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Vince Gotera, poet and writer, best known as Editor of the North American Review introduced me to Erasure Poetry in a prompt he posted right after National Poetry Writing Month (NaPoWriMo). You can find that excellent prompt toward the end of this article with examples of his work and that of other talented poets. Erasure poetry is a form of found poetry created by erasing words from an existing text in prose or verse and framing the result on the page as a poem. The results can be allowed to stand in situ or they can be arranged into lines and/or stanzas. The earliest erasure poems appeared in the mid-1960s and Doris Cross’ ‘Dictionary Columns’ was certainly one of the firsts.
According to Karl Kempton, ‘Cross’ treatment of dictionary columns and her search within them for found words has added another factor to the equation/subtraction. in the purer minimal columns the spaces devoted totally to the science of meaning, to the repeatable act of definition, are negated in the pursuit of the unique, the unrepeatable act. this is only one of the many tensions complexly woven by this maker waving a wand tuned to a negative capability, of taking from an arena of so-called certainly, turning phrases, words, letters and their parts into clues, hints of the greater mysteries and uncertainties we all face.’ Another poet compares Erasure Poetry to a burlesque, where it is what we don’t see, the undertext, which catches our attention.
It is the poetry of loaded spaces and allusions to the original text, which may be fiction, nonfiction, longer poems, songs, advertisements, really anything that previously exists. The process of erasure reforms, reinterprets, distills, and remakes the original. It is a process of selection and will teach you about your own poetic sensibilities. In one of my poems I call myself an imperfect processor with selection bias. The method of erasure brought this reality to the forefront for me.
You can erase and assemble in the same order as the original text or jump about the page. You can use one page or several, or even an entire book (unlikely for the prompt today). The visual aspect of the process can be across the spectrum from pulling from the original without showing the original text to using white out, markers, paint, or any medium to create a visual and poetic work of art. Please don’t be intimidated by the visual aspect and decide what’s right for you. If you also enjoy creating visual art then feel free to get as creative as you’d like.
For examples I am sharing one of my poems:
Jane rehearses heartbreak on a splendid Midsummer night at Thornfield while Mr. Rochester’s potent lightning strike, a seemingly small lie of omission, tears asunder the great horse-chestnut tree at the bottom of the orchard
Erasure poem and painting by Anna Montgomery
Text from the novel, Jane Eyre, by Charlotte Brontë
the sea is a barrier
from you
brine and foam
destined to rush between
it is a long way
morally certain
on the eve of separation
stars enter into their shining
my heart was still
a string inextricably knotted
cord of communion snapped
impossible to proceed
I endured no longer
grief and love
claiming mastery
petrified, it strikes me with
terror and anguish
to be torn from you forever
it is like looking on
the necessity of death
In addition, here you’ll find The Sea, the work of a very talented and prolific erasure poet Carrieola. Don’t forget to check out the link to Vince’s blog, The Man With the Blue Guitar. Also, here’s an audio excerpt about Erasure Poetry at the Poetry Foundation. To find copyright free e-books in multiple formats check out the Gutenberg Project (there are tens of thousands of books available). If you’d like to try an application online that will create an erasure poem for you go to Erasures a site created by Wave Books.
To participate:
• Write your poem and post it on your blog or website.
• Copy the direct link to the URL and paste it, along with your name, in the Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post.
• Participate in community building, a primary principle here at the pub, by engaging the work of others, reading and commenting. One of the best ways to become a better poet is to read and reflect on the work of your peers. Please provide positive, constructive feedback and appreciation. It’s how we show respect for one another at the pub.
• Share your work and that of others on your social networks. Encourage other poets to join us here at the pub.
Great prompt, Anna… it’s much more difficult than one would think. Looking forward to reading everyone’s offerings… and thanks. = )
I’ve wanted to do this for a long time so I thought let’s have fun today. Thanks so much for joining us!
ok first…this was a bit hard….ha…but it was interesting….next try i think i may start with something a bit more poetic…your example is really cool….love the color in it…
Thanks Brian, I tend to chose novels I love at the height of the emotional drama :). I loved what you came up with.
Anna–what a great challenge, and I just had to use “Civil Disobedience”
Ooo, I’m looking forward to it!
Such a cool prompt. Really enjoyed this and may try further experiments with it. I immediately went to Willa Cather – the most poetic novelist I’ve ever read with my favorite of her novels – My Antonia. Both Faulkner and Hemingway credit her with forming their own personal style and voice. She was an amazing trail blazer for American women authors and I recommend her highly to any of you who don’t know her work. Looking forward to reading yours. Sorry somehow I double linked in Mr. Linky…uh oh.
Oh, I love Willa Cather and what you did with her words. Thank you for this beautiful introduction to those who aren’t aware of her influence and beautiful work. I’ll try to fix the linky, if not I’m sure Brian will bail me out :).
got it…and gay…seriously you rocked this….i knew you would though…
This form, although completely new to me, is not one I ever tried. Thanks for giving us this opportunity. I chose some pages from Cormac McCarthy’s NO COUNTRY FOR OLD MEN, on the shelf right next to me.
I look forward to how you met the challenge. Thanks so much for joining in!
glenn you as well….i love mccarthy and it plays well to your style as well…reminiesent of your screenplay….
Ooops, I’m in twice. Sorry about that. Loved giving this a try. Yet another prompt to help me through dry spells. Thanks, Anna.
Victoria, I’m so glad to hear it!
a wonderful prompt anna…though i have to confess it cost me some nerves to get mine written…spent forever searching for the source first and found that once found, the erasing part is not so easy as it sounds…
what i loved is that i “discovered” words that i wouldn’t use usually, that i didn’t even know (maybe that’s just me cause i’m not an english native speaker) but surely stretched my horizon…and that’s good…smiles..so thank you
That’s wonderful, the stretching not the frustration of course. I do think it’s great for opening us up as poets to new styles, words, and forms of expression. Thanks so much for being willing to expand that horizon :).
working on it! Anna, the article is fascinating…again, I’m learning! proving much harder than it looks…
Excellent, I love to learn. It is funny how some of these things that look easy are not. I had a terrible time with the Than Bauk form but it was so gratifying to produce something in the end. I look forward to it.
This is really interesting. Love your poem!
Looking for to reading and enjoying these.
was great to see a poem by you last night becky….smiles.
Thank you, I think you’ll find it’s a lot of fun.
Very cool prompt, Anna. I’m not sure when I can get to it today, but will try. k.
Thank you, I really look forward to it!
psssshhhh….do you hear the sound of erasers scratching on paper…? apart from this, the pub is quiet…smiles
Isn’t it difficult?
i probably fall asleep any minute..the slurping sound of erasers on paper has a hypnotic quality…smiles…just having a bit fun… i’m writing actually… smiles
haha…one just popped in so that should keep you busy…feel like you are ‘missing someone’….grins…
haha…will immediately put on my poetic walking shoes and head over to cloudfactor 5… what did you say was your name sir..? was it bond..? james bond..? smiles
shaken, not stirred….
Bond. Jane Bond.
Having read a couple of your own poems Anna, I found this truly intriguing. It’s a lot harder than it first appears too but, I had a go …great prompt 🙂
How exciting, I’ll be there soon :)!
Well think I understood the method! I’ve taken a ‘last’ letter and liberated the love in it
Intriguing!
Something new to get my teeth into. Maybe this will help unblock the word barrier that has been my affliction over the last few months.
ah i hope you do tino…always great to see you
I have found it to do the trick, good luck!
Anna, I had heard of erasure poetry before, but had never tried it. Your prompt gave me an opportunity to do so. It is interesting to play with. I think that the more a person stretches the better poet one can become. I appreciate the opportunity you gave us to ‘stretch’ today.
Thanks Mary, I think so too :).
i agree…i think it is important we try new things…we may never do it again, but it becomes one more tool in out poetry toolkit to get us going…like tino suggested…also i usually look for interesting word pairings when i am reading for fun because it may later trigger a poem…
Wonderful prompt, Anna, thanks for hosting this! Looking forward to reading everyone else’s take!
My poem is new, and called “The Physical Meaning of Geometrical Propositions”, with the original source being Chapter 1 of ‘Relativity: The Special and General Theory’ (1916, revised 1924) by Albert Einstein.
Oh you’ve already made my heart skip a beat, can’t wait!
haha you played anna’s music with that one…smiles…lol….seriously though you dfe made it interesting sam…
Doing Einstein is fascinating, I’ve already done Chapter 2 – I think I’m going to do the entire book – one ‘sonnet’ for each chapter. Thanks for lighting the spark, Anna, this will be dynamite!
I for one believe you! Incredible as usual.
I love your poem, Anna. It is wonderful.
Thank you very much!
you gonna play shawna?
Just finishing mine up right now.
woot!
I love this prompt!
Hi Anna – I did a very odd one as I am at my office waiting to go to an appointment. Ha. Anyway, an interesting exercise – though I’m not sure mine’s that interesting, but thanks. Will not be able to read for a while. k.
You say that but generally I love your stuff, looking forward to it!
there are def some interesting phrases in it k….smiles.
asked you there but…how is your nano?
I’ll be away briefly to run and then grab some dinner. Incredible stuff so far, keep it coming :D!
oops…general comment was posted to your poetry entry…I found it too easy so figure I am not doing it correctly….I did like your Jane Eyre interpretation with emphasis placed on certain phrases and it became even more enticing…
popped over to your place and found your post…did you mean not to link it?
I think this is something you can make as easy or as difficult as you like :).
be back in a bit…
Thanx for the education, Anna. I gave it a quick go .
I’m running behind now but will be by this evening.
This was trickier than I imagined. Since I’m currently reading “Life of Pi” (haven’t seen the movie that’s out now), I went with a passage that really spoke to me.
Thank you, Anna…very intriguing challenge.
Gayle ~
I loved that book :D. Thanks Gayle!
def enjoyed that book…and cant wait to see the movie…
My first attempt at an erasure. Good fun. Thanks Anna.
You’re welcome; I’m heading your way soon :)!
Check out “Tree of Codes” by Jonathan Safran Foer
– http://www.visual-editions.com/our-books/tree-of-codes
very cool…thanks for pointing us his way sam
Ooooo.
Wow! What a unique challenge. This was much harder and time consuming than I thought it would be. Thank you.
i agree..it’s def. much harder than i thought it would be…you’ve done well margaret
It’s almost frightening how much better my poetry seems to become once I leave nearly half of it out! Food for thought… Thank you for the nudge, look forward to experimenting more with you all.
smiles…it’s a good exercise for sure and i like what you did
I think experimenting is very good for our process as poets. With each new approach I learn something valuable.
Very cool theme Anna. Killer prompt, so well done. I’ve been wanting to post a poem i did a long time ago, a la, this style, but stupid printer kicked the bucket month or so ago and haven’t been able to replace it yet. That said, i have to figure out what I want to do. Been struggling with this choice since the theme was sent out the other day- but you know, it’s getting to that point now that i’m just going to have to wind up picking something if I want to get in here. Which of course I do. Read about 3/4 of the poems up so far and they’re all very good, and something happened I totally wasn’t expecting, many of the Erasure poems, in my opinion, are actually better than the source text. You really got the creativity flowing tonight:)
Thanks, I found this type of investigation really informative and felt others might too. I thought it could be fun and have enjoyed what people have come up with so far. It was surprising how many of the erasures where more compelling. Glad you managed to join us!
Hello! I’ve been through all the links so far and will be away most of the day. I’ll be checking in this evening and want to thank all of you for your excellent work!
Anna, I’ve been in the midst of depression, so it took a while, but this lifted me. My erasure was too late for Mr. Linky, but I thought you’d enjoy a political poem drawn out of the prose of Harper Lee in To Kill a Mockingbird. Peace and thanks, Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/12/01/stock-still-an-erasure-poem/
I am 47 minutes too late. I hate that. This took a long time! I’ll be around to see others soon.
I had a very long, difficult day yesterday so I’m just now getting around to the final entries. I see someone put you in the link so I’ll be by soon!
This was fun !!!
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for adding your link. I’ll be by soon.
I got late in posting mine. Nevertheless, below is my poem:
Young Hope
Hey Anna,
Yesterday, while at work, I quickly posted another Erasure here making a meta-poetical statement. Did it quarantined by the site software accidentally or did I perhaps (sniffle) not click ‘post comment’ correctly?
I’m not sure this is my first stop in since yesterday morning (unintentional). So put it in the reply and I’ll come by.
Looks like it is lost — I will see if I can find my scribbled notes later.
Meanwhile, I used this erasure technique you shared once again today under Stuart’s prompt of “Missing You”. Thanx again
Finished it too late, but I did give a try. Very interesting exercise. 😀
http://tasmith1122.wordpress.com/2012/12/01/sarashina-travelogue-erasure/