Rebellion….to be ‘rebellious’….sounds good doesn’t it? The very thought of the word makes that adrenaline swell in our stomachs, makes us feel empowered, and maybe…just maybe, a little bit dangerous.
Well, happy Saturday to you all and welcome to Poetics!
My name is Stu McPherson, and I’m here to get you riled up, fired up, and get those poetic juices flowing!
Rebellion.
What does rebellion mean?
Well, to me it can mean a whole host of things, from political protest, to youth subcultures, to boundary pushing art, film, poetry, and fashion to name but a few. But it could be as simple as deciding to do something out of character, doing or saying something you feel strongly about. But the bottom line is…it is an action that breaks norms, whether these be personal, political, or those of the wider world.
Let me try and put this into some kind of real life perspective. My father used to work for a large pharmaceutical company. He worked there for what must have been 15 years.
He wasn’t one for really ‘conforming’ shall we say, and you could say he was quite eccentric….BUT, he worked and adhered to all the corporate rules dictated to him. This was until the day he was asked to wear a tie. At this point, and without saying a word, he got up,left, and never returned! (of course, I’m sure there were plenty of other factors involved in this, but I loved how it was the tie, the significance of ‘tie wearing’ that was the straw that broke the camels back)
NOW- some might see this as irresponsible- but for me, I see this kind of rebellion as inspirational (perfect for a poem!)
It’s also interesting to me that rebellion and the creative arts always seem to go hand in hand, like the perfect catalyst, the perfect vehicle.
For example, look at the recent news from Russia, where the punk rock band ‘Pussy Riot’ have been jailed for expressing political ideas & beliefs through music- even in our ‘progressive’ twenty first century
Painters have also been seen as ‘rebellious’ types throughout history- you just have to look at every single art movement and I guarantee you the artists at the forefront would have been considered risqué or dangerous….look at abstract expressionism for example, or the sensationalists.
SO- maybe to be an artist, to be a writer, to be a POET – maybe that is the definition of rebellion!
But what about the poetry? Let’s get to the POETRY!
For me, the poetry of Allen Ginsberg can be seen as a great example of ‘rebellious’ writing. He broke form, he broke literary rules, he wrote about political climates- he challenged the military, the government, and sexual repression.
Now to some he caused outrage, to some he was seen as genius, but one thing is for sure, he changed and influenced the shape of poetry to come, and particularly the free form.

Detail of poster with Allen Ginsberg from La Fabrika club in Prague by Martin Hassman 2008-04-3 used courtesy of Wikimedia Commons as per the licence agreement
Below is an extract from his poem ‘HOWL’ published in 1956 (it isn’t the complete piece as it’s quite long- BUT I would urge you to check it out)
HOWL by Allen Ginsberg
I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by madness, starving hysterical naked,
dragging themselves through the negro streets at dawn looking for an angry fix,
angelheaded hipsters burning for the ancient heavenly connection to the starry dynamo in the machinery of night,
who poverty and tatters and hollow-eyed and high sat up smoking in the supernatural darkness of cold-water flats floating across the tops of cities contemplating jazz,
who bared their brains to Heaven under the El and saw Mohammedan angels staggering on tenement roofs illuminated,
who passed through universities with radiant eyes hallucinating Arkansas and Blake-light tragedy among the scholars of war,
who were expelled from the academies for crazy & publishing obscene odes on the windows of the skull,
who cowered in unshaven rooms in underwear, burning their money in wastebaskets and listening to the Terror through the wall,
who got busted in their pubic beards returning through Laredo with a belt of marijuana for New York,
who ate fire in paint hotels or drank turpentine in Paradise Alley, death, or purgatoried their torsos night after night
with dreams, with drugs, with waking nightmares, alcohol and cock and endless balls,
incomparable blind streets of shuddering cloud and lightning in the mind leaping towards poles of Canada & Paterson, illuminating all the motionless world of Time between
SO- LETS BRING ALL OF THE ABOVE TOGETHER!
This week I want you to write a rebellious poem!
This might be:-
- A poem about a time you acted rebelliously-this could be from childhood,adolescence, adult life!
- A poem about an inspirational rebel (could be anyone from a friend to a family member to a historical figure)
- A poem that breaks FORM, write something in a completely unusual form that is a departure from your usual style- write REBELLIOUSLY!
- A political poem about rebellion- hell, there is ENOUGH going on in the world right now! Poverty? Elections? The environment? War? Write about something you feel strongly about
- A poem about rebellion that is ironic/funny/humorous (for example- oh my, I’ve been so REBELLIOUS, I ate a chocolate bar that has taken me 47 calories over my daily limit)
- You could even write a love poem about rebellion! Love can be rebellious right?
OK- so hopefully you can see my thought process with this. This is wide open, so be creative, be free with your words! (wow im starting to sound like a total hippie)
WHAT TO DO NEXT
- Write your poem and post it to your blog
- Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below
- This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read. Once you have pasted your poem’s blog URL and entered your name, click Submit. Don’t worry if you don’t see your name right away
- Read and comment on other peoples work to let them know it’s being read
- Share via your favourite social media platforms
- Above all- have fun!
Stu McPherson http://www.poemsofhateandhope.com
woohoo…lets set the place on fire…haha…ok maybe not we need it ready in a couple days but what a fun—or serious—topic for today stu…ginsberg def caught my attention early on have a few of his smaller works but there is a large collection i have my eye on…rebellion takes many forms though…so i will be interested in seeing where this one takes people….
ha ha- love it Brian…totally know what you mean about rebellion taking many forms- and that’s what I find so interesting about the concept…as for Ginsberg…i’ve kind of fallen in love with him…although the guy probably did enough drugs to kill a small horse- and love him or hate him…you cant deny his influence
Reblogged this on Susan Daniels Poetry and commented:
come rebel with us!
Good day to all! Always good to be behind the bar! I hope you all enjoy today’s prompt- and cant wait to see what you come up with….first things first- lets get a BEER
haha…yes…let’s get a beer and then start some writing rebellion in the pub…awesome prompt stu… looking forward to see what people will come up with
its ok to drink beer and eat chocolate cake at the same time isn’t it?
i think they go together…but then if you read laurie’s today you may wonder…
Just read Laurie’s poem…so good, so funny…. I just realised my chocolate cake had a cabbage and apple filling…oh (shit) ha ha 🙂
oh you are in trouble man….
good idea–heading to the ‘fridge.
I loved the prompt today–can’t wait to read what everyone cooked up!
Hey Susan! great to see you…and yeah…I CANT WAIT to read the responses!
Oh it always serves me right when I jump the gun and get all excitable! There is so much more inspiration in this prompt and I am already being haunted by some extra richness that could have been added to my poem for tonight…. so please forgive my rusty effort this evening, it’s been a while and i’ve been a bit swamped today – or was I just being a rebel and trying to do it my way rather than follow the rules and wait for the prompt?! Awesomeness abounds with this prompt Stu. I’ll take a Prosecco with a dash of pomegranate juice and a ridiculous umbrella to rebel against the bubbly snobs please Mr McP. Look forward to reading you all.
ha ha ha…Vanessa you PLUM… I read your poem and it was ACES…tattooing is/has always been synonymous with rebellion….erm and as for your drink.. I might just need to nip out or some pomegranate juice…cant you just have half a stella and a bottle of Smirnoff ice?..its what all the yoof drink…
I’m right classy me, it’s pommy and a brolly or i’m off. And much as it is kind of you to say so, my poem is total rust and squeaky joints and missing parts. But i’m okay with it, I still have my L plates on from time to time. And PLUM.. you are a gent as ever 🙂
i do like me some pom…and still waiting for the pic of your tattoo….
At least one of them can’t be photographed, ha ha! Another little one is hidden in the collection on my Pinterest board, whilst everything else on there is giving me inspiration for the biggie 😉 Pics of that one will follow once it is all done – not long now.
Off to co-mingle with the sheeples but will be with you all in spirit! Stu…needless to say your article resonated just a tad with me…and if I have my way, I’ll be back before you know it. Wish me luck creatives…I will not be assimilated (unless they have tequila!)
ha ha excellent tash! im just wondering what tequila and Natasha head might spell…..
I love your prompt, Stu. I demonstrated rebellion in several different ways…
Hey Laurie! excellent! can’t wait to see what you’ve come up with! 🙂
thanks, Stu… I really appreciate your comments
Love that about your dad … And I’ve always been a rebel so I will try to join all of you later on. 🙂
cool i hope you do….
🙂
YESSSS AYALA!…look forward to reading! defo hope you can make it…and thanks for the kind words about my pop…he sure was a fruit
You welcome 🙂
Love the prompt Stu – hope you’re ready behind the bar though. It could get a bit rowdy with all us rebels in the pub!
HEYY! great to see you!! yeah I think i’m ready…i got beers and crisps….that should see me through!!…
You’d better have a good single malt in, or there’ll be trouble for sure!
Tony- if I drink anything more than beers- I’ll be singing and in the morning ill look like beetlejuce…FACT
i don’t mind a bit of music in the pub…just saying…smiles
I think its funny that this kinda stumped me – I tried a little something – we’ll see! Thanks K
well that sounds cool!…cant wait to read!
your poem ROCKED it
Gosh – thanks! K
Life hit me hard for a few days, but I’m back and I love this prompt!
Dana…life has a nasty habit of doing that doesn’t it…I hope all is OK?…glad you enjoyed the prompt! and i cant wait to read what you’ve come up with!
good to have you back dana…and glad you could walk through it…
Nice prompt. 🙂
I’ve take a slightly satirical angle on this, a little character study, very tongue in cheek…
Oooohh sounds interesting! looking forward to it Holly Anne!….always great to see you here!
haha i loved your take…i am living in that at the school where i teach…a bunch of posers…but its fun to burst a bubble or two….
haha…ya know this jeans shrinking part rang familiar…smiles
It’s a strange thing, but the metalheads who followed the punk revolution kept the ridiculously tight jeans thing alive. With my legs it was just as well I didn’t feel the need to conform to the “new” normality I had chosen.
i was more the ripped airy jeans….there are somethings you just cant fit in tight jeans….
ha ha ha ha
Great prompt, Stu. I couldn’t resist sharing an older poem that pretty much made me the rebel I am. I wrote the book, ya know.
Hey Charles!…awesome to see ya….ha..cant wait to read!
Excellent, Stu! I have company at the mo (being rude by checking email but I am somewhat rebellious at times). I will be back this evening with something to share. 🙂
YES BETH!… I DO hope you’re not being antisocial? ha ha…cant wait to read!
Stu, I enjoyed your prompt. I do have a bit of rebel in me, now that I’ve thought abot it; but your prompt immediately got me thinking of James Dean (Rebel Without a Cause). I enjoyed reflecting on him in MY poem. And I’ve read most of what has been posted so far…and am truly impressed. I’m not into beer, but I will have a glass of wine, thank you. I will be in and out tonight, saying hello to the new visitors and trying NOT to eat all the chips!
🙂 wine it is Mary! red or white though? or Rose? hey- check me out!…ps the chips- I think Brian has eaten all of those already
Red is good!! Doggone that Brian. I will have to arrive earlier next time.
haha.numnumnum….
Hi Stu! Great prompt – wonderful to see Howl! Allen Ginsburg lived in my neighborhood (more or less) for years and I was lucky enough to see him read several times, and take a brief workshop. I do have to admit by that time in his life he was more interested in the young men in the workshop than me, young anxious woman – but it was still a very interesting time – and he was a wonderful reader – very sonorous voice. I have to go out a bit but will come back later tonight to read around. k.
Hey Karin!..wow…a workshop with Ginsberg! i totally hear you about his interest in the young men though! ha ha…he was a loooooon….but i really like his wild, off at tangents free verse…a style often imitated the more I read of him…ad yes- the videos ive seen of him reading…his voice is so engaging….
Really nice topic Stu. It made me conjure up lots of possibilities.
Thats cool Myrna! Looking forward to seeing what you’ve come up with!
Just linked up my post. This was a great prompt! Brought back a lot of memories from my rebellious youth, lol. Thanks, Stu!
Nice one David! thanks for stopping by!!…. I miss those days!….it was EASIER to be a rebel back then! ha ha
My head is singing all the ‘rebel’ songs now… “He’s a rebel and he’ll never be any good’… LOL
Great prompt Stu 🙂
ha ha ha LOVE it….Billy Idol any one?
Interesting theme! Many thanks for giving me food for thought. I have gone for a personal rebellion around language and culture as well as form. Oh and a sprinkling of politics if you look for it!
def an intersting form…and some nice mythical touches man…
WELL! 30 poems so far! and some absolutely great reads! im SO rebellious its time for me to go sleep…but just like ARNIE…I WILL BE BACK!!!…cant wait to see what’s here when i wake up 🙂
sleep well man…you done good…smiles.
This prompt was so inspiring! The opportunity to voice the inner voice of what I really think!
glad you took that opportunity gemma
Love it Gemma…that’s empowerment right there is it not?
How you can stir up the Pub Stu ~ I have always thought that arts and writing are some form of rebellion from our staid and structured life. Thanks to your rebellion post, I wrote a poem about someone’s rebellion (not mine as in real life, I am more of a conformist).
Have a wonderful long weekend ~
Grace
grace, i agree…stu def always finds a way to get our blood pumping…ha…hope you are having a good weekend as well…
Awww thanks Grace! very kind of you to say! your poem rocked it btw…have a good weekend! its labor day right?
Yes, Stu ~ We have Monday off, Labour day ~
Hadn’t planned to join in this weekend as away from home but found Stu’s prompt irresistible!
that very cool Polly…thank you for posting even though you are elsewhere and doing other things! glad you found some inspiration in this
This is something different! The rebel lies just below the surface of us all – so I believe.
David- I agree with you wholeheartedly! great to see you and thanks for stopping by!
Great prompt, Stu. It made me feel very powerful.
Arjan- that is VERY cool…great to see you as always!
SO- MORNING ALL! we have 40 quality poems so far! and still with plenty of time to go! what else are Sundays for apart from writing and reading!
coffee stu….black coffee….ha…good morning…catching the overnights…
oh ive had 8 cups already…palpitations will be kicking in shortly
A poem written while the Arab revolutions unfolded all around me. Thanks for the post and the prompt, endlessly irresistible…
hey Nilanjana!- thanks for stopping by…and I think this is subject so relevant for the prompt…and will continue to be for a while yet!
Well, I did happen to write a rebellious love poem… or perhaps anti-love poem might be more accurate… over on quillfyre.wordpress.com
ohhhh this sounds interesting! heading over to read right now!
Haven’t had a chance to work on the prompt yet, but I just wanted to add that I love HOWL and Ginsberg in general. Also, this prompt is perfect timing for me, having just finished reading the Hunger Games series. Rebels unite!
woot you got all day man, so take your time….like 13 hours to go
i’ve finished the hunger games series as well a bit ago…so awesome…!!
Nice one Steve! Yeah- I’m very much getting into Ginsberg….the guy was a loon….but a lot of great thought and politics …. You still got plenty of time to post!!
Awesome topic Stu. Thanks for hosting. Really stirred up a lot of thoughts in me. Lots of fun. Can’t wait to check out the others.
Excellent Fred! Looking forward to reading!!
happy sunday everyone! just back from a little bike ride and a jeff koons exhibition…and out on the trail to play catch up…
Jealous! I love Jeff Koons!!!
It’s not a new poem, but I think it fits the criteria because some “good girls” definitely do…
Im liking the sound of this! Thanks for stopping by!
Back home from camping in The National Forest in time for rebellion hope everyone is ok
Hey buddy! You had good weather for camping!! Bet that was cool as.
It was good weather was good ,got round Donington race track and other attractions and did some walking as well all been good for you
very cool….love camping…we have a great place just up outside charlottesville we like to go…
totally forgot to leave a comment, duh.
my first time doing this – the topic was just too tempting. hope you like…
thanks for the inspiration!
Great to see you here! And really enjoyed your poem….
thank you… sorry for checking in late – promise to do better next time…
hey no sweat….enjoy visiting some of the other poets as well…
oh i am on it 🙂 wonderful work so far… really enjoying it.
These are going to be gratifying to read, most definitely! Mine could get me into some trouble, which is why I added the tag “I still love my sister”!
I came in 2 hours after closing. I’ll leave teh link here anyway: http://susanspoetry.blogspot.com/2012/09/three-holes-at-age-36-we-were-at-city.html
I have been out of town.