My name is Claudia Schoenfeld and after a long weekend with pool fun and lots of sports I’m happy to tend our 46th OpenLinkNight.
On sunday evening, I went to a Poetry Slam in Basle– 6 poets, each one performs a text of max. 6 minutes, a randomly chosen 6 people in the audience vote (this can be poetry experts or someone who hasn’t read a single poem in their life)– the three poets with the most points perform a second piece and then the whole audience votes by applauding loudest for their champion.
Of course the text counts, also rhyme, rhythm but also personality. Does the Poet interact, connect with the people? Some Poets ignore their listeners or, if you copy it to the blogworld, their readers by throwing poetry upon them and then walk away without listening to their reply and without taking the chance to talk to the people by returning comments for example.
If a poet in a Slam doesn’t manage to interact with the audience, he will get bad votes because the people will feel it, if the text isn’t written for the audience, people will feel it as well and won’t listen. In a Slam, you can’t hide but look the people right in the eye and see in their reflection what works and what doesn’t work.
You can’t really have eye contact in blogworld you say? I think in a way you can, and this is by commenting and visiting back those that took the time to read your poem. We really want to encourage this type of interaction and conversation.
This is also one of the reasons why we allow just one poem per person on an OpenLinkNight– don’t just throw your poems out there but go and listen to others as well, take the time to write them a few lines, listen with an open ear and open mind, even if you’re writing poetry for years already, we all continually learn from each other and this is why we gather in a pub in a relaxed atmosphere. We talk and listen, drink a beer and then change tables and talk and listen to someone else.. this is where the life and the fun comes in– and this is why I love to be here so much…
and if you’re new, here’s how it works..
- Post a poem to your blog,
- Link your poem to dVerse (1 per blog, please) by clicking on the Mr. Linky button below.
- This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read. Once you have pasted your poem’s blog URL and entered your name, click Submit. Don’t worry if you don’t see your name right away.
- Don’t forget to let your readers know where you’re linking up and encourage them to participate by including a link to dVerse in your blog post.
- Visit as many other poems as you like or can, commenting as you like or can, as well.
- Spread the word on the poems you enjoy if you’d like. Feel free to tweet and share on the social media of your choice.
Like much the slam concept…and your advice to poets. Thanks for being here, Claudia. You are a definite charismatic presence!
“You can’t really have eye contact in blogworld you say? I think in a way you can, and this is by commenting and visiting back those that took the time to read your poem. We really want to encourage this type of interaction and conversation.”
I agree Claudia … having your poem up there is one thing, but the interaction amongst writers who quickly become friends is the reason I keep coming back here every week. I agree with the Slam concept as well! Here’s to Eye contact – and a round of drinks on the bar – on me!
yep…here’s to eye contact…cheers and great you made it.. happy new relationship to you..if you can say something like this…smiles
Of course you can! *grin*
Gee, Claudia, was it something I said? Dang!
thanks for being here jackie…you’re def. charismatic presence as well …smiles
Shoot! Thought I blew it, when I didn’t see a reply.. Whoa!…my next post will be about “impatience”…#scampersoffblushing
I’ve been away from OLN for a long while now … go back a poem or two in my archives to find out why – new relationships take up a lot of time! LOL Anyhow, I’m back … 1 minute past 3:00 and I’m at 17 already … WOW … *race track music in the background* Aaaaaaand – they’re OFF!
Glad to be back! On to the POETRY!
glad you had fun at the slam…ours is a bit different….but similar…
there are any number of poets in the opening round…then the random audience members vote…narrow the field to say 6…then again to the finals…and thn again to a champion…
the set up is def different whereever you go…there is one country where they throw roses to their choice of champion…how cool is that?
i like the allusions to blogging as well…have always said its a relational sport. get emails all the time from people wanting to grow their readers, but few that want to put the relational work in to do it…there really is no secret.
you want comments with substance, leave comments with substance. dont expect it if all you leave is ‘good verse’…if you want comments, you have to give comments. interact.
Totally agreed Brian … I enjoy the comments I have received on my blog as a part of this community, and try very hard to meet as many of the poets as possible. Love this group!
if they ever start throwing roses on slam champions..i def. will sign up for that slam tomorrow..smiles
Hoping to make up for lost time this week…we REALLY have to talk about the Poetopia Islands a little more seriously! 😉 Awesome pep talk and encouraging words, Claudia…Cheers all!
haha…down with the poetic islands…loved your rant today tash
Great intro Claudia.. every week in the poems I read here I find new ways of expressing an idea, and emotion, an atmosphere.. it’s the variety of voices that makes the pub rock. Coming up for the anniversary pretty soon I think.. 🙂 Cheers all!
yep…it’s the variety of voices…so many different people, different background, different style…makes the magic for me as well becky…and great having you here dear lady
always a pleasure, Claudia.. and must go for a drink inthe real world one of these days – when we are both in the same country!
such a great virtual slam you have built here… off to get the reading party started!
woohoooo!!
Hi everyone, my poem entry for this open link night was written last week for the “stream of consciousness writing” challenge. I was too late too post my entry confused my EST time. So, it’s here now and I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for open mic. Pam
great..looking forward to read pam..
yes, Claudia! why I love dverse soooo much… no egos please… we’re all in the same boat, and (I’m pretty sure) want the same thing… to bring not just our own work, but poetry itself up to where it should be.. in the big leagues
your piece today played def. in the big league anthony…loved it…
Evening Claudia, I’ll have my usual please, only a double tonight, it’s been a long day! Fantastic crowd in again, only 6 minutes after opening and it was already 38 deep at the bar!! Have a great night. To anyone who is reading, please bear with me, I will do my best to get around to reading and commenting on as many as poss, only i have poorly kiddies so it may take a couple of days!
smiles..double whateveritis is on the way…and no stress vanessa..hope the kiddies are well soon..
Thank you… i’ve always like a little glass of ‘whateveritis’ my fave xx
Supper time. Back in a bit to read everyone. Have a good night at the pub all
great to see you bren…
bit late in the comment section..just stood spellbound with my daughter on the balcony and watched the brave rose that climbed up the pear tree to get her rosey faces sunbathed…how awesome is that… happy openlinknight everyone…
Thanks, Claudia! Looking forward to an evening of reading and commenting. Cheers, everyone.
cheers ma’am…
Hello all, sorry first link was last week’s! The second is the right link.
Looking forward to reading some great poetry tonight!
fixed your link man…
Thanks! There’s only so much I can do on a smartphone!
Just got back from work… will have to unwind my mind a bit, and then it’ll be off to the races…
So true, Claudia, and while I could never have the courage to physically confront an audience that way and be judged, there is indeed very valuable interaction and learning going on here online when people read and cross-comment and get to appreciate a wide variety of poets and their differing approaches. Thanks to all who so generously read and support my work, and know I value it–and I will try to do the same. And thanks for hosting tonight, Claudia–hard to believe it’s number 46!
yep…number 46…it’s awesome isn’t it… and hedge, you’re leaving so thoughtful and meaningful comments around blogworld…never just something wishi-washi…really appreciate this…
Thank you girl–and you do much the same, only with a much higher volume, so back at ya.
Leo, if you stop in…your link just died….
Hiya Folks! I’m all for poetry slams as long as they don’t throw bricks!
Thank you, Claudia, and thank you dversepoets for existing and giving us a poetry platform.
And no bricks…
Lady Nyo
def. no bricks…smiles
ha the crowd will def know how they like you (or not) at a slam…if you rhyme and they can figure out the next word before you say it…having a room full scream it when you try to say will def knock you off your game…smiles…
but no bricks here…smiles…
I’ve never been to a poetry slam. Sounds like great fun!
Thanks as always for hosting this! Here’s my Wedded Limerick..
madeleine you should go to the nuyorican poets cafe in nyc…awesome place..
Excellent analogy, Claudia. I have a great deal going on right now, my muse is missing and I came to work armed only with my cell phone. I am going to be the audience this week, reading and tweeting the poetry that moves me most. I know you are busy but if you need a breather, grab a stool and I’ll buy you a glass of wine. *smile*
a glass of red wine and a chat with you beth…this sounds awesome..
lovely lovely Claudia and so true – i’m ready to enjoy the poetry! http://www.presssendpoetry.com/2010/11/lunch-with-my-great-aunt-alice.html
just about to read yours…page already open..smiles
Great advice Claudia,
I have done both open mic readings as well as blog readings and now am giving Soundcloud a try… spoken word poetry, where you record your voice and share. So many ways now and it’s great to engage with your listeners for sure.
Have a great night!
soundcloud is cool…didn’t record one of my pieces for quite a while..
Thank you Claudia. Wish I could have been there with you. I’ve never been to one. But I enjoy every week here. Wish I had Brian’s talent of being able to read fast, fathom deeply and comment on everyone. We all do have people we like to read, and when I miss my favorites it’s like going too long without seeing a friend. Thank you everyone for being here.
ah would love to go with you to a poetry slam…but this one was all in german and even swiss german..smiles
Whew, Swiss German – can you understand it Claudia? Love the sound of it, but find it hard to understand. Especially in poetry! 🙂
yep…can understand it…working in switzerland..so have to understand it..smiles
As usual , the only writing i did was for Open Link night !
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whew…cheers to that!
Here I am! Middle of the pack, as usual! A new one for you this week; fresh off the press. Enjoy!
we like them fresh…smiles…
Great job tending the bar and hosting the slam tonight, Claudia! Wise words, well spoken. I might take longer than usual to visit all the poems this week, since looking at the PC screen for long is bringing on headaches. But I will get around to as many as I can over the next few days.
Wonderful input, Claudia. I promise I will visit and comment but right now I just had my eyes dilated and can’t see….but I’m asking folks, even if you don’t comment on my very short poem, could you participate in a Poll to help me chose a title for my first published poetry book? Thank you.
oh my…hope the eyes adjust back well victoria…smiles…
Thanks, the eyes are fine, but I’m having wordpress problems now…when I try to publish a comment on a wordpress site it just disappears. Any ideas, anyone.
I think I figured it out. If you comment from Mr. Linky and the blog you’re visiting automatically fills in your info, it adds the extension to your poem. It worked when I deleted the extension and just put in my blog address.
And I apologise to those who didn’t get a comment back for OLN, the Memorial Day Prompt or possibly the stream of consciousness prompt. It is my practice whenever possible to return visits to every one who comments on my work and to do the same for every poem posted in response to a prompt I’ve given.
threw in my vote and hope your eyes are soon getting better victoria
Excellent set-up Claudia! Wish I was there at the slam with you! Thanks for being the hostess with the most-est! Love, el Mosk
smiles..you know they’re doing radioactivity checks on the participants…hehe
I do not remember if I already posted today, I’m getting absent minded in retirement! But I have been going through the boxes in the closet and found a poem from 33 years ago that has a slammy atmosphere to it and is about a bar scene. I think I am ready to let other poets see it. Previous to today, it has only been read aloud.
nice…i’m all up for bar scene poems with a slammy atmosphere…
Hello everyone!! I’ll be playing catch-up this evening. Dinner first!! Smiles and thanks for hosting Claudia!!
nice ..enjoy the dinner hannah..
Thanks for tending tonight, Claudia. I think we have wonderful interaction on this site. I know I look forward each week to the comments and exchange of words with the other poets and writers here. Have never done a Slam, as audience or participant–a little intimidated at the thought of standing and reading in front of others!
Will visit as long as I can. Severe thundershowers, heavy winds and maybe hail being predicted just to our west, so may have to leave for awhile if it heads this way.
Heading in to read while I have the chance! See you inside!
stay safe in the thunderstorm ginny..
I’ll be back later to do some reading. Happy Tuesday everyone! 🙂
Oh Gawd its morning quick coffee STAT!!!!!!! Ill be reading over the next few days… n thnx to all that comment
good morning and enjoy your coffee adrian..waving across the continents..
Coffee is not having desired effect… waves back
Once again, the highlight of my week! Long live dVerse pub. The next round of drinks is on me!
great having you here martyn..
I have a “Vanilla” poem tonight, but it’s probably not what you think. 😉
{ami}
http://sundrysumthins.wordpress.com/2012/05/29/vanilla/
ok poets…bed time for me… back in the morning for some more reading..
Morning over here. 🙂 I got mine in today. Gonna go hop about now. 🙂
Hi Claudia…no poem for me tonight, however, will read some later. This place rocks. Thanks.
Hi, gang! Looking forward to trying to read all of your wonderful posts, although I’ll confess I have never been able to actually finish, since so many of them are worth reading and pondering for comment.
This week my own post is a preview of a poem that will be offered to the public Wednesday 5/30 — but you have the secret link so you can see it first TODAY! Hope you will find it to be fun. It’s a reworking of Little Red Riding Hood. First of a series, with the second one to be a retelling of the Three Little Pigs and the third likely to be about the boy who cried wolf. All from the poor, misunderstood wolf’s POV.
I have always enjoyed playing Devil’s Advocate. Just don’t start mistaking me for the Fellow Himself! LOL
nice man…i will be over in a minute to check it out….oo a sneak preview too…smiles…
having some pretty nasty internet issues here…so if i am a bit slower getting around this week…i will be there…
Thanks for hosting tonight Claudia, as usual, some outstanding verse. People just know how to bring it when linking to D’verse.
Glad to be here again … It’s been fun!
alright, chances are i may not be back online until morning…sadly i have to leave the party early and head back home to the land of no net…see you bright and early though…smiles.
hope you can solve the internet issue…but then..being without net every once and a while can be relaxing as well…
Hi Claudia — my day kind of hard, so just getting in now and haven’t had time to read anything yet. Will do but probably not much till a.m. (our time.) Thanks for all the encouragement and wise words. k.
hope next day’s a bit better…sleep well k..
Dear Claudia, thanks. Did get to a few, all wonderful. K.
We’re having violent electrical and hail storms here tonight so I’ve had to turn ff my pc due to power spikes–just got on for a sec to say thanks to all who’ve been by, and will be around tomorrow to continue reading and commenting,
eeeww…hope everything’s fine and no damage done by the storm..
Thankfully the worst of it missed us–there was softball sized hail with this one and it would have flattened the garden, which would have been horrible considering the tomatoes are already big enough to drool over! Still rumbling out there though, and another one due through tonight. That time of year.
good morning… thinkineedacoffeefirst and be on the trail in a bit…smiles
Got home late. Brain is rubberish. Will have to read on my Wednesday. Sweet dVerse dreams. My post? I hope your mood is kind. 🙂
great stuff out on the trail…off to work now and back to read more in the evening…
in early in the AM before the fam gets up…still no net at the house…so will catch up and then be around in a bit…
Thanks Claudia and to all at dVerse for creating this wonderful place!
Anna :o]
I have awarded this blog an Inspiring Blog Award http://marousia.wordpress.com/2012/05/30/inspiring-blog-award/
thank you marousia…smiles…
my pleasure
Your observations really hit home this week.
The internet has drastically changed what it means to be a poet, or even a writer. The days of countless quiet hours and a few readings a week/month/year (depending on who you are) are a thing of the past. The online interaction between writer and reader has become as large a part, if not larger, then the art itself.
I struggle to find equilibrium between writing and social interaction, but I am confident that as time passes I’ll be able to gain my balance. As for now, I do my best. It’s quite humbling when I think of how many others (like myself) are also struggling to find that balance, and so any comment I receive is a cherished gift of someone’s time.
i know when i first started it took me months to figure out writing online and that balance so i def appreciate your tension there…
and as your readership grows dont ever lose that perspective…each comment is a treasure, each interaction an opportunity…that is why i amways return comments
I absolutely agree. That is why I had to reduced my number of posting per week, so I could devote time to talking with my readers and supporting fellow poets. When I posted several times a week, I felt buried and could not keep up. I even shamelessly resorted to speed commenting. A practice I’m not very proud to admit. LOL
ok poets…i’m late but finally made it back…playing some catch up..
Hi Claudia, great to hear that you went to a poetry slam! I would love to see you in action, so next time please let me know. I’ll be in the audience rooting for you. How did you do?
Just linked up a poem. I hope I am not too late. Tomorrow morning I’ll be spending time drinking poetry that others have served. Cheers. Q xx
oh you’re not late at all..just wanted to go to bed but will jump over to read yours first… and i didn’t perform, just listening and learning…smiles
Oh, but I could imagine you performing live poetry on stage though. Was the event in English or German? I would still like to go to such an event one day soon. 🙂
enjoyed being out on the trail…daughter asked me to watch flashdance with her, so we spent a lovely evening, laughed and cried– took me back to my teenage years a bit and i really want to do some dancing now…smiles…nah…tired and on the way to bed… thanks to all of you for playing and making the pub such a great and inspiring place to be… see you for FormForAll tomorrow..
Sounds like carpe noctem. 🙂
I’m late to the party–seems to be my refrain. This is actually a link to the memorial prompt–had to let is simmer for a few days.. looking forward to reading all the posts here 🙂
Sarav, when I clicked on your link it took me to a site to install Google chrome. Not sure where to go. I’ll try clicking on your comment.
i had to do it a second time victoria and it worked…
i am late getting back on the trail…just getting done work for the day…
clicking the link took me to google.de — tried it several times but couldn’t find your blog…
Nothing like being late to the game…if not last. Thanks for the opportunity!!
great you made it shawn..about to close the pub doors now…three…two…one…see you later..