They say that time flies when you’re having fun, which means that I must have been having a lot of fun recently because the weeks have certainly flown by. I can hardly believe that it’s already 6 weeks since I last hosted Open Link Night.
So what has happened in the past 6 weeks? Back then I was telling you all about the opportunity that has come my way to begin a creative writing class at the Grassmarket Community Project in Edinburgh. Since then I have had the privilege of attending the official opening of the Project’s new facilities, which are astounding, and on Friday just past we had the first meeting of the creative writing group. Four people came along to that meeting, which was nice for the first one; not enough to be overwhelming, but not so few as to be discouraging. After we had introduced ourselves, we discussed how, as writers, we might demonstrate the Project’s core value of respect; respect for each other and respect for ourselves. Some of the ways that we agreed would contribute to that included both sharing our work with each other and paying attention to what others are sharing, and writing to the given prompts. For anyone interested, the prompt I gave was Behind the Red Door and in response to it I wrote my first piece of prose fiction in 30 years or so.
What does that have to do with dVerse? Well, it was being part of this community that gave me the confidence to believe that I might be the answer to the Project’s need of someone to lead their creative writing group. It was here at dVerse that I found a community of poets who read each other’s work, encouraged each other by commenting on what was good about what we had read and sometimes made suggestions about how the work might be improved. It was here at dVerse that I was able to see other writers providing prompts to stretch my own writing, and here that I had my first opportunity to give a prompt for other poets to respond to. So I have a lot of reasons to be thankful to Brian, Claudia and the rest of this wonderful, welcoming, international community of poets.
My name is Tony Maude, and it is my privilege to welcome you to this week’s edition of the poetic extravaganza that is the dVerse pub’s Open Link Night.
If you are new here, let me tell you how it works; for the regulars, here’s a handy reminder:
- Write a poem and post it to your webpage.
- Click on the Mr. Linky button below and enter your name and direct url/web address to your poem; one poem per person please.
- There you will also find the list of those participating this week. You might want to refresh this occasionally or check back in as there are people joining over the next 33 hours.
- If it’s your first time here, please leave a comment to say so. That makes it much easier for us to find you and encourage you by visiting your site.
- Read other poets that have linked. Let them know what you thought, how the poem moved you, what caught your attention etc. The not-so-secret formula to receiving more visits and comments on your blog is to read and comment on other people’s poems. Please don’t forget to return the favour of those who have visited and commented on your work.
- Encourage others to participate through social media, promote both your own work and others.
- Have fun meeting and engaging with your fellow poets.
Happy Tuesday everyone … smiles
Welcome, one and all. Hope you are all having a good day. Spring has arrived in Scotland; the sky is blue, the temperaure is warm and it’s all due to last until …
tomorrow.
Community is so important, in life and in writing. Happy Open Link Night!
Hi Kelly,
Community is really important – and it’s something that seems to have been forgotten by too many people in positions of power and authority. I was at a meeting earlier today and it was interesting hearing a management scientist regretting all the things that had been sacrfificed on the twin altars of efficiency and profit; things like ethics, community, etc
Woop woop!
woot!! great to see you in the pub scott!!!!
Welcome to the pub, Scott.
Thank you both! It’s good to be here.
….and welcome back Tony….I’ll have a cool glass of Liebfraumilch, if you please! Cheers!
Chilled Liebfraumilch coming right at ya 🙂
great intro tony…community is a topic close to my heart…and i hear you..communities have to have these norms…the things like respect…and i like how you defined part of it as paying attention to what others write…it allows you to give quality feedback…and we have similar in the poetry group i run in the afternoons at our high school…you want to be there or you dont and your actions will show it…
happy OLN everyone….once i get the kids out the door i will be out on the trail…
If you want to be heard, you need to learn how to listen … or at least that’s what I think, Brian. Catch you out on the trail when the rush dies down 🙂
amen brother…that will preach…
smiles.
Happy Tuesday, y’all! Please note, the attached poem is not about me, but rather, is a perspective from a place I once was. I see so many people suffering and in the throes of depression these days, and it makes me pretty sad.
Been there, done that too. It’s not a great place to be. Over the last few years, poetry has become one of the outlets for so much that I used to bottle up. It’s really helped.
Wow, week 95 already! Wishing you all a lovely evening.
Cheers.
Seems like just yesterday that it was week 89 … smiles. Have a good evening yourself, Gwen.
very cool on the creative writing group tony…and i like that you discussed respect as well…important topic…can’t wait to read your piece… i tried prose once…but honestly…even if i try to write prose, it still sounds like poetry…just without the line- and stanza breaks… maybe i should try again one day…ha…smiles… happy OLN everyone..
There’s nothing wrong, Claudia with your prose sounding like poetry. It’s a benefit I think and so do others. There is something in the rhythm, the line, the something or other in poetry that gives great effect to prose.
Lady Nyo
I think there are one or two places in my prose where you can tell it has been written by a poet … but why is that a bad thing? Of course you should try again – or will I get sacked for suggesting that … smiles.
Hiya Tony,
That’s the way the cookie crumbles: one thing leads to another and you may well have found your feet . I ‘m sure it will all work out the way you hope.
It’s definitely how things seem to work out. If you’d told me 3 years ago where I’d be today and what I’d be doing, I would never have believed it.
Happy to be here. Now I’ll dive in and read as many as I can… a little tired after a 40 km bicycle trip…. Weatther in Sweden is almost summer like all of the sudden. Carpe Diem
It’s been gorgeous here today Bjorn, so you might get another good day tomorrow. We’ve got rain and cold forecast for the next couple of days, so maybe summer is over already. I hope not….
I saw that… and thursday and friday are holidays here in Sweden.
smiles…did 40 km on my bike as well today… in the morning to work 20 km…in the evening back home 20 km… and the weather was gorgeous… i love biking!! (but i’m tired as well…ha…smiles)
Just bought a new roadbike so it’s pure joy to be out biking…
very cool…mine’s about 4 years old..and as you probably saw on the pic on my post..needs cleaning and a few drops of oil…smiles
You inspire me, Tony. Best of luck to you in your new endeavors… and thanks for a great post!
Excuse me while I duck behind the bar to cover my blushes. Thanks, Laurie … smiles
Thanks for hosting, Tony. It has to be wonderful being in a creative writing group. Happy open link to all. I will be round to read during the day and night.
Pamela
Being in a group is one thing; leading it is quite another. The groups I’ve been in have been ones where people bring things that they have already written; in this group we write there and then – me included. Of course, I get a little bit of warning on the prompts seeing as I provide them … smiles.
Happy OLN Tony ~ I am happy to read that your community is coming along ~ Prose is my weakest form, ha ~ And spring is officially here, with the Japanese trees leading the way ~ We are fortunate to have some of the trees in the city parks and the blooms are just fabulous ~
Thanks for hosting ~
Grace
When I gave the prompt, I thought I was going to write a poem about the garden that was on the other side of the door. Things didn’t quite work out that way … smiles
Good intro Tony! i’ve just got a new computer so it won’t be such a slog and chore to get around now. For m,onths I haven’t been able to access sites and hence the no read. Sometimes it would take me numerous attempts and it would fail anyway. Don’t have that problem now…and I am ready to read!
I’ve been playing around with short forms….and cinquans are the newest for me. Just a short posting on my blog of haiku, tanka, poem and one cinquain.
Lady Nyo
Oooooh, cinquains. You know how to pique my interest … smiles. Great news on the new computer too.
Ahhhh! I spoke too soon! I tried to go to a number of sites here, ayala’s,, aprille’s, etc…and all I got was a solid colored screen! Yikes!
I will have to google ‘why’ and why can’t I access sites that I want to read??? So..ojne way or another…I’ll try to make sense of this.
Any suggestions from those who are better with computers than me?
Lady Nyo….and I loved Edinburgh…was supposed to attend art school there, but outside was the countgryside, and my butt wouldn’t stay in the seat.
try dumping your cookies…you may have caught something along the way…that has often cleared things up for me…particularly when it comes to blogger…
Thank you, kBrian…I’ll try dumping the cookies…though I will have to learn how! LOL!
Jane
glad it worked for you!
Glad to be here today!
Glad that you are able to be with us, Audrey.
Hi, Tony and everyone! OLN is helping me with the post-NaPo blues.
I think that you deserve a rest: 30 poems in 30 days is a feat I couldn’t manage just now.
Good afternoon Tony – thanks for hosting – I’ll try to get to reading soon. I have little time this week – hence my little poem. Cheers, Mosk
Cheers to you too, Mosk. I need to write something myself….
mosk!!!!!
Happy Tuesday, indeed, and congrats on your writing community!
Thanks, Madeleine. Happy Tuesday to you too … smiles
Great joining you all tonight on Open Link Night!
Nice to see you in the pub, Robbie.
Good afternoon Tony. I can’t agree more, community gives us a supportive sense of self. I can honestly say I’m thankful for the dVerse community for all of your support. I’m by nature an introvert so community can be difficult. I want to just say that you all make it easier for me to take chances and risks I wouldn’t take otherwise. Cheers! Happy Open Link Night!
Sounds like me, Apryl. At parties. I almost invariably head for the kitchen …
Me too, or a quiet corner to observe. I can carry on conversations but I’m not one who likes attention brought to me. I prefer a book and a glass of wine. I’m glad I’m not the only one Tony!
hey i am all about those risks and chances…smiles…very cool tribute you did tonight too apryl….
Hmm my first time here. I love it. Great idea.
nice…we are glad to have you in the mix…enjoy your time tripping around the poets…we have a fun crew here….
It’s only 53 minutes and look at all the posts. Glad to play and read good poetry.
We had a couple of quiet weeks, but it looks like that was just a blip.
hiya mary…
quiet weeks…ha….129 is a quiet week…oy…
Good evening, Tony and all..
Good evening to you too, myrthryn.
Happy OLN, everyone! I LOVE the community here, Tony … I totally relate to what you wrote in your intro. The community made me stay too 🙂
Community is soooooo important – and communities that stretch us, give us opportunities and encourage us are brilliant. I love the fact that I now have the opportunity to give something back here and share in a new context too.
Hi everyone! I dropped off the map for a bit, but I’m back- with a new name and everything! I hope you are all doing well!
~ The wanna-be poet formerly known as Savage Heathen
Wow – a whole new you. Welcome back; it’s good to see you again … smiles
Thank you Tony! Glad to hear of your recent writing adventures!
welcome back!
Thank you, fine sir!
Warm blessings to all xoxo
Coming right back at you, Poppy.
poppy!!!!!!
hey really moving piece by your tonight…
How exciting! Congratulations Tony!
Exciting, challenging, and downright frightening – but it was lots of fun too.
I do hope people remember that this is a comment for comment shindig. I know that sometimes the browser incompatibility is a pain. But an email – if the user provides an email – can suffice as well.
Hi Chaz. I get your frustration with people not commenting back, but sometimes – not always for sure – there are a whole variety of reasons, other than browser incompatibility for that. Recently my WP account wouldn’t let me comment on Blogger – or maybe it was Blogger having the huff with WP. And I usually comment on way more blogs than I get comments back – so I don’t have people’s e-mails. Same would be true for Brian, Claudia and a lot of other pub regulars.
i feel you charles…worked through a few of those feelings myself the last couple months as well when i saw a dip in the community aspect…and there are just some places i dont go anymore as i know i wont hear back…and some days are better than others…but you can over time def see peoples patterns on who they are here for…
i appreciated your emails when you could not comment…
‘Evening Tony…I made it to the pub this week! I’m finding inspiration returning to me and being my friend again…thank goodness …the dry months were bad!!
Evening Geraldine. Glad to hear that your muse is being more co-operative. Mine, on the other hand …
Well folks, it’s been fun so far. It’s also getting late here, so I’m off to get some shut-eye. I’ll be back in the morning … smiles.
I’m not sure how or where to make this correction, but Brian said my link didn’t work. Here is the proper URL:
http://returnforrefund.wordpress.com/2013/05/07/the-west-wind-and-the-suns-turquoise-spring-equinox/
So sorry for doing it incorrectly. Thank you for offering the repair, Brian. Kudos, my friend. You are a kind soul who deserves only the blow of whispers on a scented lavender’s wind.
fixed it…smiles.
and even poetic in your comments…smiles….
tony, welcome back; and this time i’ve got a small poem in 😉
inspired by my newest grandchild, max, photo included in post 😉
thanks so much, glad your group in edinburg is starting off well!
Thank you. Just as one swallow doesn’t makea summer, so one session doesn’t make a successful group; there’s a long way to go and I have a lot to learn.
very true, and all the more reason for the best of best wishes 😉
I think it is great you are involving yourself in spreading the poetry message. I hope it goes well and you have loads of fun Tony.
Thanks Cressida. It’s not just poetry; if it was I’d be a little more certain of my ground.
I enjoyed your intro, Tony. Community IS important, both online and offline. Wishing you success in your new endeavor.
halo mary…smiles.
Thanks, Mary. Success for me will be enabling the other writers to tap into their creativity, explore new ideas and new writing styles … everything dVerse has done for me.
I was late for to post for Fred’s prompt, so here it is. (I’m working on a third apple poem to be called “apples and oranges”; I hope I have some apple energy left for harvest!) Thanks for the intro, Tony. Brilliant.
smiles..i’ve enjoyed your apples susan…
why not apple of my eye…smiles
an apple a day…keeps me coming your way…ok, having too much fun here…smiles.
I’d intended to write for Fred’s prompt, but tiredness overtook me, I’m afraid. I’ve only just managed to turn up with something for my own party!
Very happy to be a part of :open links week 95. I hopefully, can join in soon again 🙂
hey you…is good to see you and i hope you are doing well…
Happy to be able to welcome you here.
Hi Tony, how nice to have you hosting tonight. Inspiring to read of where the past 6 weeks have taken you!
Apologies for coming in late. Miserable the past few days with a Spring cold and never-ending cough, so may have to bow out early too, but promise to come back and read tomorrow. Set me up in the corner with some hot tea and poetry. Perhaps just the cure I need!
Hot tea with honey and lemon – just the thing for a cold, Ginny. Six weeks is a long time in poetry … smiles.
good morning….oy…the pub is full…i have a lot of catch up to do…need a coffee first…smiles
good morning claudy…heading off to bed myself…enjoy the coffee…
see you manana
Hope Wednesday is good to you, Claudia.
alright…time for bed…last week of grad school!!!!!! woohoo…knocked out a paper while reading tonight…one more and powerpoint due by friday….oy vey…will get there….
Sleep well, boss …
Hmmm what a stupendous response!!!!and the poems are lovely, though couldn’t read all, but what ever i could they are amazing.
So, now posting mine. The night transfers me into a world which is beyond reality….
I’m not sure anyone has the stamina to read all the poems … except maybe Brian. Welcome to the pub.
Seems like you’re going from strength to strength. I’m very pleased for you.
Have a good week.
It’s early days yet … but we all have to start somewhere. You have a good week too… smiles
Great response to this brilliant prompt Tony. I’m late on parade this week, but here’s my contribution anyway. http://bit.ly/GBdjLk
Hi James. I was late too – a few busy days and an unco-operative muse who insisted on me writing prose didn’t help.
Hi Tony, delighted to meet you here, hadn’t done so previously. On my way to follow your links. Loved your opening of the d’Verse, enjoyed reading it. You being based in Edinburgh made it very easy for me to select a poem of mine to link to. You’ll see why! Same poem won an award yesterday in the Frances Browne Multilingual Poetry Competition based in Donegal. Off now to follow your links, thanks, Kevin
Congratulations on the award, Kevin – that’s awesome and thoroughly deserved. Folks, you should go and listen to Kevin read this; it’s a fabulous poem, beautifully read.
thankyou for the prompt this week!…I like the title ..Behind the red door..in Ireland gates are often painted red… 1 as a way of welcoming friends.. 2 as a way of brightening the home up and 3 because they wanted the “Angles” to know that they would still be there whatever. My poem Red lipstick is in many ways …a red door…welcoming …brightening but almost a rebellion against what is happening externally and a defence in times of trauma. So I love this prompt…big thankyou!
Gerry Snape
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You don’t usually get a prompt here on Open Link Night, but I’m glad you enjoyed it. I’ll be round to read soon.
Hope I’m not too late to join the party! Congrats on the new position, Tony–
Thanks. Mr Linky doesn’t close until midnight tonight, EST.
hey…just wanted to sneak in before going to bed…was a rough day and did only manage to return comments today…and so tired now… you’re doing a wonderful job tony…thanks so much for being around… and tomorrow for FFA again…oy…smiles
Thanks, Claudia. I expect FFA will be less crowded – it usually is … smiles
Thanks for hosting this week, Tony. I’ve been trying to wrap my head around the piece I posted since my last OLN, so I’m quite excited to get this first draft up before the doors close!
According to your time sig, you had nearly 5 hours left, Julie.
True–but I think it felt like I was much later because I had hoped to have a draft of this piece ready about 5 weeks ago. 🙂