared here before…no time to write another while still pondering Bouts- Rimes and a haibun 🙂 Sometimes my granddaughter gently strokes the back of my hand when standing next to me; intrigued by the prominent veins, I think.
Grace said:
No problem Lynn ~ And we have OpenLinkNight this Thursday if you missed any of the prompts ~ And how lovely to have your granddaughter with you, holding your hand 🙂
lynn__ said:
Yes, they live close so we’re blessed to be with grandchildren often.
mishunderstood said:
Hi Lynn, so glad you added your poem to the mix…and what a lovely gesture from your granddaughter. 🙂
Majka said:
Hi poets, ☺
after I saw the prompt for today’s poems, I recalled all things my granny has taught me. My poem is dedicated to her.
Grace said:
And it is a lovely tribute ~ Thanks for sharing 🙂
Majka said:
My pleasure! ☺
Mary said:
Hi Mish — Great prompt! So nice to see you ‘behind the bar.’ Looking forward to reading everyone’s poems in response! I will be making my way around tonight and tomorrow.
mishunderstood said:
Hi Mary! Thank you. 🙂 I am enjoying every minute of it.
Grace said:
Thank you Mish for visiting and commenting on the poems ~ I will be back tomorrow to check and read more poems 🙂
ghostmmnc said:
Hi, everyone! Hope all are having a great week so far. Thank you Mish, for the wonderful, thoughtful prompt. I look forward to reading your entries, but will be tomorrow, as it is late here. Wishing you all Peace! }I{
mishunderstood said:
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the prompt. 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Mish, wonderful to have you here, tending the poetry bar. I’m sorry to be absent but will try hard to jump in tomorrow. Wonderful prompt.
mishunderstood said:
Looking forward to it, Victoria. Thank you! 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I made it! Loved this prompt.
Grace said:
Yay….I will be over in a bit Victoria ~
lupitatucker said:
I slid in under the deadline, too. Good to see you all!!
Grace said:
It is still open and thanks for joining us ~
nmykel said:
Just lost my comment. Oh well, “A person’s a person no matter how small their hands.” Just had to pull out a quote! I especially liked the gloves with the possibly missing digit.
Grace said:
How mysterious that would be ~ Thanks for joining us ~
Raivenne said:
Whew! I thought I was going to miss this one! Such a great prompt Mis, glad I made it.
Grace said:
There’s still some time left ~ Thanks for joining us Raivenne ~ I am just making my rounds now ~
Hannah Gosselin said:
Well…I missed it…oops! Here’s my link any way in case someone chances it…what a great prompt Mish…I enjoyed your post. 🙂
https://wordrustling.wordpress.com/2016/03/17/picking-flowers/
Grace said:
You can share it at OpenLinkNight Hannah ~ The Mr. Linky in OLN is open right now 🙂
Hannah Gosselin said:
Oh…that’s right! Thank you, Grace…I will do that. 🙂