Happy Saturday poets, I hope you are ready for a trip in the Way Back machine. Brian Miller here and I have invited one of our pub regulars, Shawna of RosemaryMint to tend the pub for us today. She has provided us with some definite fun for the day, so without further ado, take it away Shawna…
Poetry has become quite the obsession for me of late, both writing and reading it. I consume yours almost daily. Beyond that, I supplement my dverse intake with web sites and library books featuring poets, both favored and unfamiliar.
Last week, I checked out a book called The Best American Poetry, edited by David Lehman and Robert Bly.
“The best of all time?” I wondered. This would certainly be a good read!
I did not notice the grey numerals backed by blaring in-your-face red shouting “1999” at me from the upper, right-hand corner. I often miss the obvious in favor of the oblique, like the small, empty coat hanger fading into the book’s jacket. Why was it drawn there? In 1999, who would nail-dangle a hanger on a wall? I don’t know about you, but I had a walk-in closet.
So what were you doing in 1999?
Which experiences do you recall vividly?
Were you in love?
What were your secrets?
Who was family to you?
What cars/music/styles did you like/dislike?
Who were you? Have you changed?
What do you wish you could forget?
In 1999, were you yet a writer? What does the passage of time mean for your writing? In The Best American Poetry (1999), Robert Bly says the following about writers, language, and the slipping away of one decade at a time:
“Many contemporary writers persuade themselves it is good not to have inwardness, not to have intensity, not to engage layers of meaning, not to have pungent phrasings, not to allow the heat of that sort of language … It’s possible that the particular heat which we call style amounts to recognizing and remembering the flavor of the decade in which one became an adult. … When the irreplaceable flavor of a given decade disappears, our language loses its vigor and becomes merely useful. … All of us, poets, essayists, and fiction writers alike, are being pressured by example to remove flavor from our work, along with our idiosyncrasies. We are fighting a front-line action against the cooling of language, …”
To tell you the truth, I found Bly’s introduction more interesting than the majority of the poetry presented in the remainder of the book. So if recalling the year 1999 doesn’t get your poetic juices flowing, consider mulling over Bly’s thoughts and integrating them into your poem, brimming with your own idiosyncratic heat.
To participate in this week’s prompt:
- Write an original poem based on the prompt provided.
- Post it on your blog.
- Click the Mr. Linky button below. When a new window opens, enter your name and the direct url for your poem.
- Visit others who have accepted the challenge.
- Have fun taking a trip back to 1999.
great job on the prompt shawna…this will be a lot of fun…was living in north carolina in 1999…it was a year before a lot of things changed for me…i do really like that quote from the intro…
Thanks, Brian. I’m excited too. 🙂 Loved your poem! … I was quite taken by Bly’s writing as well; I’ll have to look up more of his work.
I really enjoyed your Y2K piece, Brian. “apoca-lips” Ha! … You know what’s funny? I didn’t even think about that topic in relation to the prompt until my husband mentioned it. I wonder how many people will tackle the prompt from that angle.
yep…great job on the prompt shawna…i dusted my diary off and dived back into the year 1999 – was quite an emotional ride, re-living some of the things again..
Thanks, Claudia! … Snapshots from your diary, huh? I can’t wait to dive in myself. 🙂
In 1999 I had an experience that really left an impression on me. For me it was an ‘innocent’ year before so many things changed. Nice prompt.
Hmmm, we all have one of those, don’t we? “an innocent year before things changed” … I can’t wait to read your piece, Mary.
Shawna! How are you? I read Brian’s post this morning and, being a bit older than many of you, was swept back in my time machine to something more like 1969, so have been thinking and writing about that off and on all day I’m wondering if I can be a bit dyslexic for purposes of this exercise! Not that 1999 wasn’t a vivid time too, in its way, but my brain has been percolating thirty years further back. K.
Oh girl, I invite dyslexia and rule-breaking. By all means, take your words where the muses lead.
just make your title 1999 – 30 =
hahah
LOL … nice
Thanks.
Thanks for hosting today Shawna–this is a very compelling and writable prompt, and this time, I promise I really will write something for you. ;_) In 1999, I had stopped writing completely, had pretty much decided it was no longer a part of my life. I’d even given up my daily journals which I’d kept since the 1960’s. I’m off to go see what i can find to say about all that.
I’d imagine most writers will be able to relate to your story; we’ve all probably pushed writing aside to concentrate on “real” life, what might be seen as more important or productive. It’s a painful decision to make. And oh how good it feels to pick up the “pen” and resume what comes most naturally. I’m so glad you’re writing again!
I became a Mom…and for the first time in my life realized it was not all about me 😉 Love me some time travel…
Ha ha ha! That is a harsh realization. But beautiful. When I had Kaya, I felt like I had genuine purpose for the first time in my life.
oh how my life changed when i had kids….smiles.
Such a loaded statement. They do change the world. Precious little devils. 🙂
haha…oh i love them….
I like your new photo, Natasha. You’re lovely.
Well, Shawna, came up with both an homage to Richard Brautigan, and a memory-laden illustration of my recall of a piece of 1999; enjoy.
Fantastic, Glenn. I look forward to reading both. And then I’ll have to read something of Brautigan’s. What would you recommend?
TROUT FISHING IN AMERICA
Thanks, Glenn. I’ll check it out. 🙂
I enjoyed writing for this prompt… it was certainly another time and place for me. I look forward to reading everyone’s share of their journey ~
Thanks for the post and prompt ~
“another time and place” indeed! And we will all feel that in such different ways. I have thoroughly enjoyed the pieces I’ve read thus far and am excited to see where the next few hours will take us (back to).
awesome prompt, Shawna. And that quote from Bly makes me so sad because I believe it is true. So much of the published work I read is lacking in intensity and layers. I don’t understand it – why editor’s are looking to publish such muted poetry. thank, God, for poetry blogs where I find real, raw, and relatable-to-me poetry.
“why editors are looking to publish such muted poetry” … This makes me wonder at what is assumed about readers, and whether or not the assumptions are true. Are the target readers lovers of poetry or just readers in general? Does the audience prefer clear, unlayered, straightforward poetry? Who is driving what we write … is it the author, the editor, or the reader?
1999? I thought, what…? then I remembered… 🙂
Ha ha ha! I’d almost blocked it out too … until I saw it printed across the top of that book. 🙂
Gosh, had to get my thinking cap on for this one too 🙂
Great prompt, thanks to Shawna and all at the pub !
I’m so glad someone’s wearing a hat. We wore hats in the ’90s, didn’t we? This convo makes me think of Blossom. Loved her!
Lots of empty seats in here this afternoon. Am I early, or is there something going on I’m not aware of? Hellloooooo?
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/03/10/someone-passed-by-today/
we are just getting started charles…smiles.
Perhaps ’99 memories have captured the audience and the writers are reminiscing … hopefully enjoying what they recall.
Then again, spring IS in the air. Some may be enjoying the poetry outside this afternoon.
I can’t complain, Shawna! I got 20 hits on the poem in less than 30 minutes!
🙂
Fantastic, Charles! It’s much easier to get your work read on Thursdays and Saturdays than on Tuesdays, with 160+ competitive contributions. I know I can’t read them all! Kudos to Brian and Claudia who seem to hit most of them.
it is def a much more intimate enviroment…and easier to get around to everyone…and i do try to hit most…there are those that dont ever comment on anyone and once i notice that i usually start skipping them….
I really don’t know how you do it! I haven’t been completely caught up all afternoon. But I’m having a blast; thank you for inviting me to host, Brian.
ah you are doing a great job shawna…love all the interaction you bring to the table….
When there’s not so many, I try to hit them all too. I have to tell you, there are some awesome poets on this site!
Indeed there are!
Loved the article. I had a stand-outside-and-frantically-search closet myself. I am going to keep this prompt in mind and see if I can write for it in the morning. End of day is never good for me for writing but early early mornings… my time. See you soon, I hope. 1999 or close enough. 🙂
I hope you enjoy mulling over your memories, Beth. I look forward to reading you in the morning. Have a lovely evening!
1999 !!!
i was but a baby of 49 going on 50 then 😉
nice quote from robert bly, and nice write up, thanks shawna
You’re welcome! I can’t wait to see what you come up with. And on the topic of age, I find it to be more about the condition and health of the body and mind than the number of years one has lived. There is a certain inevitability of physical and mental decline and dulling. But if one chooses to do the necessary work to maintain sharpness, then he/she can enjoy “youth” and vitality for a greater number of years. In my opinion, yoga is one of the best ways to achieve such a state of mind and body.
you are very right on i think shawna, you, young lady, should age beautifully and gracefully 😉
Thank you, kindly. I’ll accept that blessing with gratitude. 🙂
1999 is for a very different poem then the one I did! But it links to the ideas in the introduction
It WAS different! But I thought it fit the prompt well. Thanks for joining in.
“Cooling of language”? What kind of idiotic notion is that? Bring the heat.
1999 is like the frigging stone age to me now. Good riddance.
Ha! No one could ever accuse you of writing without heat, Shay. 🙂
Shawna, it was such a nice prompt I put my 1969 poem aside, and did something new. (Agh!) It’s not so great, but glad to participate. K.
I’ve never read anything of yours that wasn’t great, so I hardly believe your claim. But I’m quite familiar with that feeling. Particularly today, under pressure. I couldn’t seem to write anything worthy of much more than a “decent” stamp. 😉
Ok, I humbly suggest you all thank me for not finding my journal from 1999. Mine flows with enough choking drivel as is. 😉 Great job on the prompt, Shawna. Shall we all be Dr. Frankensteins and recreate our poetic language from pieces of the past. What wonderful, beautiful, terrifying monsters we’ll create.
I invite, nay require, your monsters to come out and play.
haha, well thank you then…smiles.
I didn’t think *you* needed an invitation. 🙂
This was a very different kind of poem for me, different than anything else I think I’ve ever written. While taking my little trip down Memory Lane and reviewing some of the notable events of 1999, I was drawn to write this, even though the particular event didn’t have so much significance for me at the time. But, when it comes to my muse, these days I’m happy to play Follow-the-Leader. Heck, I’m just happy she shows up occasionally! Looking forward to reading some other little trips back in time. Thanks for a great prompt as always here at the Pub! 🙂
“This was a very different kind of poem for me, different than anything else I think I’ve ever written.” I’m excited to hear this! I think it’s important for a writer to step outside of his/her comfort zone. I’m glad you followed your muse off the beaten path. 🙂
Great prompt, Shawna, but I’m not going to make it, I think. My poems take forever to write, it’s just my obsession with editing. But I’m reading a lot of good poems!
No problem if you can’t squeeze anything out. But I’m a huge fan of tiny poems. So I’d love to see a haiku, senryu, or mini-poetic-burst. I love taking one thought or phrase and really compacting my creative imagery and word play. I’m always amazed at how much louder a little poem can speak than a big one, sometimes. Don’t you find that to be true?
alright poets, heading to bed…be back in the morning to catch up with the overnights….
I can’t tell you how happy I was when my husband reminded me of the hour loss and suggested the girls and I stay home from church today. I was exhausted! Can’t wait to see what all you night owls were up to in the wee hours.
I was a couple of years separated and feeling much better about myself…a real time of growth and fun…at last.
nice…know that felt good…smiles….
It sure did…it had been a long haul…
“feeling much better about myself” … Always a welcomed change. Oh how our self-esteem fluctuates depending on our external and internal temperatures and weather.
You are so right about that self-esteem fluctuating, Shawna. Thanks for a great prompt and the eye-opening quote from Robert Bly…
I also love how you responded to everyone who left a comment here…very nice of you…albeit time-consuming…
Long several days, but so appreciated your article Shawna. I remember that year I got dsl and a big new desktop computer and monitor which was huge. I played with that and my expectations that in this millennium we’d all be riding in airships to the stars!
..riding in airships to the stars sounds wonderful…
Ha ha ha! That’s hilarious. 🙂 Makes me think of that Back to the Future movie in which everyone was driving hover cars, flying through the sky, etc.
Goodness, we just got DSL for the first time about 2 years ago! … I remember when I first got a giant monitor at work, and then the upgrade to having two linked monitors. I was so very important and connected to the right IT people. 🙂
I found this difficult and didn’t have time to do it justice, so I skewed it just a bit. Not sure if you could call it an original poem: possibly not.
oh i loved it..
I’m a huge fan of skew. Thanks for playing along even if it was difficult and not your cup of tea. You’re a trooper.
I’m old, I don’t remember what happened last week, much less in 1999 — I was 52 in ’99, all I remember I made it to 2000… but this old man did offer a piece here as a small blow against the “cooling” of language — hope it’s “hot” enough…
Smashing! I’m thrilled to hear there’s another “hot” piece floating around out there. I really thought more people might go in that direction.
I hear you on not remembering last week. My husband asked me a question about something that may or may not have happened last week, and I replied that I did not remembering a single event or nugget of information about that particular 7-day burst of time. I forget everything! The only reason I remember ’99 at all is that I know I got married that year and also graduated from college.
This is my first offering for this site, I hope to come back again!
Wander
warm welcome Wander…hope you’re enjoying the place..
Thanks for having my back “this morning,” Claudia. (I have no idea what time it is in Germany.) Three children don’t respond well when mommy says, “Girls, don’t interrupt me. I have to read poetry for the next 24 to 48 hours! Love ya.” 🙂 Plus, after snacking on all that poetry last night, I slept extremely well and hard. Can’t wait for my morning (pot of) coffee, though.
How do you all drink your coffee? Or do you have a different beverage preference entirely?
great to see you here wander…
Good morning, Brian. It looks like things were hopping around here while I was sleeping and tending to little ones! 🙂 Thanks for keeping things going.
Yay! How exciting. So have you been reading the poems submitted here for a while? Your name seems familiar. We’re so glad to have you. 🙂
wander has been around for a bit…but not here, he def knows how to twist a story…been reading him for a bit, so it took me back a step when he said it was his first time…i am just used to seeing him around…
Nice work!!!
Thanks, Nikhil. Everyone has done such a great job with the prompt. Headed off to read yours now. 🙂
Okay, friends. Someone has to write me another poem. I can’t handle the number of submissions hanging at 49. First of all, I hate nines. Second of all, I hate odd numbers (unless they’re multiples of five). But I can’t tell you how delighted I will feel if we 1) break into the fifties and 2) end on an even number.
Thanks in advance. Love you. 🙂
Yay for Viv! Lucky #50. 🙂 Thank you!
ha just coming in from being at a baseball game all afternoon…got a little sun and could really use a nap but…will catch up first…smiles.
Hope you’re able to squeeze in a nap before dinner, B. Sunday afternoon sleep is the best, isn’t it?
it most def is…ha…nah my boys def wont let that happen…maybe an early bed time…
I’m headed to church; I’ll check in when I get back to see if there are any latecomers.