Contrast
Winter Solstice brings to mind the contrast between light and dark. Today is the shortest day of the year, not in terms of the number of hours, but rather, the disparity between the length of day and night.
Contrast is an gadget in the artist’s toolbox: contrast in terms of value, which is how much white or black is mixed into a color.
The painter also chooses colors that play off of one another or shapes that are organic or geometric—soft, rounded edges vs. linear, straight edges.
Differences in textures, smooth or rough, also create dissimilarity.
Contrast creates visual excitement and adds interest to the art. Without it, a painting would appear monotonous.
How can we employ this device used by artists to enliven our writing, whether prose or poetry? Consider novels you may have read (and, perhaps, abandoned) in which the characters are all similar in temperament (boring!). How about dialogue that lacks distinguishing characteristics, so much so that you are not able to tell who is speaking?
To apply the concept of contrast to poetry, we can create a list of opposites. Here are just a few:
Hot—Cold
Black—White
Love—Hate
Fear—Courage
Good—Bad
Dark—Light
Acceptance—Forgiveness
Peace—War
Skilled—Incompetent
Joy—Sorrow
Beautiful–Ugly
It’s apparent that the substance of our lives is woven of contrasting emotions and experiences. Without the one, we would not recognize the other. Without sorrow, would we know joy?
For today’s prompt, I invite you to select a pair of opposites from the above list, or chose your own and paint your own chef d’oeuvre in words.
To participate:
• Write your poem and post it on your blog or website.
• Access Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post.
• Include your name and the direct URL to your submission.
• Visit other word-artists and comment on their work.
• Return visits to those who have commented on your poem.
For an example of a well-known work that features contrast, I’ve chosen this from the Public Domain:
Fire and Ice
Robert Frost
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I’ve tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.
For dVerse Poets, I’m Victoria C. Slotto, wishing you and your loved one a joyous holiday season.
another excellent article victoria… was looking forward to it since you mentioned it last week on your blog – just finished a really good novel with excellently textured characters – nothing really spectacular happened but the author painted the characters in such contrasting colors that it was a joy to read and i didn’t get bored for a single minute.. 44 scotland street by Alexander McCall Smith
I love his writing. Have only read the 1st one of the Ladies Detective series, but I’m due for a light read. Thanks, Claudia.
Ahh… so beautiful, Victoria. I must say I pulled one out from the archives BUT it was the first poem I had published where the editor asked me to submit AND it’s never been seen anywhere else.
Happy Holidays to all of you!
Thanks, Laurie. I look forward to reading after I peruse comments.
This is kind of spooky, Victoria. I posted a poem this morning that starts with ice and snow and ends with fire (but nothing at all like Frost’s I’m afraid.) Excellent article, and thanks for hosting today in this hectic time of year.
You know, hedge, this isn’t the first time we’ve been on the same wavelength…remember Wallace Stevens? Yes, it is a bit spooky. Kinda in a cool way. Happy Solstice. :0)
Robert Frost is my favorite, and what a great post to mention him in! 🙂 Love the pics too! 🙂
Happy Holidays! 😀
Merry Christmas! 😀
Glad you enjoyed it, Elvas
What a perfect prompt for Winter Solstice. I’m looking out the window now, and I’m thinking, “It’s so dark and it’s only 3!” This was lots of fun. Thanks!
And happy Solstice. It’s time to hibernate!
Lovely post, Victoria. I’ve taken the idea of contrast to a somewhat different (pachydermal) place.
Best of holidays and new year to you and all!
K.
Can’t wait to read that one, Karin!
Hmm. mine is built around contrasts…good and bad…maybe!
Just like life, heh, John?
Hello Victoria, a great highlight of poetry. I will remember to contrast, for without it, the artist job is not complete. Thank you. Happy holidays and may you have a wonderful 2012.
Same to you, ocean!
back at the Pub for a ‘quick one’
Howdy all.
Glad you made it. I’ve got some killer eggnog.
will not be posting mine until Monday 😦 I have a full timeline right now and posts waiting in line for today, tomorrow and Saturday. I hope I can come back and link here then! 🙂 Great article!
I understand that!
I’d forgotten how much I like Frost’s Fire and Ice… so many wonderful poets (and poems) around
So true. He’s always one to go back to, though.
I always enjoy a quick stop by the pub. I missed Tuesday’s open link night so I was determined to stop by today. Happy holidays to all!
Glad you made it. Happy holidays, indeed.
Beautiful like always.
:0)
Another great prompt Victoria, thank YOU and thanks to all at dVerse, for making it happen, too. I’m in 🙂
The team at dVerse IS great but wouldn’t be anything without you all.
great prompt victoria…just getting home from a long and crappy day…so i will get to work on it and post late tonight…….
I bet your crappy days are really crappy, Brian. I’ll toss an extra shot of brandy in your eggnog.
ha i appreciate that…and in stead of letting it beat me i wrote mine about it…smiles…and i love eggnog….
And it was a great one.
It’s serendipitous that the poem I wrote for another prompt fits so well with this one. Karma, say I.
Happy Hols to all!
Don’t you love it when that happens?
This is an interesting prompt, Victoria…so much to choose from too. I went with youth and aging.
Burrowing in tonight for the long winter’s nap of solstice–ha…it’s 80 degrees here today!
Not fair. It was 6 degrees here this morning. Growl.
well, i think there is enough contrasting images in here to make the cut…i hope you think so also.
Absolutely. The way I look at it, the prompt is just to tickle the muse and whatever she comes up with is good!
I want so bad to leave a comment for -http://scrawledonapage.blogspot.com/2011/12/what-could-have-been.html
Every time I try to comment it rejects me:( I hope that this comment can be read by this amazing poet:)
Ummm… I am trying to find the words to tell you how beautiful this poem was! The passion… the fight… the heart and depth of your words spoke to my soul… perhaps it’s because these words are a fight that I am choosing to believe to keep love!
My favorite poem of the year!
~L
http://www.untitledmoments.com
I have problems sometimes with blogger, too. It helped me to enable 3rd party cookies. Can’t say I remember how I did that, though!
I just came across your comment…I am speechless. thank you from the bottom of my heart.
*hug* Love the article. Sorry I’m so late but I made it. I’m linking up an older poem, hope you don’t mind.
The holiday season at work is almost over. I will have time to participate again 🙂 I have missed you all.
You weren’t as late as I was, Beth!
ugh! this is the second time I can’t post a comment on someones blog:( I know it has nothing to do with you guys… but would still like them to know my thoughts on their lovely poem:)
http://mementomorisun.blogspot.com/2011/12/luxury-of-morning.html
“what is truly spiritual?
Appreciation
of the present moment,
keenly aware”
How true this is… I have been really trying hard to realize how important it is to take in the present moment… feel it… experience it! … I think the more we can … the less we live in the past…
great post!
Day & Night, Black & White, “A Taste for Color” offered in response to the “opposites” prompt…
http://poeticlicensee.wordpress.com/2011/10/13/a-taste-for-color/
Thank you Victoria for this reminder of the contrasts at this time of year – in the dark, light; in riches of friends and love, poverty and abuse; in the joy of belief, despondency; in the light of love, the depth of dependency and despair. I wish you and all who visit here – the truth, trust, innocence, beauty, purity, joy and redemption of the season. May the year ahead bring enlightenment, inspiration and the continuance of the abundant talent I have been able to know and learn from all of you! Merry Christmas!
Most of you know I haven’t had much time for you lately, not because I don’t want to take the time but because I have had to prioritize in order to care for my poor dear friend who is so ill. Nor have I had time to write much. I am so grateful that even in these days, I am so inspired by the people I have come to know and love here.
hugs and much love your way gay..
Gay, this comment is poetry in itself, and I think living beauty is more important than writing it. Love to you and Merry Christmas.
thanks, Victoria. Happy holidays everyone. I love the prompt and the artwork is fab. The colors are mesmorizing.
I may have linked twice; if so, I’m sorry. I paired this prompt with a request my youngest made earlier this evening. Happy holidays to all.
It doesn’t really matter, but I realized at about 1 A.M. after a real sleep (and before another sleep)–I was just incredibly tired yesterday–that I’d posted my “Villain-elle” minus one of its most important illustrations! The “good hard whack”. Anyone interested in illustrated poetry should check it out again–it’s where the girl elephant takes over! (Same link on mr. linky.)
http://manicddaily.wordpress.com/2011/12/22/contrastvillanellesvillain-elle-with-watercolors-and-elephants/
got mine in! didn’t think i’d be able to (have to go sub at the Y with a yoga class)
chose a poem i was working on last night into this morning, “happy baby pose”
a happy coincidence 😉
happy holidays everyone!
my daughters are decorating the christmas tree and i’m sitting in the middle of a messy living room and reading meeting the bar poems…oh and it smells of forest…nice..
nice…love the smell of a live tree in the house…
I’ve been away this week, so I hope you don’t mind my combining two prompts for this post.
It’s nice to be back. I look forward to doing some reading during these long nights.
hey great to see you!
Thanks for the wonderful session. I appreciate it ~
Have linked up as well ~
Happy Holidays to you and everyone here at D’verse ~
Thank you for the venue Claudia…stop in sometime
Peace
All is contrast if you get to see… the ying and yan there it is- always
Cheers everyone
Thanks for hosting
MERRY XMAS
xox
Victoria,
cannot go by without returning favor to you,
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Awesome prompt.
Thanks all who participated by linking or reading. Happy Holidays, however you enjoy them.
well, i think i jump in this one way too late, but that’s ok, i really enjoyed reading all the contributions to the prompt. hope everyone has a great holiday