Mary Oliver in A Poetry Handbook introduces the reader to a vital aspect of craft, Negative Capability. The Poetry Foundation describes Negative Capability as ‘a theory of John Keats, who suggested in one of his famous letters that a great thinker is “capable of being in uncertainties, Mysteries, doubts, without any irritable reaching after fact and reason.” A poet, then, has the power to bury self-consciousness, dwell in a state of openness to all experience, and identify with the object contemplated. The inspirational power of beauty, according to Keats, is more important than the quest for objective fact.’
Negative Capability may also be described as ‘the ability to contemplate the world without the desire to try and reconcile contradictory aspects or fit it into closed and rational systems’. Keats posits that the ‘poetical character . . . has no self – it is everything and nothing – it has no character and enjoys light and shade, it lives in gusto, be it foul or fair, high or low, rich or poor, mean or elevated.’ ‘What shocks the virtuous philosopher delights the chameleon Poet . . . a Poet is the most unpoetical of anything in existence because he has no identity, he is continually filling some other body.’ The website Keats’ Kingdom goes on to compare this to the definition of a state of conflict: ‘an emotional state characterized by indecision, restlessness, uncertainty and tension resulting from incompatible inner needs or drives of comparable intensity.’ Here we see that doubt can lead to pregnant possibility, to creativity. Keats felt this emptiness is a positive state of being, one that allows the poet to access empathy, sympathy and understanding of the other (whether person, object, or place).
Ode on a Grecian Urn by John Keats
Thou still unravish’d bride of quietness,
Thou foster-child of silence and slow time,
Sylvan historian, who canst thus express
A flowery tale more sweetly than our rhyme:
What leaf-fring’d legend haunts about thy shape
Of deities or mortals, or of both,
In Tempe or the dales of Arcady?
What men or gods are these? What maidens loth?
What mad pursuit? What struggle to escape?
What pipes and timbrels? What wild ecstasy?
Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard
Are sweeter; therefore, ye soft pipes, play on;
Not to the sensual ear, but, more endear’d,
Pipe to the spirit ditties of no tone:
Fair youth, beneath the trees, thou canst not leave
Thy song, nor ever can those trees be bare;
Bold Lover, never, never canst thou kiss,
Though winning near the goal yet, do not grieve;
She cannot fade, though thou hast not thy bliss,
For ever wilt thou love, and she be fair!
Ah, happy, happy boughs! that cannot shed
Your leaves, nor ever bid the Spring adieu;
And, happy melodist, unwearied,
For ever piping songs for ever new;
More happy love! more happy, happy love!
For ever warm and still to be enjoy’d,
For ever panting, and forever young;
All breathing human passion far above,
That leaves a heart high-sorrowful and cloy’d,
A burning forehead, and a parching tongue.
Who are these coming to the sacrifice?
To what green altar, O mysterious priest,
Lead’st thou that heifer lowing at the skies,
And all her silken flanks with garlands drest?
What little town by river or sea shore,
Or mountain-built with peaceful citadel,
Is emptied of this folk, this pious morn?
And, little town, thy streets for evermore
Will silent be; and not a soul to tell
Why thou art desolate, can e’er return.
O Attic shape! Fair attitude! with brede
Of marble men and maidens overwrought,
With forest branches and the trodden weed;
Thou, silent form, dost tease us out of thought
As doth eternity: Cold Pastoral!
When old age shall this generation waste,
Thou shalt remain, in midst of other woe
Than ours, a friend to man, to whom thou say’st,
“Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.”
Keats was not the only poet to notice or participate in this state of being. Byron indicated he embodied himself ‘with the character’ while he was drawing it. Browning imaginatively inhabited other beings. T.S. Elliot summed up the process as ‘the progress of the artist is a continual self-sacrifice, a continual extinction of personality.’ Therefore, according to Keats and other poets, the writer will exist in a paradoxical state, at once retaining some sense of perception, skill, and personal memory while conveying the interior life of another: this tightrope must be walked for the other to remain ‘other’ lest it become the self or a projection of the ‘self’. The poet effaces her own voice while maintaining her artistry to accomplish this feat.
The Mad Yak by Gregory Corso
I am watching them churn the last milk they’ll ever get from me.
They are waiting for me to die;
They want to make buttons out of my bones.
Where are my sisters and brothers?
That tall monk there, loading my uncle, he has a new cap.
And that idiot student of his–
I never saw that muffler before.
Poor uncle, he lets them load him.
How sad he is, how tired!
I wonder what they’ll do with his bones.
And that beautiful tail!
How many shoelaces will they make of that!
My name is Anna Elizabeth Graham and I’m your host today for Meeting the Bar: Critique and Craft. I am asking you to experience what Coleridge called, ‘a sort of transfusion and transmission of my consciousness to identify myself with the object’. Along these lines you may write a persona poem, an ode to an object, about the concept of negative capability or demonstrate it in other ways. Use another’s language, world view, turn of phrase, or style. And in the words of Mary Oliver, ‘I would rather see an ambitious though rough poem than a careful and tame poem’ so be brave and take some risks today.
Divine Game by Anna Elizabeth Graham
For Sainkho Namtchylak and Claudia Schoenfeld
Experimenting mystic
at the junction of Cyberia’s culture
two notes/one sound
imitating nature’s call
Tuvan Khöömei youth
encounters Soviet Union
classical music education
creating a Lamaist jazz mantra:
I am the shaman of my life
rumbling spirit timbre emotes
through a seven octave range
the space of meaning and feelings
beat drives the insistent vocalizations
like wind echoing in Artic skies
forming the transformative art
of an intoned sense
groaning, guttural sound
grandmother city dweller
revisits the tundra of childhood
‘tender bird of timelessness
touches me with her wing’
intuiting secret sounds
that would not be taught
‘hidden chords of thought’
woman on the outside
even when looking within
bodhisattva cries as
‘my sleeping pulse awakens,
trembles in front of my eyes’
how can I keep from singing
resonating frequencies that pierce
illusory aspects of the self?
‘artificial addendum of the human voice’
making sense in this divine game
‘aural quintessence of the spiritual world’
giving voice to the sacred fire
developing the capacity to imagine
fullness arises from emptiness as
‘absolute harmony is born into silence’
*All quotes are Sainkho Namtchylak’s; Cyberia is the name of one of her albums
To participate:
• Copy the direct link to the URL and paste it, along with your name, in the Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post.
• Engage in community building, a primary principle here at the pub, by investigating the work of others, reading and commenting. One of the best ways to become a better poet is to read and reflect on the work of your peers. Please provide positive, constructive feedback and appreciation. It’s how we show respect for one another at the pub.
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this is a really interesting and well researched article anna… i can certainly identify with the restlessness.. it will be interesting to see what people come up with… i tried to identify with our office printer…ha…smiles
Awesome, I really enjoyed your ode to the printer and will be by soon to comment. I too identify with I call ‘internal wanderlust’ :).
….and oh…checked out Sainkho Namtchylak … wonderful voice…and 7 octaves…goodness…this is awesome..love the going brave from the deepest to highest point and not only vocal-wise… thanks… and thanks for hosting anna
Yes, she’s quite a force of nature!
really a fascinating exercise anna…
you took me somewhere that i had not been…ha…i love corso as well, so i was very familiar with that poem…wrote something similar a couple years ago and that is when someone introduced me to him…
had fun with this…
So glad you know Corso and had some fun. I am heading to your blog now, your imaginative exercise is precisely what I was getting at here.
This really is a wonderful exercise, Anna… but I may not be able to post til later as I’ve been swamped today.
That’s wonderful to hear Laurie. I hope you are able to join us later and that things slow down a bit.
Finally had time. I hope it’s what you had in mind.
Hi Anna!
I wrote this just a moments before your prompt was p[osted, and I think I might have accidently hit the mark. I hope it’s close enough!
Great synchronicity!
Anna, thank you so much for this.
I had no idea there was this dimension to Keats.
A real eye-opener.
What a fantastic thing to introduce you to another side of Keats!
I believe a poem should be moral. A pure, a sterile, perception is impossible anyway and I believe poets should give their readers the possibility to love or hate them.
To gain empathy, compassion and understanding is an ethical undertaking to my mind. Thank you for sharing your perspective.
Thanks for this prompt Anna. I rather enjoy writing as if I’m not me. Think I’ll have a go. 🙂
ha. look forward to it…
Me too :); I look forward to it.
Damn, I still think it’s about me 😉
smiles….ha….
maybe it is, but dance on for a bit
and dont close up
A very interesting post, thank you Anna for always giving us articles to chew and stretch our pens ~ I will be around to comment in a bit (after my drive) ~
Wishing you all a Happy Thursday ~
Grace
Happy Thursday to you as well. It is always good to know a prompt has been stimulating, thank you.
Brian, I don’t know how to fix the linky but number 7 should direct here: http://annellannell.com/2013/03/21/march-21-2013-dverse/. Would you please fix it, thank you.
fixed it..
Thanks Claudia :)!
Hi Anna,
Thanks so much for a wonderful feature – brought back such sweet and heady memories of teenage A level studies of Keats at high school in England – endless summers, intense conversations, cigaretttes, girls… I’ll stop there!
I bet they were intense, those conversations and encounters. Unfortunately, here in the States, my introduction to Keats in high school was cursory, mashed in with all English Literature (Advanced Placement is our equivalent to A-level)
smiles…
Excellent theme but no space to do a poem so reposted one done this time last year. It’s a ode and to an object so hopefully in the right area!
you made my mouth water….sigh…
ok..on way to bed…will be back in the AM to catch up with the overnites…
sleep well claudia…
WoW! What interesting article. This is a wonderful challenge. I glad a read of poem of Keats. He is a interesting and thought-provking poet.
Thank you!
Anna, thanks for a really well written and researched article, and for a challenging and interesting prompt too. You’ll be pleased to know that there are already 2 results of this: first, I borrowed a book of Keats’ poetry from the Scottish Poetry Library in Edinburgh – conveniently situated about 6 miles from my home 🙂 – and second, I have an idea that I want to try out 😀
As you might remember – I have mentioned it several times before – Thursday evening was when my Poetry in Practice class at Edinburgh University takes place. Today was the last class of the term – and next term’s classes are on Wednesday afternoon – so I’ll be around both to write and read tomorrow morning GMT.
Thank you. When I lived outside London I wanted to see Edinburgh but didn’t make it that far north. Enjoy your class and I look forward to seeing the fruits of your idea!
Made it 🙂 Thanks again for a great prompt. Perhaps this was the spark that my muse has been looking for.
The opposite of confessional, then? Which most of my poems are. I seldom have time on a Friday for new creations, but I’ve resurrected an old poem (one of my own favourites) which I think fits the criteria. Will be back to read others later. So nice to see Keats’s face and read his ideas. Thank you.
Glad you found something in the archives!
Really stretching here–but wanted to play, look forward to reading everyone. Love Mary Oliver 🙂
Stretching is good :).
This is wonderful for my continuing education. Great post!
Thank you for the feedback!
This was quite interesting! Very fun!
Wonderful!
What an excellent post and prompt.!I so enjoyed reading it. I am sorry that with time contstraints I cannot do this post poetic justice with the poem I have written . I would have liked to have spent more time on it. Enjoyed writing it anyway and thank you again.
Wonderful that you joined us. I completely understand about time constraints, I run into them all the time.
alright poets…ready for bed tonight…ha…been a long week…
be back in the morning to return comments….
good morning…back with a second one…ha…couldn’t resist…smiles
will get a coffee and then out on the trail to play catch up..
How exciting!
It is late, and I want to read more of the posts…this prompt is a doozy…and doozy always is a great learning experience in the end. I don’t know if I fulfilled the expectations, but when I had a kodak moment and thought I got the picture…I wrote it and posted it.
Thank you all for your inspirations … always an inspiring experience for me at dVerse.
Peace,
Siggi
A Kodak moment sounds like a blessing, lovely to see you.
Just thirty minutes ago, I was reading about John Keats and the Jane Campion film, Bright Star. Hard to resist synchronicity… something negatively capable about it 🙂 Great post Anna and a wonderful nudge.
Haha, yes I saw that movie at the art house theater years ago. I love those moments of synchronicity. Always a pleasure to see you Becky!
..hi Anna,
…tried my hardest to write something for this…and quite unsure if it fits the demand but enjoyed reading Keats here after along time… thanks… i go for a short one and hope it’s ok.. i leave for now as i’m just about to live the office… will come back to read when i get home… smiles…
actually found yours very fascinating kelvin…wont judge if it fits, as i def enjoyed it…esp for one so small….
I look forward to it :).
OK, I’ve had a shot at this. Not sure about a couple of points, though. Very stimulating prompt – as I’ve understood it!
ha. really enjoyed your use of dialect dave….
Can’t wait!
I puzzled over this, and then climbed under the words to basque in the awe of being and perception of that being. Thank you, Anna-of-the-new-name.
bask (hmm)
It’s an old new name :); thanks so much Susan.
i have been waiting for someone to ask you about that…smiles.
In something of a silly mood today and it shows. Have a fantastic weekend all.
I love silly moods and look forward to seeing the fruits of yours.
Thanks, Anna, for the prompt; at first I thought it would be easier but I struggled with it…but now since I’ve done that and am reading others’ poems I see how I should maybe have gone for shoes, a willow tree, or many other things come to mind, but I’m too drained to start over in time 😉 I love the Keats poem. Have a good weekend.
Oh Anna, this took some thinking about – no light bulb flickered upon first reading – but later (yesterday afternoon) thoughts came unbidden.
Thanks for making my mind work!
Anna :o]
nice…i enjoyed yours…i am quite the fan of books…smiles.
You may be interested in our reprint of Bate’s long out of print classic study on Keats
http://contramundum.net/catalog/current/negative-capability-on-the-intuitive-approach-in-keats/