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John Clare was the reincarnation of Lord Byron and William Shakespeare.
Or at least that was what this poet claimed, during his years in an asylum in Essex, in the mid-1800s. “I’m John Clare now,” he claimed to a newspaper editor, “I was Byron and Shakespeare formerly.”
Despite this setback – which bedevilled him in the latter part of his life – John Clare’s reputation has grown throughout the 20th century.
Because of his peasant background, his naturalistic influence went beyond the Romantics – besides love poems and political commentary, he wrote about the natural environment, folk life, and the rural world. And yet, his works also showed a linguistic capability and philosophical depth equal to any of his contemporaries.
History now accords Clare the distinction of being, alongside Wordsworth, one of the most influential practitioners of classic poetical style. He is now regarded as the most important naturalistic poet of his generation.
John Clare was born in 1793 to a peasant family in Helpston, Northamptonshire. While he did learn basic reading and writing, his family’s poverty forced him to start working at seven, herding animals.
Thankfully for future generations of naturalistic poets, Clare discovered James Thomson’s “The Seasons” in his teens, and this inspired him to begin writing poems and sonnets himself.
His first collection, “Poems Descriptive of Rural Life and Scenery” was published partially in desperation, because his parents were about to be evicted from their home. In a piece of luck, the local bookseller happened to be the cousin of the owner of a publishing firm who had earlier published the works of John Keats.
Clare’s book, backed by such a publisher of distinction, became a bestseller, and was followed by another book, “Village Minstrel and Other Poems”. Rustic poets were in vogue, and it brought him some celebrity in London, and wealthy patrons granted him the princely sum of £45 a year.
In addition to his rustic poems, he was also known for his sonnets, which in part popularized a different structure from the more usual Shakespearian or Petrarchan forms.
I LOVE TO SEE THE SUMMER
by John Clare
I love to see the summer beaming forth
And white wool sack clouds sailing to the north
I love to see the wild flowers come again
And mare blobs stain with gold the meadow drain
And water lillies whiten on the floods
Where reed clumps rustle like a wind shook wood
Where from her hiding place the Moor Hen pushes
And seeks her flag nest floating in bull rushes
I like the willow leaning half way o’er
The clear deep lake to stand upon its shore
I love the hay grass when the flower head swings
To summer winds and insects happy wings
That sport about the meadow the bright day
And see bright beetles in the clear lake play
This type of sonnet has come to be known as a Clarian sonnet, and is composed of seven sequentially rhymed couplets – aa bb cc dd ee ff gg – in pentameter, or ten syllables per line.
This structure is what underpins my own poem, “When I Died”, which is a standalone work but also a companion piece to my poem “The First Deadly Sin” a blank-verse sonnet in the voice of a vampire. In “When I Died”, a Clarian sonnet, the victim responds.
- John Clare Memorial (Richard Croft).
… And what became of John Clare? Alas, the fashion for rustic poets did not last, and Clare’s popularity faded. Clare’s financial troubles and struggles with his publishers placed him under enormous stress, and he was admitted to a mental asylum in High Beach, Epping, in 1837. After escaping from the asylum in 1841, he was admitted into Northamptonshire General Asylum. There he lived until the end of his days, continuing to write poetry as his health permitted.
Ironically, the asylum poems have come to be regarded as among his best known works.
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sam, really well written article…i love all the back ground that you give…i enjoyed the form…maybe a bit too much, grins…i did not break it too bad hopefully…lol
at work so i will be around in a bit and return comments…
Thanks Brian, will be back later tonight to peruse the poetry!
And boy, did you rock that form… and what an immortal invention, the idontgivea meter – very cool!
To my shame I have to confess that I had never even heard of John clare, let alone his sonnet form. Thank you so much for stretching my poetic horizons yet again.
No shame… He was largely forgotten after his time, but re-discovered in the 20th century, and so his renown has been growing only recently.
I want his family home! Wonderful article Sam…I’m off to try!
You’re still alive after NaPoWriMo? I am impressed!
You’re still alive after NaPoWriMo and wrote TWO Clarian sonnets? Not only am I impressed, I bow!
Welcome to the pub, folks… it’s my pleasure to host another Form For All, and I’m looking forward to a serendipity of sonnets when I knock off from work tonight!
love the article sam and the form is def. a fun form to write…my clarian sonnet is inspired by the movie “jumper” that i saw lately…so…couldn’t help that the meter got a bit upside down with all the jumping across continents you know….smiles
That movie’s on my To Watch list, Claudia… I’m really interested in how you’ll interpret it!
I did my research on John Clare and his sonnet, and wrote one, RETALIATION–which I posted before the rush; but now I see it must also adhere to only ten syllables a line, the passionate pentameter. So, maybe I will write another one that specifically meets the parameters.
Glenn, you are definitely ambitious… Looking forward to it!
Rules were made to be broken – as long as the poem flows, all is forgiven. 😉
Loved the article Sam. I thought I could write something quickly but the task I have given myself is one of the most challenging I have ever sketched. I will be by to read the links and “try, try, try” to get a draft done; but if I don’t manage it, I will post when I finish it.
I like that you are introducing us to sonnets with this particular type. I believe we should take them in types because to throw all the sonnet forms at everyone would be too much information (at least it would for me). I am also in the process of constructing my own [which I hope is unique].
Thanks Gay! I figure there are so many types of sonnets out there, it would be good to try them out one by one.
And I do hope to see your form. There was a time early on when I thought I’d invented the rhymed couplet sonnet – no such luck, I was beaten by John Clare by a few centuries!
Looks like it will have to be a later date. Inundated myself with research and didn’t get it together. Spent today taking Ron to city for doctors. I’ll try to get by and read others. So sorry. Hard compressing my thoughts lately.
I enjoyed this challenge… thanks Semaphore. Hope you don’t mind the enjambed lines.
Oh awesome. I can’t wait to read it.
But I love enjambed lines, especially delicious on croissants!
I do love these “in form” articles and prompts: they always set me off on a treasure hunt to research more deeply the given form. Clare’s sonnets seem to fulfil the criteria of Shakespearean or Petrarchan, with the difference that he fails to “turn” for a volta. In some ways this could be easier, and I shall certainly have a go, though I may be some time….. Thank you Sam.
Thanks for stopping by, Viv. Sometimes the Clarian is ‘easier’ than the conventional sonnet forms, but also more difficult in the sense that, unless you’re careful, the ear hears those close rhymes as a little contrived. It is a feat to get it so that the rhyme isn’t intrusive.
Does that mean NO near and half rhymes allowed?
Don’t get me started! I made the classic error of reading other contributions before starting my own, and (mea culpa) left one or two rather grumpy comments. Metre happens to be one of my hobby horses, so my poem wrote itself.
Sonnets are always really difficult for me, especially the restraints of iambic pentameter, but this form really intrigues me, Sam,. How can I turn down a form invented by a mad rustic poet who though he was the reincarnations of Shakespeare? Impossible. Let me go brood over it awhile.
i am personally rather fond of mad poets…hehe
That’s called high self esteem. ;_)
Joy, that Clarian sonnet. Absolutely. Blew. Me. Away.
Thanks Sam. Your comment was really appreciated.
Actually, Sam, I think I like the sonnet better in the proper pentameter form. We write, we live, and hopefully learn, right?
You let the poem flow, and see where it goes. It’s always a learning process for me, definitely.
Oh my word. I’ve been spending the most ridiculous amount of time trying to write in iambic pentameter after reading Brian’s footnote on his blog. But you didn’t ask for that, did you?
No, we try to keep things simple here at Clarian Sonnets 101. 😉
I gave it a whirl! Read it and weep. But, please… no wailing!
lol…no wailing! you always make me laugh….I thiink I’m gonna give it a try as well.
Go for it!
Went for it! Just posted.
Yay!
Nice work, there!
Somehow it feels as if the poetic universe is reaching out to give me a bit of a kick in the pants, especially after the poem I wrote and posted on my blog yesterday bemoaning my attempts at writing some of the more intimidating poetic forms (sonnets included.) I will give it a try and see what I can come up with this evening.
Thanks for stopping by! Compared with other sonnet forms, the Clarian is pretty straightforward, which is one of the reasons I really like it.
Fascinating piece about Clare .. thanks for that Sam … will certainly look at more of his work. Away visiting my daughter and her husband for a few days but will try and find some time to meet this wonderful challenge
have fun on your visit with them…and glad you stopped in even being away…
Nice of you to stop by, will look out for that!
Well it boiled through my brain while I slept! So here it is 🙂
Awesome article- I had never heard of this poet before and certainly never this form. I’m very uneducated when it come to ‘poetic form’ or history- that’s why I love #formforall- it’s like going to poetry school! Great job Sam- just posting my effort now- again….not sure if I met the criteria, I DID find it hard- but hey- a challenge has to be met right?
A challenge is never easy – otherwise it’s a cakewalk 🙂 …You did a stellar job.
Hi Sam ~ Thanks for the article and form. Tried my hand at it; not sure if I got it correctly ~
You definitely rocked it!
Thanks Sam 🙂
Sam, I was just searching for something to guide my write tonight. Thanks for the incredible background information. I hadn’t heard of the form before and now I feel eager to try. I’ll be back.
Actually, Beth, you took to that form so easily, as I was pretty sure you would.
“Despite this setback” … You really cracked me up with this, Sam. 🙂
Whew, thank you! Wasn’t sure whether the tone of the article would work, but I’m glad it did to some degree.
Sam, thanks for hosting tonight. Pretty fun prompt and always fun learning a new form. Thanks again.
Thanks for trying it out, you did an absolutely credible job!
Had some fun with this prompt 🙂
http://newviewfromhere.wordpress.com/2012/05/03/why-he-had-to-hitchhike-home/
yes you did…lots of fun…ha
Definitely didn’t see that last line coming! Thanks for that!
It was nice to hear about John Clare, he was one of my favourite poets when I was a teenager… not sure why? Maybe because that’s when I wrote rhyming poetry, I don’t do that much these days.
I ebb and flow in terms of structured verse and free verse. It all depends on the mood, doesn’t it?
woohoo…19 clarian sonnets already…looking forward to read…
I must admit, I’m amazed that this many tried it. I think dVerse now has singlehandedly put the Clarian sonnet back on the map!
Hi Sam, very interesting article and interesting project. I think mine was somewhat influenced by yours – in terms of the death part, though also somewhat (very much) different, especially in terms of the elegance part. (Ha.) Thanks for the challenge. K.
Ah Karin, you had me sighing so much over your poem.
Well folks, I slept at 2.30am this morning finishing the article, so I’m headed to bed. Fantastic reading tonight… will catch up on anything new tomorrow!
Looked like fun, had fun, but don’t be brutal, Sonnets of any flavor are strangers to any skill I might have. Appreciate the host and post semaphone 1. I had to get in the mood to write this, so sleeping should be no issue. Will have to read on morrow. Hope you understand……
Totally, Henry, and thanks for taking the time to stop by!
Great idea about trying all the sonnet forms. I have written a lot of the poetic forms but not ihis one. Form is fun. Thanks Semaphore.
Yes, form is fun – especially since once I understand the form, I feel totally free to bend it. 🙂
Thanks to Viv – apart from being a wonderful poet, she does her research! She very kindly pointed out something about meter that I should elucidate and build on…
A “pure” Clarian sonnet, if there is such a thing, would be thus: rhymed couplets in an iambic pentameter, preferably on a naturalistic or romantic theme, without any punctuation.
Yes, you read that right.
John Clare followed a number of self-imposed strictures in his sonnets – in fact, in all his poems. The foremost of which was: he didn’t use punctuation.
This was important to him, more so than any meter or rhyme. Some of his publishers and editors, offended, put punctuation into his poems… and he fought back (those were the struggles I alluded to in the article). Accurate modern renditions of his poems respect his wishes, and drop the punctuation.
In the spirit of John Clare’s claim to be the creator of the Shakespearian sonnet (ahem!), I felt we could relax the rules a bit, especially since Clare himself didn’t write them down – relax the iambic, relax the ‘no punctuation’ – to make it easier for people to try it out.
But if you wanted to try out a new sonnet – in iambic, with no punctuation! – I’d love to see it!
I rose to your challenge – my markless mark II Clarian sonnet is now posted
You definitely rose to the challenge…. Bravo!
Well that just endears him to me more (and will drive Karin crazy..;_) –just joking, k.)–I write everything first draft no punctuation–I hate having to decide where to stick it in too as I like the way words can morph amazingly just flowing along and recombining in different ways to the eye, making for a lot of varied and more open meanings. Anyone reading mine, know it had absolutely no punctuation, not even capitols, before it hit blogger and I cleaned it up–so feel free to take it all mentally out. Off to see what viv has done in this direction.
I actually use (or not use) punctuation in my poetry quite consciously. If I need to predetermine something in the reader’s mind, I use punctuation to help specify it. If I need the ambiguity, I leave it off.
Yes, you have to use some judiciously I think or it’s too easily garbled in the mind of the reader. And obviously, more formal poems need more formal structure–that’s why it’s so delightful to think of Clare just flinging it all to the winds in a sonnet.
really interesting history and sample, thanks! enjoyed it, sorry can’t contribute this round, but will see what some others have wrote; thanks again 😉
Great that you dropped in! There are a lot of excellent poems in this round, some I wish I’d written, in fact… so it’s worth taking a gander. 🙂
Interesting and testing, this prompt, plus a sonnet from a master: what more could we ask?
Glad you could stop by, David!
alright…i am off on a trip…be back tomorrow for poetics…will return comment to any that read mine between here and there when i get in late tonight…
Have a good trip, Brian… we’ll open a new keg while you’re gone, if you don’t mind 🙂
Safe travels, boss.
thanks hedge and joy…was a great day…had a great time…saw some friends we had not in over 10 years…and a lot of fun with our boys…got in around midnite…and hit the days treaders…now off to bed…see you tomorrow poets…
Loving the format. Sadly will be a little late for this gathering. I need some quiet time to write and past two days were not, and am working long hours next two. Will see what I can compose between now and Open Link! Thanks for sharing this, Sam. Can’t wait to try one!
No problem, Ginny, looking forward to what you might put together!
Well, it’s a while since I contributed to the pub’s activities, but was inspired reading this very good article as well as Stuart’s contribution. So I thought, if he, then I should at least try. So I just did!
Good for you! I find that doing sonnets are like weight training – an excellent workout for the poetic biceps and triceps.
Enjoyed this form! Have to head off to a weekend training again, but I’ll be back to check out everyone’s sonnet on Monday. Have a good weekend!
Thanks, and have a good weekend as well!
just wanted to say hi.. we’re celebrating my son’s 20th birthday today…so will be back a bit later to read…
Have fun Claudia–yeesh–that’s a mile marker all right. Have an extra piece of cake(or whatever) for me, and Happy Birthday to your son.
thanks hedge…yeah…it’s a mile marker indeed…and will eat an extra piece of strawberry cake for you…mpfhmmm…smiles
A brilliant milestone, I hope it was a fun time for all! (Psst, I love strawberry cake…)
oh yeah…i could use some strawberry cake too…smiles. happy birthday to your son…
Amazing article and thanx for this challenge.
Thank you, I’m glad you stopped by to give it a try!
Got in under the wire once again.
I learned so much from this prompt, Sam. Thank you.
That was an amazing piece of writing Lydia, and a theme that I might want to use myself in a future poem. Filing away for reference! 🙂
excellent job lydia…
Thank you, Sam! I am honored by your comment, most definitely. 🙂
Thank you, Brian. Glad you’re having a good trip!
Loved the article Sam!
Was finally able to complete my Clarian Sonnet (Thought it might not be complying with the syllable count rule ) . I thoroughly enjoyed this FormForAll and got to know about the reincarnation of Lord Byron and Shakespeare 🙂
Good for you! I actually relaxed the rules for Clarian sonnets here (see above re: Clare’s obsession with not punctuating his poems) so what’s a syllable or two between friends?
How can I prevail upon mine hosts to extend the closing hour for FormForAll? Another 24 hours would do it. Except for Open Night, it is the dVerse activity I’d most like to participate in. As it is, because of the time difference and the way my life is structured, I am seldom in time to be included, and once again I’m not. But here it is anyway: http://passionatecrone.blogspot.com.au/2012/05/high-care.html
A touching sonnet, Rosemary, I’m glad you were able to get it in…
I’m grateful to have learned about the Clarian sonnet, of which I had been shamefully ignorant. I have always regarded sonnets as the most daunting of forms. This version finally gave me a breakthrough.